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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Unique_Lover

Awesome story harshu
Unique concept which I liked
Ishra are younger than MiMi
Loved IshRa's nick name
Jhalli & Mr lrll ..haha so hilarious
So Mimi mission mein ishra ki setting ho rhi h not bad
Loved dance & kiss about to happen..
Finally he confessed
Waiting for her answer
Eagerly waiting for next part
Update as soon as possible..


Thx a lot piya
Glad u liked it
Will update asap..
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: ArtiMishra20

Beautiful story harshita

Lovely concept
Ishra fell in love with each other while solving their siblings issue
They are trying to bring Mimi together
Loved ishra's cute scenes in the former parts
Their nick names which they had given to each other is cute...

Loved it.


Thx arti
Glad u liked it
Will update soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
Part - 17

Raman - hey don't you dare to call urself selfish smjhi now i got it what's the prblm tu yahi chahti h naa ki First we complete our MiMi Mission " which she nodded

Raman - ok then listen saying he narrates something to her

Ishita - that's nyc bt it will work naa..

Raman - haa re I m 100% sure bt I want a promise from u..

Ishita - what?

Raman - if everything sorted between them so u can accept our relationship.. Saying he looks on her


Raman - bol na jhalli ..


Ishita - but


Raman - yaar no if no but come on point & plz naa mt bolna..saying he saw her with so much love bt getting nervous


Again he said "I know jhalli tu mere baare mein sochti hogi that I'm a Casanova boy bt trust me tere se phle main kisi ko lekr itna serious nhi tha & yes I have gf before you & I had already told you about her bt trust me we never shared relationship like lovers its like frnds & I truly love you a lot I can't promise you moon & stars bt I promise to always keep u happy & respect ur parents as mine ...both shared a eyelock



Raman (st) - I think she don't have same feeling like me & I don't want to pressures her..


Ishita (st) - I'm also love him & really feeling blessed to have him bt what if amma & appa not agreed for this relationship no I will talk to them & make them understand that he is perfect guy for me..seeing her lost he said " hey jhalli its ok if u don't have any feeling for me & don't worry uska asar hmare MiMi mission par nahi padega after all wo mere bhi bhai bhabhi hai she can feel hurt in his voice & he was about to go when she holds his hands




He saw her with happiness & ask through eyes which she nodded


Raman - you really love naa i mean plz don't agree just bcoz of me main tumhe pressure nhi krna chahta..


Ishita - bas bas kitna bolte ho tum yaar & don't worry I'm not doing this bcoz of any pressure ..


Raman - that means u also love me like I do..she nodded


Raman - you can't understand jhalli how much happy I'm...


Ishita (smiles) - you don't need to say anything bcoz I can feel it..both shared a beautiful eyelock


Raman - I love you jhalli & don't worry tujhe abhi reply karne ki jrurt nhi hai bt remember after completing MiMi mission u have to say that three magical words which I'm dying to hear from you..she blushed hearing this





Raman - oye hoye someone is turning red not bad abhi ye haal to aage..saying he wink




Ishita - aisa kuch nahi hain..


Raman - really..


Ishita - hmm now I'm going..saying leave her place to go when he hold her hand


Raman - jaane se phle at least..


Ishita - what?


Raman - ek hug yrr itna to frnds ke beech bhi chlta hai..


Ishita - ohh u r talking about hug..


Raman - haa toh tujhe kya LGA..he said naughtily


Ishita - kuch nhi..


Raman - bta naa..saying he come close to her making her heartbeats fast


She became numb with his closeness & his fragnace making her weak when she felts his arms around her she too did the same & then he said "chl ab tujhe late nhi ho rha & laughs




Soon he dropped her at her home


Ishita - ok bye


Raman - one min jhalli ..saying he came out of his car


Ishita - hmm bolo


Raman - Sara plan yaad hai..


Ishita - yeah


Raman - & yes plz tomorrow is a big day so plz be on tym..


Ishita - look who is talking about time who never comes on tym..


Raman - achcha baba sorry I'll be on tym..


Ishita - good now can I go..


Raman - yes..she turned to go then he again called her


Ishita - ab kya hai


He called her closer & said in her ears "u know what you are right that tym I'm not stopped you for hug bt for that you know naa what I mean & don't worry that will happen too very soon my love saying he pecked her cheek he went from their while she was still standing there totally lost in that moment which broke by amma'call & she immediately run towards her house & pressed the doorbell amma opened the door & asked " ayyo ishu kahan thi tum your phone is also switched off


Ishita - wo amma actually aaj bhut traffic tha or bus bhi nhi mil rhi thi..


Appa - u should have to call me naa ..


Amma - but vishwa her phone is switched off naa toh kaise karti bechari (then turned to ishita) ishu u go & fresh n up till then I'm making coffee ..ishita nodded & went to change


She went inside & find mihika was sitting on bed keeping her head on headrest when ishita called her "akka


Mihika saw her " arey ishu you came back from college bt aaj late kyu ho gya


She comes & sit besides her " actually akka traffic bhut tha


Mihika - ohh


Ishita - akka plz atleast once u should call him..


Mihika - whom?


Ishita - don't try to act infront of me like you don't know mai kiske baare mein bol rhi hu..


Mihika turned her face other side


Ishita - plz akka don't do this with ur self..


Mihika - but why only me? he also can call me naa ..


Ishita - bas ap dono apne ego ke chakkar mein ek dusre ko call mt krna & continue ur blaming session.. Saying she went inside washroom unknown to them amma hearing all this after sometimes amma comes their with two cup of coffee & give it to IshMi both starts sipping it while amma went from there & called ishu "ishu kanna come here I need ur help


Ishita - coming amma..saying she went to amma


Amma - ishu maine tumhari baat suni..


Ishita - kon si amma?


Amma - wahi Jo abhi mihika se kar rahi thi..


Ishita - hmm amma I'm trying to convince akka to call jiju bt she is not ready bcoz of her ego but amma apne or appa ne hmesha hme sikhaya hai that if we want that our relationship last for long so we have throw this ego from our life bcoz this ruined a beautiful relationship in one second..


Amma cupped her face - meri kanna itni Badi kab ho gye ..saying she kissed on her temple


Amma - but ishu its all bcoz of me only & for this I deserve punishment from murugan not my mihku...saying starts crying


Ishita console her " no amma it's not your fault so plz don't blame yourself or amma ye tym ek dusre ko blame karne ka nahi bt prblm ka solution nikalne ka hai..


Amma wiped her tears " you are right kanna bt how ? tum dono ne kuch socha h kya?


Ishita saw her with confusion "kon dono?


Amma - you & mihir's brother raman..


Ishita was shocked hearing this "amma you know all this amma nodded when ishita said " trust me amma I'm doing all this for akka


Amma - relax kanna I had trust on you qki aaj main usi area mein thi jahan ke coffee shop mein tum dono the & I heard ur talk so don't worry i m with both of you..


Ishita (st) - murugan kahi amma ne wo sb toh nhi suna naa..


Ishita - amma kya suna apne?


Amma - not much just heard raman's plan bt after this I got call from ur appa so I came back..ishita get relaxed


Ishita - yeah amma we have a plan bt I need ur & appa's help..


Amma - we are with you kanna ..saying both went to appa where ishita narrates her plan to them & both agreed


Next morning

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Trio(amma,appa,ishita) gathered to execute their plan


Amma called mihika for breakfast she comes & starts eating when ishita said " arey akka I forget to tell you something


Mihika - what?


Ishita - actually ur frnd Sonali had called me to invite you for party..


Mihika - bt usne mujhe kyu call nhi kiya?


Ishita - actually ur phone was unreachable so she called me..


Amma - chlo ye achha hai frnds se milogi so u will feel good..


Mihika - no amma I'm not going anywhere mera mann nhi hai..


Appa - but why kanna ?


Mihika - bas aise hi..


Amma - plz kanna go naa I know I'm the reason of ur this situation..


Mihika - plz amma don't blame yourself..


Ishita - then go naa warna amma felt bad..Amma nodded hearing this


Mihika - ok but you too come with me..


Ishita - no akka actually mera assignment hai Jo mujhe aaj hi complete karna h or maine to start hi nhi kiya ..


Mihika - ok..soon they completed their breakfast


Ishita - ok guys now I'm college bye..saying she hugged them & went there giving some instruction to amma appa which they agreed


She was waiting for bus when her phone starts ringing flashing raman's name (Mr.Lrll)


Ishita - hlw Mr .lrll..


Raman - hlw Ms.jhalli what's going on? Did you starts the plan?


Ishita - yeah..saying she narrates him everything


Raman - great yrr tere mom dad toh bhut achhe hai..


Ishita - hmmm & did you starts ur plan?


Raman - yeah ..saying he told her everything


Ishita - that's great I hope aaj sb thk ho jaye..


Raman - of course hoga bcoz after completing this MiMi mission IshRa mission Jo start krna hai..


Ishita - who IshRa? ..


Raman - arey u don't know them they are today's love birds who are madly in love with each other or pta hai aage log inki jodi ke diwane honge..


Ishita - kon h yrr ye I don't know anything about them..


Raman - hawww tu nhi janti unki popularity. & charm toh tu in logon se puchh..


Ishita - kisse puchhu?


(Writer's view " who are reading their stories m I right my readers(Ishraians)


Ishita - Mr lrll now you are testing my patience btana ho toh btao nhi to I will cut the call..


Raman - arey jhalli u r really buddhu I'm talking about us u & me ..


Ishita - how ?


Raman - arey like we gave bhai & bhabhi name "MiMi so I made our name "IshRa ishita ka ish & raman ka ra


Ishita blushed hearing this


Raman - bas yrr jhalli itna blush mt kr..hearing this she saw around


Ishita - where are you? U r here naa..


Raman - nhi re main toh bas ghr se nikal rha & for knowing about ur situation I don't need to be with you..


Ishita - awww but don't you think kuch jyada ho gya..


Raman - haina mujhe bhi yahi lg rha ..


Ishita - what?


Raman - yahi that u gained so much fat..he said teasing her


Ishita - haww u r calling me fat..


Raman - haa thodi si & don't worry if u don't want to go Jim so just wait for tonight then I will reduce ur calories by kis..he was saying when she stopped him


Ishita(smiles) - shut up I'm cutting the call meet me on that place..saying she immediately hung the call


Raman(laughs) - arey poora sun toh le jhalli aww meri sharmili just wait for completing our MiMi mission saying he to drives towards that place..


That's all for now i hope you all liked it so hit like button do comments also..


Love

Harshita

Edited by harshiidiv - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
Such a lovely update.
Ishra confession is happened.
Ishra accepted each other.
Thanks for updating
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: -Kavya_P-

Awesome chappy
Update soon



Thanks for pm
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Posted: 7 years ago
Nice update..
Raman confessed his love but Ishita was reluctant..
Raman was sad but didn't want to compel her...
Finally she too accepted her feelings for him..
Raman was happy...
Raman dropped her home..
Amma saw IshRa together but didn't hear their conversation fully..
Ishita executed their plan with the help of her parents..
Raman likes to tease Ishu..
Plz update soon...
Thank you..
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Posted: 7 years ago
Fabulous update dear
Finally ishu accepted Raman's proposal after thinking a lot
Raman didn't want to force her and was leaving saying its OK but at last ishu stopped him
Loved their cute teasing moment
Ishu is all blushy blushy😳
Mission MiMi is being executed in full swing...
Amma appa are also supporting ishra

Loved it.
Thanks for pm dear
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Posted: 7 years ago
Awesome update 😳Loved it completely ❤️Raman confessed his love for Ishu but she is reluctant to accept it 😒Happy she accepted her feelings for him Amma saw IshRa together but didn't hear the convo fully IshRa are so cute 😳Can't wait for the next part now
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Posted: 7 years ago
It's lovely
Thanks for the update
You updated your story after long time
Please update next part soon
Don't make us wait long
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Posted: 7 years ago
Awesome update harshi.
Loved it.
Loved raman love confession..
Finally ishu accepted his proposal.
Raman is soo happy n now ishra r together n waiting to complete their mimi mission.
Amma was blaming herself n ishu is consoling her.
She got ready to help ishra in reuniting mimi.
Loved ishra moments..
Eagerly waiting for the next part.
Thanks for d pm:)

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