ShivIka SS: His Queen of Hearts ft. RiKara and RuVya (chap 8B-pg56) - Page 33

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Posted: 7 years ago
And you are back...
Why is this rudy sooo cute...I can see him in real while i read you...
Shivay is smitten alredy when can we get an equally smitten anni???
Actually didnt got enough of shivika...
And do update sooon plzzz ...
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Black_Maniac

Oh My God Kripa! This story is a life-saver. With the terribleterrible, irritating day that I had, I was on a lookout for something to read. Wattpad broke down, I have no new book to read but I swear, this is one of the best things I could've come across.

The story is only 6 chapters long and I still am not sure with the Advani's huge family but these six chapters have been a treat to read. Anika and Shivaay's relationship sounds so wonderful. You can feel things with them, and there is this consistent humour laden narrative of yours that makes it worth reading.

RiKara and RuVya's stories are being handled so amazingly as well and I can't help but root for some bhaiya ki shaadi main romance for my adorable OmRu.

It is amusing how you change a certain style of narrating depending on the character you are focusing on. Like when Om comes in picture, you don't switch POVs but you just write in a way that I can instantly connect with him. It seems as if it is Om's thoughts itself, with the instant poetic use of analogies.

I love how you've made Anika into a character that is so much Anika-ish yet a part is what I would love to see on-screen.
And Shivaay's smitten self is so adorable to read ❤️

Tej the pole-dancer had me in splits. Trust Billu to have a weurd imagination to not think of Anika the way his saasu maa suggested 🤣

There is unique way where you make it humorous, sizzling and beautiful to read as well.

The cherry on this cake has to be your vocab. I am so much inspired right now ;)


Once again, thank you for continuing and bringing it on the first few page, just made my day 🤗

Waiting for an update ;)

Krishi, I am beaming right now, trust me you have no idea how much your whole comment made me happy!
Thank you so much and I am glad this one helped you on your bad day, its as if this finally served its purpose!

There will only be a lil of Advanis, so you can give it a rest. I'll make sure I mention who is who when I write itself at the times i mention them. Its hard to rem whole clan of new characters (:

You liked my narrative? This is like the best day⭐️

Well, Annika gotta be Khidkitod nah😉
Thank you so much Krishi❤️
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: panjami

And you are back...

Why is this rudy sooo cute...I can see him in real while i read you...
Shivay is smitten alredy when can we get an equally smitten anni???
Actually didnt got enough of shivika...
And do update sooon plzzz ...

Equally smitten Annika huh?😉 soon u will know😃
Well, next episode has more ShivIka, this you can say is like OBro one!
Thank you so much❤️
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: tanisha997

Finally you update🤗

Hehe, sorry for the delay😳
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Posted: 7 years ago
love love love it
just caught up on the full ff
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Posted: 7 years ago


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Posted: 7 years ago
great update thanks for pm
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Posted: 7 years ago
Such a sweet update that was!!
Thanks for the pm
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Posted: 7 years ago
awesome as always... can't help but gush over all the couples and their journey so far. Thanks for the PM
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Posted: 7 years ago
Such a sweet update.
Thanks for the pm

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