Bringing him back( Ch 3 updated)

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Guys maine pichli story isi k liye jaldi khatam ki thi.
So basically theme bada hi simple hai Vik ko doosri duniya se vaapas lana. And yeh humari adu k bina koi kar hi nahi sakta.
Toh after Vik goes into another world adu is shattered. She behaves rudely with all,even with herself. Then one day she finds something in shaitaan chowki which arouses a hope in her that Vik can be brought back.

Guys agar aap chaho ge tabhi main likhoongi. Bina reviews k likhne ka koi faayda nahi hai.
Batana k likhoon ya nahi.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Yeh .. First one to comment on this.
Pls jaldiii update karo.
Mujhe aditi pe poora bharosa hai, ki woh Vik ko jaldi wapas layegi .
Bas suresh sir bak bak na chalu karde , post sooon
And Vik safe ho
Edited by Shristhi19 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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YEAH!!!DO POST SOON!!!ADU WILL BRING BACK VIK FOR SURE🥳
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Yeah manu do it yea bhi koi puchne wali baat hai bindaaz likho...and adu vik ko jaroor laaegi...
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Pucho mat likh dhalo yaar we all have been waiting for something like this
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Please jaldi update karo .. I can't wait for it
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Ye bhi koi poochne ki baat hain...likho likho pls likho 😉
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Posted: 7 years ago
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So guys ch1 of BHB:
(AFTER VAN TAKES VIK WITH HIM)
ADU:Vikrant...Vikrant...vikrant. Tum mujhe aise chhodke nahin jaa sakte. Plzzz aa jao na vikrant...vikrant.
(That same vaidhya comes there)
VAIDHYA: Maine kaha tha k woh tumhare liye nahi bana hai.
ADU: Par kyon? Kyon nahi bana hai woh mere liye? Humara baar baar milna phir bichadna phir milna. Jab ek khatre mein hota hai toh doosre ka usse bachana? Kya hai yeh? Aur aap bol rahe hain k woh mere liye nahi bana. Toh kya woh uss vanraaj k liye bana tha?
VAIDHYA:Haan shayad. Dekho aditi buraai ko khatam karne k liye Acchai ko toh aana hi padega? Kans ko haraane k liye krishna ko kisi na kisi roop mein toh aana hi padega.
ADU:Aur aapko lagta hai k buraai haar gayi?
VAIDHYA: Haan.
ADU: Toh aapko bahut galat lagta hai. Buraai toh jeet gayi. Le gayi woh mere vikrant ko apne saath. Kans krishna ko le gaya apne saath aur aap keh rahe hain k buraai haar gayi. Aaj buraai ne humein haraya hai vaidhya g aur main yeh hone nahin doongi.
VAIDHYA: Jo tum karna chahti ho woh namumkin hai.
ADU: Aapko pata hai agar aaj maine haar maan li toh yeh meri nahi vikrant ki haar hogi aur main vikrant ko haarta hua nahi dekh sakti. Mera vaada hai yeh khud se aur vikrant se k main use vaapas laakar rahoongi. Aditi apne vikrant ko vaapas layegi aur koi usse nahi rok paayega. Na vanraaj na vanraaj ka baap.
VAIDHYA: Tum paagal ho chuki ho.
ADU: Yeh paagalpan nahi hai,junoon hai vikrant ko vaapas paane ka. Aur main yeh karke rahoongi. Just wait and watch

(ADU GOES FROM THERE. IN THE LODGE)
(ADITI RE LIVES ALL THE MEMORIES OF VIKRANT)
THEIR FIRST MEETING
VIK:ACP Vikrant Singhal, Mumbai police.
ADU:Oh! Jai hind sir.
(EVERY MOMENT THEY SPENT TOGETHER)
Haan yeh madam hain na ajeeb aur main gareeb.
Tum ho na mere saath,tum bachalogi mujhe munjyaaon se.
Sabzi mein Namak kam hai.
Ab mujhe toh apni officer ka dhyaan rakhna hi padega jo itni intelligent hai,sensitive hai...
Hum police wale hai aditi bhagwaan nahi.
Tum insaano se rishta kyon nahi rakhti?
Police ki naukri chhodke philosophy kyon nahi padhati? Acchi teacher banogi.
I know k tum apna khayaal rakh sakti ho.
Main..main goli chala hi nahi paaya aditi kyon ki woh..woh tum thi aditi.
Lagta hai jaane ka waqt aa gaya hai.
ADU:Aur tum sachmein chale gaye vikrant. Muje chhodke. Abhi toh humein kitne aur unsolved cases ka antim sanskaar karna. Mujhe tumhare aur kitne sade hue jokes sunne hai. Ab toh jaise kaanon ko unki aadat ho gayi hai. Mujhe tumhari aadat ho gayi hai vikrant.
"BG song"
(Hum punjabi hain toh ek punjabi song toh banta hai)
Tu waada kita c k jind teri khushiyan naal bhardoon...
Tu aakhda hunda c k chann tere pairan vich dhardoon...
Na tu waada poora kita,
Na tu chann hi lai aaya,
Mere kamle dil nu dass kyon pher,tu dukkhan vich paaya...
Dass ki majboori pai gai aa...aaa
Dil taan mera c karda chadd dan par teri aadat pai gayi aa...aaa.




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Posted: 7 years ago
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Wow many kya mast likha hai...hayyy vik ke saare dialogue mujhe uske saare expression yaad aa gye bichari adu!!!!!
Tune toh abhi hi rola diya sage kya hoga...do continue!!!!! Aadat toh Hume bhi ho gai hai pr viditi!!!!!!
Thanku
Edited by Sakshi2104 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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'Aditi apne vikrant ko vaapas layegi aur koi usse nahi rok paayega. Na vanraaj na vanraaj ka baap'.
Best line ever . Jaldi update karna can't wait

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