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Christy

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Posted: 7 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: Sd1978
Its so sad..beautifully written..do continue...

Thanks for the cmnt I'm glad you liked it.. would uodauu asap😃

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Christy

@....Anabella...

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Posted: 7 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: sweetunidhi.445
It was emotional yet beautiful. Do try to write more of it.
Loved it.

Am glad you liked it . Would try and update asap

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Christy

@....Anabella...

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Posted: 7 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: Zenab78
So emotional
Awesome os

Thanks😃

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Christy

@....Anabella...

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Posted: 7 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: RomComFan
I'm crying... finally she gets to break free of being the string one... I hope you continue soon

Aww.. sorry for making you cry.. but I found her step legit enough you can't be a rock always .you can't stand strong when your insides breaking.. will continue asap once am dinewith my exam😃

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Christy

@....Anabella...

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Posted: 7 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: plmzaq
Emotional os

Thanks😃

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Christy

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Posted: 7 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: AgnesFan
It was so beautiful ! I blame the writers for not exploring her emotions properly . She never had a way to let out her emotions . She has bottled up so much and still she is trying to make pain her strength . I feel so bad for her . No one should get fate like hers . I have never seen any ITV lead who is as strong as Avni . She takes everything without a single complaint . I have wondered what will break if not the Neil taking away Mowgli . She has literally made into orphan .😭

Aww.. am glad you liked it .. had been a lil nervous on how ppl would react to Avni committing sucide. Exactly my point too much of bottling up leads to worse outcomes. Avni has been one of the strongest and most unique leads I've ever seen on Indian soaps glad to see her. But I hate the injustice done to her character.. That's what all she had was Mowgli' and no he has also been snatched from her .. she would surely lose her sainty.. 😭 ps- I really wanted joint custody

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Christy

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Posted: 7 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: Ashi3
This is so heartbreaking! Avni really is an unsung hero. No one could have endured what she did all through her life and still stay strong. She lost every single person she loved. My heart breaks for her. And what you have showed is realistic. I don't support suicide, but at times life becomes so hard on you that suicide seems to be the only possible solution. If death would end the misery and provide relief from all the pain, then why wouldn't one decide to embrace it?

Avni have endured enough. She has sacrificed enough. She has cried enough. Now she deserves happiness. And I really, really hope that she will get her deserved happiness.

Neil took too long to come. I hope at least he's not too late. Please do update the next chapter soon. This story is going to haunt me until I read the next update. So please do update fast and provide solace to my heart.

Exactly my point if ppl don't show battle scars that doesn't me that they ever never been into a battle. She endured her fight with life for too long. She always had a reason to live first it was revenge for her mother's death and getting back her brother , plus her Neela Maa .then it became Neil and now Mogwli. But when all reasons for living has been taken away from you ruthlessly what's bothering point in living? When see the hope of at least living in peace in the world. Though I ain't a support of committing sucide but it seems realistic.

To give up life in hope that they sun would finally shine on you. There would be a part two soon. Neil did take long but I really want him to get his brain back asap.

Thanks loads for the cmnt I was pretty nervous how would ppl react to committing sucide. Glad to read this cmnt 😃