#3Song Osthon #3 Thank you note on pg 96 May 22 - Page 45

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Posted: 7 years ago
This is such a Beautiful OS
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Posted: 7 years ago
Nice os... Coffee chat and all is so cute... All pics are amazing... And yeah.. drug addict concept I liked it more when Raman helped her to get her back to normal... So nicely written .. with the cute song...
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Posted: 7 years ago
Ishra os dil hai ki manta nahi@
Lovely update
Outstanding pictures

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Posted: 7 years ago
Lovely OS .
Ishra met each other in coffee shop and fell for each other .
But ishita denied his proposal as she is a drug addict .
But Raman married her and slowly she quit taking drugs .
Now they are happily married for three years.

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Posted: 7 years ago
Nice os dear...Ishra met in cafe...they fall in love with each other...Raman proposed her for marry but she denied telling her addiction of drug...but Raman adamant to marry her...& Finally ishra get married...thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 7 years ago
Manwa lage
Beautiful os dear

Finally Ishu true love wins get her Raman back in her life

Raman realised he hurt Ishu so much want to apologise to her in between her ignorance make him realised his love for Ishu

Confession was best

Finally my ishra are together


Happy for them


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Posted: 7 years ago
Hey guys, how are you all. So my last song OS and of course last OS of this Song OSthon. Thank you so much harshita for giving me opportunity to be part of this Song OSthon. This was my first Song OSthon and really I enjoyed a lot and I know everyone enjoyed. Our readers also and our writers also. We all will miss it, right guys.
And Ya I am sorry also for not updating one day because of some reasons.
So coming back to this, my last OS. So this os I have written after raman slapped ishita for her claiming to be his wife and pihu's mother. I hope you all will enjoy it. This OS is suggested by Akrirti. The song is Agar Tu Hota Toh from Baaghi.
So guys let end this night with the last OS of this Song OSthon. Enjoy reading.

Agar Tu Hota Toh

After Raman slapped ishita for her saying being her wife and pihu's mother, ishita went to iyer's house directly to her room shattered and shut herself from everyone. Not even once even in her wildest dream she has thought that she will have to face this much insult that to from the person the loves the most, she has not ever imagined that her raman will insult her like this and top of that slap her that too for calling herself his wife, their kids mother in front of their family and no one dared to say even a word in her favor. Today she was really shattered beyond words. This slap was not her face it was on her soul on their love on their relation. She was still not able to consume this that her ravan kumar slapped her just because she claimed to be his. She knows that raman had done this because he has lost his memory otherwise he would have never insult her or slap her like this if he could have remember her. But at this moment she is not able to make her heart understand this thing because at this moment she is so much hurt to make her heart understand the situation. She was sitting on floor crying and cursing her fate for throwing her into a situation where she can't even justify herself.


Ishita- This is not done raman, this is not done.


While on the other hand raman was also very disturbed with his act. He entered the room after ishita left the Bhalla house and sat on the bed thinking about the happenings.


Raman- Ye kaya kiya maine, chahe jo bhi ho mujhe ishita par haath nahi uthana chaiya tha. Ye tune theek nahi kiya raman.


Meri raahon mein pade
Tere pairon ke nishan
Ne kahan.. ne kahan


He remember how he claimed to be his wife and pihu's mother


Teri saanson se judi
Meri saanson ki wafa
Ne kahan.. ne kahan


He remembered her disappointed and hurtful eyes and her face full of tears somewhere still pleading him to believe him.


Girte un ansuon mein
Kuch toh tujhsa lagge hai
In ashqon mein main na khota


He has tears in his eyes unknown to himself remembering her pleading and hurtful eyes. While ishita was also crying remembering his act. Both remember their happy moments spend with each other and the happiness they get when they are together.


Agar tu hota toh na rote hum
Agar tu hota toh na rote hum

Agar tu hota toh na rote hum
Agar tu hota toh na rote hum


Ishita remember how they get married for ruhi and secondly for adi though second time they have taken the vows from heart.


Paon ko thhe miley zameen ki tarah
Ankhon mein kyu huwe nami ki tarah


Ishita went down feeling suffocated in the room and sat on the bench remembering the promises raman made to her and the times he loved her and her telling about how lucky he felt her to be his better half and then remember how he insulted her and slapped her as she claimed to be his wife.


Dil ko tum kehte thhe khuda ka hai ghar

Chod ke kyu gaye ajnabi ki tarah


Raman also come down feeling restless and stop seeing ishita sitting on bench crying. He felt a prick in his heart seeing her crying, he was feeling pained seeing her like this but not getting the reason of his restlessness. Ishita felt someone's gaze on her and saw raman looking at her, both shared a painful eyelock.


Girte un ansuon mein
Kuch toh tujhsa lagge hai
In ashqon mein main na khota


They were sharing an eyelock where ishita was complaining him while raman feeling guilty.


Agar tu hota toh na rote hum
Agar tu hota toh na rote hum


Raman went to ishita till maintaining their eyelock while ishita stood on her place. Raman reach near her and stood in front of her. He raise his hand and wipe her tears and said looking cupping her face and crying.


Raman- Plz help me ishita, bhaut ghutton ho rahi hai mujhe. I am not able to take this anymore ishita, I can't be like this. Mai mar jaunga ishita, mar jaunga aise. Na tumse door reh paa raha hu or na tumhare paas aa paa raha hu, aise lagta hai jaise kuch bhaut keetmi bhool gaya hu jo shayad mere jeene ki wajah hai. Tumhe takleef dekar usse kaye zayada takleef mujhe hoti hai. Bhaut dar lag raha hai,Plz help me ishita, plz help me.


Saying so he kissed her forehead while she close her eyes. After some time not feeling any moment she opened her eyes and saw raman standing on the same place looking at her or you can somewhere pleading her to help him.


Bin tere dekhun main
Zara sa lagoon
Gham se hi aaj kal
Bhara sa lagoon
Chod de saath na zindagi meri
Soch ke baat yeh darra sa lagoon


Ishita thought something and went towards him without breaking their eyelock. While raman was still not able to understand what he is feeling.


Girte un ansuon mein
Kuch toh tujhsa lagge hai
In ashqon mein main na khota


Ishita stood in front of him, both were looking at each other talking with their eyes.


Agar tu hota toh na rote hum
Agar tu hota toh na rote hum

Agar tu hota toh na rote hum
Agar tu hota toh na rote hum


After sometime ishita break their eyelock and said wiping her tears.


Ishita- Raman aapko lagta hai na ki mai jhoot bol rahi hu ki mai aapki biwi hu, toh theek hai mujhe sirf ek mauka chahia kudhko saabit karne ka.


Raman- Dekho ish...


Ishita- Just one chance raman, mai aapko khai le jana chati hu, agar waha jane ke baat bhi aapko lage ki mai jhoot bol rahi hu then I promise ki mai aapse bhaut door chali jaungi, kabhi aapke raaste me nahi aungi, I promise.


Raman saw some truth and determination in her eyes and somewhere seeing her confidence feeling maybe she is saying the truth, so he simply nodded and went with her. Both went in ishita's car while ishita is driving. She took raman to their old society. She was entering the society while raman was looking around and was getting some flashes. He close his eyes try to see those blur images but not able to see. His trance was broken with ishita applying break. She went out of the car and went towards him and open the door to let him out. He come out of car and follow her. They were going upstairs while raman was following her and getting flashes of two women fighting then a couple bumping into each other and falling down.


He was standing outside their old apartment, his trance was broken by ishita's voice. He looked at her as she opened the apartment's door.


Raman- Ye kiska ghar hai ishita


Ishita- Ye hamara purana ghar hai raman, vo ghar jaha se hamare kahani ki shurwat hue thi, jaha aap mujhe shaadi karke laye the, ander chale.


Raman- ha


Both went inside together, she took him to their room, he entered the room after ishita and was shocked to see their pictures hanging on the wall. Their marriage pics, with pihu, ruhi and adi and some of their family pics. Before he could progress everything and ask anything from ishita he heard some noise. He turn around and saw a wedding mandap and them taking vows and them binding together. All her and his family members were present there. One more movie was played and there also both were getting married. He was confused seeing all this when she heard her


Ishita- Yahi sach hai raman, mai aapki biwi hu, aur hamari shaddi ek baar nahi balki do baar hui hai.


Raman- Par ye sab... matlab kaise... Aur agar ye hamara ghar hai toh hum vaha kuy rehete hai aur mujhe kuch yaad kuy nahi aa raha


He held his head and sat on bed while ishita run to kitchen and bought water for him, she made him drink some water and settled beside him


Ishita- Relax raman don't stress yourself, I will tell you everything, don't worry but now will you trust me.


Raman nodded because seeing all this he don't have any reason not to believe her, though for one second he thought all this to Photoshoped or manipulated but what about her eyes which hold sincerity, truth and determination and all these are not looking being manipulated but real.


While ishita bought their wedding albums.


Ishita- Actually jabh mai jail se bahar aye toh mujhe pata chala ki aap mujhe bhool chuke ho toh bhaut toot gaye thi mai. Toh mai budhapest se ane ke baad yaha aa gaye. Actually ye building jal chuki thi isliye hame us ghar me shift hona padha. Par bhudhapest se wapas ane ke baad mai yaha aye is ghar ko phirse sajaya. Bhaut saare yaade judi hai is ghar se hamari. Aur romi ne mujhe bataya ki ye albums sabhne society ke store room me rakhi hai taki aapko na pata chale hamare bare mai.


Ishita then opened the album and start narrating their life of past 13 years. As she was narrating their story he was getting shocked with the realizations, that ruhi and adi is their children not his business partner or manager, shagun being his ex-wife and ishita being second. Rudi being his and shaguns chidren, pihu being their daughter. Them marrying for ruhi, their friendship, their love, separation of 7 years, their being united again and marrying , their again separating for pihu, then all being united again a big happy family, and at last her going to jail.


Raman was shocked to listen all this and held his head and getting some blur flashes and some clear images. He got up from bed and suddenly faint. Ishita get scared seeing him unconscious and ran to him. She somehow make him lay on bed and call the doctor. After sometime doctor came and check him and said he get fainted due to stress and shock and will be fine soon and went from there.


After 3 hours raman open his eyes saw the surroundings and when all the happening come into his mind, he get up with a jerk and ran outside and saw ishita setting the table for them. He ran to her and hugged her tight while crying and said


Raman- I am sorry ishita, I forget you, I am really sorry. But now I remember everything. I am sorry ishita for slapping you, hurting you and insulting you just because you claimed to be my wife. I am sorry, really sorry, plz forgive me plz.


Ishita got happy listening to him gaining his memory back and hugged him with all his might.


Ishita- It's ok raman, I forgive you. Aap ki galti nahi thi, aapko toh kuch yaad hi nahi tha. I am just happy that you remember me, our family ,our kids, that's all. Mujhe aur kuch nahi cahia.


After sometime they broke the hug while raman cup her face and kissed her. They kissed passionately for their lost time. After sometime both settled on table and fed each other. After that they went to bed and sat in each other's embrace, while ishita told him about all this done by simmi and param. Raman was not able to believe that her own sister did this to them just for revenge and after being pressurized by raman ishita told him the truth about anaya's death. Both console each other and slept after sometime determining to punish their enemies.


The End


That's all for this OS. I hope you all like it. Do hit like and give your wonderful comments.

Love

Sarthi

Edited by sharda_123 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
Awesome update.
Loved it
Both ishra are broken
Ishu take Raman to old house
She tell raman everything
After that raman gain his memory n say sorry to ishu for his behavior

Thanks for PM
Edited by Rarupatel - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
Very nice story
Thanks for the story
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Posted: 7 years ago
Nice update..
Ishita was shattered ..
Raman was restless thinking about Ishita..
Later Ishita came down as she was feeling suffocated.
Raman saw her and went to her..
Ishita asked him to give a chance to prove herself..
Ishita took him to their old society and told everything..
Finally he gained his memory back..
Thank you..

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