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Posted: 7 years ago
This was my very first OS in the forum
I had never write an OS
So bear the mistake if any...

Here is the OS on song Manwa Lage from Happy New Year suggested by harshidiv aka Harshita di..



Professor - so are u ready ishita n raman yeh hamari college ki reputation ka sawal hai toh plss apne yeh jagde side mein rakkar practice karna..

While both ishra nodded n leaves

Mihika- hey ishu iss sal bhi hamari clg hi jitengi coz we had u n raman a very nice dance partners
But ishu was loss somewhere n say only dance partners n cry
Mihika- hey ishu I m sorry plss u don't cry...chod na use ishu if he don't love u its his loss...aur tu bhi kab tak us baat ko lekar roti rahegi jaise woh normal behave kar raha hai jaise kuch huwa hi nai tu bhi waise hi behave kar...aur use bata de k tuje uske rejection se koi farak nai padta..

Ishita- par muje farak padta hai... Kya karu mein kaise normal rahu...woh mujse pyar kyu nai karte..kya mein pyar k layak nai hoo...

Mihika- aisa kuch nai hai ishu aur ab tu us Raman ke liye Rona band kar de aur practice pe dhyan de...

Ishita- hmm u r right mein kyu Sochu ab uske baare mein jise meri feelings ki kadar nai hai...

Other side
Mihir- chal Bhai ab tu practice karna start karde hamari college ki izzat ka sawal hai...waise jab raman aur ishita ho ek sath toh darne ki kya baat...
Listening ishita name raman expression change n goes into memory of his n ishita life

Flashback

Ishra were college mates but ishu is nerdy girl always busy in study while Raman was cool boy n many girls are behind him but he never paid any attention to them...
On annual day Mihika fill the form in behalf of ishu for dancing competition while ishu scold for filling her name but Mihika insisted her to participate n let know everyone about her skills..
In annual day dance competition get tie between ishra so judge ask them to performed together but their performance was that much brilliant that judge can't able to take decision n distributed prizes between them n announced ishra as dance partners & from that ishra become dance partner n win many trophy for college..
Though both are became good friend but Raman don't like ishu as she was not cool n famous like him so he keep safe distance but our nerdy ishu fall in love with raman...

Though by passing time their friendship grow n raman point of view towards ishita get change but he like her as a friend only... Not more than that...

Like this year passed
Ishu was sitting n thinking about raman n her... While Mihika call her but she was lost in her world
Mihika shook her n ask what happen where are u lost...

Ishita- nothing Mihika u tell why were u calling me...

Mihika- don't try to change the topic I know u were thinking something also smiling is something is there which I don't know ask curiously...

Ishita- hmm...there was something that u don't know..

Mihika- what tell me na plzz...

Ishita- I fall in love said with a dreamy smile


Manwa laage.. o manwa laage
Laage re sanware
Laage re sanware
Le tera hua jiya ka, jiya ka, jiya ka ye gaanv re

Manwa laage.. o manwa laage
Laage re sanware
Laage re sanware
Le khela maine jiya ka, jiya ka, jiya ka
hai daav re


Mihika is just shocked listening this coz the ishita who always busy in study n in her own world can fall for someone... N ask who was that boy for u fall may be he is not like u...
Before Mihika complete her sentence ishu speak up saying Raman...

This was another blow for Mihika as ishra are poles apart one is north then another one is south.
She again ask ishu the name of boy for confirmation..

Ishita- Mihika u listen is right I fell for Raman n I know I m not compatible for him but hogaya pyar kya karu...

Mihika thinks for sometimes n say u proposed him...

Ishita eyes get widened n say no I can't do that what if he will reject I can't take his rejection..
Said sadly..

Mihika- so u will wait for whole life... Just proposed may be he also like u

Ishita ask excitedly is this possible..

Mihika- may be possible... So u try it if he say no then just try to win his heart...may be he realized that u love him truly.

Ishita after thinking much decided to do as per Mihika instruction

She decided to proposed raman but just waiting fr the right time soon the time came
She goes to raman n say him the three magical words but raman reject her proposal saying he still have better choice then her.

Musaafir hoon main door ka
Deewana hoon main dhoop ka
Mujhe na bhaye.. na bhaye, na bhaye chaanv re

Manwa laage.. o manwa laage
Laage re sanware
Laage re sanware
Le tera hua jiya ka, jiya ka, jiya ka ye gaanv re


Raman leaves breaking her heart but ishu decided that she will try to win raman heart...

O.. kisi ka toh hoga hi tu
Kyun na tujhe main hi jeetun
Khule khabon me jeete hain, jeete hain baawre

Mann ke dhaage, o mann ke dhaage
Dhaage pe saanwre
Dhaage pe saanwre
Hai likha mene tera hi, tera hi, tera hi to naam re



So she always sent bouquet with cards...
Sending him love letter stating she loves him n can wait for himfor whole life...

Soon this news spread In the college which make raman more angry towards ishita...
So he decided to give her a peace of mind n he lash her out in front of all college...
Ishu get hurt by his behavior n thought that she will never get Raman love n decided to never ever come in his path...
But due to raman behavior ishita has become fun part for the college students some make fun of her or someone mock her...
this was seen By raman & feel guilty that he shouldn't have talk like that with ishita...

She feels bad about it but then decided to ignored all the things n focus in her study which was her aim from earlier...

Soon days start passing raman was feeling void as now he was missing ishita every time he thinks that someone will tell that Ishita is calling u or someone has brought gift for u
But it didn't happened n he realized that he had hurt ishu a lot that now she is not ready to talk with him...n he need to talk with her b say sorry for his behavior...

Like god has grant his wishes...
Professor call ishra for the dance competition which was going to held between colleges...

Flashback ends

Mihir shaked raman n ask hey where are u lost raman here I m talking like a mad person n u r not even listening...

Raman- sorry yaar but I didn't hear what u said...

Mihir makes raman sit beside him n ask what happen Raman i m seeing from past days u were behaving weirdly is something is bothering u...

Raman- yes mihir whenever I close my eyes I see ishita n her hurt n cry face n feel guilty for my act...

Mihir- its not too late raman after dance competition u apologized to her n accept her love..

Raman looks towards mihir when he say don't see like this I know u had feeling for ishita so go n win ur love back...coz it was last year of the college n make it memorable for u n ishita... I know she will forgive u as she still love u...

Raman- pakka she will forgive me...

Mihir- may be ha agar nai bhi maani toh u try to seek her forgiveness

Raman- OK...u r right... So mission started ishita patao..

Mihir- hmm...so no more talk at evening u had to go for practice... So now rest for sometimes n he leaves..

Other side
Mihika- chal ishita let it be now u rest in evening u have to go for practice n be strong n don't let that raman to mock u or make fun of u understand

Ishu nodded n Mihika also leave
While ishita was cursing herself that why she fall in love with raman who doesn't even care for her...but then decided not to think about him n take a small nap for a time..

At evening both ishra reached at venue for practice
Soon the practices was started raman try to talk to ishita in between practice but ishita ignored it n paid full concentration on her practice as she don't want to talk to Raman...
Soon the practice get end ishita was going to leave but raman pull her in a corner n say angrily
What are u thinking of ur self here I m trying to talk to u but no u were just ignoring me...

Ishita- don't u understand that I don't want to talk u...u only said na k stay away from me so I m doing that only...said with a equal tone n leaves before she fell weak in front of him...

Like few days they meet but raman can't able to talk to her as she always ignored him...coz she don't have that much strength to bear more harsh words from him..

While raman realized that how bad ishita feel when I always ignored her love n decided to win her back at any cost

Ras bundiya nayan piya raas rache
Dil dhad dhad dhadke shor mache
Yun dekh sek sa lag jaaye
Main jal jaaun bas pyaar bache


Soon the day of competition comes
Like always ishra won the competition making college proud of them...

Soon the judge call ishra on stage n give them trophy when raman say I want to say something can I get a mic plzz...

All were curios to know what raman has to tell
Raman- first thank you to all who were here to celebrated our happiness

All clapped for him
While he say n second I want to confess something to some one
He turn towards ishu n sit in his knee n say I m sorry ishita for having like that with you...u love from ur heart but I always go away from you but when u didn't talk to me or listen to me I realized that I have fallen for u
Yes this is true I love you miss ishita will you forgive me for my foolishness n start a fresh with me..
While ishita eyes filled with tears n she make him stand n hug him tightly n say I love u too...

Aise dore daale kaala jaadu naina kaale
Tere main hawaale hua seene se laga le
Aa.. main tera...
O.. dono dheeme dheeme jalein
Aaja dono aise milein
Zameen pe laage, na tere, na mere paanv re

Manva laage.. manva laage
Laage re sanware
Laage re sanware
Le tera hua jiya ka, jiya ka, jiya ka ye gaanv re

All clapped for ishra while they leave the stage together for their new beginning of the life

Rahoon main tere naino ki, naino ki,
naino ki hi chaanv re...
Le tera hua jiya ka, jiya ka, jiya ka ye gaanv re
Rahoon main tere naino ki, naino ki,
naino ki hi chaanv re...

That's all for the Os
Hope u all like it...
Will wait for ur response.
Rarupatel thumbnail
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Posted: 7 years ago
Updated an os
Have a look
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Posted: 7 years ago
Awesome os
Ishu used to run behind him
But he hurt him
From then Raman began to miss her
When he tried to talk to her she ignored him
Then he confessed his love in the stage
Loved it
Thnx for the pm
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Thanks for pm
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Nice story
Thanks for the story
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Awesome superb fabulous lovely OS dear
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 7 years ago
Awesome os!!
Loved it.
Ishra r dance partners n ishu love him..
She proposed raman but he rejected her love n she got hurt..but still ishu was determined to win his love n used to run behind him..
Raman hurt ishu n she stopped following him..
He started missing her n realised his love for her..he was determined to win her back..
They both win d dance competition n he proposed ishu infront of all n she too accepted..
Very well written.
Thanks for d pm:)
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Posted: 7 years ago
Nyc lovely os.
Loved it.
Thanks for pm.

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Posted: 7 years ago
Fabulous OS 👏Loved it a lottt ❤️IshRa are dance partner's Ishu secretly in love with him 😳She proposed him but he rejected her 😒Happy she didn't lose hope n decided to pursue him He hurted her n she got dejected He started to miss her n realized his love for her 👍🏼Now he decided to pursue her 😳They won the dance competition n he proposed her in front of all She accepted his love 🤪Fab narration 👍🏼
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Beautiful os
Loved it
Ty 4 d pm too

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