PrAja /RoSal OS - Surprises!! (Complete)

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Hello Fellas! Khamma Ghani!!

Here is a sweet shot, simply flaunting a feel good read. I hope you enjoy it. Please give it a try...



SURPRISES!!!




"Hum pe bharosa hai?" He asked in a bit husky low voice.

"Obviously! Yeh kaisa sawal hua?..par" she replied instantly.

"Par Kya? Chaliye na" softly taking her hand in his, he made a cute puppy face.

"You made me promise to spend the whole day with you, Right!?"

"Din na... Par...Abhi to thik se subah bhi nahi hui hai!" She rubbed her eyes with the other free hand and made a face at the dark outside.

"Haan to!? Ab Jaldi se taiyaar ho ke niche aa jaaiye. I'm waiting!" He said with a hint of urgency in his voice.

"Maa, papa?" She attempted one more time.

"They are asleep. Unse maine kal hi permission le li thi... To ab chale...ya aur kuch?" He got up

"And yeah! Red suits you more!" He winked, ruffling his messy curls and turned to leave. She opened her mouth to find any other excuse to save a little bit of her sleep.

"Kya Ji? Aap bhi hamare hai and yeh din bhi! Rok sako to rok lo...!!" He grinned before she could say a word as her cheeks turned a light shade of pink.

"Achha!?" He stopped at the door, smiled mischievously to her. Tapped on his wrist, showing her the time to hurry up.

"Paagal!" She blushed a little at his retreating figure and got up excited
"Good morning Ajabde! Let the day begin!"

Smiling to herself she freshened up really fast and surfed through her wardrobe to find something classy red!




Pratap Singh, a charming persona, looked handsome in white T-shirt, blue denims and jacket. His curly hair looked cute as he played with the car keys, waiting in the hall.

Paired with comfy floral blue denims she looked simply gorgeous in that cherry red frilled shoulder cut top. Simple diamond earstuds and a single diamond pendent, she knew how to accessorise herself.

He was lost staring her, when she silently walked up to him. Her kohl smudged eyes shone even in such dim light. He got back realizing her there narrowing eyes at him.

"You look stunning!" He admired her swiftly pulling out a soft red scarf from his jacket. She smiled questioningly as he played with his eyebrows making her frown a bit more. Smiling he made her cover her eyes with it.

"Arre! Ab yeh kyun?" She tried to ask before he tied it softly "Hum Kaha jaa rahe hai?"

"Shh! Bahot sawal karte hai aap!" He shook his head whispering in her ear. Politely he held her hand making their way to the car outside.



Chilly wind of dawn touched her face tickling and played with her hair freely with an enthusiastic smile dancing on her lips as they drove smoothly on the road. Soft chirps and murmurs started making the atmosphere all the more amazing.

"Ab aur kitni der Pratap?" She asked cutely.

"About to reach ma'am" He replied as she chuckled.

Few moments later, car stopped at a distance making her frown

"Pahonch gaye?"

"Um hmm" He said jumping out of the driving seat.

"Yayy!" She flung open the car door just to realize she still had that cover on. Smiling at her eagerness, he helped her come out and led a few steps.

Standing behind her, he removed the cover as they witnessed one of the most blissful sight in front of them.




"Beautiful!!!!" She exclaimed with the brightest wide smile which can melt any heart!

"Beautiful!!" Glancing at the baby orange sun just peeping out from behind the hills, he turned to her wrapping the scarf around her neck.

Her eyes twinkled happily as she clasped his arm. The greenery around got illuminated as the king shone in the sky taking over dim stars to rest. The birds chirping and flattering danced to their own created music as even trees and flowers around ruffled waking up. As if the whole nature welcomed to enjoy her dream sunrise with her man beside, it looked like nothing less than the dream itself.

"Haaye!" As if sinking in the mesmerizing beauty inside her, she leaned to his shoulder. When she was about to thank him for this wonderful visual surprise, he stepped back a step.

She looked up at him when he said "Patience Ma'am! Picture Abhi baaki hai mere dost!" He winked asking for her hand. She gave her hand smiling excited for what was next.

They walked up a little inside as coppice and bushes grew dense. Holding hands they moved to a rocky path. She widened her eyes in surprise as the soft sound of water ripples got more clear.

They stood in front of the beautiful snowy white waterfall! The morning golden sun rays played hide and seek reaching the ground. It's reflection in dancing water and butterflies around, made it look magical as the water flew cheerfully reflecting her happiness.

The flora and fauna with the fragrance of newly blossomed flowers around the place made it look like nothing less than the heaven!



Her face shone with gleeful smile as they sat on one of the rock. Keeping boots aside, they dangled their feet into cold water, childishly splashing and playing with water.

"Gajab yaar!" She stared around in awe.

"Here" he offered her a leaf bowl which she took curiously.

"Jalebis...!!???" She half jumped up looking at him, astonished.

She just loved the dish, so he packed some Rabdi jalebis for breakfast. What better than her favorite sweets to make the moment more perfect!?

He chuckled at her child-like enthusiasm as she finished her pudi of jalebis in no time, even had half of his! He simply stared her as she looked too cute, wiping her mouth with her hand like a small kid.

He looked merrily content as her giggles filled the air. They talked and laughed heartily, while she munched another round of the chocolates of her choice.


He rang the bell, as she closed her eyes folding hands as they offered their hand picked lotuses from their newly found treasure to lord Shiva at the temple near by.

They halted at her favorite dhaaba, serving authentic dishes like bajre ki roti, udad ki daal, spicy pickles, chilled buttermilk to name a few. As their heart got too filled, like the heart with happines, they moved to the next spot.


A few people stranded around at this hour at the ruins of old palace fort few miles away. She touched the walls reminiscing the the memories when they came there last in childhood with their parents for picnic. He still remembered her laughter while running and playing around this place. There were few tourists, some historians but these hearts traveled to some different path altogether.

View of the entire city was so clear from the top balcony of the palace, her preferred spot. Her eyes moistened at the feel as if the place, the wind, it's aura talked to her. The feel of belonging. Closing her eyes, she spread her arms open and smiled like the free spirit.


He smiled glad at her peacefully soothing smile. She slowly opened her eyes, when he made her wear a natural tiara on head.

"Aww!! You made it!?" She asked surprised.

He blushed a little as he sneakily plucked some flowers at the waterfall side and tried to make her a gift on his own.

"This is so cuutee and lovely! Thanks!!" She held his hand, taking him surprised and pecked his palm smiling. Though not perfect, it was a lovely tiara like something, made with love.

"Ahem!" He cleared his throat to bring her back from her happy staring posture and bowed a little acknowledging.

"So! My princess Ajab! Would you like to have a clear look around of your palace?" He asked seriously.

"Sure!" She gave her hand mocking his tone.

"Your wish, my command!" He took her hand saluting as they came down a floor. They took few steps, when at the very next moment she jumped up with joy at the neighing sound that came from behind.




"Chetak!!!" She shrieked to see their old buddy, a handsome white horse, standing in his royal style. She looked at Pratap in anticipation as he winked smiling wide.

"After you!"

"Yayy!!" Carefully she climbed up on Chetak. Her happiness knew no bound when Pratap sat on her behind, as they rode around the boundaries of the palace, her hair freely bouncing with the rhythm and speed of Chetak.

A perfect ride, with a perfect company, at the perfect place, on the perfect time, it was one of those perfect moments, to be cherished for lifetime!




At around dusk, returning to his keeper, they bid Chetak goodbye. He asked as they turned,

"Hukam Baisa!" He again bowed, asking her princess to now what?

"The stars!" She giggled making him look at her.

"I think, with you I would love to let the sun rest peacefully, making room for the moon and stars to glitter!" She said with a sass, pushing her hair at the back in style.

"Ohkay!" He chuckled at her choice of words, amused how she was not much fan of sunsets.

"Let's wish him happy journey!" She winked as he started the engine of the car. They drove off giggling and laughing.




They wandered on the sea sand bare feet, as occasionally waves came washing their feet lovingly. He slowly intertwined their hands as they walked across the shore, when the sun prepared to leave, folding back his rays turning red.

The sea reflected the sky with a little vibrant red heart amidst, as if saying to come soon. They had some sandwitches and juices they brought with them. They stayed along, sometimes talking, sometimes laughing, sometimes smiling stares or silence, the heartwarming silence.

With each other,

They had no hurry, no worries, no tension;

Just feel the presence and pure affection.




As it grew dark, the sky shone up blinking and glimmering with numerous stars. They sat aroud the bonefire on sea sand, feeling the cool breeze with background music of dancing waves. Pratap played the guitar as the strings touched her heart, while her melodious voice rightfully tickled his heaart. They sang together under the open sky as stars became their audience, moon being the chief guest.

"May I have this dance?" Keeping the guitar aside, Pratap lengthened his hand forward.

"My pleasure!" She blushed giving him her hand. He swiftly picked her up as turbulent waves gave the playback score. He held her by waist as she rested her hands on his shoulder. Slowly dancing to their heart beats, they moved a bit close as she said in his ear

"Thanks Pratap! Thank you so much" He genuinely smiled as she blushed hard. "You made these every moments so special!"

Before she could say more, he gracefully twirled her around and kneed down on one knee before her. He brought out a shining bracelet from his pocket, signing her to give her hand. She looked speechless at his sudden move. Her eyes shimmered with fain tears, at the stars hanging from the bracelet, he tied on her wrist.




"Ms. Ajabde Punwar! Hum aise hi aapka jeevan sitaare, sugandh aur khushiyon se bhar dena chahte hai. Having you by my side, my whole life becomes special. You complete me. You could see every evenings with these stars and me, but would you give me the chance, to have all those mornings that I woke up to your smile and see the sunrises with you, together, for life time!?"

He asked in the most enchanting voice. Her eyes brimmed up as she got lost in his loving and hopeful hazel eyes.



Before she could open her mouth, her eyes shot open. The dawn was about to arise. She was not at the sea anymore. Thinking it to be a dream, she frowned looking around. It took her a moment to realize, she sat on the rooftop and dozed off in a pair of comfortable arms, waiting for the sun to show up.

"Kya hua Ajab?" a concerned voice asked, striding loose strands of her hair behind her ear. A soft breeze played as she shook her head and smiled

"Good Morning Pratap!" He reflected her smile as the sun rose up, ready to lighten up the world.

"Good Morning Mrs. Singh!" Smiling content, he pecked her forehead, tightening his hand around her shoulder, as she snuggled closer resting her head on his heart. With the tinge of surprises, lives sheered up as the magic of light and love spread around the air.



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Posted: 7 years ago
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Hey MaDiee
Loved the short, sweet and the amazing surprise at the end. The feelings are beautifully portrayed.

Keep writing

Love
Garima
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: twilightlover29

Hey MaDiee

Loved the short, sweet and the amazing surprise at the end. The feelings are beautifully portrayed.

Keep writing

Love
Garima


Hey Garima!
Thank you so much!!!😃
Just a sweet try, surprising to cheer up! I'm so glad you liked the read! Thanks!!!
Will do!
MaDiee😳
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Awesome OS MaDiee😊
The scenes between Praja are so beautiful❤️
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Thank you so much!!😳
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Originally posted by: Nonie12345

Awesome OS MaDiee😊

The scenes between Praja are so beautiful❤️


Hey Nonie!
Thanks a lot dear!!😳
I'm so glad you liked the read!!!
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Hello People! Khamma ghani!!!
Thank you for reading this story. Hope you would like my next work also. Do give it a try...

A PrAja / RoSal OS - You Complete Me.. !!!

The intro is here :

Pratap Singh, a reliably joyous young man, met Ajabde Punwar, a beautifully unpredictable young lady. As time played cupid, these bonded strangers took no time to steal and live in each other's hearts.

How the kinship of two best friends turned soul mates would turn out to be the life partners as well!?

What happens when even true companions don't speak up on time!? Will the words unsaid, go unheard!?

As one way transaction hurt more, will they be able to come up with strength and stand for themselves in front of their parents, society as well each other!?

Join in Pratap and Ajabde, in the natural time play of feelings and tune in the swirling emotional swag of the life in any relationship. With the perfect imperfections, will they be the ones to fill the other's emptiness and confess... You complete Me..!?



The link is here :

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4983818&PID=147046040


Do read, like and review! Thanks in advance.

MaDiee😳

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