PaRi Story - Chalo Ek Baar Fir Se - Part 3/4 Page 7 - Page 2

Originally posted by: vib.

yaaas I am so f**king exited, I always was for how they will meet <33

Thanks 😃 Very true, there was so much scope for an interesting track with their reunion, but anyways, we can always imagine it!

Originally posted by: snowflakes2119

Rashmi! Your idea to compile your feelings for PaRi has given a pleasant feeling. Being an oversensitive person , I couldn't bear the discrimination RD suffered at the hands of the PH. Earlier it was Sid and now RD, both the senior and accomplished actors were forced to quit, so that the surrogate receives the centre stage. What hurts the most that we have been branded as jealous of an amateur actress, when we bring into light the grave discrepancies in the storyline. Members have tried their level best to highlight the gross injustice meted out to SidMi, to the notice of the makers through this and various other forums. But the blind bhakts of the surrogate is in no mood to reflect within and call an end to this objectionable show.

Very well said Sheena.. Any sensitive person will feel for Shorvori and the miseries that she had to face.. The way the CVs twisted everything to suit only one character was too forced. Things don't happen like that in reality! If Sid and RD were still there, who knows, the story would have been bit better.. But for the makers glorifying one character was more important even if it came at the cost of a sensible story. If there is anything we will remember from this show, it is story of the lovely couple PaRi, and this is just an attempt to give them a deserved ending.

Originally posted by: MIKELA

Beautiful ! I can not wait to read the love story between Parth and Shorvori ❤️

Thank you Rashmi 👍🏼

Thanks Mikela! And please don't expect something very romantic as I am not at all an expert in writing such stuff 😆 As I wrote earlier, it is just a simple story but with lot of emotional moments.

Originally posted by: xxxlgirl2001

Excited!! First ever FF here!!! PaRi!! <3

Thanks dear! 😳

It was late evening when Parth's car, making its way through lavish yet desolated lanes of Baroda, entered through the gates of Bhanushali mansion. After a hectic day at work, Parth was immensely tired and was in no mood to think about anything else than retiring to bed. To his surprise, he saw his entire family gathered at the dinning table as he entered inside the house.

He smiled dimly looking at them as everyone was delighted to see him. Unsure about what to do next, he greeted his Dadaji and Dadiji and started towards his bedroom upstairs.

'Parth beta..' He had to stop himself as Indu called him. Beta, freshen up and join us for the dinner. The food is ready.'

'No Maa, I am not feeling hungry at all. I had snacks in office late in the evening. I need some rest, so I will go and sleep.' Parth replied trying to look as normal as he could.

Indu knew it immediately that he was avoiding sitting with them so that he doesn't have to face any of their questions. Such was his routine from last few months. He barely had his food on time, he avoided talking to anyone in the house, more than minimum necessary conversations and formal greetings. He had so deeply immersed himself into his work that he hardly had time for anything else. He had not yet recovered from the shock and grief of his wife Shorvori's sudden death four months ago.

'Parth beta please, atleast have some food. It is not good to sleep without having your food. If you are tired and don't want to sit here I will bring your food in your room. But beta, please have something. If you don't eat properly, it will affect your health.' Indu tried to convince him.

Parth's eyes filled with tears as he looked at his mother. Unable to stay there facing his family's worried glares anymore, he left for his room. He knew that his behaviour was causing them pain and trouble, but he was helpless..

This was a short update because it was only a teaser 😛 Next update coming soon..

A promising teaser Rashmi..

Originally posted by: Luv_PaRiAnSh

And me first again 😆

Reminds me of our BV forum days 😆
Glad you liked it. 😳 Next will be longer for sure!

Originally posted by: _goofyCat_

Reminds me of our BV forum days 😆
Glad you liked it. 😳 Next will be longer for sure!

Originally posted by: Luv_PaRiAnSh

Those were such golden days in my IF experience..

You should PM Rina and others too.. High time they visit this place with this excuse at least😆