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Posted: 7 years ago
Awesome pt
Geet impress ed with Maan care and seeing old Maan she realise y his employees liked him and loyal Geet falling fr him
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Posted: 7 years ago
Is she falling for him..
Yes of course...
I am eagerly waiting to read
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Posted: 7 years ago
Happy Birthday Avi!!!

Hope u had a superb day!

wishing a wonderful year ahead!

May all ur dreams come true! 🤗
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Posted: 7 years ago
thanks for updating!

Hope you are fine!

Chap 53

impressive update! wonderfully written!

Geet awed by Maan's care! some things are better left unsaid!

the people are trying to be happy despite what has happened!

Loved how you portrayed Geet's emotions!

Fab song... apt for the situation!

Geet has fallen for Maan... wonder what she will do?

how can she think he is too good for her?

update asap😃
Edited by khwaishfan - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
Nice update..
Waiting for next update..
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Posted: 7 years ago
After so many years and after his so many efforts, she discovered that she is having feelings for him?
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Posted: 7 years ago
such a beautiful part
but i am still trying to understand doesn't she already fallen
probably dawning in now

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Posted: 7 years ago
This update was just so perfect. You have an amazing way of expressing yourself through your writing that every emotion Geet felt being around Maan was felt by the reader. I absolutely loved every bit of it. Fabulous job as always.
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Posted: 7 years ago
At last the moment i have waited for years. Geet is falling in love with Maan or already has and realises now. What made her fall for him want not any acts of love towards her or sweet sugary words. It was his natural,self of goodness and kindness which touched her heart.
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: mayyo


I wouldn't be wrong to state that this comment took the longest time for me to read (I'm a very slow reader at times I'm distracted lol). But I really enjoy your comments every single time.
Thank you very much, i try to curb my charcterr as much as possible however its very hard, as you can see lol

Alright, I've never been in any such storm so I'd already put up a disclaimer before the chapter started. I've been in floods, however, and that was a nightmare I prefer not to revisit. So yes, be thankful that your childhood dream never came close to turning true!

Ofcourse, now i am wise and have grew a few more brain cells lol however i have met few colleagues/freinds who have been hit my the floods. Its hard work and expensive. Home insurance apparantly doesn't cover natural disasters in most cases. I KNOW BIZARRE😲

With the word briefcase, I hardly ever get the image of that hard-body case which has those clip locks and all that. But yeah, now that you've mentioned, I'm getting that image so maybe I should change the word to something else...
Oh please i was being my uncapped self, that too at the best so please ignore my silly thinkings. it was just in the moment, like the SIR thing. I myslef have used the word sir and briefcase (maybe) in my storeis. So please don't change a thing about this story; be it a word, a feeling, a capital letter or a full stop. I love the story and all its glory, so pleasee ignore me or atleast my rants as much as you can lol. Don't ignore me lol, i love this responding to commentators thing

I say, both are beauty and brains combined. They take turns being each. 😆 Though i agree deep down however my maan-denial mode begs to differ😉lol

Actaully, since I've never been in such a situation as shown in the story, the lack of experience did cause me to turn to movies to describe what it would be like. I haven't copy pasted but I have taken idea from a movie you have not named here. Lol
ah the one movie i do not mention has inspired this, just my luck lol. Although i reckon i just mentioned space invation type of movies lol. I don't recall watching that many natural disaster movies apart from The Day the World Stood Still, which was a very good movie to be honest

Thank you for always leaving such enjoyable feedback. So glad to have you here!



No thank you, i love this interaction or communication that happens on your thread
Will read and respond to the others too
See you soon or atleast the thread (request if you can, no stress; do please update before ramzan. We starts in 12 days however if you cant, then see you after that😃)

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