If you were the writer for Bepannaah....

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Guys, weekend is killing me with the wait for next week dhamaakedaar episodes. So, let's keep stuff interesting, make some noise for the CVs and have some fun being creative. So, here is a question to you all -

If you were the showrunner, how would you proceed with the plot from the point where Adi takes Zo to the hospital after she slashes her wrist?

Stick to the basic theme - these two will fall in love, there will be opposition, they will get together! Rest is up to how creative you can get. Go for it guys!

Edit - I have updated mine on Page 3. Let me know how you guys like it!
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Madhu would inform Zoya's parents

Zoya's parents would arrive and tell her and Noor that there's no reason now to live in Mumbai so they should go to Mussoorie with them

Sakshi visits Zoya and is shocked to see she's the same orphanage gal. She apologizes to Zoya on behalf of Pooja for what she did. Zoya asks her if she knew about her daughter's affair and why didn't she stop her. Sakshi talks about problems in AdiJa marriage, how they couldn't communicate and understand each other. She also tells Zoya about Aditya's parents problems

Zoya decides to go to Mussoorie to start a new life but before they leave for airport, she goes to meet Aditya

Zoya tells Aditya how he was right and she was wrong. She tells him she's leaving for good and they will never meet again but she will never forget him and will always pray to God that Aditya gets his love, his happiness again from someone.

Aditya remembers all the moments he spent with Zoya and Zoya too remembers the same in the airport. Both wonder why they are missing each other and are so restless.

When Zoya was about to get inside the flight, Aditya arrives there and tells her that she can't leave without returning his 5 crores. Zoya's dad confronts him and tells him he can pay him 10 crores to throw him out of Zoya's life but Aditya tells Yash took money from his wife Pooja so he will take money only from Yash's wife and not his FIL.

Zoya tells that she'll stay in Mumbai till she returns him his 5 crores. When her parents question her, she says she doesn't care for Yash's company but she will stay there and work in his company till she returns him his money.

Aditya tells, Fine but I will not help u in any way.

I can write even more. I have got so many ideas. Maybe I should think of writing an FF.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Zoya in hospital. Weak n tired... Mentally n physically. She wants to thank Aditya for saving her .
Adi develops a soft corner for this silly idiot girl who believed blindly on Yash but at least now came back to her senses. .
Both become friends and care for each other. No love please .At least not for next 2-3 months. Won't be able to digest if both fall madly for each other right away.

I want them to become such close friends like 2 am buddies. I want them to not feel love or hatred for poosh. Closure is important if they want to move ahead .And if there are emotions like love, anger,hatred etc then Adiya won't b able to get closure.


Basically I want the storyline to be that they become best of Friends,care for each other, a closure to poosh and then Adiya love story can start
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Tulips-

Madhu would inform Zoya's parents


Zoya's parents would arrive and tell her and Noor that there's no reason now to live in Mumbai so they should go to Mussoorie with them

Sakshi visits Zoya and is shocked to see she's the same orphanage gal. She apologizes to Zoya on behalf of Pooja for what she did. Zoya asks her if she knew about her daughter's affair and why didn't she stop her. Sakshi talks about problems in AdiJa marriage, how they couldn't communicate and understand each other. She also tells Zoya about Aditya's parents problems

Zoya decides to go to Mussoorie to start a new life but before they leave for airport, she goes to meet Aditya

Zoya tells Aditya how he was right and she was wrong. She tells him she's leaving for good and they will never meet again but she will never forget him and will always pray to God that Aditya gets his love, his happiness again from someone.

Aditya remembers all the moments he spent with Zoya and Zoya too remembers the same in the airport. Both wonder why they are missing each other and are so restless.

When Zoya was about to get inside the flight, Aditya arrives there and tells her that she can't leave without returning his 5 crores. Zoya's dad confronts him and tells him he can pay him 10 crores to throw him out of Zoya's life but Aditya tells Yash took money from his wife Pooja so he will take money only from Yash's wife and not his FIL.

Zoya tells that she'll stay in Mumbai till she returns him his 5 crores. When her parents question her, she says she doesn't care for Yash's company but she will stay there and work in his company till she returns him his money.

Aditya tells, Fine but I will not help u in any way.

I can write even more. I have got so many ideas. Maybe I should think of writing an FF.


Wow!!! This is awesome. Please do write more. I can totally see this stuff happening.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: ssnehaaa

Zoya in hospital. Weak n tired... Mentally n physically. She wants to thank Aditya for saving her .

Adi develops a soft corner for this silly idiot girl who believed blindly on Yash but at least now came back to her senses. .
Both become friends and care for each other. No love please .At least not for next 2-3 months. Won't be able to digest if both fall madly for each other right away.

I want them to become such close friends like 2 am buddies. I want them to not feel love or hatred for poosh. Closure is important if they want to move ahead .And if there are emotions like love, anger,hatred etc then Adiya won't b able to get closure.


Basically I want the storyline to be that they become best of Friends,care for each other, a closure to poosh and then Adiya love story can start


Nice one!! Maybe the CVs will get ideas from our forum itself 😃!!
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Zoya leaves Arora house with Noor find some other place to stay

She continues to work in the company but changes its name 😆

she thanks Adi for saving her and he apologises too for the way he has been treating her and from there slowly a new friendship starts to develop

Basically I want them to become friends first like proper close friends they can tell each other anything without any hesistation

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Posted: 7 years ago
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After saving her aditya walks away.

Her parents show up and her father decides its time she marries someone he chooses

Zoya gains a fiance after running away for love she will not disobey her father again.

Despite not wanting to get married...

Before her engagement

Aditya goes out coz his dad maybe kicks him out on a little trip to like mysourie
He watches her waifing around with no will to live besides making others happy and it irks him.

He sees zoya picking out rings and taking her grand time, while he is there to change his watch battery.
Her lack of interest is visible and because she is taking so long he just picks one for her and pushes her aside. Zoya doesnt care or even see him and quietly moves off with it.
He changes his battery and zoya goes off shes buying a sari or something...
wedding shopping, and aditya is walking in the same market.
He thinks about Pooja and unknowingly picks zoya's outfit and jewelery.

Zoya after shopping in a day dream drifts away from her mother onto a road and doesnt hear a car. Aditya saves her and she notices him, and says nothing and just carries on walking he follows her kinda worried she would hurt herself more.

Zoya trips and gets hurt but continues walking. Aditya gets annoyed and picks her up. Zoya asks him to let her go. He says no. She gets super mad and bites him or something. He lets go and says the whole day she was acting like she had been starved for a week now where did so much energy come from.

Zoya tells him she doesnt want his help and stay away from her. He ignores her and carries her home.

Her father and adi have there pheli milan.
Everyone + fiance is worried
Adi puts princess down. And noor and ami take zoya away.
while whispers start how can she come home with him so late etc.
and in his arms.
Adi is about to walk out when mr s says wait.

Adi turns around and grunts about how he already had his daily dose of drama with zoya he is not in the mood for more.

The old man tells him to stay away from zoya. Adi says instead of thanking me ur telling me to stay away with her esaan faramosh admi...

Mr Siqque yells kamosh bathemeez
aditya roles his eyes.
And walks off.

Zoya complains to Noor Adi always causes her pain. Noor reminds her he saved her life and tells her he is not a bad person. Zoya says nothing and closes her eyes.

Untill next week🥳

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Cherryfairy

Zoya leaves Arora house with Noor find some other place to stay

She continues to work in the company but changes its name 😆

she thanks Adi for saving her and he apologises too for the way he has been treating her and from there slowly a new friendship starts to develop

Basically I want them to become friends first like proper close friends they can tell each other anything without any hesistation


Haha. I never thought of the name angle 😊What do you think she will change the name as ?
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: AnyaRSingh

After saving her aditya walks away.


Her parents show up and her father decides its time she marries someone he chooses

Zoya gains a fiance after running away for love she will not disobey her father again.

Despite not wanting to get married...

Before her engagement

Aditya goes out coz his dad maybe kicks him out on a little trip to like mysourie
He watches her waifing around with no will to live besides making others happy and it irks him.

He sees zoya picking out rings and taking her grand time, while he is there to change his watch battery.
Her lack of interest is visible and because she is taking so long he just picks one for her and pushes her aside. Zoya doesnt care or even see him and quietly moves off with it.
He changes his battery and zoya goes off shes buying a sari or something...
wedding shopping, and aditya is walking in the same market.
He thinks about Pooja and unknowingly picks zoya's outfit and jewelery.

Zoya after shopping in a day dream drifts away from her mother onto a road and doesnt hear a car. Aditya saves her and she notices him, and says nothing and just carries on walking he follows her kinda worried she would hurt herself more.

Zoya trips and gets hurt but continues walking. Aditya gets annoyed and picks her up. Zoya asks him to let her go. He says no. She gets super mad and bites him or something. He lets go and says the whole day she was acting like she had been starved for a week now where did so much energy come from.

Zoya tells him she doesnt want his help and stay away from her. He ignores her and carries her home.

Her father and adi have there pheli milan.
Everyone + fiance is worried
Adi puts princess down. And noor and ami take zoya away.
while whispers start how can she come home with him so late etc.
and in his arms.
Adi is about to walk out when mr s says wait.

Adi turns around and grunts about how he already had his daily dose of drama with zoya he is not in the mood for more.

The old man tells him to stay away from zoya. Adi says instead of thanking me ur telling me to stay away with her esaan faramosh admi...

Mr Siqque yells kamosh bathemeez
aditya roles his eyes.
And walks off.

Zoya complains to Noor Adi always causes her pain. Noor reminds her he saved her life and tells her he is not a bad person. Zoya says nothing and closes her eyes.

Untill next week🥳


Wah! Aapne toh story script samet sochke rakhi hai. We should start predicting weekly plots. It will be fun 😛
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: V4o9


Haha. I never thought of the name angle 😊What do you think she will change the name as ?



Not sure of the name but anything is better than zosh 😆

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