Akdha ff Hate to Love Or Love to Hate Chapter 19 on page 53 - Page 33

Created

Last reply

Replies

396

Views

50.7k

Users

22

Likes

720

Frequent Posters

mamina thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail
Posted: 7 years ago
Mind blowing update buddy. Dam ja is way too much smart. Jodha baby u hv to use ur 100% of brain to come out from this mess. Thrilling update. Waiting for ur next update. Don't take tension for pm. We always visit jaforum to know whether u update or not. Chill buddy .
Rashmisingh9151 thumbnail
7th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: natashathakur

Awesome chapter n please pm me too



glad you like it
will try to send pm
to everyone dear.
thanks for comment
Rashmisingh9151 thumbnail
7th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: simranjitkaur

Thanks for pm and lovely updates



your welcome dear.
glsd to know you like it
dear. thanks fir comment.
Rashmisingh9151 thumbnail
7th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: dellaakdha

Super Updates Rashmi..

Its good that both jodha and Jalal are not ready to give up..
Jalal and his father are trying hard for the forgiveness and one more chance from Jodha and her father...
Both are stubborn...
Its been 50 + hrs ..Jodha didn't eat anything...Strong girl...
The funny dialogues of Jo(regarding animal sounds,),humayun(breaking the gate by prithvi) is nice...
Ja is stealing hamida saree for Jo to escape from the detective... Smart..
He is very smart he managed to escape from the detective eyes and that guy didn't find suspicious in Jalal ..
Our Jo is very clever and she escaped with the keys by pushing jalal...
Prithvi part in police station is well written...U managed to compensate on both sides...
Another smart turn... Friendship is renewed between the elders...
Humayun and Prithvi part is light hearted and lovely...
Their talks about their kids is true...Both are stubborn..One is in revenge and the other is in getting back the love...
Jalal is very happy for both the families...
But now I am scared what will happen if they came to know about Jalal's actions...The relationship will be broken once again...
Nobody can save Jalal from prithvi...
Whether Jo will agree to forgive him for her father???
Interesting Rashmi...Ur twists are always unpredictable...



well situation is like that only dear.
while both jo ja are stubborn head.
how can they accept without fighting
to get what they want so both are not
ready to give up dear.

while like them there family are stubborn
as well. one is not ready to forgive and other
is hell bent to seek forgiveness.

yup she didn't eaten anything from 50 hours
definitely she is strong girl after all she is
heroine of my story she need to be strong.

well in love people can die so here Jalal
is just stealing Hamida dress for Jodha as
he can't go on shopping for Jodha as the guy
who is behind him can get doubt on him.

well said ja Is definitely smart clever guy
he mislead everyone that the detective to
didn't get suspicious on him and I am so
glad to see you like small acts of Prithvi Jodha
either it's there dilouge or action.

and you are right dear Jodha is clever
but Jalal is more than her she escaped
but he caught her again.

now the turn of events both Humayu Prithvi
become friend again. and Jalal is happy
because now he think he have chance with
Jodha but what will be her reaction about
it and what is going to come up you will
know later dear.

anf you twist well that's how my all stories
are twist and turn are destined to come up
and you all like that as well which always
make me happy.


anyway thanks for such
a wonderful awesome comment
it's made my day today dear thank you.
Rashmisingh9151 thumbnail
7th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: sana1819786

awesome dear
loved it
the way how jodha took the keys and ran away from his hold but he was more smart enough to get her back
and jodha talked with her father and now prithvi was relaxed
and the way he apoligised with officers was so adorable as many rish people will not be down to earth like prithvi who have the habit of apologizing when they had done wrong with others
and finally prithvi and humayu became freinds once again hope after getting jalas truth they dont breakup again
cont soon
thanks for pm
bye take care



glad to know you like and enjoy
reading the update dear.

yup Jo try her best to escape her way
was quick and smart enough but Jalal
is no less as well he caught her again.

well that's how parents relation are with
kids till they themselves get to hear them and
see them they don't get calm so here to by
listening Jodha Prithvi get calm.


well said dear no rich people apologize
for there wrong deed buy I didn't wanted
to show my story characters rude egoistic
type. so try to show them in nice way.
and I am glad you like that part dear you
know as far I am disappointed with many
officer work i can't Even think to disrespect
them I always try to show Officer powerful
in my stories. but sometimes I don't.

well yup Prithvi Humayu become friends
but what will be there reaction if they get
to know who kidnapped Jodha or what
will be her reaction after knowing about
both family became friends you will know
in upcoming updates dear.

anyway thanks for beautiful sweet comment
dear. your welcome will try to continue soon
dear take care as well.
Rashmisingh9151 thumbnail
7th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: mamina

Mind blowing update buddy. Dam ja is way too much smart. Jodha baby u hv to use ur 100% of brain to come out from this mess. Thrilling update. Waiting for ur next update. Don't take tension for pm. We always visit jaforum to know whether u update or not. Chill buddy .




glad you like it dear.
yup Ja is very clever than jo
you are right jo need to take
smart and clever moved to
get out of the mess.
will try to update soon dear.
glsd to know you all will check
work yourself always thank you dear
still getting so many pm late night
by others reader I am going to send
pm to you all by cell.
anyway thanks for cute comment dear.
Rashmisingh9151 thumbnail
7th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 7 years ago
Chapter 16

(Prithvi Humayu Hamida enter inside the room giving surprised to Gayatri Rukaiya Salima. they were stunned to see them happy).

Gayatri said : you all here. Prithvi what is this if you are pranking something than stop it I am not in mood to take any joke for now.

(listening this Prithvi smiled and goes near Gayatri and spoke in soft gentle tone).

Prithvi said : yesterday I get angry thinking Jalal is the one who kidnapped my daughter... so in anger I goes to them but today ...when I was talking with Officer I get call by Jodha... she said she is fine and she will be back soon... than she will tell us everything what happen with her... so I goes to them and apologies for doubting and behaving bad with them...now we are friends again and it's not some prank or joke love it's true...

(listening this Gayatri first smiled than thinking something she step back and spoke sternly).

Gayatri said : but what if your doubt is true what if Jalal really kidnap her... you know how she is I am sure while talking with you she get to know ...that you are worried about her and she for calming you down didn't spoke anything...later if your suspicious come true will you break the friendship again...

(listening this Prithvi step back a little look at Humayu Hamida than at Gayatri. it was like hard blow to him. yes he didn't think about this yet. but than determine on his decision that he is not going to let anything come between him and his friendship with Humayu this time he spoke stern yet in confident voice).


Prithvi said : no I will not break friendship with them again... we already suffer enough because of all the misunderstanding... and revenge thing not again... I am not going to let anything happen this time...

(listening this Hamida Humayu get happy. and goes near Gayatri and spoke calmly).

Humayu said : and trust me Bhabhi jaan... if Jalal is behind her kidnapping than I will myself punish him in worse manner...

Hamida said : yes we will. and don't worry Gayatri Jodha will be fine she will be with us soon.

(saying this both Hamida Humayu hugged Gayatri which make her smiled and seeing her happy Prithvi to get happy. while Salima Rukaiya didn't knew what to say or how to react of both family's re union. both of them look at each other and without saying anything goes our of the house. while walking out)).

Rukaiya said : if Jodha was here she would be so happy by this news. alas she is not here right now.

Salima said : you are right ruks. don't know where and how she is. she had eaten anything or not did those kidnapper hurt her.

(at last a sense of fear and restlessness held in. her voice which make Rukaiya bring tears in her eyes by now. after few minutes).

Rukaiya said : Di do you think like uncle as well I mean is thst possible Jalal can be behind her kidnapping.

(listening this Salima shook her head in no and spoke softly by wiping her tears).

Salima said : no ruks I don't think I mean he can't stoop this low to get her. as I know he love her very much he can never ever think to hurt her intentionally.

(listening this Rukaiya sighed and reach towards her car and spoke calmly).

Rukaiya said : he can't think to hurt her intentionally but he can hurt her unintentionally for sure.

(listening this Salima didn't say anything just get inside the car and Rukaiya to sit inside her own car. and left for there own house. other side Jodha woke up her head paining allot she felt hell thirsty and hungry but she dare say that aloud. while Jalal who was out to get something for Jodha comback in room. and smiled to see her awake. he goes near her. and forward a some rose Flowers).

Jalal said : for you my love.

(seeing flowers if he present her this few weeks before she may accepted them but not now she take the. and throw away harshly. and at last glare at him Angrily. but it didn't effect Jalal even one percent he smiled than take out some chocolate and spoke).

Jalal said : you know Jodha after years of revenge misunderstanding and pain two family became one again. it's called celebration isn't it.

(listening this Jodha get confused but didn't ask or say anything. but Jalal knowing she want to know what he mean spoke again calmly).

Jalal said : here see this than you will know what I mean...

(saying this Jalal show her his cell a video was playing on it and seeing that Jodha get hell shocked. If she saw this few week back than maybe she would be the most happy girl. but now seeing both her and Jalal parents together she can't help but hate Jalal more and more. she look at Jalal than take the cell and throw it on floor as well. and about to spoke something but than she didn't and Started looking other side. Makin Jalal get angry but he compose himself and spoke teasingly).

Jalal said : with hunger strike are you winning to give me silent treatment as well... come on Jodha leave your stubbornness... it's enough just see how happy both our families are... don't you think we had enough of rivalry and revenge game...behave like mature person Jodha...

(Jodha was Listening his words and with each passing second her anger was increasing)


Jalal said : come on Jodha say something I am talking with you...

(saying this he take here hands in his but she jerk him away from her harshly making him almost fell of from bed on floor. and seeing that a little smike come on Jodha lips which didn't go unnoticed by Jalal he smirk inwardly and than get up from floor rubbing his butt and spoke in little shocked Voice).

Jalal said : it's going to be 59 hours now ...still you didn't eaten anything... but how the hell you have power to make me fell on floor...just by little push of your...

(listening this Jodha Glare at him but again didn't say anything. making Jalal sigh sadly he thought to really let her go. but he can't let her tell everything to Prithvi that he was behind her kidnapping)

Jalal said : alright I get it that you aren't going to listen my words... so let's go back but can you please drop the idea of not telling uncle Aunty ...about me that I am the one who kidnapped you please...Jodha after long time both family became one I don't want them to break there friendship again...

(Jodha shook her head angrily showing her denial. and it's make Jalal know she will tell everything to Prithvi and Gayatri no matter what. it's make him little restless he didn't knew what to do or say. he can't let her stay like this neither she is eating anything snd now she stop talking it can be bad for her health. he can't take risk on this).

Jalal said : so you will tell them everything... you will not forgive me for whatever Happened in past right...you will take revenge from me.

(his voice was stern and eyes were emotionless. which scared Jodha very much she shift uncomfortably on bed. she didn't what he is gonna do next now. while Jalal spoke in same stern voice).

Jalal said : Good very good you are hell stubborn... but you know what Jodha I am stubborn like you as well... from past 59 hours I am pleading to you to accept my apology...but you are stubborn enough to not listen that... and top of that you are not eating and saying anything as well... what you want me to Do dammit let you marry that Abhi... when you love and you love me as well... god Jodha it's not the way to take revenge... with mine you will destroy your and Abhi life as well... why the hell you Don't understand dammit...

(he yelled at her making her lost her calmness as well she get off from bed and spoke angrily while glaring at him. as well).

Jodha said : who the hell are you to decide what i should do and not...if I will tell every to everyone it scared you...you are afraid of the consequence now...why you didn't thought about the consequence before... and who the hell told you that I love jerk like you... it was just a attraction nothing else...get that I hate you... no way in hell I am going to let you win...what hmm what the hell you think about me...am I some toy who you can play with whenever you wish to...you didn't trust me fine you let me super fine...than now what why you are back why don't you let me live in peace now...go live ad you lived before...hard or easily at least you were alive didn't you...you never go to extend of finishing your life but I did do you know why because I couldn't lived without you in past I try to end my life but dad stop me...and said is that all you natter to me he don't ...and then I realized what a fool I am... when you can avoid me and left me by trusting on your dad than why can't I... it's not only me who is hurt my dad was hurt by the ignorance of your bloody family as well...but he never try to end his life than why can't I stay strong like him... and than I change...but niw see where we are now...there was a time when I wanted to talk with you make you understand that me and my dad aren't wrong but you didn't listen and met me...now see today you are here trying to speak with me... and ask forgiveness but I don't Care just like in past you didn't care... seriously people say true...what goes clme around for sure...and this time the quote suit on your condition very well...

(listening this her words Jalal was surprised he knows she is angry at him for whatever he did but he never knew that she think of there love as attraction. he knew his ignorance had hurted her in past but he mever knew the extend hoe much she suffer. he felt guilty and worse of himself. he couldn't stand front of her. he couldn't bear the hatred in her eyes for himself. he just run out if the room with last step get out of house after closing the door. he sit on his car and left from there leaving very angry Jodha behind.).

Jodha pov : why dad why you forgive them why... didn't you knew how much I gone through ...and you forgive them so easily.

(saying this she started crying ger heart out by felling on her kness. on cold floor she glance around with teary eyed when her gaze fell on Jalal cell she which was now broken she goes there take sim card and battery put it in cell again fix it and on it she get happy but she plan not to call Prithvi she was hurt by knowing what her parents did).

Jodha pov : no I will not call mom dad let them stay happy with bloody Mohammed I care less. should I call Rukaiya Salima no they are already in love with Mirza Abdul. it will make them hate each other as well what to do.

(thinking for sometime she called her friend Kabir who was in Police. while he pick her call within seconds. before he could speak Jodha spoke quickly. with desperate voice).

Jodha said : hello Kabir help me Buddy get me out of here. I need you now.

(listening her desperate voice Kabir who was working on his laptop wearing only pant while sitting on his sofa in hall room of his house get of from it hurriedly and spoke. curiously and desperately).

Kabir said : hello Jodha is that you... where are you what's wrong... why you need me... tell me everything.

Jodha said : I am in some forest please Kabir do somthing. and please don't let mom dad know about this. please. just get me out from here by any way I will die if I stay here more.

(listening all this Kabir already wore his shirt which was lying besides him on sofa before. than he take his gun which was kept on table besides his car key and put it in his waist back side. and take his car key as well all the while not for once letting the call disconnect he was calling her down by his words as well).

Kabir said : calm down I am coming just don't let your cell out I am going trace your location and very soon I will be there for you just stay strong and be calm dear.

Jodha said : I stay strong from long but now I can't Kabir please come soon please...

(listening this Kabir get sad hr spoke I. calm yet worried voice).

Kabir said : please just for sometime I will. e there soon.

(saying this he cut the call look st the number by which Jodha call him than send the nubrr to other officer and called him. who received his call within few minutes. but before the officer could speak).

Kabir said : Officer Jayant I eant you to trace the location of cell number which I send you right now less do it soon It's urgent.

(listening this officer Jayant take the number and spoke calmly).

Jayant said : sir don't worry I am will tell you the location soon. anyway you were on leave don't you.

Kabir said : you I was and I sm on. leave still that's why I am requesting you not ordering you.

(listening this Jayant smiled both Kabir and Jayant were childhood friends it was common between them to joke and trade each other more soon they cut the call and after few minutes Jayant send the location address. taking that Kabir hurriedly left from his house to get Jodha).

Kabir pov : before I lost you Jodha not now i will not let anything happen to you and maybe i will confess what's in my heart from long time for you.

(other side after cutting the call Jodha look at front and saw her reflection in mirror. she saw herself. her eyes were red and swollen. while her lips were cut by side as when Jalal kissed her she get hurt. while the saree she was wearing was not in proper way as well. she take the flower vase from near by and throw at mirror harshly which break it in many pieces).

Jodha pov : I hate you Jalal for Everything. I hate you more than I ever loved you.

(After three hours Kabir reach the house in forest where Jodha was he get inside breaking the door harshly. and call for Jodha. but get no response he look here and there then goes upstairs and open the room door and ssw Jodha lying on floor unconscious state he rush to her).

Kabir said : Jodha Jodha are you fine Jodha open your eyes see I am here for you Jodha open your eyes dammit Jodha.

(gettihg Bo response from her he take her in his arms and rush downstairs hurriedly yet carefully and run out og room make her sit on his car and goes to other side and after getting inside left from the forest towards hospital. It was now night time Humayu Hamida were in Prithvi house as they plant to stay with them. they all were sitting on sofa. but Prithvi was pacing here and there. worriedly as it was now four hour till he get call by Jodha still she didn't Comeback. he tensed as hell. while seeing him like this Humayu felt bad he get up and goes near him).

Humayu said : don't worry she will be back. why don't you check your cell maybe she send Some message to you.

(listening this Prithvi look st Humayu and sigh sadly. than take his cell which was o. table now and see one message from Jodha. he read it and get angry he spoke irritatingly to everyone).

Prithvi said : those rascal taken her out of state it will take time for her to comeback. dammit just for once I get her than I will see those kidnapper by myself for kidnapping my daughter they have to pay for her pain.

Gayatri said : calm down Prithvi she will be back soon.

(she spoke to calm down Prithvi but inside she was worried as well what if they caught her again. and the possibility of getting Jodha hurt was scaring her beyond limit. but she try to stay strong Prithvi to trying hard shoe strong but inside his heart was getting restless. while Humayu Hamida stay silent not knowing how to calm down the worried parents front of them. after sometime to change the topic).

Prithvi said : where is Jalal why don't you both call him here as well.

Hamida said : well if you wish I am calling him now.

(saying this Hamida called Jalal but he didn't pick up his cell. he was in night club drinking alcohol Mirza Abdul are with him as well and trying to stop him while Jalal was recalling Jodha words. murmuring in low tone).

Jalal said : she hate me more than she ever loved me... how can a person hate those whom he love so much how...tell me Buddy how can she hate me... I taken her for few days with me so that I can ask forgiveness... but no she didn't forgive me she stop eating. I can't let her get hurt. I can't buddy I can't...

Abdul said : stop it dude enough stop drinking and come with us. come now.

Jalal said : no I am not coming I am going to drown myself in alcohol... at least by drinking this I will forget my pain for sometime... this restless crying heart will get calm...

Mirza said : bhai jaan grab him and take him to our car I will pay the bill here.

(listening this Abdul nodded and dragged Jalal out of club ignoring all his protest. other side Rukaiya Salima were following Abdul Mirza. anf they were inside the club as well and heard there talk they get very angry).

Rukaiya said : see I told you it's his deed he is the one behind her kidnapping I had doubt o. him and see my doubt get true for I hate these three idiot I will kill them.

(saying thjs she was about to break wine bottle on Mirza head who was paying the bill of there drinks but Salima stop Rukaiya. and drag her out of club).

Rukaiya said : why you Stop me let me beat the hell out of that idiot how dare they hurt her kidnapping like seriously Di now don't ever dare to take there side front of I am going to call uncle and I will tell everything to him.

(saying this she take her cell and about to call Prithvi but Salima stop her).

Salima said : think calmly Rukaiya out first priority is to know where Jodha is right now. we will punish them but not now not like this. let's follow these idiots again let's see where they are going.

(listening this Rukaiya look st Salima than get calm and sit In side the car and follow Abdul car again).
Edited by Rashmisingh9151 - 7 years ago
Rashmisingh9151 thumbnail
7th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 7 years ago
uff so hard to update by cell guys

top of that sending pm definitely
pained my fingers as well.

yesterday I inform you all I can't
send pm to you all and I
was so happy that you
understand my issue.

but later at night I myself
get so many pm as a request
to inform about my update so here
I am doing that only.

So guys one story in
one day hope you don't have problem
with this anyway .

I know you all are busy as well but please read and at least give your view for what I am writing I am doing
take care love you all.
Edited by Rashmisingh9151 - 7 years ago
Sranjani thumbnail
Explorer Thumbnail
Posted: 7 years ago
Jo escaped
Jo was ryt at her point
Ja really deserve it
Waiting for jo parents come to know abt kidnapping
One story in one day is enough dr
We don't have patience to wait long
Ur story really interesting
Edited by Sranjani - 7 years ago
konica.arora.92 thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Explorer Thumbnail
Posted: 7 years ago
Amazing update dear
Jo escaped
Her hatred is killing ja
Ja is depressed
Now another person Kabir also loves jo
Sali and ruks knows about the kidnapping plan
Waiting for Prithvi reaction on all this
Waiting eagerly for next update update soon dear 😛

Related Topics

Jodha Akbar Thumbnail

Posted by: So-So

16 days ago

Akdha SS - Where Passions Collide - Update Part 2 27/07/2025 Akdha SS - Where Passions Collide - Update Part 2 27/07/2025

Part 1 Two Worlds Here she was. Jodha Shekhawat stood in front of the gleaming glass and steel headquarters of Khan Engineering in Agra. The...

Expand ▼
Jodha Akbar Thumbnail

Posted by: nushhkiee

5 months ago

Akdha OS : Ehsaas

Ehsaas The night unfurled its velvety embrace over the grand city of Agra... The towering walls of the Mughal palace stood bathed in moonlight,...

Expand ▼
Jodha Akbar Thumbnail

Posted by: nushhkiee

25 days ago

Akdha OS - Under This Concrete Sky - 13/07/2025

And Then He Looked At Her...... The first time Jodha Sharma stepped into Skyline Infrastructures, she was soaked in the scent of wet earth and...

Expand ▼
Jodha Akbar Thumbnail

Posted by: MideOfTheShadow

1 months ago

ishq-e-sultaana (akdha ss/ff)

synopsis when he brought Amer's rose into his harem, she was meant to be a testament to his conquest. when she agreed to marry him, it was with...

Expand ▼
Jodha Akbar Thumbnail

Posted by: talesmith

2 months ago

AKDHA FF - MYRIAD SHADES OF LOVE & WAR

Hi all! Some of you may know me already or maybe not - I had posted a modern OS named Serendipity on this forum some months ago. Here again with...

Expand ▼
Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".