#3Song Osthon #3 Thank you note on pg 96 May 22 - Page 10

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Posted: 7 years ago
#91
story set in a TN village is unique.ishra confession...especially raman pleading her to accept him was touchy.subbu trying to kill raman was a tension giving moment.thankfully you gave a surprise that raman is fine and mihika called the police to get subbu arrested.Raman holding ishita's hand and his words (song)was beautiful
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Posted: 7 years ago
#92
Superb Os
Subbu is so disgusting
Raman was pleading her to accepte his love its so emotional
Glad raman is fyn..
Thx for pm
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Posted: 7 years ago
#93

hello babies, hope you all are doing well, I wasn't supposed to post this OS today but since sarthi is unavailable, I am here with this OS on the song pehli nazar mein suggested by sweetdivya aka rashmi, hope you enjoy

LOVE AT FIRST SIGHT

She walked inside the cafe and sighed holding her badly aching head before she ordered a cappuccino for herself. Opening her books, she tried to read something as it was her exam the next day and the guests at her home were just adding to her headache. She couldn't study in the chaos at home, and so had came here to study for a while. This was her favourite place to relax for a while and she absolutely loved it for two reasons.

The first one being the ambience and the low crowd which always gave her a warm feeling and the second one, their orchestra singer, he was just too good. The way his fingers flicked with the chords of the guitar and the way his voice just melted into her ears and soothed her soul was one of the biggest reasons she almost dropped by here every day. She smiled to herself thinking of him and the charming smile he would flash at her daily. She looked around and found him nowhere. Sighing as she just realized it was time for him to arrive, she dipped herself into her books while her cappuccino too was served and taking a sip post stirring it with the spoon for long, she finally started studying.

An hour or two later, she was finally feeling good as she just realized she had covered most of the topics and would just need a quick revision and a quick scan of the whole syllabus to appear for the next day's exam. Falling in love with her favourite place all over again, she stretched her arms lazily as her eyes began looking for him now. The only thing she wanted now was the soothing voice of his melting in her ears to make her day complete.

Her lips curled in disappointment as she realized he hadn't arrived yet and she ordered a grilled sandwich for herself to kill her time and feed her growling stomach before his arrival.

She was busy munching her sandwich when she finally felt his presence. Her eyes twinkled in excitement seeing him in that black shirt with blue denims, setting the chords of his guitar, all set to treat her ears with his melodious voice all over again.

"yee" she chirped excitedly seeing him earning his attention as well and he just flashed his dimpled smile at her making her go weak in her knees. Now this was her third reason for visiting this cafe regularly, she had loved his voice at first but soon, she fell for him as well. Though both were just familiar strangers till now, they hadn't talked much to the other.

Signalling her to wipe the ketchup from the cores of her lips, he started to sing for her while she got busy admiring him and didn't even realize when the song ended. Her trance broke as her phone rang flashing her mother's name on the screen.

She took the call and her mother had asked her to come back home soon, she told her mother she will be there in a while and left from there seeing him packing up his stuff already.

He saw her going and smiled ruffling his hairs before his guard Romi Arora came inside and told him that they should leave the cafe now as it wasn't safe for him to be in a public place without security for a long time.

Nodding his head at what romi said, he walked out where his black merc was waiting for him and settling in his car, he was soon being taken back home by his driver while his mind was struck on ishita's thoughts only and the day he had laid his eyes on her for the very first time and lost his heart to her.

FLASHBACK

Raman bhalla, the topmost businessman of the country was driving his car himself as his driver had some emergency at home. He was in a rush as he was getting late for a meeting when suddenly a girl came in front of his car out of nowhere. He applied brakes with a jerk to save her and was about to step down and give her a piece of mind when he saw her caressing the little puppy he was about to thrash in his rash driving. The girl apologized to him for coming in front of the car like that and left from there while he was just left looking at her losing his senses. He never believed in love at first sight and today, he had fallen for someone in a single meeting itself.

He smiled looking at her retreating figure and asked his men to find about her and knowing she visits that particular cafe daily and loves music, he thought to use his singing talent to get close to her. He joined the cafe as a singer and used to see her daily, admire her while she would be enjoying his singing and smile at her occasionally, letting her fall in love with him slowly.

FLASHBACK ENDS

A month passed like that only, he thought it was time to confess his feelings to her now as he could see something for himself in her eyes as well. It was another normal evening for ishita; she entered the cafe and was surprised seeing nobody around.

Seemed the entire cafe had been booked, she was about to walk out when she heard his voice and her feet just refused to meet as she heard him singing.

Pehli nazar mein
Kaise jaado kar diya
Tera ban baita hai
Mera jiya
Jaane kya hoga
Kya hoga kya pata
Is pal ko milke
Aa jee le zara

Mein hoon yahan
Tu hai yahan
Meri bahon mein aa
Aa bhi ja
O jaan-e-jaan
Dono jahan
Meri bahon mein aa
Bhool Ja aa

O jaan-e-jaan
Dono jahan
Meri bahon mein aa
Bhool Ja aa

Baby i love u, baby i love you, baby i love you, baby i love you ... so..
Baby i love u
Oh i love u
I love u
I love u so
Baby i love u

Smiling at her as he slowly reached her and hit his shoulder with hers confirming her doubts that he was singing it for her only, he saw her lips curving up into the brightest of her smiles as she got excited like a little kid and looked at him happily while he continued to sing for her.

Har dua mein shamil tera pyaar hai
Bin tere lamha bhi dushwar hai
Dhadhkon ko tujhe se hi darkar hai
Tujhse hai rahtein
Tujhse hai chahtein

Har dua mein shamil tera pyaar hai
Bin tere lamha bhi dushwar hai
Dhadhkon ko tujhe se hi darkar hai
Tujhse hai rahtein
Tujhse hai chahtein

Tu jo mili ek din mujhe
Mein kahin ho gaya lapata

O jaan-e-jaan
Dono jahan
Meri bahon mein aa
Bhool Ja aa...

Ishita felt goose bumps all over her skin feeling his gaze on her, she was about to turn her face away when she felt him standing right next to her as he crinkled his eyebrows at her asking her what happened to which she only shook her head in negative saying it's nothing.

Kar diya Deewana dard-e-Kash ne
Chain cheena ishq ke ehsaas ne
Bekhayali di hai tere pyaas ne
Chaya suroor hai
Kuch to zaroor hai ...

Yeh dooriyan
Jeene na de
Hal mera tujhe na pata

O jaan-e-jaan
Dono jahan
Meri bahon mein aa
Bhool Ja aa ...

Baby i love u, baby i love you, baby i love you, baby i love you ... so..
Baby i love u
Oh i love u
Baby I love u
I love u...

By the time he finished the song, he was on his knees holding her hand in his, smiling brightly at her, all set to propose her. Biting her lips as she just couldn't hold her excitement at the thought of him proposing her, she looked at him eagerly waiting for him to begin.

He looked at her and closing his eyes for a moment, trying to suppress his nervousness, he finally started

R -Ms. Ishita Iyer, I know we are still strangers, we hardly know a thing about the other and it might be early for you but I can't hide my feelings anymore. I want to shout to the world that I, Raman bhalla is in love, madly in love with you. I love you ishita, I love you since the day I had seen you for the very first time.

She widened her eyes hearing he is the Raman bhalla while he just smiled understanding what she was thinking and told her about their first meeting and how he did all this to be close to her.

Ishita smiled fully overwhelmed while he just asked her to speak up as his knees are hurting. Smiling, she too bend to his level and without saying anything, just looped her arms around his neck, hugging him.

I -you'll have to promise to sing me a song daily, then only I will agree to get married to you

She whispered in his ears slowly making him smile. Tearing her a little from himself, he looked at her dying to hear those three magic words from her mouth and realizing his eagerness, she just chuckled ruffling his hairs before she actually spoke up.

I -I love you too

He grinned fully hearing that and hugging her as tight as he could, twirled her around screaming loudly to the world that his first love just got its destination while ishita just giggled seeing his excitement before she hugged him back again as he just promised to hold her tight for the rest of his life.

So that's all for the OS

Hope you liked it.. will be waiting for your reviews

LOVE

AKKU

akriti154 thumbnail
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Posted: 7 years ago
#94
updated the OS
hav a look
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Posted: 7 years ago
#95


Thanks for pm Di
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Posted: 7 years ago
#96
Superb os Di..
Ishita entered her favourite cafe to study for her exam...
She likes to visit here as she loves to hear the songs from the singer of this cafe...
She almost finished her studying and was waiting the singer..
She got excited after seeing him who gave his smile in return..
He started his song while she was lost in his voice...
Raman was a famous businessman and fell for her at first sight..
He joined the cafe as singer to stay near her...
He thought to propose her as he has seen same love in Ishita's eyes..
He proposed her after dedicating a song for her..
She was overwhelmed and accepted his proposal..
Thank you..
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Posted: 7 years ago
#97
Awesome os akku!!
Loved it.
Raman is a business man n he fell for ishu in first sight only..
To make her fall in love he joined a cafe as a singer knowing she loves music..
Ishu too started loving him n
Finally raman proposed her n she too accepted..
Very beautifully written.
Thanks for d pm:)
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Posted: 7 years ago
#98
Superb os akku..
Loved it
Raman fell for ishu in the very first sight ..
He got all info about ishu n got to know she loves music..
He joined cafe as a singer to make her fell for him..
Ishu fell for him..
Raman decided to propose ishu..
He booked whole cafe n proposed her..
Ishu accepted his proposal..
Beautifully written loved it..


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Posted: 7 years ago
#99
it's really an awesome 1...sweet sa cute sa...infact I love dis type of OS...kitna pyaara sa h...no sadness no anger...sab kuch positive sa...

keep on updating its gud...n ur imagination is also too gud...
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Posted: 7 years ago
Lovely os
Raman fell for ishu in first sight.. N ask his friend to take information of her
Ishu fell for him as he was best singer
Loved how raman proposed her
Update soon
Thanks for PM

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