Cv's, audience deserve a little bit clarity

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clairvoyance

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Posted: 7 years ago

Good drama is unfolding, no doubt.Good effort. commendable. Kudos to team kaleerein.

But some clarity should be there when it comes to some things

1. Meera still blames Vivaan and is complaining her mother about it. While she is onbserving Vivaan asking for divorce. That makes it clear to clear marriage was spontaneous. Its a bit contradicting .Meera still holds him responsible and is still cooperating with him for happy couple acting

2. We audiences are not antaryami or astrologers to interprete what is going inside the mind of Vivaan and Meera.

We cant interprete whether Vivaan loves meera somewhere deep inside also.

Because no such monologues . Actions of fighting for her, saving her, marrying her did show us a hope but again that was reversed in these few days episode where we can see Vivaan desperate to get rid of meera. Vivaan and Meera stumbling, falling and staring each other for eons is also not sufficent to hint their feelings cause the next moment we see Vivaan too eager to get the divorce proceedings done. Even if there is confusion in his mind regarding present situation , please give us a monologue of his thinking mind.

When meera says him iam not crazy for u and dont ever thing of the gold digger tag, That was very clear about what she feels and why she is continuing.

Vivaan is also discussing with his step mom that he will soon get rid of this chaos.

Iam fine with this scene. But dont land up suddenly with vivaan's i love u dammit scene.

Whenever Vivaan starts developing feelings please give us insight through monologues

Whenevr Meera starts developing feelings please give us insight through monologues

Dont leave it at us for interpreting when both fall over each other.on stairs, corridors etc etc .

Because when vivaan hide the kalerein in his pocket and that feeling of emptiness when he was leaving, many audiences thought he is going to be a bit flirtatious or diplomatic from now onwards even while fighting with her. But since marriage we are seeing vivaan desperation for divorce.

Even we will see Meera being defensive for those roadside kids being at the helm of an accident by Roma. If she can be Jhansi ki Rani for those Kids.atleast there should have been that angriness or some dialogues against mahila morcha to dragged her like a piece of shit.

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Posted: 7 years ago

A truly apt post!!

My POV-

Any serial/series/movie succeeds on the basis of storytelling. Storytelling is an art. We all loved fairy tales knowing they r all fakes😳😆. So even though tracks may be illogical, they should be told in such a way that they feel convincing enough!

Till now, apart from Meera's love for Kabaddi, all other tracks has its own lack of logic. So in case CVs want to ride that boat, they surely need to convincing enough!

I feel, this will be achieved only with a strong backing of side characters!

Vivz suddenly landed where Meera was dragged in a devastated attire..why? how? some explanation atleast...

When Vivaan brought Meera home, nobdy asked what happened, not even after marriage. the night was simply wasted. Why? Beeji shld be the one who wl ask, everybdy what happened...

Vivz has to marry in such a situation. What did Amaya do? she decorated SR bed? Does it any way sound logical? Will she atleast not ask his brother what happend how it happend?

After coming home Vivz was preparing divorce papers...give him atleast the night...he was beaten so badly...some explanation...somethng atleast!

Vivz readily, well almost, agreeing with Meera abt no divorce, till now he was hell bent on divorce? Given Vivz's character "Koi Vivaan kapoor se kuch nahi karwa sakta" Reason?? somethng atleast...

To cut short...all i want to say is, whatver illogical track u show give some backup atleast...

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clairvoyance

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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: anjani-pagli
A truly apt post!!

My POV-

Any serial/series/movie succeeds on the basis of storytelling. Storytelling is an art. We all loved fairy tales knowing they r all fakes😳😆. So even though tracks may be illogical, they should be told in such a way that they feel convincing enough!

Till now, apart from Meera's love for Kabaddi, all other tracks has its own lack of logic. So in case CVs want to ride that boat, they surely need to convincing enough!

I feel, this will be achieved only with a strong backing of side characters!
Vivz suddenly landed where Meera was dragged in a devastated attire..why? how? some explanation atleast...

When Vivaan brought Meera home, nobdy asked what happened, not even after marriage. the night was simply wasted. Why? Beeji shld be the one who wl ask, everybdy what happened...

Vivz has to marry in such a situation. What did Amaya do? she decorated SR bed? Does it any way sound logical? Will she atleast not ask his brother what happend how it happend?

After coming home Vivz was preparing divorce papers...give him atleast the night...he was beaten so badly...some explanation...somethng atleast!

Vivz readily, well almost, agreeing with Meera abt no divorce, till now he was hell bent on divorce? Given Vivz's character "Koi Vivaan kapoor se kuch nahi karwa sakta" Reason?? somethng atleast...

To cut short...all i want to say is, whatver illogical track u show give some backup atleast...

You have put some necessary things which needed an answer from Triangle Productions .I appreciate.

To sum up i feel that no story telling is complete without continuity.

Or else how can we connect?

Because here in the show what happened a day before is conveniently forgotten by next day events.

Lack of continuity and consistency

Over these years we know about OTT scenes, High end drama, Close up, shocked shots of characters , Heavy duty editing twists in TV. All these are part.

But what is the minimum we can expect is consistency

The person who was defending, Fighting, and hugged her so possesively as if his life depended on her , that person just prepared divorce papers within and wanted to get rid of her sooner.

No consistency in meera too. She is doubting vivaans video clip intentions and at the same time she is acknowledging it was a uncalled disaster that marriage took place.

I want consistency or else i can ignore other facets like Mother in law-daugher in law drama

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Anniiee

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Posted: 7 years ago

I agree with you.

As of now the show doesn't appear to be consistent... Vivaan agreeing to continue with the marriage for some time doesn't seem like him... how come suddenly he is agreeing with Meera!
If I am not wrong the whole Sumer-Silky thing has not been addressed.
What happened to Sumer and his mother... what about Silky...? Vivaan knows the truth yet we don't see him doing anything...
When he was leaving we were shown scenes that hinted that both of them had some feelings for each other...but BAM after the marriage we are back to square one.
All those fall-catch moments,eye locks look good but are not enough to make the story move forward...
Making Vivaan trip and fall three times post marriage was to be honest a bit repititive and random... After all most 50 episodes i still don't feel that Meera-vivan have progressed in any aspect.
Now with Vivaan's step mother entering... where is the story heading? They already have enough characters whose story arc can be shown...

But i hope that the CV's tie these loose ends and show some logical tracks moving forward

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