SS:KAISAI MUJHAY TUM MILL GAYE. (Maaneet) DISCONTINUED

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-gurukideewani-

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Posted: 7 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: Keepdreaming
I love the name of your story
this song is my favourite one

It's my fab song to :)

Thank you so much dear

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Posted: 7 years ago

#22

great update

mission successful but maan injured badly n in critical situation

geet assure daadi that maan will be ok n she is going take care of him

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Madhu

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Posted: 7 years ago

#23

Nice update :D

Maan is really brave..without even caring for his life,he saved the little kids and teachers from terrorists!!Hats of to him!!

Love Vicky's love fro his brother...

Dadima and vicky are shattered by the news 😒

Does Geet know Maan already?Why is she trembling and crying?

When Geet is here nothing will happen to Maan...Eagerly waiting for next part :)

Loved this update very much!

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Posted: 7 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: Madhu..
Nice update :D
Maan is really brave..without even caring for his life,he saved the little kids and teachers from terrorists!!Hats of to him!!
Love Vicky's love fro his brother...
Dadima and vicky are shattered by the news 😒
Does Geet know Maan already?Why is she trembling and crying?
When Geet is here nothing will happen to Maan...Eagerly waiting for next part :)
Loved this update very much!

No she doesn't I wrote her POV in next updates hope that will clear it

Thank you:.

Edited by -gurukideewani- - 7 years ago

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Taahir

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Posted: 7 years ago

#25

Thank you for updating really appreciate that

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Taahir

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Posted: 7 years ago

#26

Maan is a true hero he made sure that the innocent children and teachers were all saved

at the cost of his life but he was happy that none got harmed

he was shot three times and also had a head injury

Geet on seeing him was blank but his operation was successful

and she tells Daadi that Maan will be fine

looking forward to Geet taking care of Maan

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Madhu

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Posted: 7 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: -gurukideewani-

No she doesn't I wrote her POV in next updates hope that will clear it
Thank you:.

Oh..sry..I think I misunderstood...

Will be eagerly waiting for next😊

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khwaishfan

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Posted: 7 years ago

#28

thanks for updating!

Part 2

dynamic update! well written!

Maan is so brave! glad he managed to save the kids and teachers! but he is badly injured! Geet seems shocked seeing Maan!

does she know Maan!

dadi and Vicky worried!

liked how Geet assures dadi! Geet taking care of Maan!

update soon

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-gurukideewani-

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Posted: 7 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: Madhu..

Oh..sry..I think I misunderstood...
Will be eagerly waiting for next😊

No no May be my narration confused all hope pov will clear it

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-gurukideewani-

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Posted: 7 years ago

#30

Originally posted by: khwaishfan
thanks for updating!

Part 2

dynamic update! well written!

Maan is so brave! glad he managed to save the kids and teachers! but he is badly injured! Geet seems shocked seeing Maan!

does she know Maan!

dadi and Vicky worried!

liked how Geet assures dadi! Geet taking care of Maan!

update soon