AvNeil Fan-Fiction : Chase Against Time Ch31: Pg41 on 11/09

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Shahnaz

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Posted: 7 years ago

#211

Originally posted by: AgnesFan
I love this total cool tech savy Aman ! Such an interesting character you have shaped up . He is as good as his sister in digging crimes .
Looks like both ACP and Ananya are in same page . Though Neil doesn't have a tech savvy like Aman to help him 😆

Are you even in an idea to reveal what this Mr. criminal is upto !_This man has intrigued me the most . When everyone thought he was going to kill Ananya he made a video to mislead all . Wah ! Brains !

Thank You so much for the review. I am relieved that he is loved. You will more of Aman and Avni, I guess. While others join in.

They both look to be on the same page but it might so happen that one may take the lead in the upcoming chapters.

Mr. Criminal can wait but still you will have this person appear again after a couple of chapters, I believe. Thankfully, the murderer has intrifued someone 😆 Oh, there's more to it than what meets the eye. Be game for the upcoming revelations. Because it isn't as easy as it looks like. 😉

Thanks once again for your review.

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Shahnaz

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Posted: 7 years ago

#212

Originally posted by: farcry
amazing <3

Thank You! I am glad you like it. :)

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Shahnaz

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Posted: 7 years ago

#213

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darsh333

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Posted: 7 years ago

#214

Finally read the updates!precisely the last two😆

Aman and ananya are a team and that too aman is tech savvy!

Loved how aman helps ananya😊

But why has the attacker left ananya the footage??or why didnt he not kill her when he could do that easily??

You didnt provide much space to neil in the previous chapter

Now to this chapter!wow ananya is super smart than neil😆

Neil doesnt like him being addressed officer by ananya...mmm😆

Wasnt ananya indirectly saying neil is local cop or like she is interested in sherlock types??😆

15 people??im expecting more to be in the team😆

So what are they gonna do??what is in the meeting??

Goodiee updates shenz😊update the next part soon😊

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Shahnaz

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Posted: 7 years ago

#215

Originally posted by: darsh333
Finally read the updates!precisely the last two😆
Aman and ananya are a team and that too aman is tech savvy!

Loved how aman helps ananya😊

But why has the attacker left ananya the footage??or why didnt he not kill her when he could do that easily??

You didnt provide much space to neil in the previous chapter

Now to this chapter!wow ananya is super smart than neil😆

Neil doesnt like him being addressed officer by ananya...mmm😆

Wasnt ananya indirectly saying neil is local cop or like she is interested in sherlock types??😆

15 people??im expecting more to be in the team😆

So what are they gonna do??what is in the meeting??

Goodiee updates shenz😊update the next part soon😊

Thank you so much for your review, Darshana!!

Yes, you have read two chapters in a go. Let's see when do you make your presence felt the next time. 😉

Thankfully, Aman is loved by all. I am liking the response for Ananya and Aman as a team. The siblings workign together.

You will get your answers, in the next chapter or maybe the next to next one. But definitely in the next two chapters. I promise.

Well, Neil did make an appearance in the previous chapter, with DD though. And this one compensated for the lack of Neil-Ananya. This has been the lengthiest chapter in the history of this Fa-fiction. Not that I have not written such long chapters in the past. ;P

I wouldn't have Ananya any other way. She has to be smart, even if it means to out smart Neil. It is just a way to show how smart and resourceful she is.

Neil doesn't? I can't comment much on whom or what kind of men does she like. But maybe Aman would be able to help clear this confusion for you and for Neil ;)

How many more people do tou expect in her team? Aren't you a curious reader?

By the way, you will get all answers to your question. You just need to be patient. I hope that won't be a problem for you 😆

Thanks once again for the review.

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Wingsoflove_2

@Wingsoflove_2

Rocker

Posted: 7 years ago

#216

Awesome one

They cant stay away from argument.

Lol, it was funny when he said, I have a good name and that is Neil.😆

She's taunting him.

Lets see wat happens.

Continue soon.

Thanks for the pm.

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Shahnaz

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Stunner

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Posted: 7 years ago

#217

Originally posted by: rilsaf
Awesome one
They cant stay away from argument.
Lol, it was funny when he said, I have a good name and that is Neil.😆
She's taunting him.
Lets see wat happens.
Continue soon.
Thanks for the pm.

Thanks for the review.

There's barely any conversation between the two without an argument. You will witness more in the upcoming ones. ;)

I was totally imaging Zain as Neil trying to pull it off with his pouty expression, "I have a good name and that is Neil."

You will find out what happens next. How soon is the question here. But hopefully you won't have to wait for long . :)

No need to thank me for the PM.

Thanks once again!!

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Shahnaz

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Posted: 7 years ago

#218

Just in case, if you would like to read something different and random, try the One-shot :

Neil OS: Burning Soul

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srinithi

@AgnesFan

Sparkler

Posted: 7 years ago

#219

Always arguing on something be it even a name 😆 This two are just impossible ! Neil can never get what he wants from Ananya. She will only share the information which she wants . This girl is such a sneaky mysterious entity .

I have a name and that's Neil was the best part of the conversation . 😆 I can imagine Zain's pout and that disappointed expression

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Shahnaz

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Stunner

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Posted: 7 years ago

#220

Originally posted by: AgnesFan
Always arguing on something be it even a name 😆 This two are just impossible ! Neil can never get what he wants from Ananya. She will only share the information which she wants . This girl is such a sneaky mysterious entity .
I have a name and that's Neil was the best part of the conversation . 😆 I can imagine Zain's pout and that disappointed expression

Thanks for your review.

Well, Neil might just want way more than what she is capable to give. You never know. She might be trying to make him learn, how to adjust. 😆 Sorry, that was irrelevant.

Ananya has to be mysterious to keep this whole FF going ;P

Even, I could imagine Zain pouting That's what got me to write that, in the first place. Zain and his priceless expressions. 😳

Thanks once again for the review. :)