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Shahnaz

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Posted: 7 years ago

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darsh333

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Posted: 7 years ago

Aargh the last lines hit me hard🥱

Well written!i wish if such a scene comes up in the show😊

Keep writing more😊

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Shahnaz

@ShenzK

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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: darsh333
Aargh the last lines hit me hard🥱

Well written!i wish if such a scene comes up in the show😊

Keep writing more😊

Thank You, Darshana!

Now, you are expecting way too much from the CVs, aren't you? 😆 We are not that lucky, girl.

Thank you. I will try to come u with more such chotu-random shots 😉

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AvNeil123

@AvNeil123

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Posted: 7 years ago

You have expressed Neil's emotions so well. The battle between the mind and heart, has been beautifully written.

If possible do write something similar from Avni's POV

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840837

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Posted: 7 years ago

Loved this. Well written. Can you perhaps write a sequel or an avni POV shot also...

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srinithi

@AgnesFan

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Posted: 7 years ago

Now I'm gonna demand Avni's POV man ! At least Neil has some way out through his anger but Avni doesn't even get a monolgue. Sometimes I feel it's unfair to Avni 😆

Beautifully penned ! Creatives will never give such scenes which are due from jail track .

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Shahnaz

@ShenzK

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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: -AvniNeil-
You have expressed Neil's emotions so well. The battle between the mind and heart, has been beautifully written.

If possible do write something similar from Avni's POV

Thank you so much. It's a relief that this has been well received, so far.

Writing something similar for Avni is a challenge but I will see what I can get my hands onto. 😊

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Shahnaz

@ShenzK

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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: neeraja91
Loved this. Well written. Can you perhaps write a sequel or an avni POV shot also...

Thank You. I guess, I will have to think of something for Avni as well, now that I see many asking for it. I did have the thought of writing something from Avni's POV but Avni is so delusional in her acts these days that it gets a little complicated to justify her. 😆

I will try though. :)

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Shahnaz

@ShenzK

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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: AgnesFan
Now I'm gonna demand Avni's POV man ! At least Neil has some way out through his anger but Avni doesn't even get a monolgue. Sometimes I feel it's unfair to Avni 😆
Beautifully penned ! Creatives will never give such scenes which are due from jail track .

I think, I will have to write something from Avni's POV now. Avni doesn't have the time to sit back and think. Her emotions were flushed out of her system the day she started her 'Meri Mishti' jaap ignoring her husband. 😆

Thank you so much. Creatives are busy glorifying the unwanted characters. They no longer care who the leads are 😛

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srinithi

@AgnesFan

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Posted: 7 years ago

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Originally posted by: -shenz-

I think, I will have to write something from Avni's POV now. Avni doesn't have the time to sit back and think. Her emotions were flushed out of her system the day she started her 'Meri Mishti' jaap ignoring her husband. 😆

Thank you so much. Creatives are busy glorifying the unwanted characters. They no longer care who the leads are 😛

The problem with Avni is we can't understand whether she wants to stay with Neil or not. She is one of the biggest confusing character at the moment.