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WaveTeal

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Posted: 7 years ago

#201

Originally posted by: Keepdreaming
three parts !!!!!!
so happy to read it
thnx

Hilarious responses Sabina!! 🤣

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Posted: 7 years ago

#202

Originally posted by: Iptida
<font color="#009999">Hilarious responses Sabina!!🤣</font>

I know ⭐️

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Posted: 7 years ago

#203

@Chapter 48 Part2

Awesome and chatty update

Loved it!! Eloquently penned 👍🏼

Geet was missing Maan and felt void in her heart and along with it she realised that she desired him. She couldn't fathom her own passionate self and her ardent love for Maan. She couldn't express her brazen self to Maan that she thought that Maan will miss her more and will be restless and distracted from his work. Loved their pure and sinless love for each other. Maaneet keep each other above thyself and prioritize their partners feelings and value their relationship than thyself. It's always US in their relationship rather than I or me, myself. Loved their adorable chatty banter message. Pinky's random talks regarding amorous shade of love made Geet to open up about her thoughts and quandary. Geet was clueless regarding her and Maan's intimacy and the way to approach things with Maan. Geet was feeling guilty aftermath hearing Pinky's words and was naive with her approach and thoughts that she feels she couldn't fulfill his wifey duty whilst she loves him with all her existence. Apropos to her age and naive self she couldn't understand the depth of intimacy husband and wife share. Maan loves Geet beyond and immensely that their relationship and love can't be bounded within the circles of intimacy. Their love for each other is beyond words and limits yet Geet felt thyself remorseful with new things coming into light.

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Posted: 7 years ago

#204

Originally posted by: Iptida
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sorry i was late in reading the update but all were awesome and really looking forward to the next one after reading the precap...👏

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Sowmiya

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Posted: 7 years ago

#205

@Chapter 49

Awesome update dear

Loved it!! Beautifully penned.

With time Geet is turning mature and responsible. She wants to understand her desirous feelings for Maan and Maan's passionate self for her. Geet was lost in reliving her memories Pinky's utterance broke Geet's reminiscing session. Pinky's words about modernized love story and theories between couple made Geet to put froth her thoughts and knowledge owing to her naive self and was all into commitment thoughts. Geet just shared her inhibitions with pinky quoting it as her friends issue whilst Pinky unknown to Geet's dilemma was all lost in sharing her prespective pushing Geet into sphere of guilt. Pinky and Geet has different prespective regarding this subject thus couldnt bring thyself to understand others prespective but yupe Geet was trying to grasp Pinky's words to an extent. Pinky's distracted Geet's mood with Maan's name and turned atmosphere light. Geet was back to her lively and chirpy self. Liked Pinky and Geet's frienshfri and lovely rapoora they share. Loved their deju Vu moment. Geet was so lost in seeing Maan in front of her that she couldn't differentiate between reality and dream. Geet melted thyself in Maan's live love and warmth. She found her Oasis in desert amid her yearning for Maan's presence, their lovey dovey moments, his love and warmth self for her. She found her thirst seeing Maan in front of her and being in his arms added to their togetherness.

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Posted: 7 years ago

#206

Interesting precap!!

Seems like Mohi wanted to know Maan's interest and concern in Maaneet's alliance before moving ahead with further rituals and gathering s.

Looking forward to the update.

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Posted: 7 years ago

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Fantastic gifs dear ❤️

Apt and sublime.👍🏼😊

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Posted: 7 years ago

#210

Comment of the chapter

Thanks a lot dearies for your awesome comments!!

Check out the Featured comments of the last chapters!!

Originally posted by: Khushibloom
Part 1
Amazingly written baby 👏

Aww maaneet's texting was so well defined and so much filled with love for each other , well said that distance never matter for these live birds
Even now they are busy with their Never ending cute nok jhok which enlightens their world and of course including ours 😉

Grrr 😡
Sameera is officially gone mad now
Even after clear cut reply of maan that he miss geet the most she is not stopping her stupid messages and testing his patience

He was sane only and only because of his wifey's cute messages

Baby their conversation was so much deep and each word was filled with immense and pure love ❤️

I have always loved the concept of texting between Maaneet as in the real show too it happened plus you can see it in the initial chapters of Mp...Chapter 28

Also in PD as well!!

I wrote this back 1 month ago btw!! Didn't know how it came out in the update but your comment sure was a breeze of bliss!!

Thank you so very much for your encouraging words and loving MP Maaneet!!

Love you baby!! 🤗

Originally posted by: mayapari
Oh meri jaan !!!
What an update!!
Maan is not here and Geet is missing maan and vice versa
I just loved how maan replied to sam
Maan and geets bickering was super awesome
Pinky has her own views and she told them
That isn't wrong
But maaneet as a couple are different
Geet will understand with time
Oh maan is here!!!
Wow
Kiss
Precap is
Maan explaining geets father and mother
I am loving this
Update soon
Thank you

Aww!! Such a cute feedback!! I am glad that you liked Maanet's banter and Maan's reply to Sam!!
Thank you so very much for your outstanding comment!! 😳

Originally posted by: anu5
@Chapter 48 Part2
Awesome and chatty update
Loved it!! Eloquently penned 👍🏼
Geet was missing Maan and felt void in her heart and along with it she realised that she desired him. She couldn't fathom her own passionate self and her ardent love for Maan. She couldn't express her brazen self to Maan that she thought that Maan will miss her more and will be restless and distracted from his work. Loved their pure and sinless love for each other. Maaneet keep each other above thyself and prioritize their partners feelings and value their relationship than thyself. It's always US in their relationship rather than I or me, myself. Loved their adorable chatty banter message. Pinky's random talks regarding amorous shade of love made Geet to open up about her thoughts and quandary. Geet was clueless regarding her and Maan's intimacy and the way to approach things with Maan. Geet was feeling guilty aftermath hearing Pinky's words and was naive with her approach and thoughts that she feels she couldn't fulfill his wifey duty whilst she loves him with all her existence. Apropos to her age and naive self she couldn't understand the depth of intimacy husband and wife share. Maan loves Geet beyond and immensely that their relationship and love can't be bounded within the circles of intimacy. Their love for each other is beyond words and limits yet Geet felt thyself remorseful with new things coming into light.
:))

Anu, Yeppiiee!! Finally got my baby's comment!! Gosh I am so happy that you liked all three updates!! Phew that was a relief!! 😆

Bold - Baby do you know even curtus(another ardent reader) said the same as you!! And this was exactly my endeavor to show Maaneet's dynamics in such a light only!! So I am glad that this has been coming out successfully!! 😳

Thank you so very much for your outstanding comment!!

Originally posted by: taahir004
Chapter 49

Excellent Chapter

I enjoyed both Pinky and Geet's conversation their view points
and its true life has become modern but culture is still there so I guess
it totally depends on the couple if they want intimacy in their relation
but then there are other couples that just take this intimacy as part of dating
its not really special for them now the difference with Maan and Geet is when they kiss
its heavenly when his body closes in on Geet its pure bliss so one can imagine when the time comes
and they take their relationship to the next level their sexual intimacy will pure love it will be the ultimate depth of showering their love
Maan is there already and wow Geet is stunned as she first thinks it maybe a dream but her husband makes it known to her that he is there in real and she kisses him forgetting Pinky behind them
waiting now to see Maan and Geet's dad speak

There..You have said it all!! Let's see what turns we have now in Maaneet's sexual intimacy but your view on the pureness and depth of their love is totally appropriate!!

Thanks a lot for your amazing views Taahir!! 👏