#3 Song Osthon #2 Jeene laga hu by divan19 on pg 133 April 17 - Page 28

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Posted: 7 years ago
Awesome...
Ishita is gona get married to akash..
Yet she is not happy...
Loved what raman said...
Updt sooon di. .
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Posted: 7 years ago
Beautiful os
Ishita feel un wanted because of her wouldbe husband and family
No one try to understand her
Avinash don't have a word to say
Because this type of people r everywhere
Eagerly waiting for next update
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Posted: 7 years ago
Amazing update dear OS
Thanks for the PM waiting next update
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Posted: 7 years ago
Di I'm really sry for not commenting in ur posts.. Cos first immediately after exams I went on a tour then after coming back my network was not at all proper.. Sry for not commenting but I read all ur posts.. All were awesome.. I couldn't comment in each and every post but I promise here after I'll comment... And I want an epilogue for this one.. Its really good.. I would love it if you continue it..!!!
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: lavsusername

Di I'm really sry for not commenting in ur posts.. Cos first immediately after exams I went on a tour then after coming back my network was not at all proper.. Sry for not commenting but I read all ur posts.. All were awesome.. I couldn't comment in each and every post but I promise here after I'll comment... And I want an epilogue for this one.. Its really good.. I would love it if you continue it..!!!


You should at least mention for whom this comment is .
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Posted: 7 years ago
Superb shot
Curiously waiting for next shot
Updt soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
Hello friends I m back again to bother you all ,actually today was not my turn. Today was zoha's turn but she couldn't post her story today due to some reason ,so I m here with mine . I m writing OS on song " Tera mujhse hai pehle ka naata" suggested by " akku "

MAANE TU YA MAANE NA




Ishita picked the phone and dialed his number ,he picked the phone in few calls and spoke " bol meri jaan ,why did you call me ".

I- to call you on my funeral .

R- arey tu itni jaldi mar gayi ( arey you died so soon ).

I- shut up and tell me when you are coming .

R- why I will come ?

I- Raman I will kill you someday .

R- that you can't do for sure ,I know it .

I- that's why you always bother me .

R- nahi bilkul nahi ,I never bother you ye to tu hi hai jo mujhe hamesha pareshaan karti hai.

I- haan haan,I always bother you and your that Anita wo bahut achchi hai na .

R- haan yaar ,my Anita is very nice girl ,she us my jaan .

I- haan to ,my Avinash is also a very nice boy ,you know he is gifting me a diamond earrings on my birthday .

R- haan to le le na ,usi se le le(then take na ,take from him only) ,why are you calling me .

I- because its my birthday and you have to come ,you know na if you will not come I m not going to cut my cake .

R- I have a nice idea ,you don't cut cake this year ,you distribute pastries on your birthday .

I- Raman I swear ,if you will tease me once more ...

R- to kya karegi tu ...

I-( angrily)- I will ,I will ...

She was thinking something when her mother asked ,opening her rooms door " ishu to whom you are talking ,your phone is busy ,Avinash has called on my phone ".

I- who else ,ye Raman hai ,who use to tease me always .

A- you talk to Avinash and give me your phone ,I need to talk to him .

I- ruko na amma ,I m fighting with him .

A- offo oh ,you people are always fighting ,give me phone I had to talk something important to him.

I- ok take ..

Saying so ishita gave her phone to amma and started talking to get fiance Avinash while amma talked to Raman about some help for Ishita's birthday party .

Ishita iyer and Raman bhalla ,both were childhood friends and had studies together from nursery to class 12 ,after that both parted as Raman wanted to became software engineer while ishita wanted to became a doctor . Now both had completed their studies and were excelling in their respective fields ,ishita has become a gynecologist while Raman was scientist in Nuclear power . Ishita was living in Delhi with her parents and was practicing there only and is now engaged to her senior Dr Avinash reddy. On the other hand Raman was posted in Mumbai and lives there only . He us now engaged to Anita ,a Punjabi girl chosed by his mother .

Though Ishra use to stay away but their friendship is as strong as it was in their school days , don't matter how important work they had but they use to meet at least twice in year on their birthday moreover Raman family use to live in Delhi only ,so he has to come Delhi . Now ishita birthday is approaching and she was inviting him for his birthday party but as usual he was teasing her saying he cannot manage to come .

Three days flews like that and tomorrow is Ishita's birthday . The clock was about to hit 12.00 and she was staring on her phone , though she knows very well that it will be Raman who will wish her first but this year she wanted to be wished by Avinash first as he is going to become her soulmate moreover he himself has asked for ishita's hands from her parents and,as she don't love anyone and Avinash was a perfect choice, she agreed for marriage .

Ishita was counting the seconds in her phone and the moment it stuck 12.00 , she received a birthday message from . Ishita shook her head in disbelief and spoke to herself ," he is first again , non of us will leave the habit of counting seconds in this time ".

She was smiling when her phone rang , she picked the call and before she can say anything he wished her .

R- happy birthday motu .

I- kam se kam aaj to mat bol .

R- kyun na boloon ,only I call you with this name .

I- at first you tell me where are you .

R- where else, in my appt .

I- don't tell me that you are still in Mumbai .

R- haan yaar , actually my senior canceled my leave .

I- Raman I will surely kill you if you don't come ,main bata raheen hoon ,I will not cut the cake.

R- please try to understand sweety ,I had even booked my tickets too but boding boss of mine ,canceled my leave .

I(adamantly )- I told you na ,I m not going to cut my cake ,you must not had done the booking and now fooling

R- please baby ,understand na ,you don't believe me na ,ruk.

Saying so he send a pic of his tickets , showing today date . Ishita became sad and didn't spoke anything when Raman spoke " arey baba why are you behaving
so sad ,main nahi to kiya hua ,Avinash to hai na ".

I- yeah he is there but you know I feel free with you , with you I m myself but with Avinash I have to compose myself. bahut soch samajh ke bolna padta hai , don't know how many time I tell you that I will kill you but with Avinash ,I cannot .

R- haan yaar ishita ye to sahi hai ,I can tell you anything but with Anita ,I have to be sweet and lovely , has to give her smile always , either madam with get angry and ma will scold me.and hamesha mujhe hi sorry bolna padta hai , you know his much I hate to say sorry .

I- mujhse achche se kaun jaanta hoga ,you never said sorry to me.

Like this they talked for long and finally slept in morning. its her birthday and people can call her was long forgotten . Next morning it was about 7.30 am when amma came to wake her and called " ishu get up kanna we have to go to temple '.

I(rubbing her eyes )- amma just five minutes more ,I slept late in night .

A- ishu get up kanna ,see who has come .

Ishita immediately got up thinking its Avinash ,she without telling anything to amma ,went to washroom instructing amma to keep the saree she wanted her to wear today . Amma shook her head in disbelief and spoke " this girl never listen,koi nahi its good that she is getting ready without fussing over anything ".

Ishita was still bathing when she heard song ..

Tera mujhse Hai Pehle Ka Naata Koi
Yoonhi Nahin Dil Lubhaata Koi
Mera Tujhse Hai Pehle Ka Naata Koi
Yoonhi Nahin Dil Lubhaata Koi

Jaane Tu Ya Jaane Na
Maane Tu Ya Maane Na
Tera mujhse Hai Pehle Ka Naata Koi
Yoonhi Nahin Dil Lubhaata koi

Listening to which ishita asked " amma Avinash hi aaye hain na ".

Amma was about to deny when Raman signalled her to nod . Amma did same then ishita asked " then who played this song ".

A- its coming on TV .

Ishita hot silent listening to which but started cursing Raman as he hasn't come . She came out dressing fully like a cultured girl ,wearing a cream color kanjiwaram saree with red border . Her hair were nicely tied in braid in which was decorated with flowers . She hadn't done any makeup but was looking so pure and beautiful . She came out checking herself again and again ,when she heard " omg aunty is this our ishita".

Amma smiled and nodded while ishita raised her face surprisingly and called his name .He smiled fully and nodded , while she picked the cushion and started hitting him for fooling him while he was running here and there to escape from him. After sometimes ishita stopped and asked " but you told ".

R- main to kal hi aa gaya tha .its my motu birthday how can I miss it .

I- omg thank you so much for making time for me .

R- I always have time for you.

Ishita then recalled and asked " amma where is Avinash ,you told that he has come ".

A- no kanna ,it was Raman only .

Ishita become silent and looked at him while he smiled fully and wished her " happy birthday baby ,dekh ma be kiya bheja hai ".

I- my favorite ghobhi ke parathe .

R- humm ,but before that coke let's go to temple .

Ishita looked at amma for permission as they had decided that this year she will go temple with Avinash . Amma told ishita that she can go with Raman as Avinash is gone out of town for some important operation ,he has called in morning but couldn't talk to ishita as she was sleeping and he was in hurry . Ishitas face fell listening to amma ,Raman noticed this and thought to cheer her ,thinking so he spoke " what is this ishita ,I have come to celebrate your birthday and you are being sad sad . "

I- then what should I say , my fiance has gone out without informing me that to on my birthday . and you being my friend had come canceling all your work .

R- haan to tera mera pichle janam ka rista hai ,ab chal and cheer up ,ya gaaun.

I- no no don't sing but you can play our song in your mobile ,you have that in your phone .

R- haan yaar ,that's our friendship song ,yaad hai we had chose this song as our signature song .

I- humm .

Saying so both went out and settled in car to go temple while Raman played the song .

Dhuaan Dhuaan Tha Vo Samaan
Yahan Vahan Jaane Kahan
Tu Aur Main Kahin Milay Thay Pehle
Dekha Tujhe To Dil Ne Kaha

Jaane Tu Ya Jaane Na
Maane Tu Ya Maane Na

Tu Bhi Rahi Mere Liye
Main Bhi Raha Tere Liye
Pehle Bhi Main Tujhe Baahon Mein Leke
Jhooma Kiya Aur Jhooma Kiya

Jaane tu ya jane na
Maane tu ya mane na

Dekho Abhi Khona Nahin
Kabhi Juda Hona Nahin
Ab Ke Yoohin Mile Rahenge Dono
Vaada Raha Ye Is Shaam Ka
Jaane Tu Ya Jaane Na
Maane Tu Ya Maane Na

Tera mujhse Hai Pehle Ka Naata Koi
Yoonhi Nahin Dil Lubhaata Koi
Jaane Tu Ya Jaane Na
Maane Tu Ya Maane Na

That's all for now , i had written this in jiffy ,hope you like this . Enjoy reading and do comment.I know its not completed but will write further if you all want .
Edited by Divanru - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago

Thanks for pm Di
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Posted: 7 years ago
Awesome fab fantastic chap
Nice both r best friend
But engaged to other
Please continue soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
Awesome os!!
Loved it.
Ishra r childhood buddies..
They both r engaged to someone else..
Loved their bond..they both know each other very well n r so comfortable with each other..
They don't have to pretend when they r with each other unlike with their patners..
Ishu got happy when raman came for her leaving all his work but got sad as her fiance left without informing her that too on her birthday..
Very beautifully written..
Plz continue this dii..
Thanks for d pm:)

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