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Posted: 7 years ago
#71
Congrats for yet another story..
Interesting n different concept...

Thanks for pm...
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Posted: 7 years ago
#72
Part 1..
Thanks for the update..

Thanks for the pm..

Continue soon...

Interesting... Awesome...

Maan followed geet for over 4months , she woewor in his company for over a year n he didn't know..

He felt some unknown pull towards her ...

He became friend's with her..

Everything was going on well ...

N now comes a twist from our very own TWIST QUEEN..

Zor ka jhatka Hayee zor se lagaa ...

Geet is not human but a robot... Wah wah kya twist hai...


Ab kya hoga...

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Posted: 7 years ago
#73
Nice start
Maan was attracted to her eyes which were always expressionless n followed her fr months
Maan was happy when geet was working under him as his assistant.. N he had developed a likeness towards her
But he was shocked when he knew dat she is nt human but a robot he was hurt but he realized her pain n he promised to be wid her
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Posted: 7 years ago
#74

Originally posted by: T.Peru

Nice update

Geet is not human
She is machine
It shock Maan
Thanks for PM
Update soon



Yup Geet is different

Thank u
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Posted: 7 years ago
#75

Originally posted by: taahir004

Fantastic Start

Maan has always been drawn to Geet's eyes
and when he learns that she is not human
though he is shocked but he promises to always stand by her side
support her








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Posted: 7 years ago
#76

Originally posted by: nishamna

Nice part. Geet has been watching geet from far since long and suddenly one aybhe comes to know she works in his company. Dev appointed her as maan's assistant. Gradually they become friend and one day Maan comes to know geet is a robot and she is from another world. It was shocking. Waiting for next dear






Hehe yup Geet will b very different here


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Posted: 7 years ago
#77



Thank you for your support 😃














Part 2



First Date







I have always thought of the reason for my existence but in that one moment I felt it was for her only her. I felt I have found everything, I didn't care for anything anymore...but everything is not that simple now is it...that is why we have to strive in life to attain the ultimate happiness and our journey had just begun. "You really don't care if .., I heard her say. "No, I don't Geet, so don't be sad alright, I assured her. She smiled and nodded. I helped her out of the archive room and decided to drop her home just to be sure that she is fine. This time she took me to her house. It was huge just like my Mansion but something was different about it. I saw an old man coming out. "Are you alright dear, He asked her. "I'm fine father, She said.








"Thank you Mr Khurana you saved my child today, He thanked me. "It is alright Sir, I said. "Geet, go and eat something dear, He said. He turned to me and said, "I'm Prof Handa. I have saved Geet when I found her. She thinks she is not a human because of her automated heart but truly she is actually an Android, a human with a robotic heart the button to which you activated today, He explained. "Android.., I asked. "Yes Mr Khurana she has some limitations but she can live like any other girl of her age too...though she also has immense strength, He said. "Then why is she sad, I asked the question which bothered me since long. "Geet knows your future Mr Khurana ...she is here for you, He said leaving me shocked.




Geet came in at that time and I looked at her for answers. "Sir, thank you for today, She smiled. "Are you okay now, I asked. "Yes, She nodded. I turned to her dad and asked the question which I intended to as I saw him the first time. "Sir, with your kind permission, I would like to take your daughter out, I said in an intent to make her happy. Her dad was surprised and Geet looked at me in question to which I nodded assuring her that I want to be with her. "Mr Khurana..., He started but I interrupted... "You can call me Maan.



"Alright Maan but you do know that my child has her limitations right,He asked. "I am well aware now Sir but if even for a day I could make her happy...I will be happy, I said. "What do you think Geet, He turned to his child who looked confused. "Sir...I don't know and our future seems unsure...and..., She tried to explain.








"Geet, I know that you know the future but if we can make our present beautiful then may be the future might be better too...please let me take this chance ...let me make you happy, I asked desperately. "Geet...dear you should give someone a chance to make you happy...may be this young man could...so consider his request, The Professor said. "Alright Sir, She conceded. I was really happy at that moment. I thanked them and went back to my home.




My grandma and Dev were waiting for me, they smiled looking at me and asked the reason. "I...I'm going out tomorrow...I mean on a date, I said nervously. "Really...that is great bro, Dev hugged me. "I'm so happy, that you finally found love for yourself...who is the young lady anyway, My Dadima grinned. "It has to be Geet, Dadima...isn't it bro, Dev winked and I looked down embarrassed nodding silently. "I knew it you liked her...I saw you following her so thought to get you two to know each other better so I appointed her as your assistant, He said. "You knew..., I looked up shocked and he nodded. "Even Dadima knew that so we did this for your happiness, He said. I was again happy to have such a loving family. "Bhai, let's celebrate, Meera, Dev's wife came with a cake. "We really wish you happiness..., They smiled. "Bade Papa, I want cake too, My five year old niece Samaya said. I picked her up celebrating with my family. I went to my room waiting for the new day to come.




Finally, it was the time for my first date with Geet. I escorted her to my car, she looked really pretty in that white dress, just like an angel. "Thank you for accepting my request Geet, I said. "Thank you Sir...even after knowing my truth you are still ready to accept me, She said. "Geet...I'm the happiest today, so don't think of this as any favor I'm doing to you let us say it is for both of us..., I smiled. She smiled for the first time and I could see some shine in her eyes. I took her to diner first. I was surprised when she ordered only the dishes which contained chocolate and only some of other normal food. "Sir...actually chocolate is the thing which is needed for my heart...Dad said that...I forgot to take that yesterday so that accident happened, She explained.









"It is alright Geet, you should eat what you like. Are these other dishes according to your taste, I asked looking at the Indian food she ordered. "Ah, yes Sir, I loved these spicy dishes ...it was before Dad gave me a automated heart but he still cooks these for me so that I could still remain normal, She said. "I'm happy that you like these Geet even my grandma loves these, I said. "Sir then why do eat such a bland diet, She pointed at my Italian dish. "I...I like these you see it keeps you healthy, I defended myself. She laughed hearing that it was the first time I saw her laugh, I felt happy seeing that. "I'm sorry Sir but I thought exercise keeps you healthy no matter what you eat...it is followed in my world too, She said.





We had our diner but I was still thinking about from what era did Geet actually came from but then I liked to see her happy so thought to ask about it later. Next I took her to an open area far away from the main city.The dark sky was brightly lit with starlight. "This spot is my favorite Geet, I told her. "I know Sir because this where you will meet me again, She smiled.



Precap - ??




I'm extremely sorry to update this story this late but I was held up with family issues ...I will complete all my stories before leaving in May





Please do give your honest reviews 😃😃😃 ...


Geet in my story is not a robot but she is a half human and half robot an android ...if you guys read science fictions then this is something which is common in those ...This is a fiction so have taken writer's liberty to make it suitable for Maaneet...If any query do ask will try to answer them

Edited by pixelflower620 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
#78
wow big surprise
Maan truly gentleman and undoubtly likes Geet very much
she is cute
but will dating her be that easy ???
let's see
their first date went good
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Geet is mystey still and maneet future is also mysterious and uncertain... End is very mysterious But loved this part... Waiting for next part...
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Posted: 7 years ago
#80
Oh Geet is half human
Such a different concept
Maan is happy to take Geet with him
Geet also seems happy
Knowing future is making her worried byt as Maan said they can still enjoy their present...

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