RAINA-tere mere dil ka rishta... - Page 6

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Part-5(b)

Heyaa guyzz...m back again...I know I know u all were waiting for the update in between the week as I only said so... but I m so sorry...I badly got stucked wid my studies and classes... so I hope u guyz will understand...so coming to the update...as in the last part only I told u tht I have written it incomplete...it means it didn't reached till that point where I want to see my story in that part...so I divided the parts as a and b...and here I m updating the second part of 5...now enough of my blabbering...here goes the next part...enjoy...

Secret place(In NIFT Campus)

Naina bs kr...mr jaunga mein...said Aalekh when Naina showering her love in her "phoolan" style...

Nhi nhi...sbko pta pdna chaiye na Aalekh k me tujhe kese treat krti hu...

Naina...sbne dekh liya...aaj k liye itna kaafi tha...said Aalekh again when some sort of grass landed on his head...

Now Aalekh understood tht she is out of control now...and something has to b done...

Naina...I m sorry...maaf kr de...ab se kabhi nhi bolunga...

Vo to me tujhe krne se rahi...kuch or bol...

Jo tu bolegi vo krunga...tere sath shopping bhi jaunga...ab to maan ja...said Aalekh in a very pleading tone...with making face also...

Kese dost ho...mera sath to do...said Aalekh to Huda who is standing close to him...

Are han han...phoolan ab maan b jaa...Aalekh bhai itna bol rhe hain to...

No...kabhi nahi...ye hamesha aisa hi bolta hai...or kabhi implement nahi karta hai...hmesha bhaag jaata hai...

In between this...Huda signaled Ali and Yudi to help...and they also joined Huda...

Haan haan...Naina ab maan b jaiye na...is baar Aalekh bhai aisa kuch nahi krenge...kyun Aalekh bhai...au...

As soon as Ali said this...instantly before completion of his words Aalekh jumped in between saying...ekdam sahi...me dobara aisa kabhi nahi karunga...

No...

Are ab kya karu...oh han...is chuhiya ko kese manana hai ye mujhe yaad aa gaya hai...

Thik hai Naina...jesi teri marzi...said Aalekh in very sad and kind of bechara tone...(just acting...as he is nothing like bechara)...bhai bhi aaye huye hain...bol rahe the k tujhse milna hai...ab tu to naraz hai...to milegi hi nahi...or mere sath bhi nahi chalegi...to me unhe mana kr deta hun...

Whaaatt...Aakash bhaiya aaye hain...kisne kaha me unse nahi milungi...me tujhse naraz hun unse nahi...me unse jarur milungi...or tere sath bhi chalungi...abhi chalein...vese bhi ab koi lecture important nahi hai...

Important kya Naina...aaj ke lectures to cancel bhi ho gye hain...

Whaaattt...kya sach me Pooja...thankgod...varna mujhe lg raha tha k miss honge...see Aalekh bhagwan ji bhi chahte hain k me bhaiya se milu...to chalein...guyzz...tum log bhi chalo na humare sath...

Nahi yrr Naina...aaj Punjaban ne kaam pr lagaya hai...Fashion show ka kuch kaam hai to hm sb to nahi aa paenge...or tu to kaam ekdm fataft khatam krti hai to tujhse puchne ki to jarurt hi nahi hai k tera kaam to tune kr hi liya hoga...

Vese bhi Aalekh aaj hi aaya hai...to thode din to rukega hi...hm kabhi or mil lenge...kyun yaaron...

Asked Huda pointing to all...

Yes I think today Huda is saying rights...we have to complete some work...otherwise it will result in big problem...

Oye yudiye aaj se tera kya matlab hai...Huda roz hi sahi bolta hai...said Huda raising his collar...

Everybody except Aalekh shows a whatever look...

Haan Naina Huda bhai sahi bol rahe hain...aap jaiye...hum sub thoda aaj free time use hi kr lete hain...

Chalo thik hai tab...me chalti hu...Aalekh chalein...

Yes madam...chaliye...

In Car

Like a true gentleman Aalekh opened the car door for Naina and after sitting Naina gave him a whatever look...but as Aalekh is her bestfriend so till now with her behaviour he very well understood that she is no more angry...just teasing him...so for teasing back...he also ignored her...and very calmly seated beside her to drive to his bro...

This gave Naina utter shock...and in this her mouth got open...when Aalekh sat beside her...

Mooh band kar apna...makhi mar jaegi nhi to tere muh mein...

And this is it...irritated Naina...folded her hands and started looking outside from the window...

As looking at her face Aalekh easily guessed that she is damn irritated...so to increase it a bit more...

Nainaaa...tujhe gulab jamun pasand hain kya...??

Going to kill through her eyes only...she gave him a look...and then again turned back to the window...

Naina sun na...ek baat batani hai...its important yrr...sun na...

Mujhe nhi sunna kuch bhi...

Han thk hai..kyun sunegi tu meri baat...said Aalekh emotionally...as he know very well that his tone is more than enough to melt her heart...

Meri sunegi hi kyun tu...me hun hi kon tera...sahi kr rahi hai tu...mt sun...

Are yrr Aalekh aise mt bol...tujhe pta hai na...me aisa sb nh sun sakti hu...or I dont think k mujhe tujhe batane ki jarurt hai k tu kon hai mere liye...bol kya important baat hai...I m all ears...

Tu gussa to nahi hai na Naina...

Nahi yrr...tujhe pata hai na...me tujhse jyada der tak gussa reh bhi nahi sakti hu...ab bol kya baat hai...

Vo to pata hi hai mujhe...han to sun...important baat ye hai k...Naina tujhe pata hai...jb tu gussa hoti hai na...

Han...to

Tb na...ekdm cute si chuhiya lgti hai...hahahaahhaah...

Whaattt...Aalekh...tu bht bura hai...and she started hitting his arm playfully...but I love u soo muchh...

Han han...vo to pata hai mujhe...pyar dikhane ka acha way hai...kitna maara hai aaj tune mujhe...

Vo to aise hi...said Naina while giggling and lowering her head...while with one hand putting her hairs behind her ears...

Vese Naina...sun na...back seat pr dekh ek briefcase hoga...utha to usko...

She turned her head backwards and found a chocolate box...which is indeed her faviourate one...

Ohh Aalekh tu bohot acha hai...ye mere liye hain na...

Nhi nhi...mere liye hain...oye akeli mt kha jana sb...moti ho jaegi...pehle hi itni moti ho gyi hai...

Haww...me sach me moti ho gyi hu...pr me chocolate to nh chord skti...

As the car halts infront of the gate of "RV Fashions",Aalekh applies brakes...and hit his head...kya hoga Naina tera...

And while saying so...he gets down from his side...and came towards her to open the gate for her...

Aaiye princess...

Thankew thankew...and by the way Aalekh,mera kuch nhi ho sakta...kyunki agr hm badal gaye to duniya bura maan jaegi jaani...said Naina in dramatic style...

She picked her cell phone in one hand with clutch in the same...and the chocolate box in the other...Aalekh handed over the keys to the security for parking...and along with his "princess" started entering "RV Fashions"

Enterance,RV Fashions

By the way Aalekh...ek baat to puchna me bhul hi gayi...hum yaha kyun aaye hain...wait wait...

This made Aalekh to stop in a jolt...

Ab kya hua tujhe...

This is "RV Fashions"...OMG I cant believe this...seriously...aaj ka din bohot acha hai...OMG me RV Fashions me hun...pinch me Aalekh...ye dream to nahi hai na...u know what...har fashion student ka dream hai yaha aana...

Yess...as Rajveer at a very young age gave RV Fashions a new height...and after he joined he every year got the top position...so everyone especially in fashion industry wants to meet him...and above all his charm has always attracted girls...

Bs yaha aane ka dream to ho nhi sakta tera...seedhe seedhe bol na k tujhe RV se milna hai...

Naina passed a deathly glare to Aalekh and started walking again...saying...I m not at all interested in meeting him...

Oh reallyy...jhuti kahin ki...to itna jaldi jaldi kahan bhaag rahi hai...aaram se chal...

Naina haulted on her feets while folding her hands on the gate...and Aalekh rushes towards her...

He told the security his name...and passed a smile to them...while Naina was standing at some distance from him so didnt get what he was talking...as she is busy with her phone...

Chalein madam...asked Aalekh while bowing his head a little and while his left hand is in the position of asking her to step ahead...

Sure...chal...ab bata mujhe yaha kyu laaya hai...

Tujhe bhai se milna tha na...to bhai yahan pr hi hain...and he only asked me to bring u here...unhe unki pyari behna se jo milna tha...varna mujhe koi shauk nahi tha tujhe yaha laane ka...

How mean of u Aalekh...bhaiya kitna sochte hain mere baare mein...or ek tu hai...kuch bolna hi bekaar hai tere baare me to...

Acha me bekaar hun na...chal vapas chalein...kya jarurt hai...me bhai ko aaj shaam me tere ghar le aaunga...vahin mil lena...said Aalekh in fake anger and while holding her turning back...

Are yrr...me to majak kr rahi thi...tu to serious ho gaya...said Naina in a very sweet tone...

Tab thik hai...ab chal...said Aalekh while nodding his head...

Acha Aalekh sun na...mujhe kuch baat karni hai tujhse...

Han bol na...kuch problem hai ky...sab thik hai na...kisi ne kuch kaha kya tujhe...tu bas naam bol baaki me dekh lunga...

Hold on mere over possesive bhai...said Naina...while coochi cooing his cheeks...aisa kuch nhi hua hai...or tu to janta hi hai,kisi ki itni himmat nhi hai jo mujhse panga le...

Rajveer's Cabin,RV Fashions

Rajveer is standing near the full length size glass window cum wall...this make him see everyone in the office...while Aakash is sitting back facing Rajveer talking with someone on phone...

As soon as Rajveer eyes captures the enterance,he himself dont know why,his heart started beating very fast...his eyes captured the most beautifull scene...a girl with fair complexion and very beautifull eyes was coochi cooing a boy...wait...this boy is none other than Aalekh...he knows Aalekh very well...though he likes the girl very much...but again...he didnt like the scene which was going infront of him...he wants to just rush towards her and want her to withdrawl her hands from Aalekh's cheeks...he unknowingly started admiring the girl...started noticing her every expression with keen interest which are changing in every nano second...he lost his mind and senses and forgot where he is standing...

Rajveer...rajveer...sun to...kya kr raha hai yahan aa...said Aakash in a frustrating tone as from past 2 mins he is calling him but but...Rajveer is in his own dream land...not paying any heeds towards what anyone is saying...

Aakash stood up from the chair and marched towards him...and after watching the scene infront of his eyes...he quickly understood what is going...but wait...this is something new for him also...as he knows Rajveer from many years but Rajveer never payed any heeds towards any girl...due to his looks and nature he was very popular in his college among girls...but today he is drooling over the girl actually...that too in office time...as he knows very well that in office he never got distracted but today this is something very new...and actually Aakash likes this...

When he keenly observed the girl...he wants to dance like an insane because this is her Naina...her sister...

In order to control the situation...he casually placed his hand on Rajveer's shoulder...but for the first time not teasing as he dont want to destroy this newly built feelings in his friend...as from sometimes...he want a special girl in his bestie's life who will make him the one he is...as after his father's health condition dropped,he changed alot...

Rajveer...very quickly composed himself so that Aakash didnt get any hint about what he was thinking,but little he know that he has already guessed his feelings,best friends afterall...

Han Aakash bol...kuch bol raha tha tu...

Han to me bol raha tha k mene Aalekh ko yaha bulaya hai...uski ek dost ke sath mein...I hope tumhe koi problem nahi hai...

Tu pagal hai kya...mujhe kya problem hogi...vese bhi...mujhe Aalekh se milna hi tha...

Chal tab thik hai...

Acha sun mein ye puch raha tha k tu Aalekh ko next contract k liye sign krne wala hai na...

Han usik bhi kuch baat krni hi thi usse...

And they started discussing their business and contracts...

But today Rajveer is feeling something new...he was unable to cooncentrate on his work...and this is the first time such a thing is happening to him...his mind always captured the beautiful eyes of that girl and he now badly wants to talk to her...as Aakash very well know his friend's current state...so he was also cooperating with him and not discussing anything important...because he know very well that if something goes wrong then Rajveer will not take a minute to take all the blame over himself and may be due to this he will never allow his heart to beat for someone special...

To be continued...

So here ends the part 5(b)...I hope u will like it...I did my 100% to write this...but somehow if there remained any loopholes...then forgive me...this is the point where I want to end part 5but unfortunately I had to break it in two parts...but let it be...now its done from my side and ur work is started...do comment guyzz...if u guyzz didn't liked it or found any mistake thn let me know...I hope if u can arrange some time from ur busy schedule to read this...then u will definitely give response to me...I will surely try to update next part as soon as possible...but I cant promise you...as my exams are coming nearer so the update will be after 7 feb...hope u guyzz will understand...

So till next update...happy reading and stay blessed...

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PART-6

Entrance,RV Fashions

Hold on mere over possesive bhai...said Naina...while coochi cooing his cheeks...aisa kuch nhi hua hai...or tu to janta hi hai,kisi ki itni himmat nhi hai jo mujhse panga le...

Han ye bt to tune ekdm sahi boli...koi bhi itna pagal nhi hai jo apni maut ko khud bulaye...ab bol tujhe kya baat karni thi...asked Aalekh in a teasing yet serious tone...

Pehle to tu ek baat samajh le...ye bilkul mt sochna k hum yaha office mein hain...jahan teri thodi bohot reputation hai to me tujhe kuch nhi bolungi...or dusri baat ye...yaha ki ladkiyan to tujhe aise dekh rhi hain jese kasai bakre ko halal karne se pehle dekhta hai...mujhe to tu itna bhi koi hot nhi lagta hai...said Naina in a mere whisper tone and checking him from top to down...

Thik hi hai...not so khaas...

Naina...tu ye meri tareef kar rhi thi ya mujhe dara rhi thi...anyways ye sab chord na or ab mujhe kya aap ye batane ka kasht karengi mohtarma k aapko mujhse kya baat krni thi...

Are hann...dekh teri vajah se me bhul hi gyi thi...

Whatt meri vajah se...said Aalekh making an O from mouth...

Han han...thk hai...abhi yahan se kahan jana hai...vo bata fir me tujhe apni baat bhi batati hu...

Han han...chal...said Aalekh while handing hand her hands with his...

Aalekh baat ye hai k tujhe to pata hi hai na k hmlog ko kitne saare fashion shows organise krne pdte hain...or kyunki tu abhi yahin hai to tu ramp walk karega kya mere liye...I mean meri designs k liye...asked Naina in a bit hesitating tone...while lowering her head...

Whaaattt...tu mujhe tab se ye baat bolna chahti thi...tu pagal ho gyi hai kya Naina...Aalekh said this line while entering Rajveer's cabin...

Inside Rajveer's cabin

As Rajveer was busy in his own dream lands...so he didn't noticed the presence of Aalekh and Naina...and by Aalekh screaming only Aakash understood that his dear bro is here...he gets up from his chair and as soon as both of them entered inside...in a quick move Aakash picked Naina up from her waist and started twirling around...

This makes Naina so happy...because she very well know that only one person can do this and this is none other than Aakash...she started giggling in the air...and this breaks Rajveer's chain of thoughts and as soon as he watches the sight before him...he was overwhelmed...the one whom he was dreaming about since 15 mins is now before him and nothing can be better than this sight for him...

He again started admiring her beauty and this time Aalekh noticed this sudden change in Rajveer...but keeping his every thought away...he went towards Rajveer...and hugged him...

This is very sudden for Rajveer...as he was busy in Naina's beauty so didn't noticed Aalekh standing beside her...

Bhaiya bs...niche utariye mujhe...

Kya Naina...kuch khati nhi hai kya...abhi bhi ekdm bachpan jesi hi hai...

Sun le Aalekh...bhaiya ye Aalekh hmesha mujhe moti ho gyi hai...aisa bolta rehta hai...

Tu uspr dhyan mt de or bta kya khaegi...pizza...??

Ofcourse bhaiya...

Ok let me order then...are Raj...sun...but Rajveer didn't listened in single voice...

Ye Raj first impression hi bigaad raha hai...aage kya krega...muttered Aakash under breath while hitting his forehead...

Kya hua bhaiya...

Kuch nahi yrr...ruk pehle me tujhe isse milwata hu...

While patting Rajveer's shoulder Aakash grabs Rajveer's attention and gestures him through his eyes...and forwarded towards Naina...

So Naina jii...ye hain...the famous Rajveer singh Shekhawat...

And after hearing this line Naina was speechless...she was not at all expecting meeting Rajveer...that too this soon...she always wanted to visit RV Fashions...and meet Rajveer and she planned that after her graduation...for internship she will apply here only...on the other hand,Aalekh was enjoying naina's expression...he very well know about Naina's plan of meeting Rajveer...but he wants to give a surprise to her...and as he got the chance...without a second thought he brought her here...

Seriously bhaiya...omg...Naina first turned towards Aalekh and then towards Aakash...and finally approached towards Rajveer...

On the other hand Rajveer was feeling very very happy,but...

To be continued...

I know...I know this is a very small update...plus u all wants to hit me like hell to stop the story at this point but it's ok I guess to keep something like mystery...so wait till next update...and above all this my exams are going on but in between I was not feeling good to make u all wait for so long so I decided to give this update...but one thing is sure that I have written this update in not any hurry...I have given my 100% to this also...I will surely try to update as soon as possible...may be by coming Tuesday or Wednesday...so till then enjoy this part...

So till next update...happy reading and stay blessed...

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Hey loved there first meet.. Rajveer ko apne sapno ki duniya se bahar nikalo..Warna Naina se kaise baat karega

Part-7

So as per not my promise...I m back again with a new part...as the last part was a small one...so I think this will compensate the former...coming to the update...I left the update just before raina's convo...and for that u all want to scold me and what not...but but...surprises are good...and I just hope u will like this one too...but before going to read the update,I want to tell u that if u guyzz didnt find that enough good then pardon me for that...

But believe me this track is necessary for progression of their love story...I m sure u will like this...so enough of all this blah blah...here is your update...enjoy...

Rajveer's cabin,RV Fashions

On the other hand Rajveer was feeling very very happy...but on seeing her eyes again lost...and here Naina forwarded her hand to greet him...but he was lost in his own world and didnt responded...and this made Naina very angry

(Naina's monologue)

Had hi hai ye to...me yaha inko itne ache se greet kar rahi hu or ye apne hi akad me khoye hue hain...itne bde and famous hain to kya...iska ye mtlb to nhi k koi student ya unse post me chota koi unhe greet kare to ye back greetings bhi na de...pata nahi bhaiya inhe kese jhelte hain...mujhe pata hota k ye insaan aisa hai to me kabhi milna hi nahi chahti inse...mana k bohot handsome and hot hain...pr iska ye mtlb to nahi k kisi or ko consider hi na karein...this is the first and last time I m seeing this guy's face...I want to never ever meet him again...in my entire life...arrogant kahin ke...

(End of monologue)

But little did Naina know that this is definitely the first but not the last time she is meeting Rajveer...fate has written something different for them...

And here Aakash has very well read Naina's facial expression and he clearly and confidently assumed that how much Naina may be cursing Rajveer...chuckling inwardly...he again patted Rajveer...

Raj...

Ha...ha...Aakash tu kuch bol raha tha na...

Han bhai..me ye bol raha tha...this is Naina...Naina Ahluwaliya...fashion designing student in NIFT...and...

Enough bhaiya...bs...said Naina very slowly,and eyeing towards Aakash to stop praising her further as she not at all like anyone praising her...she want to show her work by her actions not by words...

This time Rajveer extended his hand for greeting and said very softly...

Hello...Naina...I mean Miss.Ahluwaliya

No its ok...u can call me Naina...

And by the time the both joined their hands to shake...both felt a jolt of current passing through their body...

Naina felt a very different emotions and felt only goosebumbs all over her body...on the other hand Rajveer was on cloud nine...in a single day he found a girl who is just made for him...and here meeting and talking to her soo soon...he was also feeling something different first time...different atmosphere...actually he felt lost and this time...no one is around him...except Naina...

Their small eye lock was broked by Aalekh...who was continuously noticing every action of Naina and Rajveer...as he dont want to make situation awkward in the first meeting for Naina...so he fake coughed and this brought back both of them from their dream land...

While Naina slided her hairs behind her left ear and Rajveer grabbed his phone to make a call...(not really)...

Are Raj sun na...kuch important hai kya...

Nahi nahi...bol na...tujh se jyada important kuch nahi hai...and while he said these words he secretly eyed towars Naina who was busy in her cellphone...settled on the couch with Aalekh...

Ye ladka pagal ho gaya hai pehli hi meeting me...muttered Aakash under his breath...

Ha to me bol raha tha k pizza order karein...actually Naina ko thodi bhukh lagi hai...or tum dono first time mile ho to itna to banta hai...

Yes,yes...ofcourse...why not...pizza to banta hai...

He hurridely grabbed the office phone and dialled canteen no.to order 4 pizzas...

Though Naina was checking her phone...but still she was listening all his talks...

Koi itna ajeeb kese ho sakta hai...bhaiya se to itne ache se baat karte hain...pata nahi mujhse kya problem hai...chordo mujhe kya fark padta hai...bas jaldi se jau yaha se...

And after having their respective pizzas with some not so casual and formal talk...they ended it...

Bhai...me Naina k sath uske ghr ja raha hun...uncle aunty se bhi milna hai...aap aaoge...asked Aalekh...

Nahi Aalekh abhi to nahi...me thodi der me aa jaunga...abhi Naina ko lekr tum jao...me aata hai...there is something important which I have to discuss with Raj...so u guyz go...ok...me ek hour me aata hu...

Cuz shaam me humein Raj k ghr bhi jana hai...keep that in mind...ok...

Ji bhai...ok then me is chuhiya ko lekr jata hu...milte hain fir...

Ok Rajveer bhai...I must leave...shaam me milte hain...

Yeah sure Aalekh...shaam me milte hain...bye...take care...and while turning towards Naina,he again said bye...

Bye...said Naina...in a very displeasing tone...

While bidding bye to Aalekh and Naina...Rajveer started thinking...

Ab ye Aakash ko kya important baat karni hai...saari business ki baat to hum kr chuke hain...oh no...damn it...kahin isne mujhe Naina ko dekhte hue to nahin dekh liya...oh god...tb to meri love story shuru hone se pehle hi khatam ho jayegi...kyunki ye baat Aakash Aalekh ko bolega...or Aalekh Naina ko...damn it...oh god plzz help...

On the other hand Aakash...

I think...jis intensity se Raj Naina ko dekh raha tha...agar mene usse baat nahi ki to kuch gadbad na kar de ye pagal...vese bhi ise ldkiyon se baat karne ka experience nahi hai...or agar ek do br milne ke baad bhi ye aisa hi raha to Naina bohot uncomfortable ho jaegi...n I dont want this...I whole-heartedly want them together...Naina is best for Rajveer...and same is for Naina too...I think Rajveer se baat karna is a good option...

And bidding bye to both of them,Naina and Aalekh settled in their car heading towards Naina's house...

Raj...I want to talk to you...

Ha ha...bol na Aakash kya hua hai...said Rajveer for the first time not making an eye contact...and pretending to be busy with some files...

To be continued...

I think I have dragged the office scene...hope u didnt get bored...so here ends the most of the office scene and raina's first meeting...howz it...and do u like the twist of Naina not liking Rajveer...and finding him arrogant type...share ur views...I need them badly...so comment for the story...

So till next update...happy reading and stay blessed...