See if I care - A RiKara FF (Part 17 Updated Pg 55) 29/03

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Ms.Lizzie

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Posted: 7 years ago

#421

That was a mature decision, to let Shivay and Annika talk

But how will this talk go?

Loved the update

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devildiva21

@devildiva21

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Posted: 7 years ago

#422

Glad to see om including gauri in his plans... telling her about everything he feels and gauri though she doesn't consider him as her husband whom she used to worship but also knows that she can't leave him like that and is there with him to support him... the way she cupped his cheeks and assured him was beautiful
Continue soon

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Farri25

@Farri25

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Posted: 7 years ago

#423

My heart goes out to them ! My poor babiieess...💔 😭

Loved Loved how to described his pain and how she consoled him... so beautifully written...

Whatever's happening is for their own good... I hope things get better soon...🥺 😳

Lovely Lovely chappy...😊

Waiting for the next one 😃

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sosweetsumi

@sosweetsumi

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Posted: 7 years ago

#424

wow so much had happened

hmm hoping these two couples can resolve their differences much easily

please do continue

bye sumi

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Naina

@Naina280599

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Posted: 7 years ago

#425

Such an amazing chapter, Genie! I so loved this one. First of all I loved that you showed Gauri thinking about herself this time and also not putting Om on a high pedestal. I've always loved the way you portray Om and Gauri's feelings, emotions, everything! Loved how you wrote Om's pain and Gauri consoling him. It was wonderfully written. I don't have enough words for that! Totes loved it. Moving on to ShivKara, I loved how you wrote their part in this. Both of them are so broken and feel helpless for not being able to help each other. You've penned this down so amazingly! Loved every bit of this chapter and now I'm more anxious to read further. Continue soon ❤️

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rikara94

@Raghav_Rao

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Posted: 7 years ago

#426

Lovely update❤️ genie

Really happy omkie involve gauri in his plan

Feeling bad for him and It's okey she is not considering him as pati parmeshwar..and she's right on her place because forgetting it all not easy for her

But still she can't see him hurt and sad

Loved how she comforted and consoled him

I loved how you elaborate everything

And it's true shivika should talk

Eagerly waiting for the next chapter