Pavitra Rista. ... Tanshi shot

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Hello.
This is a special piece of friction. This is written by many writers and not just one. I'm just posting it. This is the result of mission os 1.

The rain drenched. The clouds thundered a roar..A beautiful girl was enjoying a rain.
A boy was staring her from a shead. He was smiling and looking at her.
The boy couldn't see her face properly as the rain water gave him a hasy vision. Inspite of that the boy felt a closeness in his heart seeing that girl, her drenched hairs and her flowing chunni.


The girl could feel someone looking at her. She looks at his direction and smiles. She walks in his direction.

"Crazy!" muttered the boy to himself," just because i looked at you doesn't mean i like you." Such denial though.
"Pls' God," silently she prayed," he has an umbrella in his hand, touch his heart and hope he shares it with me."

Suddenly, a motorcycle crossed and stopped on her path, blocking the guy in the shed. The rider pulled his visor down and leeringly looked at the girl up and down. Her wet dupatta and salwar khameez, clinging like second skin on her body, suddenly felt cold from those knowing looks.

The girl felt weird.She startedshivering. She moved her palms one her hands somewhat covering her shoulders. The rider smiled evilly narrowing his eyes. The girl moved side wards. The rider held her hand.



The boy in the shed noticed it all, looking, waiting intently.
"Let me hand go!" she said in a loud, calm, voice telling the rider while consciously pulling her hand but the rider's grip was strong, not letting go.
Slowly, the boy on the shed moved purposedly towards them,

Suddenly she felt the rider left her hand. She saw the boy standing between her and the rider. She felt somewhat relieved seeing him.

"How dare you.? What do you think she is alone and you can do anything ." and he gives him a punch. The rider falls from his bike. The girl is in a state oh frightened.


The boy start beating the rider.The girl was so secared that she strar severing .Suddenly some more boys come there and start beating the boy.
The rider again gets up but the boy was looking at the girl shivering. He was mesmerized by her beauty. The rider came very colse and was about to hit but the girl shouted.
the rider runs away. The boy looks at girl and then turns away. Suddenly he stares at full moon and feels a strange breeze with a increased heartbeat.

The boy went to that girl and make her wear his jacket.And ask her not worry as he is there.The girl hug him.Both feel a strange connection.
Suddenly, the girl becomes alert and fumes .the girls looks at him and fumes she says'agar tum mere saath yeh umbrella share kartay toh main aise nahi beeghti aur wo rider mujhe na notice karta aur na hi chedta tumhain bhi aqal baad mein ani thi ?!!'

"Oh hello . Maine tumhe bachaya aut tum mujhe thank you Kehne ke bajaye aakad dikha rahi ho. Waise fighting kaisa tha?"
He said with a flirting smile. The girl looks annoyed.
Ekdam bakwass fight thi.Ase bhi koi fight karta hai.Agar mai nai chiliti to wo tumhe mar hi deta.Tumhe mujhe thanks bolna chayia.Chalo bolo thanks.The boy was lost in her beatu and say thanks.
Girl -Good boy.And start smiling. Both were lost in each other. Their eye lock was in breakable. The girl read some untold stories in his eyes.. A loud thunder and the girl hugged him passonately.

Hum tere bin ab reh nahi sakte.
Tere bina kya wajud mera.

She hugs him with greater fear. He too keeps his hands on her back sensing her perfume.

Wao your perfume fragrance is great. The girl suddenly feel shy and break the hug and said tum mare sath flirt krny ki koshish kr rhy ho. Boy with smiling face ha to you are so cute and beautiful and by the way tumne mujhe hug kiya meine nai ok. The girl said wo to mein slip ho gaye thi. The boy said oh then goes near the girl .
The girl steps back,but he forwards. She smile and runs.
"Arre apna naam to bata ti jao"

" kyu. Batun? " she runs.

The boy returns home.

At night he saw a dream a girl is comming towards him and forward her hand toward him.He try to hold her hand but she get disapear.He wake up shouting.
Boy-Don't go away from me and start sweeting hard.
His mom came inside after listing his voice
what happened son??are you ok na with tensed face.
The boy ya mom i am ok.
Mother :do you need something with worried voice.
Boy get up from bed and goes near to mother and hug her.

"Oho maa dakho mein thik ho bus ake khawab dakh rha tha." Mother :"Humma so you was seeing a dream but kis bary mein kahi koi larki to nai thi. "

"Boy with smiling face aisa kuch nai hai maa."
" Hun main tumhari maa hun"
Ha maa janta ho k tum mari maa ho but still you are looking so young and beautiful ."
Mother :oho acha g",
boy :or kya agr tum mari maa na hoti to mein tumhe girlfriend bna laita .
Mother to boy: oye chup kr badmash kahi ka and hit on his head and both start laughing loudly.
ok now go to sleep' mother says and go out of the room the boys remembers his and the girl moments he feels a chill running through his spine ans says to himself "uss ka naam kya tha? pata karna pary ga uss miss kyu baaton ka naam jis ney meri raaton ki needin hi ura di" .
On thr other hand the girl reach her home in wait cloth.Her mother take her inside.Her brother come out .He saw the girl in wait cloth and...
ask what happened to you? Are you fine? Or tum is time kaha sy a rhi ho?
Girl:bhai wo actually...
Bro : tu and er ja. Kal shadi hai teri aur aaj gum rahi hai.
He said daringly,.
The quietly goes to her room.
The remembers the day's events how he saved her,fought for her. A small smile appeared on her lips.
"Kash tumhe sab kuch Yaad aajata. Hum saath hote. Tum yeh sab kaise bhul gaye. Aaj tum mujhe saal baad mile pad ajnabi Yoon ki tarah. Par nahi ab aur nahi. Main aage baadh chuki hoon.

She walks up to the cupboard and opens a portrait of hers and his together. She held it close to her and cries. Kash maaji mujhe apna let. She cries.

They were married. In an accident he lost his memory 2 years back. The families became rivals and separated them.

To be continued.

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ashlesha2 thumbnail
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Innovator ...
ashlesha2

Board of writters,.


ManazzaShahid12
arya1210
Lornab
Achelvi
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Special thanks to ManazzaShahid12 and
arya1210.

Request : Please work on part 2. Need coordination.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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😲😲rishi sab bhul gaya
Waiting for next 😃
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😲😲 so much suspence yar pls guys post next part asap...berriliant work guys😳
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Super peice of work .waiting for next part
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It appears as another interesting stuff, waiting for the updates desperately now.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Ary tum kaha thi ye idea to tumhara tha or buht zabardast tha 😃 hum to bhool hi gaye thy isy 😆
Chalo Aru and guys sub os mission 2 start kry phir sy ready steady go 😉 😆
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Wow mission os again back . Excited for next part.Ready stady go
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Originally posted by: ManazzaShahid12

Ary tum kaha thi ye idea to tumhara tha or buht zabardast tha 😃 hum to bhool hi gaye thy isy 😆
Chalo Aru and guys sub os mission 2 start kry phir sy ready steady go 😉 😆


yeh Kya tha mannu 😆
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Originally posted by: pari454


yeh Kya tha mannu 😆

😆 Ye hamara os game kaisa laga chal to bhi hissa dal maza ayee ga or tu zayada acha hissa dale GI 😉

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