#3Song Os Thon : Sang sang yun chalun by akriti154 on pg 137 Mar 29 - Page 44

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Posted: 7 years ago
Such a cute os di
Raman's an orphan brought up by iyers
Ishra loved d other
He left seeing her getting married to someone else while she realized her love
Finally ishra confessed
Last scene n naughty ishu was cute
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 7 years ago
Lovely os
Ramon is an orphan and ishra bought him home
Ishra r best friends and r always together
Ramon has feelings for her but scared to voice it iut
He leaves when ishita marriage talks started
Ishita felt void after rMn left
The sing perfectly for ishra
Liked Mr. Iyer he treats both ishra equally and happy that his bath kids stay with him always
Last part beautiful
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Posted: 7 years ago
Awesome os!!
Loved it.
Raman is an orphan n ishu took him to her home..
They becomes best friends..
He loves ishu but never confessed to her..
He was broken when appa fixed her marriage..
He went away from her n both ishra r miserable without each other..
He came to her marriage n finally ishu confessed her love to him infront of all..
Raman too confessed his love to her..
N her parents too agreed for their marriage n blessed them happily..
Very beautifully written.
Thanks for d pm dii:)
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Posted: 7 years ago
Really very amazing
I loved it
Thanks for the update
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Posted: 7 years ago
Lovely OS .
A cute story .
Raman was orphan but iyers brought him with them on Ishita's idrance .
They grow together and remain forever together .
Glad senior iyers didn't created any fuss .
Loved it a lot
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Posted: 7 years ago
awesome...lovely cute os di...
totally loved it
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Posted: 7 years ago
Very nice os n beautiful os
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Posted: 7 years ago
Hey
Wonderful Loveliest N Amazing Os

Love it

Beautifully Written

TakeCare
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Posted: 7 years ago

hello darlings, here with the next OS for the Osthon, this one was suggested by raksha di and amu aka amreen helped me with the idea and I really hope you guys like it

TU MERI AASHIQUI HAI

"good morning meri mad-rasan" his chirpy voice rang in the confines of the room the moment he woke up from his sound sleep. He left the bed seeing her glaring at him for calling her a mad-rasan and ruffling his hairs, blowing an air kiss to her hoping it would calm her anger like always, he moved to the washroom.

Stopping at the door, he glanced backwards and saw her smiling from the cores of his eyes and chuckled seeing her fake anger. He was about to step inside the washroom again but stopped thinking something and just moved back to her with slow steps like a thief cautious not to let her know of his presence as he hugged her from back.

She got startled at first but then relaxed as he moved her hair and planted a soft kiss on the nape of her neck.

Closing her eyes feeling his soft touch, she leaned her head backwards as both swayed to nothingness stealing away some little morning romantic time with the other.

She looked at him after a while without breaking their hug; his eyes were already on her. Both shared a beautiful eyelock. He caressed her cheeks and leaned in to kiss her when she glared at him and stopped him keeping her finger on his lips.

I -no kissing without brushing

She said in a stern tone pushing him back to the washroom. He made a dirty face hearing that and murmured under his breath "dentist biwi. She was still pushing him inside the washroom when he turned to her and pleaded her for one kiss but she just shushed him and pushed him inside.

Locking the door from outside telling him not to do any mischief, she resumed her works and soon, he began banging the door asking her to open it. Shaking her head at her husband's childish antics, she opened the door only to be pulled by him the very next second.

He locked the door grabbing her as he pinned her to the door and asked with a devilish smirk on his face

R -now where will you go mad-rasan?

He asked caging her in his arms while she just looked on. Trying to free herself from his hold, she pushed him a little only to be grabbed by him again, this time a little more tightly.

R -happy confession anniversary ish

He husked chewing her earlobe making her sigh. Smiling seeing how she had already let her guards down and surrendered to him, he raised her face holding her chin and made her look at him.

R -do you remember that day?

I(smiling) -how can I forget the most beautiful day of our life raman

She said making him recall the efforts he had put in to make their date perfect and how all his efforts had got paid off when she had said yes to him. Smiling at her and those beautiful moments, he hit his forehead with hers softly, interlacing their fingers.

R -ish

He spoke up after a moment of silence

I -hmm

R -sing that song again na, please

I -which song?

She asked with a mischievous smile on her lips, teasing him

R -ish, please na baby

He said making a pout on his face and she had to give in as she began singing wrapping her arms around his neck.

Humko humise chura lo (Hun..)
Dil mein kahin tum chupa lo (Hun..)

Hum akele (Aa..)
Kho na jaayen (Aa..)
Door tumse.. (Aa..)
Ho na jaayen
Paas aao gale se laga lo

Humko humise chura lo (Hun..)
Dil mein kahin tum chupa lo
Hum akele (Aa..)
Kho na jaayen (Aa..)
Door tumse..
Ho na jaayen
Paas aao gale se laga lo

His hold on her waist tightened as he began swaying with her slowly while she was just caressing his cheeks and he was busy kissing her here and there in between without minding her glares.

Humko humise chura lo
Dil mein kahin tum chupa lo

Aa.. aa..

Aa.. lalala la..

She signed him to sing along and he too joined her twirling her like a princess in ballroom.

Ye dil dhadka do
Zulfein bikhra do
Sharma ke apna..
Aanchal lehra do

His hand slowly crawled to her back, caressing and teasing her before he slowly opened her bun letting her long locks fall freely till her waist. Knowing exactly where he was going, she tried to move back pushing him shaking her head in negative when he again pleaded her through his eyes.

Hum zulfein toh bikhra dein
Din mein raat na ho jaaye
Hum aanchal to lehra de
Par barsaat na ho jaaye

Again melting seeing his pleading face, she kissed the tip of his nose making him flash a victorious smile at her as he slowly carried her to the shower and opened the knob letting both drench under the cold water.

Hone do.. barsaatein
Karni hain kuch baatein

She smiled at him and opened her arms for him. He cuddled to her like a kid

Paas aao gale se laga lo

Humko humise chura lo
Dil mein kahin tum chupa lo

Hum akele (Aa..)
Kho na jaayen (Aa..)
Door tumse..
Ho na jaayen

Paas aao gale se laga lo

Humko humise chura lo

Dil mein kahin tum chupa lo

Aa.. aa..

Aa.. lalala la

Both continued to hug the other for long and finally breaking the hug, he caressed her cheeks softly. She closed her eyes all set to fell his lips on hers anytime and smiling; he fulfilled his wife's wish. His lips touched her softly and she just smiled moving a litte more close to him as she grabbed him by the back of his head and kissed him deeply. Relishing the other;s flavours, both parted back after a long time and seeing her shivering, he hugged her tightly as he resumed singing.

Tumpe marte hain
Hum mar jayenge
Ye sab kahte hain
Hum kar jayenge

Ishita galred at him for having said that and kissed his cheeks again dancing with him.

Chutki bhar sindoor se tum
Ab ye maang zara bhar do
Kal kya ho kisne dekha
Sab kuch aaj abhi kar do

Ho na ho.. sab raazi..
Dil raazi..
Rab raazi..

Paas aao gale se laga lo

Humko humise chura lo (Hun..)
Dil mein kahin tum chupa lo (Hun..)

O..humko humise chura lo (Hun..)
Dil mein kahin tum chupa lo

Hum akele (Aa..)
Kho na jaayen (Aa..)
Door tumse.. (Aa..)
Ho na jaayen

Their romance was interrupted by a knock on the door. Raman made an irked face cursing the interrupter while ishita just chuckled and signed him to go ahead. He nodded his head half heartedly and telling her to stay rooted to her spot and not move an inch, he walked towards the door checking her in between. Glaring at her as she tried to move, he finally opened the door.

Ruhi looked at him, he was fully drenched and shook her head.

Ru -what is this papa, you are fully drenched and you aren't ready yet, we will be late for the meeting. Come on get ready soon.

He ruffled his hair smiling telling her how her mother is the one to be blamed for him being late making ruhi's expressions change.

Ru(trying to be calm) -enough of your romance papa, now get ready like a good boy. We have a very important presentation today.

She said in a strict tone making him nod his head robotically at his dadi amma. He closed the door while ruhi couldn't hold her tears anymore; she ran to the portrait of ishita hanging in the room and caressed it.

Ru -it's been five years ever since you left us mumma and papa is still not over it. He still talks to you, imagines you around like you never left us, like nothing has changed in our lives. He has still kept you alive with himself and shares his pain with you, but what about me mumma, whom will I talk to? I don't have you anymore, papa is too lost in himself to even notice me and... I don't know how to handle him... why you left us mumma. Why? You know na nobody else can handle your ravan kumar, not even me?

She said crying hugging ishita's picture while raman just got ready and walked out of the shower. Seeing him coming, she quickly placed ishita's pic back in its place and wiped her tears.

R -ruhi you were complaining to your mumma about me?

He asked her to which she just faked a smile in return.

R -sachchi ishita, I wasn't late; this ruhi has the habit of exaggerating things. You know actually, she is jealous of us and that's why she always finds excuses to interrupt us when we are alone like she used to do in childhood.

He said complainigly only to get a glare from ishita.

I -stop scolding her raman, she is my baby

She said hugging ruhi making him cringe.

R -and I am no one to you, hai na. I am not your baby.

He said complainingly making her shake her head.

I -come here nautanki

She said opening her arms for him all over again. getting excited like a five year old kid gets seeing chocolates, he quickly jumped into her arms.

While ruhi just bit her lips trying to hold her tears seeing her father talking to and hugging no one and not knowing what else to do, she too put her arms around him. He looked at her and then pulled her for a hug as well smiling while she just hoped her father will be fine and back to her one day.

Paas aao gale se laga lo
Paas aao gale se laga lo
(Aa..aa..)

So that's all for the OS

Hope you liked it.. will be waiting for your reviews

LOVE

AKKU

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Posted: 7 years ago
updated the OS
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