IshRa TS : Rishtey Naatey Last Shot on pg 44 Mar 26

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Hlw frnds I'm here with a new story bt don't worry its not a long one it has only two & three parts this story is dedicated to my sweet friend "akriti154 aka akku" this song suggested by her to me for osthon bt this story can't be writes as Os & its getting too long so she asks me to post it as "TS" so I'm here with first part of this story akku I hope u liked it baby😉..
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Raman bhalla is only son of Mr Omprakash bhalla who is top most businessman in Delhi everyone wants to work with him but he only work with those people who can stand with them in short Bhalla s known for their high class status


Mr bhalla reading their newspaper when his wife comes with tea & snacks putting them on table she turned to go when he called her "toshi ji don't tell me that u r going to woke ur lazy lad " saying he saw her


Toshi became nervous bcoz her husband is very angry man who want everything in his lyf with perfection bt god has gifted him a big amount of imperfections in form of his son who is totally different from him lazy,fun loving, naughty, carefree..


Mr bhalla - toshi ji I'm asking u something ..


Toshi - ji bhalla wo baat ye hai ki kal raat use sone mein der ho gyi thi ..


Mr bhalla - say something that I don't know definitely he has been come late from any useless party m I ryt..he is saying when they heard from behind "no u r wrong papa they turned & saw then raman coming down he come & greeted his parents & settled on dinning table


Mr bhalla - what do you mean by that m wrong ? Kya tum kal der raat party se nahi aaye the?


Raman - yes


Mr bhalla looks towards Toshi ji "see he is accepting "


Raman - one min papa I didn't said yes for party bt for coming late..


Mr bhalla (confused)- I don't understand..


Raman - that's why I'm saying first listen everything then reach on any conclusion.. hearing this Mr bhalla makes face while toshi ji chuckles



Raman - actually last night one of my frnds met with accident so I had taken him to hospital that's why I had came late last night..


Mr bhalla - is that so?


Raman - yeah!


Mr bhalla - ohk which hospital tell me ?hearing this both mother & son became nervous


Toshi - arey bhalla ji don't u have trust on our son ?


Mr bhalla - nope bt actually I want to know his frnd's condition if he wants some help so I can do for him..raman & toshi ji saw each other while seeing their face Mr bhalla smirked


Mr bhalla - tell me raman ..


Raman - wo papa..


Mr bhalla smirks seeing him when raman said "City Hospital "..


Mr bhalla - ok wahan toh mere ek business associate ke relative doctor hai great mai Abhi unhe phn krke bol deta hu that take special care of Raman's frnd tell me ur frnd's name..


Raman - arey papa its not needed I had already paid all bills..


Mr bhalla - tumse jitna puchha jaye utna hi bolo smjhe ..he said in strict tone


Raman - okk papa


Mr bhalla - name?


Raman - Sameer!


Mr bhalla - who is sameer? I don't think ish naam ka tumhara koi frnd hai?


Raman - hai papa actually my new buddy..


Mr bhalla - ok whatever.. Saying he dialed city hospital's no. & after disconnected the call he saw toward raman


Toshi - bhalla ji what happened?.. she asked in fear thinking that raman caught


Mr bhalla - kuch nahi they said that his frnd's is fyn now & will be discharge tomorrow.. hearing this raman smiles while toshi ji too became relaxed


Raman - Thank god he is fyn can I go to meet him in the evening papa..


Mr bhalla just nodded then saidBTW from when u r going to join our business ?


Raman - arey papa first let me grow up then I'll definitely join our business Abhi toh mere aish karne ke din hai..he said in carefree tone


Mr bhalla - ohh so till now u haven't grown up for ur kind information let me tell you that now u r 26 years old ..


Raman - so what papa? Itna bhi bada nhi hu..he said making a irritating face


Mr bhalla - I don't want to hear anything u have to join office from tomorrow & remember if this tym u hadn't come I will block ur all cards then u can enjoy ur so called childhood without money..saying he went from there


Raman (irritating tone)- maa see papa kya bol gye..


Toshi ji caresses his hairs "na mera bachcha aise udaas nahi hote "


Raman - then what can I do maa u know naa I don't like this business wijness..


Toshi - but puttar ek din toh tujhe hi sb sambhalna h na ..


Raman - bt Abhi kyu..


Toshi -puttar this tym I can't help u in this bcoz many tym I helped u bt this tym I don't think bhalla ji will listen mine so ..


Raman - so what?


Toshi - so u have to go office from tomorrow..


Raman - koi idea nhi h..he asked like a baby ..


Toshi ji smiles "sorry puttar ji



Raman - okk will go office from tomorrow bt aaj mujhe party karni hai ok..making a baby face.


Toshi - okk puttar bt jaldi aana u know na ur papa don't like latecomers..


Raman - yup I know actually he don't like me too..


Toshi laughs listening this "achha leave it this & tell me ye hospital or tere frnd ka kya chakkar h I mean u had went for party naa then how come this accident etc..


Raman wrapped his arms around her arey mere bholi maa don't u know ur son is more intelligent than ur husband "


Toshi - puttar


Raman - oops sorry mujhe pta h apko apne pati ki burai pasand nhi bt Jo h so h bt it's true bcoz I know it that when I'll say him about my false story so he will definitely cross checked it so I had fixed everything beforehand.. he said raising his invisible collars


Toshi - them how come the hospital staff confirms ur false story


Raman - bcoz its not fully false let me tell you actually last night when I was coming home I saw that someone was lying on the side of road with lots of injuries so I took him in my car & admitted him in hospital and he thanked me for that I asks him to tell everyone that he is my frnd so that no one will trap me in false case..


Toshi - ohk bt its good that u had helped someone in his problem..saying she hugged him & he went from there to do party with his frnds


He is driving when his phn starts ringing he take the call & starts talking suddenly someone has comes in front of his car & he immediately pressed break & by mistake mud has thrown on that person raman disconnect the call & immediately comes out of his car see that person's clothes became dirty bcoz of mud Raman went to her & saidoops sorry I didn't do it intentionally mera dhyan nhi tha u r fyn naa "


That person glared him listening this & she is none other than...😉



That's all for now I hope you all liked it for early update hit like button do comments also..


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Harshita

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Updated new story
have a look..
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Congratulations on ur new ts
Awesome update
Raman is a careless boy
And mr bhalla wants perfection...nice pair 😆
Cont soon
Eagerly waiting for the next update
Ty 4 d pm too
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Congratulations harshii for ur new story..
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Superb start
I really liked to see careless raman..
Mr bhalla is strict dad..
Both r pole apart..
Bt u devil stopped it wrong point..
Now eagerly waiting for next update..
Continue asap..
Thx for pm.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sunshine_DivAn

Congratulations harshii for ur new story..


I'm second one.. 🥳
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Superb update harshu
Nice start
Mr. Bhalla is too strict he want raman to join his business but raman didnt want to join
Hahaha their convo was too good
Ishu clothes became dirty because of him
Thanks for pm
Update soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Congratulations for ur new story harshi

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