IshRa TS : Rishtey Naatey Last Shot on pg 44 Mar 26 - Page 14

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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: aru_27

lovely teaser
continue soon


Thx dear
Will update soon..
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: ASYAKASHLOVER

Awesome superb update

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Continue soon


Thx dear..
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: --Evil_Angel--

<font color="#993366">Super amazing teaser dear..</font>

<font color="#993366">Raman was getting ready for the first day office as orders by his dad..</font>
<font color="#993366">His mom & his conversation was lovely..</font>
<font color="#993366">Haha.. only he can call her pataka..</font>
<font color="#993366">Wow...</font>
<font color="#993366">Waiting for updates..</font>
<font color="#993366">Thanks for pm dear !</font>


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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: .Priyanka-

Lovely teaser
Thanks for the pm


Thx dear..
Will update soon..
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Posted: 7 years ago
Mind Blowing Start

Wow this will be interesting as Raman is a careless guy
while his dad is strict
I'm looking forward now to seeing all the stuff a careless Raman does
and maybe gets into trouble with Mr Bhalla
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Posted: 7 years ago
Shot - 2

He is driving when his phn starts ringing he take the call & starts talking suddenly someone has comes in front of his car & he immediately pressed break & by mistake mud has thrown on that person raman disconnect the call & immediately comes out of his car see that person's clothes became dirty bcoz of mud


Raman went to her & saidoops sorry I didn't do it intentionally mera dhyan nhi tha u r fyn naa "


That person glared him listening this & she is none other than our 7yrs old ruhi


Ruhi(glaring him)- Ye toh hoga hi naa when u r talking on phn while driving u know it's not safe for u & also for others too aapko bhi chot lg skti thi bt you are really so careless.. She was continuously talking while raman smiles seeing this chatterbox finally he stopped her "Please stop pataka how can someone talk this much


Ruhi - pataka?


Raman - yes u r a pataka u know in our culture we call pataka girl like you ..he said smiling while ruhi makes confused face as she don't understand when Raman smiles seeing her & tried to change her moodnot bad yaar in this age u had so much information about traffic rules "


Ruhi became happy listening this & raises invisible collars raman too smiles seeing her this antics


Raman - BTW what r u doing in mid of road ? Agr tumhe chot lag jati toh..


Ruhi - actually uncle..hearing he made face


Raman - hey plz don't call me uncle I'm not that much older...


Ruhi giggled listening thisthen what should I call you?


Raman - u can call me by my name or anything else except uncle so let's introduced ourselves hii I'm raman..saying he forward his hand for hand shake


Ruhi too shake hand with him "hii I'm ruhi

Raman - wow nice name from now we r frnds & hum dono ka name same letter se start hota hR..


Ruhi - yup frnds ok Buddy ..now I'm going.


Raman - where?


Ruhi -my home actually my school bus has about to come ..


Raman - so what r u doing here?


Ruhi - actually buddy I had come here to buy a ice cream bt bcoz of u my whole dress became dirty with mud & that ice cream shop also closed..she said making a cute pout


Raman - sorry buddy come I'll take u to another ice cream shop..


Ruhi - nope my school bus will be reaching any tym..


Raman - ok tell me KB tk aati h..


Ruhi - 2:20..


Raman - great Abhi 10 min hai hmare pass come I'll drop u at ur scl on tym..


Ruhi - but mumma says don't go with any stranger..


Raman - hmmm ur mumma is ryt but we r frnds naa so come..


Ruhi - arey haan chlo buddy bt mujhe tym pe chhodh dena warna meli bus chli jayegi ok..


Raman - ok now come saying he picked her in his arms & settled in His car & droves towards nearby shop both bought has same choice "Chocolate chips


Raman - wow our choice is same..


Ruhi - yay ..saying both did hi-fi & drove towards her scl where her bus is about to leave bt raman stopped it & make her sit on it both bid bye with each other with wide smile on their faces



Other side

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Ishita was sipping her tea when she hears doorbell she went & open the door


Ishita - aap yahan? ..she said seeing the person & person is her amma


Amma - yes kanna me can't I come here to meet my daughter..


Ishita - ye toh apko apne husband se puchhna chahiye.. she said in rude tone


Amma - tum baap beti ke jhagde mein mai phash gyi hu..saying she became emotional ishita called her inside & gave her water


Ishita - amma I know isme apki koi galti nahi hai bt plz understand my point too..


Amma - I'm understanding ur point kanna bt plz come with me..


Ishita - where amma?


Amma - what's type of question is it? Our home kanna or kaha..


Ishita - ok amma I'll come with you..hearing this she became happy when ishita saidif appa will agree for my condition "


Amma - kanna u know naa ur appa he don't understand ryt now Bt I'll promise u mai unhe smjhaungi tum Abhi chlo bas..



Ishita - nope amma plz forgive me bt I couldn't come with you ..amma nodded heavy heart & went from there after sometimes ruhi reached her home & press the door bell ishita comes & open the door & picked ruhi in her arms


Ishita - aa gyi mera bachcha how's ur day?


Ruhi - it's awesome mumma..


Ishita - ruh beta apki dress itni dirty kyun hai.


Ruhi - actually mumma one uncle oops sorry (saying she pat on her temple ) my buddy didn't saw me & mistakenly this happen..


Ishita - ur buddy who Riya & kabir?


Ruhi - nope he is my new buddy whom I met on road ..saying she narrates everything to her


Ishita - bt betu I teach u naa don't go with strangers ..


Ruhi - bt mumma he is my buddy & u know u shared same ice cream unko bhi chocolate chips pasand hai..


Ishita - ok now enough for ur buddy chant come I'll clean u ..saying she take her inside washroom


On other side raman reached his home & called his maa


Toshi ji - arey puttar tu itni jldi aa gya party khtm ho gye..


Raman - I didn't went for party..


Toshi - but why?


Raman - u know maa aaj kya hua.

Saying he narrates her everything


Toshi - wo Thk toh thi puttar koi chot toh nhi lgi na..she asked in concerns


Raman - no maa she is absolutely fyn u know she is "Chota Pataka the way she talked I love her u know I want a daughter like her..hearing this her eyes popped up


Toshi - that means u r ready for marriage..then he realized what he said he immediately replied "No maa mera mtlb wo nhi thatoshi ji's face fell hearing this when he cupped her face "maa plz don't be sad


Toshi - then what should I do? Mera bhi mann hai mai apne bete ki shaadi dekhu meri bahu aaye who give me my grand children


Raman - Maa usme sirf Teri bahu ka nhi mera bhi contributions hoga..he saig naughtily


Toshi - chup besharm na hoye te bol kb shaadi krega..


Raman - bahut jld..


Toshi - it means should I start find good alliance for u..


Raman - no I'll find her .


Toshi - chl koi nhi tu dhoondh ya mai mujhe bahu mtlb h..saying both hugged each other


Next day raman again went to meet ruhi she became so happy to meet him & from that day they everyday meet & their bong getting deep day by day


After one week

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Raman was getting ready to Go when toshi ji entered inside his room..


Toshi - arey puttar where r you going?


Raman - arey meri bholi maa aap bhool gyi ur dear husband had given me ultimatum to join that so called office today itself... He said making face


Toshi - ohh yes I remember bt puttar office ka time toh 11bje h na or Abhi toh 9 bje h why r u going so early?



Raman - actually maa firstly I have to go to meet her afterall today's is my first day of office so how can I go without meeting her..


Toshi - so today ur pataka also coming to meet you..she said smiling


Raman - maaa don't call her pataka only I can call her by this name okk..


Toshi - okk bt mujhe KB milwa rha h usse..


Raman - very soon bt now I'm going warna late ho jayega..saying he went from there while Toshi called him from behind for breakfast bt he went without listening


Raman reached there & saw that his pataka is Waiting for him he went to hersorry sorry sorry I know I'm late bt please forgive me & wish me luck as today is my first day of office & without waisting time she kissed on his cheeks..


Raman - now I'm sure that my first will be great..


Ruhi - all the best buddy ..saying she became sad when raman cupped her facehey what happens my chota pataka ? Are you not happy?


Ruhi - I'm so happy bt sad too as from now you will not meet me naa..


Raman saw her with aww face "who told you this? Is it possible that I don't meet my pataka?


Ruhi became so happy listening this "so that's mean you will meet me everyday


Raman - yup definitely now give me ur smile "hearing this ruhi smiles wholeheartedly & both hugs each other tightly..


Then raman headed towards office halfheartedly as Mr bhalla blackmailed him that if he'll not come office then no party no money..


Other side ishita too appointed as marketing manager in bhalla Industry & today is first day of their office


Ishita - ruh aaj se mumma bhi office jayengi so after returning from school you please go to mihika anuty s home (mihika is a very good frnd of her & also he neighbour who lived next to her apartment with her husband mihir)


Mihika - ishu tu ruhi ki tension na le I'll take care of her..ishita nodded & kissed on ruhi's temple ruhi also did the same then she went to her office


Mr bhalla introduced raman with his office staff & show him his cabin he is not liking it at all bt bearing him after sometimes peon comes to him & informed him that Mr bhalla is calling him he nodded & ask him to go while he is coming meanwhile ishita enters in the office & asks in reception about Mr bhalla's cabin Receptionist show her the direction she thankrd her & headed towards his cabin IshRa was coming from opposite direction & didn't saw each other & Bang with each other ishita is about to fall when raman holds her she closed her eyes in fear while he lost in her beauty ishita opens her eyes realizing that she is not fall on ground & saw him totally lost she & unknown to her a smile crept on her face bt she composed herself & called himThanksbt he didn't listen it then she again said it & he immediately make her stand saying sorry & both went Inside Mr bhalla's cabin


Mr bhalla saw them & asked to sit


Ishita - Good morning sir I'm ishita iyer


Mr bhalla - yeah our new marketing manager.. Which she nodded then he said "ishita I want a favor from u


Ishita - yes sir tell its mine pleasure ..


Mr bhalla points towards ramanmeet him he is my son Raman Kumar Bhalla " both shakes hand with each other & passed a smile then he saidactually ishita I had seen ur profile & I'm so impress with ur business knowledge & experience & I want u train my son as like you bcoz he is new for this could u do that for mehearing this Raman did bhagda dance in his mind


Ishita - bt sir what about my marketing manager's post?



Mr bhalla -its still urs & this training of him think like a over tym u have pay for it too..she became happy as she also needs more money so she agreed with it from that day raman was always be with her both r becoming comfortable with each other & became good frnds raman starts loving her & waiting for ryt day to propose her & ishita too start loving her bt don't want to accept it as she thinking that after knowing about ruhi this relationship will not last for forever bt unknown to her RaRu meets thrice & twice in week & their bond also becoming stronger


Today Raman is going to give his first preparation made by him he is so nervous


Ishita - raman don't be nervous you'll rock it & u will make sir proud..


Raman - you really thinks so?


Ishita pressed her hand on him & gave him much needed strength soon everyone gathered in conference hall where raman gave the presentation with confident everyone clapped for him & Mr bhalla hugged him saying he proud of him from behind said "Congratulations which he saudThanks



Mr bhalla thanked ishita for her help to raman then he went to his business colleagues while ishra starts talking with each other


Mr bhalla announced for a party tonight on raman's first success


Ishita went to himsir I'm not able to come tonight for party


Mr bhalla - but why ishita?


Ishita - actually sir late ho jayega..


Mr bhalla - you don't worry about it it's my responsibility to drop u ur home safely & ishita agr tum hi nhi aaogi toh kaisa lgega its bcoz of u raman gave thus outstanding presentation & I don't know anything u have to come..


Ishita - okk sir BT I'll not stay for long ..which he nodded unknown to them raman was listening their talk & decided to propose her in tonight..


That's all for now frnds i hope u all liked it so hit like button & do comments also..


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Harshita

Edited by harshiidiv - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Superb update harshii
Omg so its ruhi.. 😆
I thought it ishu 😉
Superb twist..
Loved raru bond so much..
Ishra also fab..
He is going to propose him..
Continue soon
Eagerly waiting for next..
Edited by Sunshine_DivAn - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
Superb update
Love ishra raru
Update soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
Awesome update.
Loved Raman and ruhi's bond
Ruhi is ishita's daughter.
Ishita don't live with her parents.
So muchh suspence.
Ishra bond grew as they work in same office Raman decide to propose Ishita.
Update soon.
Thanks for pm.
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Posted: 7 years ago
Amazing update
Waiting for next
Updt soon

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