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Part 3

Raghuveer Handa sees Maan and Sameer running away and starts fuming.

Meanwhile, Dadi asks Geet, "Then What happened Geet?"

Geet: Everyone fell on each other and that resulted in chaos.

Dadi: And what about the guy who came here as Dev?

Geet: We didn't see each other. He ran away.

Raghuveer Singh comes to the room. Dadi calls him & asks him, "Did you get to know who was that duplicate Dev?"

Raghuveer: Just now I got to know from Munim that the guy is Dhanraj's son who had come here to appeal to the court for the property.

Geet is shocked.

Raghuveer continues: He had come on the red bike. If I knew that before, I would have killed him & send his dead body to his family.

At Khurana Mansion

Maan, Sameer & the Khuranas are playing carrom.

Jaswant Sings suddenly gets the post. He reads it & gives it to Dhanraj.

Jaswant: This is the wedding invitation card from one of our relatives at Mount. Abu. This is the best opportunity for us to go for a break & see the place as well.

Parvati: I thought of going to the temple as soon as Dhanraj comes back.

Jaswant: Of course, you can.

Meanwhile, at the college, Geet & Kavita meet.

Kavita: Tell me what have you thought about our college Sitanagar camp?

Geet: It is difficult for me to come there. My dad is sending me to Mount. Abu

Kavita: Fine, Mount Abu & Sitanagar are close. Just a matter of 3 hours journey. Tell your dad that you want to go to Sitanagar.

Geet: I cannot open my mouth in front of my father.

Kavita: Fine, I will talk to your father.

Both go to Handa house

Kavita to RV: Have you ever been to Sitanagar?

RV: No

Kavita: You need to visit Sitanagar at least once.

Mallika: But how is the weather there?

Kavita: It is terribly cold there that a person starts shivering.

Mallika: Then we are better off at Mt. Abu.

Kavita & Mallika are discussing the trip.

RV: Stop both of you. I will ask Geet & decide on that basis.

He then asks Geet, "Where you want to go?"

Geet hesitantly said, "Mt.Abu."

RV: Then it is final that we are going to Mt. Abu.

He leaves to the office.

Kavita: You have screwed up the entire thing.

Geet: I told you that I won't be able to open my mouth before my dad. I get baffled.

Kavita: No problem. I will work out on a plan. I will come to Mt. Abu & pick you there.

Geet: Promise?

Kavita: I promise you.

The next day everyone goes to Mt. Abu. They visit a lot of places. Geet takes everyone's pictures there.

At Khurana Mansion

Jaswant is talking over the phone about attending the engagement.

At Mt. Abu, Geet continues to take the photographs of her Mallika & others. Suddenly she said, "I need to take the photograph of the setting sun. I will come within 5 minutes."

She goes out to take the photographs.

Maan & Sameer are jogging at the time of the sunset.

Geet takes the photograph of Maan jogging at the time of the sunset.

Maan sees that & escapes from there. He sees Geet & remembers her seeing that she was riding the horse. He comes behind Geet who gets startled & drops her camera. Maan picks up the camera & gives it to her. He said, "I am sorry. I hope it didn't break."

Geet: No, it is fine. I had taken your pics when I was taking the sunset pics. I hope you didn't get angry.

Maan: Not at all. If the pics are good, I will never get angry.

Geet: I don't know much about photography. I keep trying my luck.

Maan That is a good thing. You have come to the right place at the right time. During sunset, the beautiful things look more beautiful.

Geet: It seems that you know a lot about photography. Can you take my pic?

Maan: Sure.


He was about to take Geet's pic. Suddenly, he hears Sameer's voice.

Geet: It seems someone is calling you.

Maan: Yes, now the light has diminished. I will see you tomorrow at the same place & same time.

He meets Sameer.

Both the families go to the hotel room & have dinner. Maan & Geet see each other & wave at each other. After they are done with dinner, the Khuranas see Geet there.

Parvati: She has got a lovely face.

Dhanraj: I want the same bride for Maan.

Sameer sees that & is happy.

Maan covers his head with the shawl & is looking at the surroundings. Geet comes there. She sees Maan from behind & suddenly gives the sound, "Boo."

Maan startles & looks at the back. Geet takes his photograph. Both of them giggle.

Geet: It seems you are searching for someone.

Maan: I am searching for my cousin, Sameer. I don't know where he is.

Geet: It is a good thing that we are in the same hotel. The photographs will be ready tomorrow.

Maan: I don't need them.

Geet: Why?

Maan: They say whoever sees the sunset photographs will die soon.

Geet: Do you believe in that?

Maan: I don't believe in that but I don't want to take a chance either.

Geet: Show me your right hand.

Maan shows his right hand to her.

Geet sees his hand & said, "Your lifelines are just like mine. You will have a long life."

Maan: What will I get in that long life?

Geet: Name, fame, wealth...

Maan: And what else?

Geet: Whatever you desire you will get.

Sameer comes there.

Geet: I am leaving now. I will get the photographs tomorrow and take some more pics of yours. Bye

Maan: Bye

She leaves.

At night Maan gets a dream that Geet takes his pics the next day. Both are about to kiss each other. Maan gets up.

At the ground-floor, some of the customers complain to the manager regarding the room service.

Dhanraj, Jaswant, Parvati comes there.

Dhanraj: They are our Maan's & Sameer's friends. Looks like they have come for hunting here.

Maan's friends: We had planned that with Maan in Delhi.

Dhanraj: Good. Have a nice time.

Geet & Mallika are in the room.

Geet: I don't feel like going out. You guys can go.

Mallika: Even we are not going. It is cold outside.

Geet: No, you need to go.

The phone rings suddenly

Edited by kavsy - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
#42
terrific update, well written! thanks 4 da pm
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Posted: 7 years ago
#43
geet Dadi scene was nice. loved the sunset scene.loved maan saying that beautiful things look more beautiful in sunset.maaneet meeting again was nice.can't wait for the next meeting .maaneet pics are nice.whose phone call is that?
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Posted: 7 years ago
#44
Awesome update!!
Thanks for d pm:)
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Awesome lovely update dear
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Awesome update...maneet scenes were beautiful...so nice ..
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Wonderful update.
Loved it.
Loved Geet and Dadi scenes.
Continue soon.
Waiting for the next update.
Thanks for the PM dear.
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Posted: 7 years ago
#48
Awesome Chapter

Geet and Daadi's scene was beautiful
Maan and Geet at sunset that entire scene was lovely
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Part 4

Geet picks up the phone.

Kavita: I am Kavita speaking. We have come to Mt. Abu. We will be taking the bus at Sitanagar @ 3 pm. You come to the bus stop on time.

Geet: How about going tomorrow?

Kavita: Nothing doing. We have planned everything. I don't want any goof-ups.

Meanwhile, in the hotel room, Maan and Sameer are getting ready to go to Sitanagar for hunting.

Dhanraj: You are going to Sitanagar to hunt. Where will you stay?

Maan: Dad, we will be staying at Hotel Rocks overnight.

Dhanraj: Fine, I will come there within 2 days then we will go to Delhi together.

Kavita comes to the hotel room to meet Geet who sees her Raghuveer Gupta from the window.

Geet: Oh no

Kavita: I want to take Geet to Sitanagar. I promise that she will come back safely

Mallika: The question of going there does not arise

Kavita: Aunty, it is just a matter of 4 days at Sitanagar. It is a beautiful place.Geet, please convince your mom.

Geet: Not today.

Kavita: Fine, it is your wish. I am going.

Geet goes to Kavita who said, "If you didn't want to come then why didn't you tell me before?"

Geet: I will come but not today. But tomorrow.

Kavita: Are you sure?

Geet: I am sure.

Maan and Sameer are having a good time with their friends.

Maan: At what time shall we meet?

Sameer: 8 a.m

The boys dance and target on different things to shoot. They aim at the bottles but misses it.

Maan: Bad luck.

Geet comes out. One of his friends see her and decides to woo her.

Sameer sees Geet and tells Maan, "See who is coming."

Maan: Who is coming?

Sameer: It is the same Dhanakpur girl. Your parents are planning to get you married to her.

Maan sees her and recognizes her. He laughs.

Geet is coming forward. One of the boys picks up the handkerchief and stop her. He asked, "Is this yours."

Geet takes it and throws it. All others laugh at the guy.

Geet goes to Maan and Sameer. She said, "Good Evening."

Maan: Good evening.

Geet: I had taken some of your pics. I have brought them.

She shows him the pics. Maan sees one of his pics in which the sac is on him and laughs.

Geet: Did you like them?

Maan: Yes, I liked them

Geet: This is for you.

Maan: What will I do with them?

Geet: I have taken them only for you. Please don't refuse.

Maan takes them. He said, "Thanks."

Geet: My pleasure. Since it is sunset, the place is very good to spend time.

She goes there.

All his friends said, "You are a silent killer."

Maan and Sameer go to the room and freshen up

Sameer: Where are you going?

Maan: I am going to the market. If you want something please tell me.

When he is about to leave, Sameer said, "I know that you are going to meet Geet. She is Raghuveer Handa's daughter. If it was any other girl, it was fine. Think about it."

The sun is about to set. Geet waits for Maan & goes back.

Geet, Maan, & Sameer see each other in the hotel.

Geet: I am going with my friends to Sitanagar.

Mallika: Fine but give a call.

Geet: I will do that but I will go there.

Maan, Sameer & friends go for hunting. Maan looks at Geet's pic and gets mesmerized by her beauty. The boys start shooting. Maan is staring at Geet's pics. Suddenly they hear an animal roaring. Everyone runs away except Maan & Sameer. Suddenly Maan drops Geet's pic & tries to pick it up. Kavita & Geet are passing by the same place. She sees the pic & gives it to Maan.

Kavita: Come Geet, we have to get ready tomorrow. Maan & Sameer are surprised. Sameer sees Kavita & get mesmerized by her beauty.

All of them go to the room.

Sameer is lost.

Maan: What is the matter?

Sameer: I like Geet's friend, Kavita.

Maan: You didn't want me to meet Geet but you have fallen for her friend.

Sameer: She belongs to a different family. But Geet is Raghuveer Gupta's daughter. He & dad are enemies. If he gets to know that Geet is his daughter, he will definitely drop that idea.

Maan: I know who is she. Anyway, you can meet Kavita at Sitanagar tomorrow while I spend time with Geet.

Sameer: As you wish. I promise that I will support your decision.

The next day, everyone is on the way to Sitanagar. Suddenly the tire gets punctured. All the passengers get down. They asked, "How much time will it take?"

The driver said, "It will get ready only the next day."

Some of Maan's friends are coming by jeep. They see Geet. One of the boys who tried to woo her gets down. Geet keeps her bag & starts taking pics. The guy comes & lifts her bag. Geet sees that. The guy asked, "Is this your bag?"

Geet takes her bag. He shows her the handkerchief. Geet tries to take it but he dodges. Geet is about to leave but he stops her.

The guy's name is John.

Geet: Why are you harassing me?

John: I only want to know about you. If we go further, that will be a very good time to spend.

He tries to take her but Geet refuses.

John: Come on, be a sport.


Geet slaps him and tries to escape but John blocks her way and said, "You will pay for this."

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He tries to misbehave with her but Geet kicks him on his private parts and run. His other supporters see that he has fallen down and chases her. Geet is running. Suddenly she falls and rolls down. She hides behind the bushes.

Kavita is in search of Geet. Maan, Sameer and 2 of their friends come to the same place to hunt. Maan goes out to explore and gets lost in the midway. He finds the place and lits the fire. Sameer is in search of Maan.

Geet sees the boys and runs further. It is dark. Geet suddenly sees the fire being lit and decides to be there. Suddenly one of the guys grabs her. Geet screams but to her surprise, it is Maan.

Geet: How come you are here?

Maan: What are you doing here?

Geet: I will tell you later. Can I have some water?

She sees the water bottle and drinks.

Maan sees that Geet has got bruises. He said, "You have got hurt. I will get dettol for you."

He gets the first-aid kit and tends to her wounds.

Maan: Is it paining?

Geet: Wherever you have put Dettol it is fine.

Maan: How did you get hurt?

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Geet: We were on the way to Sitanagar. The bus tire got punctured. I began to take the pics. Suddenly some of the guys came and misbehaved with me. I kicked them and escaped from there.

Maan: Is there any other place where you got hurt?

Geet: No.

Maan: I have kept some sandwiches. You can have them.

Geet eats up the sandwiches. Maan sets the bed by spreading the grass.

Geet: I won't be sleeping here. You drop me till the main road, I will get buses there.

Maan: I myself have lost my way. When we had come here for the hunting, my friends had gone very far off and I was left behind.

Geet thinks and considers his point to be valid.

Maan: I have spread the grass. You sleep now.

Geet: Won't you talk to me for some time?

Maan: Aren't you tired? You have been in this jungle the entire day.

Geet: I was but after seeing you, I became fresh.

Maan: It is the late night. Sleep. Good night.

Geet: You have put our beds so far that when I get scared at night I won't even be able to hold your hand.

Maan laughs: Being a Rajput, you are scared!

Geet: How do you know that I am a Rajput?

Maan: By your looks & appearance.

Geet: Thanks. This is the first thing you told about my community. You can say something more if you want. Shall I come to you?

Maan smiles. He said, "No, Goodnight."

Geet: You have put our beds so far that when I get scared at night I won't even be able to hold your hand.

Maan laughs: Being a Rajput, you are scared!

Geet: How do you know that I am a Rajput?

Maan: By your looks & appearance.

Geet: Thanks. This is the first thing you told about my community. You can say something more if you want. Shall I come to you?

Maan smiles. He said, "No, Goodnight."

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Maan lies down on the grass. Geet lies down for some time.

Sameer and Kavita meet each other in the process of searching for Maan and Geet.

Sameer: I think I saw you somewhere.

Kavita: We met where you guys had come for hunting. The bus got punctured on the way. I don't know where this female goes.

Sameer: The same thing is with Maan. I think there is a possibility of them meeting in the jungle.

Kavita: I think you are right.

Both of them get exhausted. Sameer lits the fire.

Sameer: It is the late night. I think we can start our search tomorrow.

Kavita: Fine.

Sameer gives his water-bottle to Kavita to drink. Kavita drinks it & gives it to Sameer who drinks it. Both of them share the food with each other & spend one night in the jungle.

Edited by vatika_r - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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it would be better if you put drashti jennifer's phone pic in the first pic.maaneet photo scenes were nice. maan called as a silent killer was interesting .geet wants to talk to maan and said that seeing him she became fresh.guess she is already attracted to maan.sameer kavita scene was very cute.loved it

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