Maaneet FF - Qayamat Se Qayamat tak - Page 7

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Please update next chapter
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Part 5

Maan is half-asleep while Geet kept awake. The background song is

Kaahe Sataye Kaahe Ko Rulaaye

Kaahe sataaye kahe ko rulaaye

(Raam kare tujhako neend na aaye) - 2

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Geet sleeps next to Maan which he notices. He sleeps.

Sameer and Kavita are also restless for 2 reasons. The first one is to speak out their feelings towards each other and the other is they are worried about Maan and Geet.

Kavita: I wish Maan and Geet should be safe wherever they are.

Sameer: Even I hope the same.

He puts the bed for both of them to lie down. Suddenly, a thorn pricks her. Sameer sees that and takes off the thorn.

Sameer: Are you alright?

Kavita: Yes, I am alright.

Sameer sees the blood oozing out from her foot. He said, "I will get the first-aid kit."

He gets the first-aid kit and tends to her injury.

Sameer: We will search for them tomorrow. Good night.

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The next day, Maan & Geet change their dress & start looking out the way. Sameer & Kavita also resume their search.

Sameer: It is hard to find them in this huge jungle. I think we should go to the main road & wait for them

Kavita: Yes, you are right. Even I think the same.

Sameer: I think our thoughts match.

Kavita: Yes.

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She tries to walk but her foot starts paining. Sameer carries her in his arms till the main road & wait for Maan & Geet.

Maan & Geet are trying to find their way. He tries to call Sameer but is unable to reach him. Sameer also tries Maan's number but is unable to reach. Kavita tries Geet's number which gives the message as switched off. Geet finds out that her mobile is missing & realizes that she lost her handset while encountering John & he is having her handset & camera.

Maan is making a cross mark to the trees, indicating it as a wrong way to the main road.

Geet: Won't you ask anything about me?

Maan: What should I ask?

Geet: Anything. If you are shy to ask, I will tell you about myself. I am from Delhi. Where are you from?

Maan: Delhi

Geet: Wow. I would also like to say that I am a Rajput & my name is Geet. What is your name?

Maan: I am Maan

Geet: I have cleared my send year degree. I am 19 years old. I am unmarried.

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Maan looks back.

Geet: There is nothing to hide. Since we have lost our way, it is a good thing that we know each other till we find the way right?

Maan smiles.

Geet: I have got a good impression on you that even if you ask my address, I am ready to give you.

Maan: We can talk later but now the main thing is to find the way to the main road.

Geet: Then we should find the way instead of wasting time in chit-chatting.

Maan: Am I chit-chatting?

Geet: Even I am not chit-chatting.

She laughs.

Maan: Nothing to laugh. If we don't find the way by the end of the day, we will be roaming here all our lives.

Geet: Can it happen like that?

Maan puts the cross to the tree & said, "No."

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The song begins

Gazab ka hai din soncho zara

Ye deewanapan dekho zara

Tum ho akele hum bhi akele

Maza aa raha hai

Kasam se kasam se

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Maan looks back. Geet opens her hair.

Gazab ka hai dinsoncho zara

Ye deewanapan dekho zara

Tum ho akele hum bhi akele

Maza aa raha hai

Kasam se, kasam se

Maan indicates the way. Geet follows him and dances. Maan indicates Geet to come to the right but Geet refuses. Maan drags her but finds there is a pit on their way.

Dekh lo hum ko kareeb say

Aaj hum mile hain naseeb say

Dekh lo hum ko kareeb say

Aaj hum mile hain naseeb say

Ye pal fir kahaa

Aaur ye manjil fir kahaa

Gazab ka hai din soncho zara

Ye deewanapan dekho zara

Tum ho akele hum bhi akele

Maza aa raha hai

Kasam se, kasam se

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Maan keeps his bag and removes his coat and touches Geet's shoulder & dances with her.

Male:

Kyaa kahoo meraa jo haal hai

Raat din tumhaaraa khayaal hai

Ho kyaa kahoo meraa jo haal hai

Raat din tumhaaraa khayaal hai

Fir bhi jaane jaan

Main kahaan aur tum kahaan

Female:

Ho gazab ka hai din soncho zara

Ye deewanapan dekho zara

Tum ho akele hum bhi akele

Maza aa raha hai

Kasam se, kasam se.

Maan & Geet finally find their way to the main road.

Maan: The road was so close & we were roaming insanely.

Geet: Yes, but now I am not happy as you will be somewhere & I will be somewhere. Will you meet me in Delhi? Even if it is a no, you can say yes at least to make me happy.

Maan: Why are you saying that, Geet?

Geet: From the time we came to Mt. Abu, I never thought that I will get someone in my life only to depart but that is what happening but I don't expect anything from you. There is no such rule that if I love a person, he should love me back.

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Maan kisses Geet. Tears roll from her eyes. Both hug each other.

Sameer calls Maan who picks up the call.

Maan: We are near the main road.

Sameer: Fine, we are coming.

He carries Kavita in his arms & is on the way to meet Maan.

Kavita: I want to have some water.

Sameer puts her down & gives her the water bottle. Kavita drinks it. He sees Kavita with a traditional dress & said, "You are very beautiful."

Kavita blushes. She said, "Thanks, you are very handsome."

Sameer smiles. He asked, "Today is your birthday, right? You had told me on the way."

Kavita: Yes. But we are in this jungle waiting for Maan and Geet.

Sameer: They have come. We will celebrate your birthday together.

Both of them are on the way to meet Maan and Geet.

Meanwhile, Geet sees John and others in the jeep.

Geet: They are the ones who have been misbehaving with me. They have got my camera and cellphone. Let's go.

Maan and Geet walk is on the way to meet Sameer and Kavita. John and his friends drive the jeep and come near Maan and Geet.

John: So, you were with this hen? No problem, we share everything with each other.

Maan: The camera and cellphone that you have, belongs to her. Give it back.

Geet: I don't want them.

John: I can't hear you, baby. Come and say that in my ears.

Maan: There is a limit to everything and if you don't be within that, it won't be good for you.

John comes out of the jeep. He comes forward and asked, "What will you do?"

Maan: At the most, I can give you a kick.

He kicks John. All of them start fighting. Sameer comes there and joins the fight. Both Maan & Sameer beat them black and blue and take back Geet's camera and cellphone.

All four of them get into the jeep and go to the hotel room to celebrate Kavita's birthday.

Maan: Geet, this is my cousin, Sameer.

Addressing to Sameer, he said, "She is my love, Geet."

Sameer: Hi Geet.

Geet: Hi.

Sameer: I will buy the cake and snacks here to celebrate Kavita's birthday.

Maan: Even we are coming.

All 4 of them go to the bakery shop and buy the cake and the snacks. They all go to the ground floor of the hotel room and have fun. Kavita gets lots of gifts. When she opens Sameer's gift, she finds the makeup set with the letter. Kavita opens the letter and reads the content, "Wish you a very happy birthday. I want to tell you something that is special. Kavita meets Sameer in the afternoon. She asked, "What is it that you want to tell?"

Sameer: I love you.

Kavita: I love you too.

Both hug each other.

Edited by vatika_r - 7 years ago
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awesome update
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Superb lovely update dear
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thanks for the pm!

lovely update!
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Nice update...finallu John gets what he deserved...thats so good
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Posted: 7 years ago
#68
geet introducing herself to maan and telling that she is willing to give her address to him was nice.loved geet taking the situation of getting lost positively as she can get to know maan more .song confession and hug were romantic .sameeta scenes were romantic.nice pics. usually you put the same picture for common couples in all versions.but here the last picture of samud was different from the arshi version.thats good.who made that samud edit?
Edited by jasminerahul - 7 years ago
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Awesome update.
Loved it.
Continue soon.
Waiting for the next update.
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Awesome update
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