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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey its my first FF so do rply if u like or dont like.i wil cntinue if u like it.so forgive me if sumthing wrong as i dont hav experience.

Ist PART

ARMAAN B'day on 23feb. AR(armaan) cums 2 sanjeevani n meets R(RIDZ) in locker room hoping she wud wish her.

AR-hi riddhima

R-hi

AR-how r u?

R-i m fine.wat abt u?

AR-me 2 fine

R-oh! no

AR-wat happened?

R-i hav 2 meet dr.keerti.i will see u later.ok bye{wen ridz leave atul(AT),muskaan(MUS),anjali(AN),rahul(RL) cum n dey just say only hi 2 AR n go for dere duties.wen all leave AR feels sad dat even ridz dint wishd him}(next scene AT,R,MUS,KEERTI,SHUBHANKAR,RAHUL,ANJIE all are having sncks in canteen AR cums dere)

AR-hi evryone(no1 rply him back.all ignore AR) wats d problem guys why u are behaving wid me like dis.(end of day n end of evry one's duty.evry1 leave for dere home.AR reaches his home.he iz shockd 2 c dat d house was opened.wen he enters home lites gets switched on n frnds n his seniors sing a song wishing him HAPPY B'DAY.ar smiles

AR-u all remember.so nice of u.thnx

AN-now cut d cake(aft cake cutting he gives cake 2 evry1 except ridz.she feel bad but den she takes a mike)

R-ood evening evryone.aaj hum AR ka b'day celebrate karne ke liye ek saath ikhatte hue hai.main AR ko or apni family,friends ko ek gift dena chahti hun(ridz take a bunch of roses n move 2wards AR)

do rply!!!!!!!!!!!!!! plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

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Posted: 17 years ago
#2
Awesome start 👏 👏 👏 .
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Posted: 17 years ago
#3
that was a great start do continue soon...i would love to read your FF
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Posted: 17 years ago
#4
hey tina hiiiii it ws awesom prt nd nce cont.frm armaans birthdy u shud cont.........plzz cont..soon i'll be waitng.......now hope ridz tll evrythng abt their relationshp plzz u hv 2 cont........

yachna
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Posted: 17 years ago
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awwww so sweeet do continue plssssssss
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Posted: 17 years ago
#6
hey tina pehla part aur woh bhi itna aacha 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
#7
thnxxxxxxxxxxx for ur support.i will continue.
2nd PART
RIDZ(R) moves 2wards AR wid bunch of roses n cum in front of AR.she sit down on her foot n offer him ROSES.

R-ar main aaj tumse sabhi ke saamne ek sawal ka jawab chahti hun.(evry one cnfused wat she is trying 2 do)
AR(confused)-kaisa jawab.
R-ar kya main tumse kuch maang sakti hun.
AR-kya!!!!!!!!!
R-ar main aoni baaki ki zindagii apne pyaar yaani tumhare saath bitana chahti hun.kya tum mera saath doge(evry one surpised.ar is also surprisd dat she proposed him in front of evry one wich ar wanted n she is not able 2 do it wen he said her to say i love u 2 him in front of evry1 she was not able 2 do dat easily it had taken her lot of time.but now ar is happy)
AR-haan.main bhi tumse pyaar karta hun(AR makes ridz stand up n hold her hand)
AR-main vaada krta hun ki main zindagi ke har kadam,har mod pe tumhara saath dunga.kabhi bhi tum kisi mushkil mein hogi tum hamesha mujhe apne saath khada paogi(ridz,AR in tears n dey hugg.guests clap.all frnds,seniors arehappy except SHASHANK,PADMA,RAHUL,MUSKAAN.SHASHANK n PADMA move out 2 d terrace n AR,RIDZ,ANGIE,ATUL,KEERTI,SHUBHANKAR,MUSKAAN,RAHUL follows dem leaving d guests dere only)
R-papa.main AR se pyaar krti hun or is se hi shaadi krna chahti hun lekin agar aap nhii chahte to main apke khilaaf kabhi nhii jaungi or jis se aap kahege us se shaadi karungi
SHA-theek hai tum mere khilaaf nhii jana chahti to theek hai.PADMA main soch rha tha ki aaj AR ke b'day pe hi hum RIDZ ki sgai krwa dete hain apne pasand ke ladke ke saath
PAD-aap bilkul sahi keh rhe hain.(ar,ridz,angie,atul,keerti,shubhankar r shockd by his decision)
ANGIE-dad aap ye kya keh rhe hai.aapne to ridz di ko hmesha mujhse bhi zayda pyaar kiya hai to aaj ye aisa faisla kyun,ridz di ki zindagi brbad ho jaegi.plz aisa matt kariye.
SHA-mera faisla aakhri faisla hai or is faisle ko koi bhi nhii badal sakta tum,ridhima,or AR to kya bhagwan bhi nhii.
ANGIE-lekin dad!!!!!!!!!
PAD-anjali ye kya kar rhi ho tum apne dad ke saamne zubaan lada rhi ho tum janti ho na tumhare dad ka faisla koi nhii badal skta ye inka aakhri faisla hai(keerti,shubhankar,atul also try 2 cansole SHASHANK n PADMA but dey dont listen n RAHUL,MUSKAAN smiles by SAHSHANK's decision)
SHA-enough ab main niche jakar sabke saamne RIDDHIMA tumhari engagement announce kar dete hun.sgai tumhari aaj hi hogi maine or PADMA ne saari tayariyan kar li hain.engagement ring bhi ready hai.ab sabke saamne koi scene create matt krna.(SHA n PADMA leaves.RIDZ in tears cry n fall down KEERTI,ANGIE go 2 support her.AR is also in tears so ATUL n SHUBHANKAR go 2 AR n support him)
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Posted: 17 years ago
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wow tina ridz hs prosd 2 ar in frnt of evry1 wow thts cool bt how did he do tht aftrall its all abt ridz lfe bt i thnk shashank gonna annonce armaan nd ridz engagemnt i thnk sooooo plz dont break thm plzz cont.soon i am dyng 2 read wht happnd nxt..........

yachna
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey wat happend no rplies for 2nd part. it meanS u dint like my FF
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Posted: 17 years ago
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i bet shashant is gona announce AR's enganged ment! i loved it! nce goi! cntd sn!

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