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Posted: 7 years ago
"Black Love"


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PART-40

It was late night. Aanchal back to home. She was very heartbroken. She was recalling everything what happened. She was walking to terrace. The pain was killing her.

"Aaj...Aaj tum sab kuch todiya Ranvir...Sab kuch...Meri pyaar, barosa ko, meri himmat ko...Tum sab kuch todiya...Kyu? Kyu kiya tune aisa? Kyu? Tum mujhe bohot sare
vaade kiya tha par tum inn vaado ko kabhi nahi nibaya...kabhi nahi! Kyu tum mujh se jhoot bola? Kyu?! Mujhe laga shayad tum sirf ek khiladi ho jo apne pyaar ko haasil karna chahta hai par...par asli mein...asli mein tum ek khooni hoon! Ek khooni! Main ek khooni ko kaise apnau?! Kaise?! Mujhe khud se nafrat hai kyu ke main tumse pyaar kiya! Tumpar barosa kiya! I hate myself for this!"

She recalled their first night and was crying so much. Then she started to purify her body.

"Tum apne gande haaton se mujhe chua...Apne gande haato se! Chi! Jis haato se tum logo ki khoon kiya uss haato se tum mujhe chua!"

She wiped her tears and with angry and painful voice said.

"Main...Main tumhe apne haq samjhi aur tumhare liye ladna chahthi thi...par ab...ab main tumhare liye nahi...tumhare khilaf ladungi! Tumhare gunaho ke saaza main dunga!"

She walked away. She wanted visit her mom and brother. She needed someone who will undesrtand her pain and will support her. She went to her mother's house. Ranvir was
in their holiday house. He was heartbroken. He recalled everything what Aanchal said to him. He was feeling himself very bad. He felt like he lost everything. He came
in the room where on every wall were Aanchal's photos. He wante make surprise for her but eveyrthing were ruined.

"Maine socha tha ke agle month hum dono yaaha aaynge aur kuch waqt ek dusre ke saath betaynge...Sab se door...Maine socha tha main yeh kamra tujhe dekhaunga aur ek baar
phir apne pyaar ka izhaar karoonga par...ab...ab sab kuch mitta hai...Kuch nahi baccha aur yeh sab kuch mere wajah se hua! Mere wajah se!"

He started crying. He came close to Aanchal's photo.

"Tum sahi hai Aanchal...Jab mujhe pata tha ke tum mere jaise log se nafrat kar rahi hai toh main kyu tujhe haasil karna chahta tha? Ha? Jab mujhe pata tha ke jab tumhe sach pata chalega toh tum mujhe chor kar chali jayegi toh main tujhe kyu haasil kiya? Main bhi na...iss pyaar mein itna stupid bangaya...Main tumhe apne maqsad banadiya aur sab kuch kiya apne maqsad ko haasil karne ke liye..Par sach yeh ke tum sirf mere maqsat nahi thi Aanchal...Main tumse sach mein pyaar kiya aur main tumse sach mein pyaar kar tha hoon...par ab...ab mere pyaar ka koi faida nahi hai...Main tumhe khoya aur yeh sab sirf mere wajah se hua...Yeh sab mere galti hai...Sab mere jhoot ke wajah se hua...Par main jhoot sirf iss liye bola kyu ke main tumhe khoya nahi chatha tha...par phir bhi...phir bhi main tune khoya..Main tumhe khoya hoon Aanchal..."

Aanchal came to her mom's house. Mrs.Shrivastava opened the door and was in shock when she saw Aanchal. Aanchal was crying. She was looking very bad. Mrs. Shrivastava
scared.

"Aanchal! Kya hua beta?"

Aanchal just was crying and hugged her.

"Maa..."

"Kya hua beta? Aaja...Aandar ajaa."

Mrs.Shrivastava brought Aanchal inside and put her on the couch.

"Batao Aanchal...Kya hua?"

Aanchal was not saying anything. She just cried.

"Dekho Aanchal...Main bohot pareshan hoon...Batao kya hua...Kuch toh bol..."

"Maa...Woh...Wo.."

"Kya beta? Koun? Kya?"

"Ranvir..."

"Kya hua Ranvir ko? Kaha hai woh?"

"Maa..."

She again hugged her. Aanchal was not able to say anything to her mom. Mrs.Shrivastava was nervous. She was not able to understand what happened to Aanchal, why she
crying.

"Aanchal, beta...Please...Mujhe batao kya hua...Tum kyu rora hi hai?"

For few minutes Aanchal was silient but then she said.

"Mom, tujhe yaad hai mere haat mein ek case tha...Meenu's case..."

"Ha..Yaad hai."

"Mom...Meenu ko...Meenu ko..."

"Kya? Bolo?"

Aanchal started crying and said.

"Ranvir ne mara hai."

Mrs. Shrivastava was in shock. Aanchal told whole story to her. After listening everything Mrs.Shrivastava said.

"Dekho Aanchal...Main janti hoon jo main aab kahoonga tumhe shaayad pasand nahi ayegi par phir bhi...Beta, Ranvir bura insaan nahi hai, woh bohot accha ladka hai... Woh tujh se bohot pyaar karta hai...Woh janta hai kya accha hai aur kya bura...Woh koi..."

"Mom, yeh tum kya keh rahi hai?! Tum pagal hogaya?!"

Aanchal stood up and was screaming.

"Mom! Ranvir ek khooni hai! Khooni! He is murderer!"

"Har khooni bura insaan nahi hota Aanchal! Saamjne koshish karo!"

"Nahi mom! Murderer is the murderer!"

"I'm not saying he is right but..."

"He is not right without any but!"

"Aanchal, beta, try to understand him.."

"Bass mom!"

Mrs. Shrivastava came close to her and hold her.

"Look at me. Agar tum Ranvir jaise logo se nafrat karti hai...Toh phir yeh aasoon tere aakhon mein kyu hai? Tum yaha kyu aayi? Tumhe toh pata hai Ranvir jaisa logo ke saath kya karna chahie. Jao aur unko arrest karo. Baat katam."


Aanchal looked at her mom with shock. From another side Ranvir was still was at holiday house. He was broken.


"Aanchal please wapas aaja...Please Aanchal...Wapas aaja..Mere paas aaja Aanchal...Mujhe teri zaroorat hai...Main maar jaunga tere bina Aanchal...Please...Please..."

He was crying and then screamed.

"Aanchaaal!"

Aanchal turned.

"Ranvir!"

Mrs. Shrivastava asked her what happened.

"Mom, mujhe aisi laga ke Ranvir mujhe bula raha hai."

"Dekho...Yeh kya tha Aanchal? Tum uski dard mehsoos karti hai...Tum unka awaaz sunti hai."

"Kyu ke main Ranvir se pyaar karti hoon!" -
she screamed.

"Ha! Aur yeh sab se bada sach hai!"

"Nahi, mom...Sab se bada sach yeh ke mujhe mere pyaar ko saaza dena padegi. Kyu ke mera pyaar dunya ke samne ek khooni hai. Yeh ek lawyer bolti hai..Patni nahi."

She wiped her tears and left to the room. She felt beside her bed and started crying.
On another side Ranvir also was crying. He was calling Aanchal.

"Aanchal please waapas aaja...Please Aanchal...I love you Aanchal!"


[HAK song on BG]


[Scene in video]

[YOUTUBE]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VXcjV4YnPUA&feature=youtu.be[/YOUTUBE]

Kabir was sitting in his room and was watching video of Ranvir and Aanchal's fight. He was sad to see his brother in this condition but from another side he was happy
because he was sure now Aanchal will be with him.


"Aab iss khel ka baazi mere haat mein hai. I'm sorry bade but everything is far on love and war. Main janta hoon...Main janta hoon ke tum bohot zyada upset ho par kya karoon...Tujhe yaad hai na..tum sab kuch kiya Aanchal ko haasil karne ke liye or ab meri bari hai. Main janta hoon tum Aanchal ko koi dard nahi de sakta par phir bhi she should stay away from you kyu ke Aanchal sirf meri hai. Sirf meri. Sorry bade...Mujhe maaf karo bhai."

Kabir threw phone and stood in front of mirror. He was looking at mirror and was recalling his and Aanchal's romantic moments when they are were a couple. He smiled
and said:

"Bohot jald yeh sab kuch wapas ayega...Hum phir se ek honge Aanchal. Maine kaha na mera jhonoon aur mera pagalpan koi haad nahi janta. Main apna jhonoon haasil karoonga!"

Next morning. Aanchal was sitting at her room. She was thinking about something. She was looking very nervous and sad. Ranvir woke up in holiday house. He was looking like beggar. First what he did took his phone and started calling Aanchal. Aanchal looked at her phone. She saw Ranvir's name and tears fell from her eyes.

"Aanchal, please...Phone uthao...Please..."

Aanchal was just looking at phone.

"Please Aanchal...Maat karo aisa...Please Aanchal..."

Aanchal turned off her phone.

"Aanchal..."

"Nahi Ranvir...Main kamzoor nahi baanunga...Aab tere liye main ek lawyer hoon aur tum mere liye ek khooni ho."

Ranvir screamed and throw his phone. Aanchal came to hall. Mrs. Shrivastava looked at her. She came close to her and asked:

"Tum teek ho?"

"Ha, mom, main bilkul teek hoon."

"Tum kya decide kiya?"

"Main Ranvir Raichand ke khilaf laadongi"


Mrs. Shrivastava was in shock.

"Kya?! Aanchal tum pagal hogayi?! Ranvir teri pati hai!"

"Woh meri pati tha aab nahi"

"Yeh kya bakwas hai Aanchal?!"

"Yeh sach hai. mom. Ab sirf yeh sach hai."

"Aanchal please..."

"Hamare divorce hogi."

"Aanchal!"

"Bass mom...bass.."

Aanchal left. Mrs. Shrivastava was so sad.

"Meri beti apni zindagi khud baarbad kar rahi hai. Hey bhagwan...Ranvir aur Aanchal ke rishte ko bachalo...Woh dono zidd bacche hai...Please kuch karo..."

Mrs. Shrivastava was praying for God. She was so scared because she didn't want Ranvir and Aanchal's divorce.


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Posted: 7 years ago
You just updated and I just PMed you! Telepathy😆
Ok I'll go and read noww!!!!

Wow yaar! Perfect!
Aanchal is upset. Ranveer is heartbroken. And Kabir is happy.
I was so sad when Aanchal was purifying herself, it was brutal for my heart!
And Ranveer, God he's broken beyond repair! I was afraid he was going to kill himself!! Thank God (and you) that he didn't otherwise Aanchal would've followed him to hell or heaven!
Now Kabir thinks that Aanchal will be with him but he doesn't know the intensity of her love for Ranveer. She still loves Ranveer and will always do.
For a change, I'm finally impressed with Mrs Srivastava , lol.
Promo was beautiful! I love HAK (the song). Fits perfectly!
100/100😆
Edited by SanyaEterna - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
Hi, first of all I am commenting on ur FF after many days. Actually I was really busy plus I am kinda busy with my studies so that's why I didn't comment plus I deactivated my twitter account.(hope u still remember me).
To be honest, I always visit this site just for your FF. I am so done with the show and have no interest to see the last few episodes (maybe the last episode). I have read many FFs on Hindi shows for the last 2-3 years. Yours have been one of the best FF ever!!! I have never seen someone work so hard for a FF. Not only you produce a beautiful work by writing, but also increase our interest to read the story through your vms and photo collages. I know its an almost impossible thing to update an episode everyday or early, but I really like how you make VMs to let the readers know about the upcoming track so that we dont have to wait too much.
I wish your FF was the actual show and the actual show was just a FF(even FF's are 1000 times better than the actual show). If they showed the actual show based on your FF, this show would have been very popular and received appreciation. The story is correct, the plot is interesting, all three characters are actually grey(not like the show), the pairing is correct, hatred and love, even your vms are more interesting than the entire episode of the show. That actual show is just screwed itself up with typical story, 2 good and 1 bad character, below average chemistry between the lead. The show was so good in it's first month. You know i think i was the only one happy when ranvir turned out grey cause i thought there is something more in it, and perhaps aanchal's grey shades and true colors or something like that will be shown. Ended up a obsessive lover's story. Even Beyhad made some sense, but this show didnt even make sense.
Elvira you are very talented, and ya sorry for the big comment. God Bless you. Always keep writing like this. And do give the next update asap hehe if not i will be angry, jking jking. Take ur time.
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: SanyaEterna

You just updated and I just PMed you! Telepathy😆

Ok I'll go and read noww!!!!

Wow yaar! Perfect!
Aanchal is upset. Ranveer is heartbroken. And Kabir is happy.
I was so sad when Aanchal was purifying herself, it was brutal for my heart!
And Ranveer, God he's broken beyond repair! I was afraid he was going to kill himself!! Thank God (and you) that he didn't otherwise Aanchal would've followed him to hell or heaven!
Now Kabir thinks that Aanchal will be with him but he doesn't know the intensity of her love for Ranveer. She still loves Ranveer and will always do.
For a change, I'm finally impressed with Mrs Srivastava , lol.
Promo was beautiful! I love HAK (the song). Fits perfectly!
100/100😆



Hello Sanu!:)
Thank you very much for ur review!:)

Aanchal purifying herself most emotional part of this chapter:)
Ranveer very heartbroken...How he will behave right now no one knows:)

lol...I made Mrs.Shrivastava better than in show😆

Glad you liked promo:)
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: randomfancrics

Hi, first of all I am commenting on ur FF after many days. Actually I was really busy plus I am kinda busy with my studies so that's why I didn't comment plus I deactivated my twitter account.(hope u still remember me).
To be honest, I always visit this site just for your FF. I am so done with the show and have no interest to see the last few episodes (maybe the last episode). I have read many FFs on Hindi shows for the last 2-3 years. Yours have been one of the best FF ever!!! I have never seen someone work so hard for a FF. Not only you produce a beautiful work by writing, but also increase our interest to read the story through your vms and photo collages. I know its an almost impossible thing to update an episode everyday or early, but I really like how you make VMs to let the readers know about the upcoming track so that we dont have to wait too much.
I wish your FF was the actual show and the actual show was just a FF(even FF's are 1000 times better than the actual show). If they showed the actual show based on your FF, this show would have been very popular and received appreciation. The story is correct, the plot is interesting, all three characters are actually grey(not like the show), the pairing is correct, hatred and love, even your vms are more interesting than the entire episode of the show. That actual show is just screwed itself up with typical story, 2 good and 1 bad character, below average chemistry between the lead. The show was so good in it's first month. You know i think i was the only one happy when ranvir turned out grey cause i thought there is something more in it, and perhaps aanchal's grey shades and true colors or something like that will be shown. Ended up a obsessive lover's story. Even Beyhad made some sense, but this show didnt even make sense.
Elvira you are very talented, and ya sorry for the big comment. God Bless you. Always keep writing like this. And do give the next update asap hehe if not i will be angry, jking jking. Take ur time.



Hello! Ofcs I remember you!:) Thank you very much for your review about my FF:)

I'm very very glad you love it:)
I'm trying to make everything looks real...Like real show:) So thought to make promos and scenes:)
I'm glad you like everything:)

This show became big shit...They are spoiled everything...They are spoiled very beautiful couple who had a chance to have very beautiful story...I hate haasil makers so much...I just can't stand them. ...But anyways...Show finally ending...

Anyways...Thank you very much for ur comment again:) Hope you will love next chapters too:)
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Posted: 7 years ago
Elviii 🤗

What a heartbreaking yet perfect update 👏

AanVir are in pain..both are miserable without each other...for a moment i thought that Ranvir will do something to himself

Aanchal wanted to purify herself...Her trust has been broken..she wants to fight against a criminal but she is madly in love with that criminal ! this is called angst and a perfect conflict !

Ranvir knows what he did was wrong and yet is helpless coz he is in love with Aanchal

Aww...m AanVir are hurting and they want to be with each other and yet Aanchal is not ready to accept Ranvir coz for her right now he is a murderer

Kabir is happy and thinks that Aanchal will come back to him but he doesn't realize that the only man Aanchal will ever love is Ranvir...Aanchal's hate as well as love, her emotions and she herself belongs to Ranvir now

I detest Mrs. Srivastava in the show but here i am loving her

Elvi I am in love with your promos...U need to tweet them to Haasil makers...they need to learn from u as to what viewers wanted to watch and how this show should have been

Another amazing update

waiting eagerly for the next one

😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
Another very beautiful and heart touching update. Loved it. Elvi ur superb writer. Well done 👏. Love Aanvir ❤️ . Eagerly waiting for next chapter. 👍🏼
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Posted: 7 years ago
There is no love if their is no trust it so sad to see how easy for her to walk away wanted her to confront Ranvir talk it out instead she decided a divorce atleast she could have gone to see him once .
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: anshvi

Elviii 🤗

What a heartbreaking yet perfect update 👏

AanVir are in pain..both are miserable without each other...for a moment i thought that Ranvir will do something to himself

Aanchal wanted to purify herself...Her trust has been broken..she wants to fight against a criminal but she is madly in love with that criminal ! this is called angst and a perfect conflict !

Ranvir knows what he did was wrong and yet is helpless coz he is in love with Aanchal

Aww...m AanVir are hurting and they want to be with each other and yet Aanchal is not ready to accept Ranvir coz for her right now he is a murderer

Kabir is happy and thinks that Aanchal will come back to him but he doesn't realize that the only man Aanchal will ever love is Ranvir...Aanchal's hate as well as love, her emotions and she herself belongs to Ranvir now

I detest Mrs. Srivastava in the show but here i am loving her

Elvi I am in love with your promos...U need to tweet them to Haasil makers...they need to learn from u as to what viewers wanted to watch and how this show should have been

Another amazing update

waiting eagerly for the next one

😊



Hello Anshi!:)
Thank you very much for ur review! Like always I love reading what you guys think:)

AanVir so much in pain...They are hurting each other...They are hurting themself...They are dont know what to do...Lets see what will happen next with them..In next chapter big news for them will come and lets see how they are will react:)

Kabir is happy and he ready to do anything to bring Aanchal back...Whats his next plan...Lets see:)

I'm glad you guys likes promos...I'm triying to give you feelings like its real show:)

Will post next chaopter in few days...I'm just busy...My parents came to me and staying with me right now..so I'm busy now...But I think after 10 march I will post chapters everyday like before:)
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Originally posted by: Rubygill528

Another very beautiful and heart touching update. Loved it. Elvi ur superb writer. Well done 👏. Love Aanvir ❤️ . Eagerly waiting for next chapter. 👍🏼



Thank you very much for your kind words:)
Glad you liked it:)

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