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Hello guys! That's my first FF on Indian Forum and first FF on english. So Im sorry for mistakes. I hope you will like it. đ
[NO COPY]"Black Love"
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PART-1
"Maine kaha tha tujhe...Yeh ladki tujhe barbad karegi...Mujhe pata tha...I knew..
And after some minutes he said...
"Duty?! Kounsa duty?! Kaise duty?! Tum..."
"Mom...You can't change truth. You should accept it. And not only this...Waqt agaya maa..."
"For what?"
"You should bring her back to home."
"Nahi! Jab tak main zinda hoon aisa nahi hoga! I can't see her face! Woh mujhse sab kuch chin liya! Uski waje se mere pati ka maut hogayi! Sirf uski waje se aaj mere dono bete mere saath nahi hai! Uski wajah se hamare khushiya chaligayi! Main unko kabhi maaf nahhi kaarungi!"
"Maa..."
"I don't want listen anything! I still remember the day when this girl first time came in our house with..."
2 years ago. Mumbai. Raichand house.
Someone was screaming.
"Badeee!"
"Badee kaha hai?" - the boy asked servant.
"Pata nahi sir"
"Okay. You can go"
Sarika came on hall.
"Mom. Bade kaha hai?"
"Office mein hoge..."
"Nahi hai maa."
"Strange. Aaj toh monday hai. And he should have been go to office. Anywyas. Tell me what happened?"
"Mom. Tonight one my guest will come and I want you all meet her"
"You talking about..."
She said it with anger in voice.
"Mom. Please. Don't start it again. You never meet her. So you can't judge her without knowing her."
"I don't want know her. I know she is not right girl for you."
"Oh mom...Stop it. Okay. Main chalta hoon. Shaam milte hai"
"But..."
"Bye mom".
"Kya hua?"
"Aaj raat party hai. He want introduce to us his so called girlfriend."
"Finally!"
He said with smile on face.
"Ranvir you know I'm against this relationship."
"I know mom and mujhe saamaj nahi ara hai kyu? Aap toh unko jaante bhi nahi"
"Aur nahi jaana chati hoon!"
"Maa.. Par kyu? Just because she is middle class girl? Mom..She is successful lawyer. Independent girl..."
"Ek minute...Tumhe yeh sab kuch kaise pata hai? Aise lagta hai ke tum usko barso se janta hai..."
"Mom...Kabir..."
"Ranvir I have strange feelings. Main maa hoon"
"Aur main ek bhai hoon and I don't have any bad feels. Please mom. Just once meet her. Maybe you will like her. Accha Kabir kaha hai?"
"Room mein hai"
"Teek hai. "
"Lawyer hai...Iss liye problem hai." [/NO COPY]
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It's romantic thriller with twists and turns. My FF will have both couples and almost all "Haasil" characters. Their characterization almost the same but some changes also there. So lets start. I really hope you will like it.đł
Btw sorry for some cliche dialogues and scenes.đ
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Btw sorry for some cliche dialogues and scenes.đ
Plot: Ranvir and Kabir Raichand. The richest brothers in Mumbai. Ranvir kind, calm, caring, mature man who rule Raichand industry. Everyone loves him and respect him. When Kabir tottaly opposite to his brother. He is impulsive, careless and sometime even dangerous. The only common thing between these two is love. Love for each other. For their family. But what hidden behind their love? Raichands - a mystery family. Kabir have a girlfriend. Aanchal Srivastava. The strong, independent lawyer with her own rules. She looks simple but she is not simple as she looks. The girl with her own mission. What will happen when one day she will enter in Raichand's house? Why she is with Kabir? What will happen when she will meet Ranvir? Will she able to get know Raichand's secrets? Will able brothers save their bonding from this storm? Or love will make them weak? A lot of secrets, mystery, murders, plans, separations, love, hate, pain. The story about 3 strong people.The story about 3 flawless persons. Be ready for BLACK love story.
May 2017. Mumbai. Central prison. In the quiet walls of this place you only car hear the wailing of woman.
"Maine kaha tha tujhe...Yeh ladki tujhe barbad karegi...Mujhe pata tha...I knew..
I always was saying this girl curse for you. See..See what happened with you..With your brother..."
There was dark. The slender, tall young man stood a back to this woman. Suddenly in silence music has played. It was he. He started play on his harmonica.
And after some minutes he said...
"Maa...Jo hogaya woh sahi hai...She just did her work...It was her duty..."
"Duty?! Kounsa duty?! Kaise duty?! Tum..."
"Mom...You can't change truth. You should accept it. And not only this...Waqt agaya maa..."
"For what?"
"You should bring her back to home."
"Nahi! Jab tak main zinda hoon aisa nahi hoga! I can't see her face! Woh mujhse sab kuch chin liya! Uski waje se mere pati ka maut hogayi! Sirf uski waje se aaj mere dono bete mere saath nahi hai! Uski wajah se hamare khushiya chaligayi! Main unko kabhi maaf nahhi kaarungi!"
"Maa..."
"I don't want listen anything! I still remember the day when this girl first time came in our house with..."
"Badeee!"
Someone was screaming.
"Badeee!"
"Badee kaha hai?" - the boy asked servant.
"Pata nahi sir"
"Okay. You can go"
Sarika came on hall.
"Kya hua Kabir? Itne chila tha hai kyu?"
"Mom. Bade kaha hai?"
"Office mein hoge..."
"Nahi hai maa."
"Strange. Aaj toh monday hai. And he should have been go to office. Anywyas. Tell me what happened?"
"Mom. Tonight one my guest will come and I want you all meet her"
"You talking about..."
She said it with anger in voice.
"Mom. Please. Don't start it again. You never meet her. So you can't judge her without knowing her."
"I don't want know her. I know she is not right girl for you."
"Oh mom...Stop it. Okay. Main chalta hoon. Shaam milte hai"
"But..."
"Bye mom".
When Kabir left Sarika was thinking about this girl. She never meet her but she had a strange feelings.
"Hello mom!"
Sarika turned and saw him. It was Ranvir. Her elder son.
"Ranvir...Tum yaha? Kabir was looking for you."
"Kya hua?"
"Aaj raat party hai. He want introduce to us his so called girlfriend."
"Finally!"
He said with smile on face.
"Ranvir you know I'm against this relationship."
"I know mom and mujhe saamaj nahi ara hai kyu? Aap toh unko jaante bhi nahi"
"Aur nahi jaana chati hoon!"
"Maa.. Par kyu? Just because she is middle class girl? Mom..She is successful lawyer. Independent girl..."
"Ek minute...Tumhe yeh sab kuch kaise pata hai? Aise lagta hai ke tum usko barso se janta hai..."
"Mom...Kabir..."
"Ranvir I have strange feelings. Main maa hoon"
"Aur main ek bhai hoon and I don't have any bad feels. Please mom. Just once meet her. Maybe you will like her. Accha Kabir kaha hai?"
"Room mein hai"
"Teek hai. "
Ranvir left to room. Sarika sat on the sofa and started think about Ranvir's words.
"Lawyer hai...Iss liye problem hai." [/NO COPY]
Part -2: Page 3
Part -5: Page 10
Part -14: Page 35
Part -29: Page 75
Part -33: Page 83
Part -34: Page 85
Part -35: Page 88
Part -36: Page 91
Part -37: Page 96
Part -38: Page 99
Part -39: Page 101
Part -40: Page 106
Part -42: Page 111
Part -44: Page 116
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