Ranbir Kanya story after this week!!

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Monday is too far away from me. So I will start my own story. This happens after Ranbir slapped Kanya and she leaves the house. I will start the story and everyone can continue from there, and write the next part of the story. It's like a chain story.

Ranbir and Aditya are walking into the house. They are really happy since they think they got rid of Kanya and Shanta tai.
Aditya: ok ok. Aab haasi baandh kar, nahi to Malika chachi ko shakh ho jayega.
R: oh you are right bhaiya. But one last time. {they both laugh like fools, then they make serious faces and walks into the house}
M: Ranbir.
R: Nahi mom kuch maat kehna. I am sorry. I am sorry ki maine Kanya jaisi itni battemeez ladki se shaadi ki.
M: But Ranbir.
R: [over acting at this point] Mujhe kya maloom tha mera pyar itna ghatia soch ki ho sakti hai.
M: Ranbir mere baat suno.
R: Main janti hoon aap kya kahenge. Yahi na isme tumhara kya kasoor hai? Yeh saab Kanya ki baje se huyi hai. But don't worry mom Main aaj se kabhi uski shakal tak bhi nahi dekhoonga. {pretends to cry on Aditya's shoulder but he is laughing}
M: Mujhe Kanya wapas is ghar mein chahiye.
K: Don't worry mom woh kabhi is ghar mein nahi ayegi.....WAIT kya kaha apne?
M: Kanya is ghar ki lakshmi mein Ranbir. Uske baje se hum aaj barabad hone se bach gaye. Main chahti hoon tum usse wapas le aao.
K: no mom, I can't do that.
M: you have to do that Ranbir. Jao aur Kanya ko lekar aao. Nahi to tum bhi is ghar mein kadam nahi rakhna.
K: Mom....
M: Jao Ranbir.
{nods his head}

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Posted: 17 years ago
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lol that was good..someone continue 😛
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Omg someone continue. I know we have some great writers here. I want to see what we come up with. I know someone on the other post mentioned Ranbir living in Kanya's house. I think that would be so kewl.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey u right a ff
then start right now
anyways good imagination 😊 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
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wow i can actually imagine that happening !!! 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
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lol as no one is writing anything I will cont with the story myself. Maybe tomorrow!!

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