Raaz- Adiza fanfic- UPDATED (part 8 updated on 18/08/18)

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Hi guys!

I'm back with the Adiza fanfiction I had promised you all! And i really think you will like it, well, I really hope you do since I have come to love it a lot. Please comment and like, and tell me what you liked and what you didn't... all is welcome.

But a huge, huge disclaimer- this is completely utterly fictional, and I'm not trying to offend or force the real people nor try to judge their behaviour or actions or personality in real life. I respect anybody I mention, and these are just dreamy imaginations and fictional scenarios and not intended to cause offence or harm.

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Aditi chattered away with Zaan, her adorable nature and hearty giggling had plastered a grin to Zaan's face.

They sat on the sofa together, but Aditi had folded her legs underneath her to maintain a certain distance.

"Aditi kal aap mere saath dinner ke liye aaiye na? We will have tons of fun... just like when you joined us with poonam... Zaan smiled charmingly, but Aditi just returned a polite tight lipped smile.

"Par kal tho inloge ki next BCL match hai na-"

"Tho? Aap tho team mein nahi hai... its just one match. Miss it na? He batted his lashes like a child, but Aditi didn't spare him a smile.

"We'll see... just you and me? She tried to hide the discomfort on her face, twiddling nervously.

"Haan... is that a problem? Zaan seemed offended, but maintained a composed smile.

Yeah, it was a problem. Zain wouldn't like that.

She pulled a smile on to her face, "No Zaan. Of course not.

.

Zain walked in to the sets, panting in exhaustion with the soaked orange team shirt sticking to his body.

Passing the day without seeing her face was difficult. She had wanted to come to cheer him along but she had to shoot all day, and because nobody knew about their relationship she couldn't give the excuse that she wanted to see the match for a day off either.

He sighed with a dreamy smile, at least now he could pick her up and take her home.

He froze.

He felt a painful twinge in his chest at the sight of Zaan and Aditi on the sofa, chatting so at ease. Zaan had an admiring smile on his face as he leant close to Aditi, and Zain stiffened as he immediately spotted it.

His blood boiled.

But he had to control it.

"Hey guys... He tried as hard as he could but his voice still came out strained.

Both of them looked up to face him, and Aditi visibly retreated slightly, recognising the rage in his eyes.

But she ignored him and looked back at Zaan.

"Hey man... Zaan stood up to pat his arm in a friendly manner, and indicated for him to sit down.

Zain flinched at Aditi ignoring him, becoming even more riled up. He sat on the sofa beside her, and she shuffled away.

"How was the match man... Aditi was anxious for you guys... Zaan started up the conversation but Zain could tell he would have rather been with Aditi alone. But Zain warmed up at the thought that Aditi was thinking about him during the day.

Aditi was wedged in the small space between the guys, and he was growing more and more uncomfortable at the small distance between her and Zaan.

Zain held her wrist inconspicuously, and buzz flew through their veins, having their relationship secret made them hungry for touch, each touch felt like the first. He dragged her closer to his side and further from Zaan, practically on to his lap.

"The match went well, we won... How was shooting? Zain returned the pleasant small talk to Zaan but was still tensed up in possesiveness.

"Let go Zain... Aditi whispered under her breath, she looked pissed as she tried to struggle out of his grasp.

"No. He was just as stubborn as her, he wouldn't let his her out of his grasp.

"Shooting was great... and inbetween we got to catch up and spend some quality time together... hai na Aditi? Zaan looked at Aditi, awe filling back in his eyes. Zain wanted peel his eyes out.

"Wow that sounds great... Zain faked a smile.

"Sounds like you had fun without me... He growled in to her ear, gripping to her waist with his hand that was behind her, where no one could see.

"Not as much fun as you were having without me Zain... She spat back, causing him to frown in confusion at what she could have meant.

She pulled away from him, inching toward Zaan. His hands fell loosely at his side, a void filling them as he looked wistfully at Aditi, possesive anger raged inside him as Zaan spoke to her animatedly and she giggled.

He knew nobody could own her beautiful laughter.

But he wanted to be the only one to make her laugh like that.

Anger churned in his gut, and he tried to close his eyes to controll himself. Because when it came to matters about her, his temper was terrifying.

"Maybe I should leave... I think I'm just getting in both of your ways... right Aditi?

She looked at Zain with fiery eyes at his accusatory tone, she looked hurt and that stung him.

"But Aditi was saying- I thought you were here to drop her back home? Zaan seemed innocently confused at what was happening, his gaze going from Zain to Aditi.

In amongst his anger, he felt a slither of guilt, she had been expecting him.

"That wont be needed. Thank you. Her tone was harsh, as she began walking away. Her heart pounded, and her eyes glazed over and she cursed herself for being so emotional. Nothing had happened.

But her heart wanted Zain to stop her.

Zain's lips parted to say something but seeing Zaan's soppy face, his anger returned with a vengeance.

"Aditi wait! He grabbed her hand. Aditi was about to smile, but then sighed silently, hearing Zaan's voice and sensing somebody else's touch rather than Zain's.

Zain clenched his fists, almost shaking at the sight of Zaan holding Aditi.

"Hmm? She looked back at him, trying to hide her dissapointment.

"Shall I drop you instead? The question was well-intentioned but she tensed, considering the options in her head.

She did want to spite Zain... She met eyes with him.

But seeing the anger and hurt in Zain's eyes, she decided against it.

"I'm okay thank you... actually Nalini was going to take me to meet her new boyfriend... She lied through her teeth. She was going to ring Nalini up, and ask her for a lift, she wanted to talk to somebody. Nalini was one of the only ones who knew about their relationship.

"Okay... Zain smiled a little in relief but Zaan seemed dejected.

"Anyway, dont forget to consider our dinner...

Zaan lifted her hand and pressed a small peck against it, it was a gentlemanly gesture and Aditi didn't think much of it except pulling away in slight discomfort.

But Zain's lungs collapsed in his chest, and he felt ill at the pit of his stomach.

...

"Aditi stop! Aditi! Zain yelled out as he tailed behind her in the parking lot.

She ignored him, picking up the pace to loose his trail on her, wrapping her arms around herself from the harsh cold.

"Aditi! He called out again, this time his voice was raw which stopped her in her tracks. Till now he had disguised his voice to avoid suspicion. If he let his real emotion filter through in a public place, then he was really desperate.

He caught up to her, panting in exertion. She looked around at him, her eyes automatically wandering down his body, at the hot way his shirt stuck to his muscular body.

She bit back on her lip, her voice controlled and emotionless, "What do you want? I said I'm going home after meeting with Nalini today...

Wordlessly, he wrapped his jacket tightly around her shoulders.

"You were cold... He didn't meet her eyes but his concern was evident, "I dont want you to get ill...

She looked up at him in wonder, as he cutely focused with his tougue poking out as he carefully zipped up the jacket.

"I know you're not meeting her boyfriend Aditi. She looked at him helplessly, there was nothing she could hide from him.

"But if you're planning on going out with Nalini... don't drink, and don't come back too late... He complained on and on like the overprotective boyfriend he was.

"I don't understand why you give a shit... if you think you can't trust me... She wasn't particularly angry, her voice was soft, defeated, as she turned away.

"Aditi... I don't think that... He grabbed her hand stop her, sighing deeply. "Aditi. Are you going to go with him?

She looked round at him to see hurt eyes that were on the verge of tears, "With who?

She held her ground, pretending to not know whats going on to provoke him.

"Are you going to go to dinner with Zaan, Aditi? His voice rose slightly, hoarse in frustration.

"I'm going to think about it... She shot back, glaring him back in the eye.

Nalini honking her horn broke them out of their conversation, she rolled down her window, smiling at Aditi.

"Come in Adu... we'll have a drink or two... Aditi looked over at Zain, who didn't leave a trace of emotion on his face.

She went and sat inside the passenger seat without a word of protest, Nalini looked up at Zain, "You aren't coming?

Zain sighed in hurt, not hearing Aditi refuse drinks after he had asked her to. He hated this bitterness between them that had come out of nowhere.

"Maybe another time yaar... you two have fun... Don't keep her out too long okay?

"Yes sir! She mock saluted him, before closing her window and driving off.

Leaving Zain watching behind the retreating car with a heavy heart.

...

He lazed on the sofa, sighing in the silence from time to time. He repeatedly pressed the remote as he flicked through the channels half-heartedly, not actually paying attention to whats on the screen.

All he could think about was her saddened eyes. And Zaan's obvious move on her. And her laughing at Zaan's joke. Her considering going out to dinner with him. Her. Her. Her.

Her.

Coincidentally, Naamkarann flashed up on screen and he realised he was actually home early enough for it to be showing on the channel.

He's never had an interest in watching his own work. But she was on the screen.

It was a close up of her face, magnifying her stunning eyes. And he couldn't help but get that gush of feelings in chest, falling in love with her all over again.

He wondered whether he could even blame Zaan... who could resist falling madly in love with her?

He sighed again.

Turning the tv off and staring at the ceiling in the painful silence.

All he wanted was her there beside him.

...

There was a knock on the door and he sprung on to his heels at the speed of light, praying it was her.

And it was.

He opened the door to face her, worn out with tired baggy eyes, and holding his jacket around herself as if she was going to melt away. She looked frail and distraught, he frowned in pain.

He didn't think about it twice, he scooped her in to his warm arms and crushed her to his chest, nuzzling his nose in to the nook of her neck that only he had a right to.

And after reaching his appartment 3 hours ago, this was when he felt he had come back home.

She was home.

She inhaled shakily, as if she was trying to decide whether to cry or not. "I came home early... I didn't drink... just like you told me to...

"I know baby... He kissed her hair with a soft sigh and a sad smile.

"I'm sorry-"

"Hey, He cupped her face gently, looking in to her eyes with a smile of reassurance. "We can talk about it later... okay? I'm just glad your back...

"Hmm... She fell back in to his arms and he held her protectively, rubbing her back.

...

They were sat on the sofa, Aditi curled in to his side with his arms wrapped around her back. Her head laid on his chest as she watched the tom and jerry on tv through half open eyes.

He used to hate tom and jerry. But he came to love it. Because it never ever failed to bring a smile on to her face.

"Adu... He whispered cutely in to her hair, his hot breath tickling her scalp.

"Haan?

"You won't go with him right? He gripped to her hand desperately, fear looming in his voice.

"Where? With who? She smiled slightly at his possessiveness and teased him.

"That guy. The one that practically stole my name and is now trying to steal my girlfriend He pouted like a baby, and Aditi burst out in to laughter.

Zain admired her with sideward grin, this is what he yearned to see, her wide teeth-flashing smile that was the only thing on earth that made him so happy.

"Zaan didn't choose for his name to be one letter different from yours Zain... She sighed at his hopelessness with a small smile.

"But you wont go to dinner with him right? She shook her head at his fear, but her heart thrummed in joy seeing someone who cared for her so ardently.

She pressed her hand to his chest as she leaned up to him, and kissed him softly, lingering against his lips with a smile.

"No... I would never go if you didn't want me to...

"God Aditi... He smiled back, and she suddenly remembered how she had missed it so badly. "You scared me...

She jumped away from with an irritated huff, leaving him looking on at her cluelessly.

"I scared you!? You scared me duffer! She hit him in the arm before reaching over for her phone. She pulled up some pictures and handed it over to him.

He looked down to see the BCL pictures, where the women had their hands on him or was kissing his cheek, or he was kissing theirs.

His mouth dropped open, he looked back up at her to see looking adorable with her cheeks and nose flushed a deep red of anger.

"Aww baba... is this why you were so mad at me? Pagal... He reached over and pulled her cheeks with a affectionate smile, chuckling at her antics.

"Shut up. She shoved his chest, frowning. "You're going to get it from me today Mr. Imam... Look... their hands are all over you...

"Aditi dekh mujhe... He playfully smirked in arrogance, raising his eyebrow. "Who wouldn't want their hands all over a handsome dashing man like me?

"Do you really think arrogance will help you right now Mr Imam... She narrowed her irked eyes at him, and shifted slightly as if getting ready to pounce.

His eyes widened in fear, which was not his fault. His girlfriend could make herself look seriously scary sometimes, "It's not like I could say, get off me I have a girlfriend. They would get suspicious.

"It was just to evade suspicion huh? Look at your smile! You like your on top of the world...

"Well thats why I'm an actor right? He joked, poking her nose.

She sighed, suddenly more serious. He hated her face so crestfallen, "I don't like it Zain.

He held her closer comfortingly with a frown, smelling her hair, he loved its sweet yet spicy scent that suited her so damn well.

He whispered sweetly in to her ear, "What does it matter Aditi? At the end of the day, none of that matters. I'll only ever come back home to you.

She pulled away slightly, smiling playfully, "stop trying to butter me up...

"I'm not! He defended, whining like a child.

"Yeah? Well if that's enough of an excuse, and all such is needed to evade suspicion...

She raised her eyebrow, with challenge in her eyes and a smirk on her lips, "Then how should our picture be? Should I kiss Zaan or should Zaan kiss me... infact why don't we do both...

"Don't you dare even think about it... He muttered, rage coarsing through him.

He pressed a burning kiss against her lips, and she could feel all his love and care and possessiveness flutter in her stomach.

It felt like the first time all over again.

"Only I can kiss you. And you better not kiss anybody but me. Samji? He reprimanded her cutely, his eyes burning with passion.

"Oh... is that so? She smiled teasingly, looping her arms around his neck.

"Yup. He grinned back, biting her bottom lip with relish, making her laugh breathlessly.

"Avni might be Neil's. But Aditi is only mine.


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Mesmerisingly...Beautiful..!! Loved every bit of it..!! Especially the dialogue-writing and the way u potray the emotions is beautiful to read...!! Keep up the good work dear..!!
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Originally posted by: Amayrasharma18

Mesmerisingly...Beautiful..!! Loved every bit of it..!! Especially the dialogue-writing and the way u potray the emotions is beautiful to read...!! Keep up the good work dear..!!



Aww thank you so much, I'm so glad you liked it
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What an imagination sirji 😆honestly it was too good waiting for the next update
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Awesome. Waiting for the next chapter.
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This was outstanding!!!! Please continue if you can.
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Hey guys, I just wanted to thank you all so so so much for all the lovely lovely comments you all leave me because they are genuinely the sweetest ever and I am completely overwhelmed by your love and support and I'm so glad that you all liked it. Please keep on letting me know what you think of it through comments and votes. And also pleae do leave suggestions on what you would like to see happen...

I hope you guys like this one as much as the last.

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Aditi yawned as she woke up, stretching her aching joints. She lightly grazed the blankets around her in confusion, suddenly confused where she was. She sat up and leaned against the headrest, with a hand on her head, looking around with narrowed eyes.

Ah.

It was Zain's bed.

A small smile appeared on her face at the thought of him.

"Zain..."She called out for him, snuggling in to the pillow that smelt so strongly of his musky scent.

She frowned when he didn't reply in that husky morning voice of his.

"Zain?" She dragged herself out of bed, realising that he had made her wear a sweatshirt over the clothes she was wearing yesterday.

She smiled as the warm feeling melted her heart, she walked out of the room in to the living room.

Her heart broke.

He was sleeping on the sofa, curled up like a baby with no blanket and cranked up in an uncomfortable position.

He frowned and whimpered in his sleep like a wounded animal, she rushed to him and kneeled beside the sofa with worry etched on to her face.

She ran her hand through his hair softly, whispering to him gently, "Zain? baby?"

He just groaned in his sleep, shifting slightly, and shuddering as if he was cold.

She held his upper arm as she leaned up to place a tender kiss on his forehead, her tone strained with concern, "Uto Zain... What's wrong baby?"

She frowned as his forehead burnt against her lips, she pulled away to check his temperature against the back of her hand.

He was burning.

"Zain uto... you're burning..." She shook him carefully, panic spreading across her face.

His eyes fluttered half-open, his raspy voice was obviously pained "What's wrong? Are you okay? Did you sleep well?"

"Am I okay!?" She exclaimed, her eyes widening in hysteric irritation. "You're burning baby..."

She squeezes his shoulder lovingly, scanning over him, her voice perplexed, "How are you feeling?"

Zain sighed, shivering with cold, "Not so good... but I had some painkillers in the night..."

"Why didn't you wake me up idiot?" She pouted as she brought back a thermometer.

He gave her a lopsided grin as he watched her awestruck, at the adorable panic on her face as she fussed around him.

"You look so cute when you sleep... mera maan nahi laga..." He murmured in to her face, his breath washing over her nose.

"Shut up... and sit up... come on..." she tried to pull him up, but he grunted in exertion and flopped back on to the bed.

"Please adu... sone do na..." He begged adorably, batting his eyes lashes and pouting with those puppy dog eyes that she couldn't deny.

"You need to go to the doctor baby..." She complained, glowering.

"But my throat hurts, and I'm so cold, and it feel like someones hitting my head with a hammer..." Zain whined like a small child, taking her arm and hugging on to it, making her heart ache.

"Aww baby... I'm sorry..." She played with his hair lovingly, "but that's exactly why you have to go Zain..."

"Its just a viral fever adu... let me sleep..." He pleaded again, and she just couldn't say no to that face.

"Fine." She gave a defeated sigh, "But let me go make you breakfast, and you have to eat it okay? You shouldn't take medicine on an empty stomach..."

"Par-"

"Nahi..." She scolded, making him smile at his caring girlfriend. "No excuses..."

...

"Look Zain... I made your favourite pancakes..." She looked around at him expecting to see his melted brown eyes light up as they always did.

But he just moaned in pain and twisted and turned restlessly on the sofa, which hurt her like a pang to the chest.

"Zain, eat a bit na? Come on... Then you can have a tablet and you will feel a bit better." She tutted at his state as she leant over him.

"I don't want it..." He grumbled, she pulled him up to sit, squeezing in beside him.

"Please baby?" She asked him cutely, fluttering her lashes which played with the strings of his heart.

"I feel too sick..." He groaned, furrowing his eyebrows immaturely. "Stop asking me so cutely... I feel bad refusing..."

He leaned on her chest, his eyes falling closed in the solace of her arms, she tried again, "Are you sure you won't have them for me Zain? Don't they smell nice?"

"Adu..." He warned playfully, making a sneaky smile brighten her face.

"Look I'll tell you what..." She cups his face with her free hand to make him look at her, "One bite of the pancake... one kiss..."

His eyes shone as he looked up at her like a child on Christmas day, "Seriously? Promise?"

She grinned at his absolutely endearing childishness, "Haan. Pakka..."

He smiled up at her gorgeous morning face as she cut the pancake in to small chunks, wondering whether she would ever not look as stunning as she always did. With make up, without make up, laughing or crying.

She looked at him, as if suddenly realising he was staring at her hopelessly, "Jaldi kha lo..."

She fed him a tiny piece, her nimble fingers brushing away the crumbs on his cheek.

"Well?" He asked, raising his eyebrow with a wink.

"What?" She asked, pretending but not being able to pull the smile of her face.

"Where is my kiss?" He asked childishly , melting her heart helplessly.

With a smile she leaned over to press a kiss to his lips, but she bent back a bit in shock as he pulled away, exclaiming, "Hey careful baby... I've got germs... you'll catch it..."

She pouted like a child, disappointment in her eyes, "But then how will I complete my promise?"

"It's okay, don't worry about it baby-"

But suddenly she planted a big wet kiss against his cheek making him grin so widely his teeth must have ached.

But then she ruffled his hair, to which he scrunched up his face in adorable distaste, "Don't touch my hair..."

"Its a mess anyway Zain." She sighed again, chuckling under her breath. He could be relentless in his antics sometimes.

"Hey! My hair is always perfect."

"Whatever. Just have another bite..." She traced his lips with her fingers, as if trying to pry them open.

"I'm full..." He whined, grouching.

"You've only had one bite Zain! How will I give you medicine?" She chided him like he was a school kid, which just made him love her all the more.

"Pleaseee"

"One more bite... one more kiss..."

And like magic... he shut up. The sulk vanished from his face and he eagerly opened up his mouth for her to feed him.

She smiled, feeding him the next bite and attacking his other cheek with a sweet kiss.

...

"Okay... I'm sorry baby..." She tried to peel away from the tight grip he had on her waist as they cuddled together on the sofa while Zain was trying to sleep, his head resting on her heart. "But its my call time... I have to go to set..."

"Don't go today na..." He tugged her back in to his arms, nestling her in to his chest.

"If we both don't show up? Wouldn't that be odd? Suspicious?"

"Then I'll come with you..." He murmured, his lazy grumble grazing her collar bone.

"Are you mad?" She hit him gently, trying to wriggle out of his grip.

"Yes I'm mad. Madly in love with you..." He pressed a kiss to her forehead and she hit his shoulder, hiding her smile under a look of disgust at his cheesy line.

"Stop with the cheesy lines, its only for a couple of hours, let me go jaan..." She pleaded with him reasonably but his grip didnt get any looser. He clutched to her as if his life depended on it, nuzzling his tired head in to the crevice of her neck.

"Do you think I'm crazy to let you go to shoot with Zaan yourself again? That bas***d is going to make a move on you and I won't be there to do anything about it." He got riled up, straightening with fisted hands and a growl.


"Zain... Calm down..." She rubbed his back with reassurance, "He won't try anything..."

"If he f*cking tries anything... I'm telling you-" He spoke through gritted teeth, his jaw clenched.

"He's not a bad guy baby... I'll be fine..." She pressed her lips against the pulse on his neck, making his eyes close in its sensation. "You can't say anything to him. Everybody will find out about us..."


"Why can't everybody just find out!" He yelled in hopeless frustration, still raging at yesterday's events. The thought of Zaan looking at her in so much awe was imprinted in his mind like a nightmare.


"Come on Zain... you know we can't do that..." There was a break in her voice, as it saddened, which he couldn't bear. He couldn't stand her moistening eyes.

"I know... we won't tell anyone, I promise..." He pulled her against him tightly, laying her head against his chest and cacooning her in his arms, his voice was pained. "I'm sorry baby... please... don't get upset..."

He smiled slightly, resting his cheek on top of her head as he inhaled deeply, taking in her addictive scent all over again, "Mein bus poore duniya ko meri daulat dikhana chata hu..." (I want to show the whole world my wealth)

She shoved him away lightly, a tiny smile gracing her glowing face, "Don't try Neil Khanna lines on me mister... they won't work... I'm going to set now... okay?"

"Aditi-"

"Zain." She shot him down directly as she stood up, and he weakened innocently at her fierceness.

With an affectionate smile, she leaned down, pressing a peck to his lips, it didn't need any words to explain the feeling behind it but she gave it words anyway, whispering softly, "I'll be fine, I promise..."

"Stay away from him okay?" He murmured against her lips, tickling them.

"Zain. Leave it." She sighed, running her hand lazily through his hair. "It's always you. Its always going to be you... "

"Now let go, I'm going to be late..."

He smiled in relief, his grasp around her middle was tight, "I dont want to let you go just yet..."

"I'll be back before you know it..."

He leaned over and captured her lips urgently again, reluctant to let her leave.

"Zain... sleep now...okay?" She pulled away and stood up again and he sighed in defeat, letting go and laying back on the sofa with a huff.

She grinned at his childness, pressing a kiss to his head before picking up her keys and leaving through the back door instead, so nobody could see her leaving his flat.

...


After a few scenes she sat and finally got to enjoy the freshness of water running down her sore throat. Screaming for so long hurt, really hurt.

But she couldn't sit still, fiddling with her fingers and twiddling her toes.

She just worried about him constantly, whether he felt any better, whether he couldn't sleep, whether his fever had gotten worse, whether he needed medicine or any help.

She wanted to go back to him.

With a sigh she switched on her phone, scrolling through the instagram to calm her invading thoughts. A small smile lingered on her face as she looked at all the pictures of her and Zain that their fans had posted. They tried to hide their relationship, but some feelings can't ever be hidden, she stared at it longingly.

But then like a car crash...

Her heart fell to the pit of her stomach.

The comments.

'How can you imagine her with Zain? She's so fat. Zain deserves better.'

'This girl used to be so pretty. But how could Zain find her attractive now?'

'How is she a heroine? She should seriously lose some weight. Its lazy and disgusting. Zain shouldn't have to cope with a costar looking like this.'

It hurt like hell.

She swallowed the lump in her throat, her eyes falling shut. Tears flowing down her cheeks.

Zain would have been furious if he had seen the comments, or her so upset.

But yes. She wasn't taking good care of herself nowadays, the nature of her work never allowed to eat proper food, or take time out to go to the gym. She was worn to her last bone.

She had gotten out of that relationship of hell, where her ex would repeatedly belittle her for the way she looked. Force her to go to the gym and eat small meals. But Zain never put any demands or restraints on her, infact fed her with all her favourite foods to make her happy.

But now she was like this. Feeling fat. And ugly.

She knew he deserved better.

She felt guilty that he had to cope with her broken unattractive self.

She never understood what he saw in her.


She sighed shakily, looking down at the cereal bar she had clutched in her hand to eat during the break because she had forgotten to eat breakfast in the midst of looking after Zain. She looked over the bar, the comments emblazoned on her mind. She flipped it over, reading through the amount of calories and fat content.

She decided against it.

She'd lost her appetite.

She chucked it in the bin, before returning to the shoot.

...

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Mind blowing update . Thanks for updating.
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