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hi all its i think last year geet celebration ki os hai ...




so jinhone pada hai ..dont get confused and jinhone nahi



they go ahead and read it ...
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part one



She remove her pyaal her all jewelers the bangles so her shadow also don't hear a sound of her walk or existence ..today she is fear as women ..it's no matter to her that form which country she belong ..is her country is right or not but today she want to be treat as human and save her dignity today her gender her feminism is biggest weight biggest burden of life .log koi bhi ho they r going to attack and hurt a women inside her which r going to a living death for her.she is belong to any country it's not her choice it's her birth ..where she took first breath ..

Someone fight for name of country , someone fight for religion, someone fight for power and someone fight for money but whether they ask to person what she need what she want ..they all fighting for them na than why there opinion is not IMP..they don't want this war , terror which is governing their life like big black shawo ,...jaha padai...khana .house ye need hai waha war ku jarrori hai ...and ye kaisi jang hai jo ...unka aman ,unki like unki dignity mang rahi hai ...kya suicide karna is way for her to save her dignity but why she have to sacrafised her life for someone so called war ,they don't took permission from her for war than why should she scarified her life for them why ..

So many thoughts roaming in geet brain she feel like her brain will be burst in any moment.she cover her face with duppata ..she hold her breath as she hear some footstep..it's coming closed and closed.. at last she stop to took breath ..she heard footstep its must be a shoes ..may be police or army person ..she pray its should be her side person but next moment her brain ..is they save her or use her to satisfied their hunger ..her soul shake for while with qus..yes man r man ..who give the guarantee ..

She is stuck now if she make any moment it will took their attention ..and if she will be not than ..may be she will safe or...or ...

And next moment before she run away or took any decision she is pull by force and next moment she land on floor a dirty floor ...

She open her eyes with fear and there she found 3,4 person is around her with full of guns and all ..their eyes start to turn with hate ness and lust geet hand went to knife which she hide in her dress ...she thought time is come to finish herself...she will not going to give her dignity no never ..

One man who cover with balck clolor face start to approach her ..to touch her ..geet hold tighten on knife ..before she cut her hand ...with knife someone stand between her and that man ..that man back is her side she could not saw his face ..but his word give her some hope that she will not get ruined or kill on name of war ..

That person voice have such aroma that could put scared to other

U r not going to touch her ..

That bad man - who give u authority to give order to your superior officer mr.xyz ...

Man he answer with calm yet authority voice The army law give me authority that to protect innocent I have right to stop or order to my superior authority ...and sir I am not any XYZ I am commando Maan singh Khurana vikram sir ...he say with full pride ..

Vikram - camando u r new here and yaha mera law chalata hai ...waise bhi what if she belonging to that anemy so ...

MSK - vikram sir if she belong to them we will send her to her place ..which is said my our army law sir ...

Vikram - mr msk I already say yaha sirf mere rules chalet hai ..

Msk - in that condition u have to fight with me ..sir ...maan say in loud voice ...

Vikram pull his gun and put that on maan forehead ...but other stop vikram ..to shoot bullet they pull that gun from him...

Other don't vikram ..he is not that smiple ...

Vikram - msk now u have to save her from me ...if u go little bit away from her than she would be my ...u know na what am I saying vikram say with full devil grin ..

Maan only nodded ...once vickram look to her and went away from them with his men ...

Other side geet took deep breath .

Maan turn to her ...but he also have black color on his place geet open her mouth to say something but maan cut her no need of thanks and ect ,ect we have to go out from this area...first he will come back again and every time I can not save u so move ...hurry..up .

Geet try to get up from floor but accidently she push to knife and her palm get cut with she hissed in pain..but that's not loudly so maan don't get any idea of her ... situation .

They both r middle of jungle and first they have to come out from it..maan once again saw her who struggling for stand up ..He feel like what the hell , why she is wasting such time ! he took some steps to make her stand but before that she somehow stand on her feet. maan hardly say come now start to walk behind me..

Geet feel so much pain on palm which get cut because of knife , but she don't have courage to stop him or say something to him ,He is right they have to come out from this place else..her soul shake with just thought ..she clutch her palm so blood get stop and took long steps behind maan ...she almost running ..

After and half hour Maan stop when he found water fall ..he also feel thirsty ..once he look back found her breathless ..

Maan - we stop hear for while drink some water ..

Geet took deep breath she really need that ...she somehow took control on her breath than went near waterfall and first clean her palm ..a soft cry come out from her mouth ..which took attention of maan he bend little and saw a cut on her palm ...don't know when his leg took him to near her and he took her hand in his hand ..which make shutter geet ...she found odd ..with maan touch till now she is not get touch with man...

And few hour incidence make her more scare she took some steps backside ..maan saw a fear in that beautiful almond shape eyes ..Where innocent and fear both emotions oozing out from it.

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part 2





Maan turn to her ...but he also have black color on his place geet open her mouth to say something but maan cut her no need of thanks and ect ,ect we have to go out from this area...first he will come back again and every time I can not save u so move ...hurry..up .

Geet try to get up from floor but accidently she push to knife and her palm get cut with she hissed in pain..but that's not loudly so maan don't get any idea of her ... situation .

They both r middle of jungle and first they have to come out from it..maan once again saw her who struggling for stand up ..He feel like what the hell , why she is wasting such time ! he took some steps to make her stand but before that she somehow stand on her feet. maan hardly say come now start to walk behind me..

Geet feel so much pain on palm which get cut because of knife , but she don't have courage to stop him or say something to him ,He is right they have to come out from this place else..her soul shake with just thought ..she clutch her palm so blood get stop and took long steps behind maan ...she almost running ..

After and half hour Maan stop when he found water fall ..he also feel thirsty ..once he look back found her breathless ..

Maan - we stop hear for while drink some water ..

Geet took deep breath she really need that ...she somehow took control on her breath than went near waterfall and first clean her palm ..a soft cry come out from her mouth ..which took attention of maan he bend little and saw a cut on her palm ...don't know when his leg took him to near her and he took her hand in his hand ..which make shutter geet ...she found odd ..with maan touch till now she is not get touch with man...

And few hour incidence make her more scare she took some steps backside ..maan saw a fear in that beautiful almond shape eyes ..Where innocent and fear both emotions oozing out from it.

Maan took deep breath he don't want to scare her ..he don't want to come near her but when he saw cut on her palm don't know why he could not stop himself ..he mummer sorry ..but your hand need medicine .. he don't want to make her uncomfortable ..he remove his bag from his back and offer first aid box..

Other side geet took deep sine when she found his softness and gentleness ...with shaking hand she took that first aid box ..she got cut on her right hand ...she first clean her palm than she try to applied detol on it with left hand but ..she having difficulty ...

Maan again push his hand to hold her hand ...but she pull back her hand ..now that hit maan ego ...he scold her ...stop your all antic ...if I want to misbehave u than tabhi karata ..when they all ready to abuse u ..i just want to help u ..girl ..with that he forcibly took her palm in his hand and applied some detole which brought tear in her beautiful eyes ..she bite her lips to stop her moan ..her cry...some tear fall on maan hand and he look to her don't know why but he feel pain in his heart with her tear ..

Maan - bus thodi der than u will feel ok ...geet again get surprise with his softness and care..she nodded ...

Maan smile on her reasons and ask r u mute ...u c an not talk kya ...

On that geet imm replay no no aisa kuch nahi hai wo hum apse dar gaye the...so

Maan chuckle on her response and she get he is pulling her leg she once look to upper side and mummer something maan amazed with her action ...but same time he heard some voice ...he imm push geet to back side of tree ..and put his palm on her mouth to stop her voice because ..his sudden action ..make her shelter and she try to cried in fear ... maan bend little to her . and mummer ..please don't make any noise someone coming this side...maan hot breath falling ...on her face and smoothing missed in her heart ...she almost lost in his mainly voice and feature thou till she could not saw his face yet clearly because of that black color but ...his structure could not hide also.

Noise of Foot step start to come very close to them both almost stop to took breath and their eyes glued on that direction itself ...and someone come out form that bushes ...and both souls eyes winded in shock and next moment ...maan feel like ye kya hai ...he took back his palm form her mouth and next moment her giggle sound ..spread in that place ...

Maan also could not hold his smile and laugh with her...its small kitten who come out from bushes ... maan once look to her and like the spark of her eyes which a smile brought in it ..pain and scare disappear from them...now he really want to see her glimps of her face .. just once time ...

Maan got shock with his own thought .he took deep breath and say in strain voice ..come on we have to move on before its get more dark . geet scare with his sudden change in talk ..she mummer sorry and start to follow him .maan scold himself in mind to behave like this but her frustration with himself why he want to see her face ..in first place ..till now so many beautiful women and girl try to woo him but he never give chance to anyone ..but this girl he only saw he eyes which gave so much impact on his heart .he took fast steps in frustration and his own thinking and poor geet fail to match his speed of walk ..

After 5 min maan feel so silence around him ...his heart beat skip for while he turn and froze in his place ..that girl is not behind him...sweat appear on his forehead ..but he somehow control his mind and start search her ..he cannot make noise else any type of enemy get alert and upon that he don't know her name ,he though for while is she scare with his behavior or any other problem ...god Ye ladki muje pagal kar degi ...he took small steps ..to find her he come back to some distuence and there he found her ..her back to maan ..

Maan fear that he lost her make him more angry and he march to her and turn her harshly ...with shoulder ...but in this process her duppata come out which she wrap around her face ..and maan forget to took breath...he is so lost in her beautiful yet innocent face...other side geet gasp with maan sudden act its so sudden ..

She is looking to him with her teary beautiful eyes maan heart arch with her tear he took his hand to clear tear but stop in middle ..

He come out from his daze stage and say dam it why u stop hear ...she took to step back with his angry tone ...

Maan ask one more time girl ans me ..

Geet - wo app abhot tej chal rahe thea I try to match your speed but can not and pitche reh gai sachi she pinch her neck like small kid ..

Maan don't know how to react ..is he have to be angry or happy ...

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part third and last one

Maan - thanks for saving my life ..but now I ma thinking its danger to move ...its turn dark so we have stay hear ...at night ...

Geet nodded in yes and closed her eyes she is hell tired with all day event ..its stressful to her body as well as mind...

She need brake ...to stop this man effect on her ...she feel small fever in her body ..her injurer start to get infection and fever is result of that ...if her fever increased than its become hard in this jungle ..she mummer please no fever please no ..i don't want to make him more suffer for me please ...its make this situation verse ...but destiny smile on geet talk destiny know what she all ready write for this two souls ...don't know when geet closed her eyes ..in tiredness .

Other side maan whose heart and mind fighting with each other for his attraction to that girl. He very well know they r cannot be each other ..he have so much control on his mind but today why his mind ..and heart not lessoning to him why he is feel so helpless so much attraction to her which is wrong ...with so much thought he also slip in sleep ...

Maan sleep broke with soft voice of painful moan he get alert with such sound and he almost run to geet side with fear ..that thought ...what happen to her ...he found she is crying in sleep itself ...he try to t ouch her with his palm but stop in midway ..he remind her reaction when before some ..time . he stop his plam and try to call her but ...big q he don't know her name

Maan mummer u r impossible maan now how in earth u going to called her ..same time he saw her shaking and maan forget all things and touch her shoulder ...and try to wake up her first he thought that she is watching any bad dream but when he touch her got that she having fever and because of that her body shaking like that . just than his hand touch her wounded hand and painful moan come out from her mouth ...maan look to wounded hand and found some swelling on it .

Maan got that she get fever because of wound ... he put her softly on ground .and took his first aid ..he again clean her wound and applied some cream on it...than he took of her duppata from head and clean her forehead and face with wet cloth ..but still her body shaking in fever .which is not good he have to do something ...else she start to drop her body heat which is not good for her .

Maan hand start to turn cold with thought ..its not first time he facing such thing but this time a emotions of heart making its difficult for him.he took deep breath and start to carsed her toe so she get some body heat but ..her body start to turn more and more cold ...

Maan took her head on his leg and called d please wakeup ...wakeup I could not forgive myself if something happen to u please wake up ..but don't get any response from her .at last he put her head down and took his bag and pull out his sleeping bag... He give her some medicine and put geet in it than with so much thought he slip near her ...he know my be he get accused when she get her hosh but ..he is doing what is best for her ...he is ready to took all allegation and all but her life her health is more imp .

Geet ..in unconsiunce mind feel that someone clean her wound than ..someone is closed to her she so much try to open her eyes but all went vest she don't even open her eyes once ...she again slip in sleep ...nd after hour or two hour ...she feel weight on her body ...she slowly open her eyes and try to remind where she was ...than full days event passed from her mind ...she found something or say someone is close d to her very closed to her ...actually she is in someone arm a ground slip from her feet ...she wriggle in her that tight hug..but no use that grip is like iron ..she once look to person ..both body glued to each other like two pieces of puzzle..

Her eyes fall on that person face and she forget to took breath they r in sleeping bag where they have little much space upon his tight hug its making more and more hard . she at last stop her wriggle and start to wait to his wake up ..

After few min maan wake up with jerk he is in still in that thought about her that she is unwell ..he ask in fear please wake up please open your eyes now u scaring me like hell please ..

She slowly open her dow shape eyes and mummer shant ho jaiye ...main thik hu bhkar chala gaya please don't u worry ...

Maan feel like he was on top of world . he got life back ..in that feeling itself he hug her tightly and mummer u scare me ...meri jaan nkal gai thi ...he almost kiss her on her forehead when he got what he doing in ..happiness ..

He shut his eyes ..mummer what the hell u r doing ...

He shutter for while now he is more than 100% sure she is going to accused him..he wait for her bad word ..

Geet - who get with his face emotions that he regretting for his act .

Geet softly say - humko bahar aana hai slipping bagse

Maan open his eyes and nodded than he come out from hug and make some space so she come out from the sleeping bag.

She again cover her head with duppata like she always wear than turn to maan and say ..thanks for saving my life

Maan who all ready to lesion all accuse ...get shock with her talk ..

I know I have habbit ki thodisi chot ke baad bhi fever ho jata hai and body temprachur gir jata hai so I know ..that u r closed to me to save my life ...

Maan took deep breath a soft smile appear on his face ..which took breath away from geet he looking so smart with that smile ...

geet so much want to touch his face but her brain stopping her to do so. And next nature start to took big exam of maaneet which is going to test their self ..control as well as love both soul who stopping them self with a though that they belonging to enemy country .

Before they save themselves ..rain drench them in few second ..both from toe to head get drench in rain ..geet dress glued to her body like second skin and other side geet cannot tore her gaze from maan wet handsome attired in rain.

Maan once look in geet and lost his all thinking and all ...thought his heart only saying she is your only yours .same thoughts spread in geet heart also .her eyes start to feel with her heart and helpness ..she can not accept what is her heart saying to her ..

Rain stop ...and fog start appear there ...maaneet who is standing little bit away from each other ...they feel like there soul come out from body and start to take slow step to each other ..with giving them smile like saying u stop your body and mind but do ruho ko ek hone se to kudrat bhi nahi rok sakati

Geet soul went to maan hug ...like their heart singing lag ja gale ...geet first touch to maan heart with her soft and shking heart than she kiss to him on his heart ...her simple act give all her heart word to maan that she accepted his unspoken love ..maan tight his grip around geet ...

lag ja gale ki phir ye hasin raat ho na ho

shaayad phir is janam men mulaaqaat ho na ho

lag jaa gale se ...

maan once look geet with so much love and kiss on forehead than slowly took off her duppata from her which is always irritating him...duppatta fall from her head to their legs ...geet suddenly feel so much shy without duppata ..she turn to other side and hide her front with her hand a read hu appear on her cheek .

maan smile on geet reaction and come around to her and blow a air to her eye...like demanding her to open her eyes ...that hot blow from maan mouth make shake geet ...she feel all Goosebumps on her body.maan little bend to geet and pick her redish cheek with so much love and ...geet open her eyes with shock its her first kiss na na pick ...next seond her eyes start feel with tears because she know its for while uska sath kuch pal ke liye hai than they have to parted with each other ..they got this time because of destiny ..

geet took bold step and she took out her hand from front and maan gasp with her beauty and her tear ..he drink her tear with his shaking lips he know that what is she thinking ye Milan ki baad ki judai ...going to make them...incense they even don't know even they going to meet again or not .

ham ko mili hain aaj, ye ghadiyaan nasib se

ji bhar ke dekh lijiye ham ko qarib se

phir aap ke nasib men ye baat ho na ho

phir is janam men mulaaqaat ho na ho

lag ja gale ki phir ye hasin raat ho na ho

maan took few step back with thought that is he doing right or wrong ..its not going to easy to face her family and all ...geet get little bit hurt with his action but she know that he is thinking about her only ..she took maan plam in her plam and put that on her thudding heart ..her action say all things to maan that maan ki geet to maan ke liye kcuh bhi karne ko tyyar (ready)hai.

paas aaiye ki ham nahin aaenge baar-baar

baahen gale men daal ke ham ro le zaar-zaar

aankhon se phir ye pyaar ki barasaat ho na ho

shaayad phir is janam men mulaaqaat ho na ho

her eyes spiking to him please lesions to your heart and forget all things ...because she can not come again again to him..dont know in this life they able to meet each other ...they have so much distance in them distance of country, religion and hateness ..lakir jo kisine kitch di hai un dono ke country main.

lag ja gale ki phir ye hassin raat ho na ho

shaayad phir is janam men mulaaqaat ho na ho

lag ja gale ki phir ye hassin raat ho na ho

next moment maan closed the distance between two lips ...which is going to change their destiny ...geet start to melt in arm ,love of her maan.

Same time someone shake her with shoulder ...kuch kha lo beta ...tumko jarrurat hai u need it ...

Geet with teary eyes look to that lady who taking her care from last 6 month ...geet hand reach to her baby bump who start to see now..her eyes again start to feel with tear ..tear of agony tear of her lost ...she nodded and come out from that small house and went near a small plant where a small ...name is written on white stone ...Late ..Maan singh khurana...

Geet who got and lost her love ,life in same day when they wake after became one in all sense .maan took her in hug and mummer we have to run from hear ...to my house side ...and both start to walk but destiny play next card and ...both become target of both side army near LOC in darkness and maaneet fail in deep river ...when she got her hosh she found herself in this small house with that women who become her mother now...geet may kill herself that time if she don't get about baby ..baby of maaneet.

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Beautiful story with sad end...
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Mummy. Rola rahi Hai
War I hate this word
Only brought destruction
Maan man of principle saved a woman diginity
Yeh sad ending achi nahi lagti
Mummy yyy
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Posted: 7 years ago
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I remember this OS
Fantastic yet Sad at the end
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Posted: 7 years ago
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I read this story before...very sad one...loved Maaneet moments...thank u 4 pm...

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