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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: preyasekar

geet is talking maturely will maan understand?
nice teaser dear



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Hope he understand her 😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Khushibloom

Will be waiting for the update



Will update soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Khushibloom

Nice teaser

Hmm good going geet
Let's see if he understands you



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Let see does he understand her concern😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: sanum23

Nice tsr

Maan will understand hr concern


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Let see will he understand her 😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Humsafar
Part. 10.

M. Prem we should play also it doesn't hurt elders am I right (Prem slowly nodded his head then he left down not before looking at Geet who was still holding Prem hand also little shock seeing him angry then she make him clam as she can see Prem is scared after few minutes she ask him.

G. Prem what happen Bacha and why your dad is angry on you (Prem hug her and tell her.

P. Mama I was sitting on nano back as he become my horse and dada saw he angry on me (he said this while making crying face but then cupped his face also clear his tears and said him.

G. No baby dada is not angry as you are big boy also nano is having legs pain so that's why dada get angry so now give mama smile and in no time dada will be fine okk (Prem give her smile and they went down, there she saw Maan was holding Pari also her father was no where, Prem went toward Maan held his ears Maan smile at her him also hug him. Geet smile at them then she set the things till then her father also come all had dinner and he left home while taking his family with him.

It was night time Maan was in his room working on file, Geet was down helping Ridhima and Prena in some work but her thoughts were on Maan and Prem talk, later she went to her room where she saw Maan was doing work, Pari was sleeping in cot and Prem was sleeping in the centre of bed, she went and kept the Pari milk on side table also sit on the bed. Maan was busy in his work but got distract from his work when he hear room door being open also he hear payal voice and he know who will be, he turn to her side where he saw she covering Prem with quilt then look at Pari, he smile at her and continue his work. After few minutes his eyes fell on the file, he remember something and look at Geet who was playing with her bangles and he ask her.

M. Geet if you want you can close the lights I don't have problem just on this one which is above me (listening his voice she look at him and said him.
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G. Nahin I don't have any problem it's just that I want to talk with you, you get free I can wait (she said while giving him small smile, Maan kept the file and look at her and when she saw him like this she understands that he want her to continue so she said him slowly) Maan I just want to say that Prem is small also he get scared early I know you love him a lot but you were really hard on him for few minutes as he was really scared also hurt that you are angry on him (Maan understand what she is trying to say so he call her.

M. Geet I know what you are trying to say but I don't want that all that love make him something is future which I can't accept it (Geet was confused listening to this but then she come and sit in-front of him and said him.
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G. Maan I just want to say you one things that from the time I met Prem I know that one thing he is our son not anyone else also in future he will be like you not like any other person whom you don't like (Maan look at her who was giving him small smile and saying this she was going but then Maan call her.

M. Geet (she turn to him who was also giving her small smile and said her) thank you also I need your signature on these papers (he while while showing some papers to her, in which she took from him and signed it without reading it, seeing this Maan was shock and he ask her) Geet why you didn't read the papers (she look at him then said him.

G. Maan I don't have anything which you can take but I have given myself to you and this family when we got married also like each relationship trust is important and I trust you (Maan was happy listening to her, then he said her.

M. Geet these are adopting papers in which I will be the legally father of Pari and like you I will have equal right our children also now I will be her father (listening to this Geet was happy also she had tears in her eyes and Maan also saw the happiness on her face, he also give her small smile it make her happy and she went to sleep but Maan was in his thought) I did this for Prem happiness but I can also see the love that you have for Prem as you also love him like Pari and one thing I know that now Pari is also my daughter and I will equal love like I love Prem (he closed the file then went go sleep in the bed as he was tired.

It was late night when Geet woke up because of Pari who was crying, she pick her and look Maan and Prem were sleeping peacefully so she took her to balcony where she feed her but Pari was in mood to play and after many attempts she give her milk then after few minutes she slept, Geet took her to room and make her lay on the bed and she also slept not before coving Maan and Prem who were sleeping without having any quilt but Maan was awake when he hear Pari weeping voice also he felt good when she put quilt on Prem and also on him then he also slept.

Next morning Geet was the one who get up, she immediately get fresh and doing make up when Maan woke up and his eyes felt on Geet who was getting reach also he kept looking at her but then he come out of his thought went Prem accidentally put his hand on his hand, he look away from her then kept his hand on his face.

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Posted: 7 years ago
#97
Thank you friends who like & commented on previous part
Enjoy the update
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Posted: 7 years ago
#98
nic pt
geet make maan understand
that dont became so strik with pram
maan adopte pari leggly
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Posted: 7 years ago
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nice
so geet try to make maan understand
geet also fully trust on maan
maan observing geet
he feel happy after geet trust on him
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Posted: 7 years ago
Nice update
Liked it!!
Geet makes Maan understand Prem's mindset and prespective. Maan was scared that in future prem may turn out to be indifferent but Geet assures him. Maan gets Geet's signature in adopting papers and wants to shower his love and warmth for pari equally.
Thanks for the pm!
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