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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: -secretlove-

I am loving your story more and more. I like the fact that prem is such a gentleman. Both are shy just like they were in the show and i like that. Although prem ji and heer ji sounds very formal but it is understood as both of them are very shy but also have respect for one another. Daljeet as usual is hatable with her snobish attitude. Thanks for the update. Continue soon :)

Thanks for your long comment Trisha. Yes, Prem -Heer are modest and shy in nature. I think they are a match that is made in haven.
I will try to update soon.
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Posted: 7 years ago
That was such a beautiful amazing update
Premeer convo and their scene was very lovely.love the way.they were holding each other hands without even realizing.
Glad prem stand for heer and give reply to daljeet taunting
I loved it The way they could feel each other's emotions through their voice. That part was very beautifully written love the song u choose.
Preet and meher scene was very nice too
Waiting for the next part
Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: preciousrose26

That was such a beautiful amazing update
Premeer convo and their scene was very lovely.love the way.they were holding each other hands without even realizing.
Glad prem stand for heer and give reply to daljeet taunting
I loved it The way they could feel each other's emotions through their voice. That part was very beautifully written love the song u choose.
Preet and meher scene was very nice too
Waiting for the next part

Thanks for liking the scenes. Prem Heer will always support each other. They are already feeling a pull towards each other. Lets see how they will face various obstacles together.
Meet will also have a very romantic journey in this chapter.
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Posted: 7 years ago
wow what an amazing part
loved it
love premeer sceans
and Meet convo
beautiful writen
thanks for the PM :)
Waiting for next part
Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: tarannum6

wow what an amazing part
loved it
love premeer sceans
and Meet convo
beautiful writen
thanks for the PM :)
Waiting for next part

Thanks for your comment sister.
I will try to update soon.
Posted: 7 years ago
Next chapter within an hour
Posted: 7 years ago

You are my destiny

Chapter 10

Meher, Geet, Veera understood that Prem and Heer's marriage occurred in abnormal circumstances, therefore, they did not steal shoes of Prem, and they were also planning not to demand money when Prem would enter into the room of Heer.

However, at the same time they wanted to make the environment lighter. Therefore, they decided to tease Heer a little.

"Didi kya baat hein aaj ke baad to aap ko ye room share karni padegi Prem jiju ke saat, pichle bara -tera saal se aap iss room mein ekele so rahe the aab to ye badalne wale hein." Meher teased Heer.

"Mujhe to Prem jiju ki chinta ho rahi hein. Didi apne room ko leke bahut conservative aur sensative hein. Unko har chease organise tadike se karne ki addat hein. Room ko hamesha neat and clean dekne ki unki aadat hein. Prem jiju itne saal bachelor the, mujhe dar hein unko didi jaisa itna organised tadkie se kam karne ki addat nahi honge aur didi iss liye unse bahut gussa ho jayegi." Geet join with Meher in teasing of Heer.

Heer was feeling little shy after listening all of these teasing from Meher and Geet. Yes, she thought about that angle too. From today, she would share everything with her husband just as if Prem would share his everything with her.

To make that whole sharing process work, it needed mutual understanding, respect, and compromise. Heer was hoping that, she would be able to communicate effectively with her husband.

She was still feeling anxious about her future but after her brief conversation with him before their singing erase some of her anxiety.

Heer could sense that, Prem was an open-minded person who was willing to give their relationship a chance. She could sense that, Prem would be a reliable person.

Nevertheless, Heer really did not know how Prem would react to her somewhat obsession with clean state of room and her tendency of keeping everything of her room in an organized way.

"Ha Meher, Geet mujhe to meri Prem bhayia ke liye chinta ho rahi hein, bhabi ji black belt hein kya pata aaj raat unhone bhaiya ke upar isska demo dekha diya to." Veera teased Heer.

" Tum sab bhi na, bahut sarahati ho gayi ho, aab jao yaha sein aur meri bahu ko tang karna band karo." Gayetri scolded the girls for teasing Heer.

"Kya baat hein maa, aap abhi se apni bahu ke side le rahe hein. Lagta hein ghar mein aap dono ka to jamdar alliance hogi."Veera remarked.

"Ha, bua aur didi ka alliance to bahut takadar hoga, sara ghar ko ye dono samalege aur kyunki saas bhi kabhi bahu thi gayengi." Meher commented.

Both Meher and Veera realized that they should not have made checky comment as Gayetri hold ear of both Meher and Veera.

"Bahut badmash ho gaye ho, tum dono, aab jao tum log mujhe meri bahu se ekele mein baat karne hein." Gayetri told girls to leave her alone with Heer.

Soon, the girls left the room and Gayetri became alone with Heer in the room.

Heer came from her bed and touched the feets of Gayetri.

"Jeete raho bete, Heer mein teri bua hone ki nate janti hu ki tu bahut hi acche ladki hu, aur mein ye bhi janti hu halat jo bhi ho tu aapne taraf se ye rishta ko nibhane ke liye puri koshish karegi.

Heer, mein Prem ki badi maa hu, iss liye nahi keh rahi hu. Prem ek bahut hi acche ladke hein. Zindegi ne usse bahut sare dukh diye lekin uske baad bhi wo zindegi mein aage bade, aapna har rishta, har zimmadari ko nibhaya.

Lekin uska ek dosh hein beti, aapni sari zimmadari, rishta nibhate nibhate wo khud ki bare soach na bhul jati hein. Aapna kushiya dosre mein baad dete hein, lekin aapna gum khud mein sama lete hein.

Heer mujh se tu aaj wada kar aaj se tu sare janam uska saad nibhaygi.Uski har dard ko baat ne ki koshish karegi. Wada kar beti?" Gayetri requested Heer.

Heer realized that, Prem had a selfless tendacy, His marriage with her also an reflection of his selfless nature. However, Heer recognized that when one become selfless he/she sometimes foget to think about him/herself.

Heer promised to herself that, she would always care about Prem. She would reminded him when he would forget to care about his own interest.

"Ha badi ma, mein wada karti hu aapse mein aaj se Prem ji ki saat nibhane ki puri koshish karongi." Heer told Gayetri.

Gayetri pulled Heer into a hug.

"Heer beti tu ek lawyer hein, adalat ke samne sawal karti hein.Mein chahati hu ki aaj se tu sare duniya ka samne Prem ki taraf se sawal karegi.

Heer beti, mein janti hu aage ki raste tum dono ke liye asan nahi hoga. Ye samaj tumhe aur Prem ki rishto ko lekar bahut sare baat karengi. Lekin beti dosre ke baat shunke kabhi himmat nahi harna aur ek baat hamesha yaad rakhna aapna jehan mein ki teri ye badi maa hamesha teri aur Prem ki rishto ko support karegi." Gayetri told Heer.

"Mein janti hu badi maa, aap hamesha meri saat dengi."Heer told her.

"Thick hein, aab mein chalti hu, mujhe lagta hein ki aab meri beta Prem ki anne ka waqt ho gaya. Mein ye nahi chahati ki mein tum dono ka ye khas palo mein kabab mein haddi bano." Gayetri told Heer.

"Badi maa." Heer shyly told Gayetri.

"Dekho to meri bahu ko, sharmate hue kitne khubsaroot lag rahi hein." Gayetri after saying that kissed Heer on her forehead and then she left the room.

After that, Heer was waiting for the arrival of Prem. She could sense that, Prem would never force himself on her, as he was a very decent person. However, at the same time she hoped that, Prem would realize that, she still needed some more time to adjust fully into that new situation.

Her thought got interrupted when she heard the sound of opening of the door.

Prem was also feeling very nervous even though he had a meaningful conversation with Heer.

He could see the potentials of their marriage working in the future. Nevertheless, Prem realized that, they still needed time to understand and know more about each other to make that relationship fully work.

According to Prem, they needed to build up their relationship gradually. Nevertheless, he had a fear that, Heer might misunderstand him after seeing his cautious approach regarding their relationship. Prem feared that, Heer might think that, their age difference might be a reason behind his cautious approach.

Prem sat near to Heer in the bed

He removed the veil from Heer's face. Prem once again feel mesmerized by Heer's natural beauty. In his opinion, Heer was definitely one of the most beautiful women in the whole earth.

Before today, he never thought or looked at Heer such way. She looked perfect every way. Prem did not even realized that when he started to feel a desire for her. A desire to have her with him for rest of his life. A desire to win her heart. A desire to earn her confidence and trust. A desire to know and understand her deeply. A desire to become a person on whom she could rely on. Overall a desire to make their relationship work.

Prem was shocked to see how much effect Heer started to have on him. Prem once again promised to himself that he would do everything to make that relationship work.

Heer looked at Prem when he removed the veil from her face. She suddenly found lost herself in these beautiful chocolate brown eyes. Heer once again realized that, her husband was really a very handsome man. Heer still found it was somewhat surprising that, a handsome man like Prem did not had a one girlfriend even after staying so long in the outside of India.

Nevertheless, she would not complain about that. In addition, of that, she would now take the situation very seriously if any other woman showed unhealthy interest into her husband. She might even apply her karate skill on that woman. Heer blushed slightly when she realized that she was suddenly feeling possessive about her husband.

"Heer ji aap ko bahut discomfortable mehasus ho raha hoga iss vari dress mein, aapcahahe to bathroome jake change kar sakte hein." Prem suggested Heer.

Heer was surprised by Prem's suggestion. She was really feeling discomfort able with heavier dresses and glad that Prem recognized her problem.

Heer nodded her head and went to bathroom for change. Heer changed her dresses in bathroom and came from bathroom by wearing a comfortable nightgown.

However, after returning from bathroom she saw something that made her throat dry. She observed that Prem was also changing his dress. He was already changed into pajama but he still did not wear anything to hide his upper body.

Therefore, Heer could see bear back and blushed deeply. Prem had an athletic body; his body shape was well defined. Heer could not help but to observed his well defined muscles not too much but not too less, just perfect.

One tiny part of her wished that, she could touch and feel those muscles and moved her hands around his bare back.

Heer scolded herself quickly for having such indecent thought. She told herself that it was against her values to observe and enjoy such views of a man and having such fantasy about him.

But, another part of her quickly rebelled and reminded her that, it was not just another man, it was her husband and being his wife he had every legal rights to see him in that state. It also reminded her she should not feel guilty for having intimate fantasy about her husband, she had legal right.

Her heart was hearing that part of her and her suddenly feeling desire to have him for rest of her life. She suddenly felt desire to win his heart. She felt desire to be held by these strong arms. She felt desire to earn his trust.

The word trust brought her back into the reality. Yes, she had all the legal rights over him as his wife but she realized that, their relationship was still in early stage. Prem would not be comfortable if he saw Heer was observing him in that state. She should give him some privacy just as if Prem gave her.

She quietly returned to bathroom to give Prem some privacy. Heer blushed deeply when she thought about her action. She could clearly see future of their relationship. Heer in that moment vowed to know and understand Prem better to make their relationship work.

Heer once again returned from bathroom and that time she felt relived as she saw Prem finally wear t-shirt and he sat around the bed.

Heer quietly sat near Prem. Prem saw her and smiled.

"Heer ji hum jante hein hamari iss rishte ki sharuat ek hadse ki wajase hua hein. Mein ye bhi samaj ta hu ki mujhse achanak shadi karne ka decision aap ke liye bahut mushkil thi.

Heer ji mein apse kehana cahata ki mein jee jaan se kosish karonga ki aap ko kabhi bhi mujh se shadi kare ne ki decision ko leakar afsos na ho. Mein apni taraf se puri koshish karonga hamare rishta ko kamiyab karne ke liye." Prem told Heer in a serious voice.

Heer felt her respect for her husband increased more after hearing that. He was talking about how difficult it was for her to take a decision to marry him. Heer observed that, he did not talk about his own difficulties. Heer realized that it was equally difficult decision for him to marry her. Heer came to know that before today he was not planning to get married for next two -three years. She also recognized that, how his loyalty and love for his family that make him to marry her. She liked Prem's selfless nature but decided that, she would take care of Prem's interest from now.

"Prem ji ha wo meri liye ek mushkil faisala thi, lekin mein ye bhi janti thi aab bahut acche insan hein. Aapki ye acchaiyat aur parivar ki taraf aap ki nishta meri faisala ko akhir mein asan kar di.

Prem ji mein ye bhi samaj ti hu ki ye aap ke liye bhi bahut mushkil faisala raha hoga. Aur aap ki tarah mein bhi aaj aap se wada karti hu ki mein bhi apni best effort dongi iss rishte ko kamiyab karne ke liye taki aab ko kabhi bhi nahi lage ki aap ka mujh se shaddi karne ka decision galat tha." Heer told Prem.

Prem felt relived after hearing that, he also felt warm inside of his heart as he realized that, Heer started to care about him.

"Heer ji, mein bahut kush hu ki aap ka mera upar itna accha yakeen hein."Prem smiled after saying that.

Heer felt lost her lost in his smile and she did not know when her fingers touched Prem's fingers. Both felt a jolt inside of their body because of that, but nobody moved their fingers from other person. Soon, their fingers became intertwined with each other. Surprisingly both of them did not felt any discomfort because of that. For both of them it seemed like most natural things to do show their support for each other.

Both of them looked at their intertwined fingers and assuring smiled formed in both of their face.

However, they both came back to reality when they heard a knock into the door.

Chapter End

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Posted: 7 years ago
Fab update... So prem and heer already have feelings of desire other than the soft corners in their heart. Thay have decided to take it slow and its good to see that they are giving the space that the other partner needs at the moment. Waiting to see what happens and expecting lota romance in future.
Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: -secretlove-

Fab update... So prem and heer already have feelings of desire other than the soft corners in their heart. Thay have decided to take it slow and its good to see that they are giving the space that the other partner needs at the moment. Waiting to see what happens and expecting lota romance in future.

Yes, they are already feeling a connection with each other. Their romance will grow gradually but it won't be too slow.
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Posted: 7 years ago
Thanks for the update brother and here's my comment
As usual amazing update the whole part was very beautifully written.
Prem heer scene was very lovely I loved it. I am happy to see that both of them are already feeling a deep connection with each other .would love to see how their relationship will process further as they have already started to care about each other
I wonder who could be at the door.
Waiting for next part


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