Short Shot- 'Kya koi kisi se itna Pyaar kar sakta hai?'(updt

Khidki thumbnail
9th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 8 years ago
#1

Short Shot- "Kya koi kisi se itna Pyaar kar sakta hai?"


"Kya koi kisi se itna Pyaar kar sakta hai ki uski Jaan le le?"


Om's deep voice, pulled the hearts of those listening. While he stared at Shivaay.


While Rudra blinked, behind him stood Bhavya and still behind her Saumya. They could kill for Rudra but certainly not kill him.


"Pyaar wo hai jiske liye Jaan le te nahi Jaan dete hai!" Replied Gauri in a strong voice.



"Lekin, kisi aur ki jaan toh le sakta hain na!" She said staring at Bhavya. Rudra turned to her surprised. Was it his Love Angel Speaking?


Omkara looked at Saumya thoughtfully. "Jaan Lena aasaan hai, uske ehsaas ke saath jeena ..." He fixed his look back at Shivaay.


"...har pal marna!" Completed Shivaay, as tears pricked in his eyes.


Saumya-"Toh naa jaan le sakte hai, naa jii sakta hain, yeh toh apni jaan le na hua naa?"


Rudra blinked, this time not lifting his gaze to look at her.


"...woh Jaan dene ke barabar ho gaya na?" Spoke Gauri.


Tears made way to Saumya's eyes, " Kya isse Pyaar kehte hain?"


"...toh humne Pyaar karna seekha hi nahi!" Spoke Bhavya thoughtfully.



"Kyunki humaare liye Jaan le na aur jaan dena dono hi barabar hai!" She shot a glance at Saumya who was looking away at the rear end of the pool.


"Kis khasmakash mein aa phasa hai ye,
Kal take ishq samjtaa thaa dil,
Aaj khudi hi hai bekhabar ye,
'Kya hai ishq', poochta hai Dil?"



Rudra's eyes stated a clear testament of confusion growing by multifold in his heart. He turned back to look at Bhavya and then at a distant standing Saumya, blinking his eyes he slowly disappeared. The day had witnessed enough debate and now this reflections of pain dint help.


Soon silence dominated. The words remained unexplained yet speaking for themselves.


Bhavya chose to go out and walk in the dark gardens that magnificently decorated the entrance of the mansion. While Saumya slimply slipped away to the back lawn.



The last few days events had left an impact on not just Shivaay's but everyone's hearts!


Gauri and Omkara stood arms in arms staring up at the sky. Shivaay continued to look at the ripples on the surface of the pool with his legs immersed. While his finger delicately drew small patterns on the surface of water.


A lone tear escaped Om's eye as he saw his brother.
Soon he felt a feather wipe it away. He looked down to find his wife's finger. He smiled at her painfully. She kisaed his cheek, silently understanding his pain.


They were soon walking down the dark corridor to their moonlit room.


Somewhere far away, she traced unknown patterns on the waves that reached the sure. She dint know why she did it. But she felt tranquillity in her action. Her silent drops added water and salt to the already vast expanse. She looked away as far as she could, she saw the waters meet with the sky. A small smile crept up her face. Small time's wait and she would be like those waves of water that touched the sky.
Little did she know that every bit of water was already touching the sky.


"Kya koi kisi se itna Pyaar kar sakta hai,
ki khud pal pal mar kar,
Usse nayi saasn de sakta hai?"


Kya koi kisi se itna Pyaar kar sakta hai?


Note:-
On purpose the back story isn't disclosed entirely. More of suggestive read!
Would love to read what you understood here!
Everyone reads , but each understands it in unique way!😳
Excited to read your take!
Every dialogue here indicates a story!
Let me know if you dint understand any, would love to share my POV😳



Explanation Added:


Omkara and Gauri are mere spectators and understanding people here. After all they have gone through!
Shivaay sitting alone tracing patterns on water remembering his paanika!
He shot Anika so that she could get into hiding to protect her until he has killed all the demons.
But still with the mere act, he is left shaken. The bullet might be fake, but the scene has left its mark, not on just Shivaay but everyone.
The scene is set when Om comes to know Shivaay shot Anika to protect her! But is somewhere against the entire thing.
That's when he says , confused himself, "can someone love so much to kill?"

At the same time, Gauri gives him an escape from the confusion by saying, you can give your life in love and never take!

It is then that Shivaay's pain seeps into Omkara.

But Saumya's view is different. She thinks its okay to fake a third person's life also if needed for love. Hinting at her inner demon which would love to get Bhavya off their way.
This shade surprises Rudra! He feels her pain here. But is still unsure.

Omkara too senses something different in Saumya too. Maybe has a hint from what Gauri would have shared with her, about the temple incident.
And he warns her by saying its never easy to live the truth of having killed someone he himself has known it in past and then looks at Shivaay, who is going through same.

While Shivaay completes Omkara's words and says its like dying every moment!
The mere thought of you in an act of killing your beloved is like dying every moment. Being away from the one you love is like dying every moment. "" har pal marna""

But painfully Saumya says that living without the one you love is like killing yourself any way!

Here Rudra is perhaps understanding depth of Saumya's words and he doesn't look at her, scared that his eyes might witness the truth!

While Gauri gives her piece of mind to Saumya, and tells that is nothing but sacrifice and that is exactly what selfless love is!


While Bhavya has an altogether different view. Being the practical woman she is...
She never saw life and death situation as LOVE!

That's why somewhere she feels she never loved. Because for her giving her life (for country) and taking a life (for country) is same !
She looks at Saumya feeling that maybe , maybe Saumya loves Rudra more( and this is her love for him!)

Seeing the conflicted state of hearts Omkara says the shaayri.

Rudra is now confused about who he actually loves that's whybhe sees the nearer Bhavya(present) and distant Saumya (past)
And he escapes, goes away from both to find where his heart is!

Om-Gauri feel Shivaay's pain. And his helplessness. That's when Omkara cries and Gauri comforts him, and they go back to their moonlit room signifying peace in their own love life.


And that's Anika somewhere away, doing exactly what Shivaay was doing in OM! She might be away but she is still complete. She also feels his pain!
She thinks she is away, but her heart is still very close to him.
She wonders how much Shivaay loves her , that he is dying every second so that she breathes safely every breath!


Edited by Khidki - 8 years ago

Created

Last reply

Replies

10

Views

3.2k

Users

4

Likes

41

Frequent Posters

farinaks thumbnail
8th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 8 years ago
#2
beautiful heart touching👏
Edited by farinaks - 8 years ago
IfritAmbrose thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 8 years ago
#3
Beautiful Annika..you certainly have your way with words! :)

BTW Shouldn't it be Jaan instead of Japan here?

"Kyunki humaare liye Japan le na aur jaan dena dono hi barabar hai!" She shot a glance at Saumya who was looking away at the rear end of the pool.

Khidki thumbnail
9th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 8 years ago
#4

Originally posted by: IfritAmbrose

Beautiful Annika..you certainly have your way with words! :)

BTW Shouldn't it be Jaan instead of Japan here?

"Kyunki humaare liye Japan le na aur jaan dena dono hi barabar hai!" She shot a glance at Saumya who was looking away at the rear end of the pool.


Thank you!
Thanks to my autocorrect I feel so embarrassed right now!
Rectified it.
Dont remember seeing you before- did you change your username or something? Or I need to get back at baadams!
IfritAmbrose thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 8 years ago
#5

Originally posted by: Khidki



Thank you!
Thanks to my autocorrect I feel so embarrassed right now!
Rectified it.
Dont remember seeing you before- did you change your username or something? Or I need to get back at baadams!



Hota hai Hota hai.. first I thought Bhavya kuch alag hi angle ka dialogue mar rahi hai..

Ahh..I'm an old one here from the beginning of IB. Changed my Username, it was -WhitePearl- before.. I thought it to be too common so changed it.

Anyways I'm Khushi here no you don't need badams..there are many here who actually need it lol.
Edited by IfritAmbrose - 8 years ago
Khidki thumbnail
9th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 8 years ago
#6

Originally posted by: IfritAmbrose



Hota hai Hota hai.. first I thought Bhavya kuch alag hi angle ka dialogue mar rahi hai..

Ahh..I'm an old one here from the beginning of IB. Changed my Username, it was -WhitePearl- before.. I thought it to be too common so changed it.

Anyways I'm Khushi here no you don't need badams..there are many here who actually need it lol.


😆
CVs need it first!
Thank you Khusi Ji!😳
Nice to know you⭐️
IfritAmbrose thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 8 years ago
#7

Originally posted by: Khidki



😆
CVs need it first!
Thank you Khusi Ji!😳
Nice to know you⭐️



Sahi pakde hai ;)

Same here Annika Ji.. waiting for our next meetwa :*
AparnaChinnu thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail Networker 3 Thumbnail
Posted: 8 years ago
#8
awesome shot Annniii...
I think it's the happenings after shivaay shot Annika...
"lekin kisi aur ke jaan to le sakte na " saumya said it looking to Bhavya...I think here she meant Rudra... I think so...
"jaan lena aasan hai..lekin uss ehsaas ke saath jeena har pal marna" ...taking life away is easy but to live with that feelings is like dying every moment...I think shivaay meant is to live away from Annika...
then next saumya said that you can't take life as well as can't live also... I think all saumya's dialogue is about her situation ... and last one is about Annika's... that means he is trying to protect Annika by keeping her away from him... I understood like this... but i really want to know you version Anniii
Khidki thumbnail
9th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 8 years ago
#9

Originally posted by: AYUSHIVISHU

awesome shot Annniii...

I think it's the happenings after shivaay shot Annika...
"lekin kisi aur ke jaan to le sakte na " saumya said it looking to Bhavya...I think here she meant Rudra... I think so...
"jaan lena aasan hai..lekin uss ehsaas ke saath jeena har pal marna" ...taking life away is easy but to live with that feelings is like dying every moment...I think shivaay meant is to live away from Annika...
then next saumya said that you can't take life as well as can't live also... I think all saumya's dialogue is about her situation ... and last one is about Annika's... that means he is trying to protect Annika by keeping her away from him... I understood like this... but i really want to know you version Anniii



Originally posted by: AYUSHIVISHU

awesome shot Annniii...

I think it's the happenings after shivaay shot Annika...
"lekin kisi aur ke jaan to le sakte na " saumya said it looking to Bhavya...I think here she meant Rudra... I think so...
"jaan lena aasan hai..lekin uss ehsaas ke saath jeena har pal marna" ...taking life away is easy but to live with that feelings is like dying every moment...I think shivaay meant is to live away from Annika...
then next saumya said that you can't take life as well as can't live also... I think all saumya's dialogue is about her situation ... and last one is about Annika's... that means he is trying to protect Annika by keeping her away from him... I understood like this... but i really want to know you version Anniii


Aparna Dear you got there almost!

Omkara and Gauri are mere spectators and understanding people here. After all they have gone through!
Shivaay sitting alone tracing patterns on water remembering his paanika!
He shot Anika so that she could get into hiding to protect her until he has killed all the demons.
But still with the mere act, he is left shaken. The bullet might be fake, but the scene has left its mark, not on just Shivaay but everyone.
The scene is set when Om comes to know Shivaay shot Anika to protect her! But is somewhere against the entire thing.
That's when he says , confused himself, "can someone love so much to kill?"

At the same time, Gauri gives him an escape from the confusion by saying, you can give your life in love and never take!

It is then that Shivaay's pain seeps into Omkara.

But Saumya's view is different. She thinks its okay to fake a third person's life also if needed for love. Hinting at her inner demon which would love to get Bhavya off their way.
This shade surprises Rudra! He feels her pain here. But is still unsure.

Omkara too senses something different in Saumya too. Maybe has a hint from what Gauri would have shared with her, about the temple incident.
And he warns her by saying its never easy to live the truth of having killed someone he himself has known it in past and then looks at Shivaay, who is going through same.

While Shivaay completes Omkara's words and says its like dying every moment!
The mere thought of you in an act of killing your beloved is like dying every moment. Being away from the one you love is like dying every moment. "" har pal marna""

But painfully Saumya says that living without the one you love is like killing yourself any way!

Here Rudra is perhaps understanding depth of Saumya's words and he doesn't look at her, scared that his eyes might witness the truth!

While Gauri gives her piece of mind to Saumya, and tells that is nothing but sacrifice and that is exactly what selfless love is!


While Bhavya has an altogether different view. Being the practical woman she is...
She never saw life and death situation as LOVE!

That's why somewhere she feels she never loved. Because for her giving her life (for country) and taking a life (for country) is same !
She looks at Saumya feeling that maybe , maybe Saumya loves Rudra more( and this is her love for him!)

Seeing the conflicted state of hearts Omkara says the shaayri.

Rudra is now confused about who he actually loves that's whybhe sees the nearer Bhavya(present) and distant Saumya (past)
And he escapes, goes away from both to find where his heart is!

Om-Gauri feel Shivaay's pain. And his helplessness. That's when Omkara cries and Gauri comforts him, and they go back to their moonlit room signifying peace in their own love life.


And that's Anika somewhere away, doing exactly what Shivaay was doing in OM! She might be away but she is still complete. She also feels his pain!
She thinks she is away, but her heart is still very close to him.
She wonders how much Shivaay loves her , that he is dying every second so that she breathes safely every breath!

😳
AparnaChinnu thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail Networker 3 Thumbnail
Posted: 8 years ago
#10

Originally posted by: Khidki




Aparna Dear you got there almost!

Omkara and Gauri are mere spectators and understanding people here. After all they have gone through!
Shivaay sitting alone tracing patterns on water remembering his paanika!
He shot Anika so that she could get into hiding to protect her until he has killed all the demons.
But still with the mere act, he is left shaken. The bullet might be fake, but the scene has left its mark, not on just Shivaay but everyone.
The scene is set when Om comes to know Shivaay shot Anika to protect her! But is somewhere against the entire thing.
That's when he says , confused himself, "can someone love so much to kill?"

At the same time, Gauri gives him an escape from the confusion by saying, you can give your life in love and never take!

It is then that Shivaay's pain seeps into Omkara.

But Saumya's view is different. She thinks its okay to fake a third person's life also if needed for love. Hinting at her inner demon which would love to get Bhavya off their way.
This shade surprises Rudra! He feels her pain here. But is still unsure.

Omkara too senses something different in Saumya too. Maybe has a hint from what Gauri would have shared with her, about the temple incident.
And he warns her by saying its never easy to live the truth of having killed someone he himself has known it in past and then looks at Shivaay, who is going through same.

While Shivaay completes Omkara's words and says its like dying every moment!
The mere thought of you in an act of killing your beloved is like dying every moment. Being away from the one you love is like dying every moment. "" har pal marna""

But painfully Saumya says that living without the one you love is like killing yourself any way!

Here Rudra is perhaps understanding depth of Saumya's words and he doesn't look at her, scared that his eyes might witness the truth!

While Gauri gives her piece of mind to Saumya, and tells that is nothing but sacrifice and that is exactly what selfless love is!


While Bhavya has an altogether different view. Being the practical woman she is...
She never saw life and death situation as LOVE!

That's why somewhere she feels she never loved. Because for her giving her life (for country) and taking a life (for country) is same !
She looks at Saumya feeling that maybe , maybe Saumya loves Rudra more( and this is her love for him!)

Seeing the conflicted state of hearts Omkara says the shaayri.

Rudra is now confused about who he actually loves that's whybhe sees the nearer Bhavya(present) and distant Saumya (past)
And he escapes, goes away from both to find where his heart is!

Om-Gauri feel Shivaay's pain. And his helplessness. That's when Omkara cries and Gauri comforts him, and they go back to their moonlit room signifying peace in their own love life.


And that's Anika somewhere away, doing exactly what Shivaay was doing in OM! She might be away but she is still complete. She also feels his pain!
She thinks she is away, but her heart is still very close to him.
She wonders how much Shivaay loves her , that he is dying every second so that she breathes safely every breath!

😳

This much in one shot...Omg I am speechless... this much depth...hats off annniii

Related Topics

Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".