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Chapter 44 : His Universe!



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To her utter shock, yes and no both! She has doll like innocent face! But Maan probably meant it for Geet's overall antics, isn't it! Gggrrr! Again the burning elevated!

"Maan... He knew she is going to call him from behind but he has to act calm.


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"Hmm? He turned around slowly and found Sameera looking at him with some serious level of love, that did make him startle a little but he maintained his cool aura.

"Tum kal site pe aaoge?? She sounded chilled as well, not emoting anything except love from her eyes! Made him feel guilty! How does he make her understand! It's better to not give her any chances of loopholes or false hopes!

"Shayed Nahin...Sam...You look pale...Tum dinner karlo aur so jao...Kafi der ho gaai hain, thaak gayi hogi tum...Mujhe bhi jana hain...Good night...! He literally paced his words out with a crisp voice and a plastic smile then rushed into his room, leaving no chance for Sameera to continue her talk. They had spent enough time together and he has little bit pending work on his phone as well!!

Thinking about his schedule for the next day Maan entered his room after finishing the meal!! It was almost 9.30 Pm.. His heart is at peace though he has that one pending job as in confiding Geet in about the stunt Sameera pulled.

And that needs to be soon. Sooner the better. Today he deliberately spent more time with Sameera because no matter what, today he would not have uncovered about Sameera's proposal to Geet but knowing about Sameera's approaches were important for him to track the better outcome of the whole situation!!

Since she is not going to leave soon and his birthday almost has a few days to arrive! Hence to him tackling the situation calmly seemed the perfect solution for him. Otherwise, he definitely doesn't even pay any second thoughts to any proposals he gets or bother his lady love with all those unnecessary tales!! Because to him, those are simply not even something close to significant but with the admirer being Sameera things were different this time!!

And the whole observation of the circumstances tells him that Sameera is just being naive and she is not thinking logically as her emotions are a little shattered over all the places!

He knows her well too. She can be emotionally extreme when it comes to love. That reminded him of their college days when she used to date that jerk and was literally blinded by him to an extent of being deluded!

Same thing is happening again with a bit change! He is clueless as in why and when she fall for Maan at the first place! Is there anyhow his association involved? Even if that is unwanted!!

No...It isn't. He couldn't find anything like that. Then why?? Also why such possessiveness for him as well! What makes her think that Maan is somehow obligated to her! That's one hell of a delusion to get started with!

Whatever now it's time to talk with Savitri...That he will by this approaching morning all by itself!!

Knock..Knock Knock!!! Sound of some frail knuckles hitting on his door made him drifted away back to reality!!!

Who could be coming to him, it's probably Daadi!!

Maan dragged his body up and open the door to find the cutest surprise possible!!

His nervous little doll of a wife, wearing her night suit standing in front of his door timidly with her hands clutching a pillow and is checking at every direction cautiously like a thief!!

A nervously cute Geet heeded him opening the door and getting rooted to the ground as he was rubbing one of his eyes which also got stopped after he spotted her!! Looking at every way and finally ensuring that it's all fine she entered into his room and closed the door instantly!!!

"Phew!! Kisine nahin dekha... She took a deep breath of relief!!

"Shona... Maan called for her with utmost love while taking her into his embrace!!

"Sorry...I disturbed you...But I want to sleep next to you tonight... She snuggled into him and reciprocated into his hug by holding him tightly!!

Raising her head to meet his passionate eyes she started giving explanations, "I will not say a word...Just... Immediately his fingers greased against her soft lips, disrupting her tender voice!!

"Sshhh...Itna safai?? Aur woh bhi tum?? Aapne hi pati ke paas soney ke liye?? Narrowing his eyes he said in a husky tone, "You know you are the universe to me... so...Tumhare muh se mujhe hukum sunna hain, ye sorries nahin... Her overwhelmed soul witnessed him lifting her in his arms whilst she clutched on her pillow!!

"Umm...Woh...Aapse aaj bilkul door nahin raha jaa raha mujhse Maan... As he was placing her down on his bed she was looking at him unblinkingly, "Neend nahin aayegi aaj mujhe aapke baaho ke bina... Blushing hard she expressed herself in a very low-key tone!! However, the real reason she couldn't tell him!!

"Woh toh main samajh raha hoon acche se... You don't need to explain wifey... She was protectively wrapped inside his cage as he spoke next while kissing her forehead deeply, "I am so happy...You make me so happy Geet...You know that?? Tum mere paas hona chahti hoo ye jaanke hi mujhe meri saari khushiya mill gayi hain..
But why are you tensed shona?? He tucked her loose hair down, looking at her with immense love!!

"Sshhh...No talks now...Chup chap so jao... She broke her gaze slowly and snuggled into his chest, closing her eyes while taking all his intoxicating fragrance!!

"Don't play smart...I will sleep soon...Srif batao ki.. He held her face and brushed his nose with hers while she spoke instantly, "Misha wali baat...yaad aa gayi...aur phir mujhe laga bohot din...nahin saal ho gaya aapne mujhe ninni nahin kiya...Naa hi maine aapko...
Uss party wale raat ka manzra alag thi...Khair.. Saying so in a pragmatic tone she earned a peck on her lips which turned into a long yet soft kissing spell and both didn't realize when they swept away in the realms of dreams as they were chit-chatting about random stuff!!

Maan didn't pester her more by asking about any complicated stuff so he just cuddled up with her, rubbing her belly with utmost love as they were lying in a spooning position!!

As morning approached Geet found herself all puddled up in his arms, he was shielding her whole frame!!

However, beaming while looking at him when she was detaching herself from her sleeping husband that morning arousal of his made her blush profusely!!

Grunting in his sleep he was about to hug Geet back but she safely snuck away from his hold and left his room after staring at him for ages and bestowing a profound kiss on his forehead deeply!!

After almost 45 mins Maan opened his eyes and found the last night one of the best ones as the warmth of his demure wife was tickling his senses and that note on the side desk made his morning even brighter!!

"Good Morning..Hubby...I love you!! Thanks for the new, happy memories!!

It was a short yet the sweetest note ever!!

With a broad smile Maan grabbed his towel and initiated the day and within next hour he was in the in the car on the way to his office with his beautiful wifey who was resting inside his arms, learning about his rhythmic heartbeats!

He couldn't talk to Savitri this morning unfortunately as time was not in favor!!

After dropping her to her classes Maan was back into his work! A hectic busy day welcomed him with open hands!

That day went extremely busy for both of them as Maan was busy in his new project and Geet was busy in her new assignment!!

When he was back Geet has gone to a birthday party and he was having a bad temper on the addition a supremely irritating headache to which on the demands of her crazy husband she came back and made him coffee from her own hands and calmed him down ultimately!! All it takes to ease him up is her presence only!! (Read The Coffee Saga for their coffee banter)

The next day Maan planned for a dinner date for both of them while Geet was in a huge dilemma owing to one recent hectic decision she made sheerly based on rage!! She thought to rectify her mistake but that didn't work out so now it was the time that Geet has to tell her beloved about the recent events lined up for her!!

Thinking about all these followed by looking at her phone Geet raced her fingers to reply him as the new text from him was waiting to get her attention!!


"Jaan...It's been 18 hours...I have been into your lap...I am missing you baby...
Today I will manage at least one hour...You know how I feel if I don't see you for long!!
4.23 Pm


"Maan...I am right here...All of me waiting for you... Aap bilkul pagal ho...Pata hain mujhe woh...Do you want me to send you my selfie?? 😉
4.26 Pm


"No...No... Don't do that now...You know it very well, your pictures make me more crazy!! I am in a meeting.. Please spare your lunatic hubby!!
4.34 Pm

"Ha ha ha...Aisa kiya?? Chalo ye toh kabhi aur istemaal karoongi... 😉
Abhi jaldi jaldi meeting finish kaarke mere paas aao...🤗Wifey wants to be in your arms right away...You know my mood swings!! 😕
4.37 Pm


"Will be on my way...You are lucky that you are having your monthly...Or else...Aaj I would have...☺️
Oh well...My client is staring at me and here I am trying to control my erection...See this is how you irritate me!! Not gonna even text you until this meeting gets over!!
Girl, you are dangerous!!
4.45 Pm


"Hawww... Aab ismein bhi meri galti...Huh!! Jao maat karo baat mujhse...!! Aisi baatein sochte khud ho...Aur galtiya mujhpe daalte ho...!! 😭💔
4.46 Pm
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"Phew... 😃 Finally, the meeting is over...And guess what I am on my way!! Are you sleeping baby?? :) ❤️
5.38 Pm

" I am katti with you...And Drive safely...Abhi ek bhi text nahin...!!
5.39 Pm


Maan smiled seeing her cute cribbing filled caring text and instantly dialed her up!! He simply can't resist hearing her voice now, can he??

With a frown yet happiness surrounding her heart Geet saw his beautiful name flashing on the caller id, "Hello?? The mere thought of hearing his voice soothed her heart with a great vigor!!

"Jaan...Kiya huwa...Why my baccha is angry on me?? And relax I am not driving...Driver is... Said Maan calmly, looking outside the window!!

"Areh...I am not angry...Woh aise hi hum majak kar rahe thhey na...Aap bhi naa... Caressing his eardrums Geet spoke chuckling a little!!

"Ohh...Baby you want to eat something special?? Soon I will be crossing xyz restaurant...Kuch leke aau tumhare liye?? She heard his inquisitive tone while tapping her fingers on her chin!!

"Hmm...Let me think.. Pausing briefly she said in a mysterious erotic voice, "I want to eat my Maan Singh Khurana...All raw...Spicy...hot and little bit salty...Thoda thoda meetha!! UMM...!! Letting a light moan she just turned the havoc on for a desperate Maan!!

"Oh, really Mrs. Khurana?? Phone pe aap jo ye sab kehti hain madam and jab samne aati hain toh aapse jayada innocent toh koi hain hi nahin... He warned her sounding quite serious as she bit her lips imagining what he is indicating, "Ek baar tumhari tabiyet theek ho jaye...then I will make you...!! Geet interrupted him immediately, summoning him in her lengthy voice,"Maannnhh...Aap bohot burey ho pata hain aapko?? Maan knew his little doll of a wife must be blushing hard and all this is just a camouflage to hide that!!

"Haan...Acche se bataunga kitna bura hoon...!! As both lovebirds were engrossed into talking the afternoon was transforming itself into the evening when Maan was going back at the Khurana Mansion, he has a date with his doll!!

A lot of gifts yet to present her!!

There, in the terrace, an apprehensive nervous Geet is waiting for her beloved! Nervous because of the recent blunder she played!! She is worried about Maan's reaction now, everything is fine just he shouldn't be hurt!! That would prick her heart so badly!!
Maan entered the terrace with a huge flower bouquet and saw his life waiting for him with her fist over her chin, looking at the moon!

He froze for a few seconds, she looks like a fairy in the dim light of the dazzling moon!! Who is the real moon here??

Maan could clearly feel his heartbeats rising seeing that celestial beauty of his wife whom he loves way more than his own life!! Stretching his long legs silently he went close to that entranced doll of his who was deep lost in some contemplation!

"Geet... His soft summoning sailed her back and she looked at him with her nervous yearning eyes!!

Within seconds they were fused together, hugging each other after a long day and filling these moments with serenity!!

Maan was caressing Geet's back as always whilst she has melted her existence into his broad shoulders!! Time elapsed like racing wheels and finally breaking the hug Maan offered her the flowers and cards he bought for her!!

She looked at the love of her life with her dilated pupil, he was wearing white and looking just perfect like a poetry!! Parting her lips she anticipated a deep smooch and as if he could read his mind because the next moment he raised his finger and encountered over her lower lip!!

Regarding her getting shivers with his greasing finger over her delicious lips he jerked her close and plunged his avid lips into her parted ones!!

The feeling of her sweet saliva was turning him on like never before but he knew this was not the moment to slip his control away!! Hence he kept the kiss sweet and short, breaking it in a lot of countless pecks!!

At that moment Geet was more overwhelmed seeing her husband controlling all his passionate desires for her!! Guilt was again making its place prominent in her head!!

However, Maan was clueless and saw his wife caressing the flowers he gave her, still groped into his arms!!

A lot of gifts more were also on the way, he was revealing them one by one to his universe!!
Chocolates, cookies, bangles, dresses, cosmetics, books everything was there!!

"Maan...Aap constructions chorne wale ho?? She proposed with her wide opened eyes, peering at all the gifts surrounding her!!

"Hmm??? Kiyah...Kyun?? Widening his eyes he asked!!

"Arehh...Itnaaa sara saman...Aisa lag raha hain sabkuch utha ke leke aaye ho... Geet was chatting casually while gazing at all the gifts surrounding her with her mesmerized eyes!!

"Kiyaahhh...Ye toh kuch bhi nahin hain...Woh toh airport walo ne rakh liye hain kafi sara...Warna... Maan hugged her carnally and dipped his nose into the crook of her neck, "Hey Babaji...Aur bhi thhey?? Main keh rahi hoon aapko...Aap naa sach mein import export ka business kar lo... Aur ye sab toh theek hain janab...Magar ye kiya hain?? With her widened eyes, she was staring at a black soft piece of cloth, rubbing it with her fingers to feel the fancy texture it had!!


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PRECAP :

"Baby...You didn't even tell me...Wait a second...Tum kahin isi wajah se to uss raat ko mere paas sone nahin aayi thi naa??" Scrutinizing her with his sharp dark browns he said in a edgy voice!!


"Maan...I was really missing you, may be somewhere it was the reason...And I am sorry..." She sighed with guilt, "Par maine try kiyah hain bohot mummy ko mana karoon and aapse puch ke then chali jau...Par...


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😳Sameera wanted to talk with maan but maan wanted to escape?? Is it called escape?? I dont know... But he doesnt want to talk with her... he is feeling very awkward after that whole proposal fiasco... He doesnt wnat to give her any hints or hopes.. But seeing love for him in her eyes he started feeling guilty.. And yeah possessiveness... Now maan came to correct point.. Y the hell she is possessive for him..?? As far as he knows sam is a matured person and if she loves him then it becomes one sided but the way she had spoken to him few days back gave clear picture that she thinks that he also loved her... And i dont know what to say abt sam... one incident which happened when he is drunk other incident which happened when she is drunk and she started thinking that he is in love with her and even intimate with her... She is living in some delusional world.. Her way of thinking and her mental condition is very bad... I dont know y but i am feeling pity for sam... And this can also create prblms for maaneet 😕
I always admire maaneet bond especially in mp... The love they had for each other is beyond limits... And that line where he said that she is universe to him is my fav line... Is geet going somewhere??? Thats why she is feeling low and what is the mistake that she had done?? May be she did that when maan went to london and ignored her calls.. Both slept in each other arms while dreaming abt their future.. I loved it when she kissed maan's forehead while going out of his room... even she left the note for him...
That was so sweet baby... Their msgs i loved them totally ... Both of them care for each other...😳 i liked him when he asked whether she wanted anything... 😳 His love for her ❤️
Wow.. He brought many gifts for her and even chocolate from London ... Geet is feeling guilty as she is hiding something from maan.. 😒 Loved whole chapter baby... I am reading again and again.. Full of maaneet essence .. ☺️
Edited by Roopa_1 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
Lovely update
Maan wants to talk with savitri reguard sameera but not getting any chance
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Lovely update
Waiting for next update. . .
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Superb update!!!
Maan has to talk to daadi !! That is the best option !!
Aww how cute !! Maaneet together for the night and their love
Haha!! Meeting main naughty maan
Abb what did geet do??
Export import business
Good one geet
Waise where is geet going
Extra bite was an update in itself
Enjoyed it to the core
Light hearted update
Enjoyed it to the core
Update soon !!
Hope maan tells abt Sameera soon !!!
Abb engagement karo do pls
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Posted: 7 years ago
sweet update
ignoring sameera hope Maan thinking something
the love birds always cute and lovey dovey
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I am reading the ud 4 d 3rd time
I have gone crazy right?

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