Mortal Promises!#T4!*UPDATED CH 47@Pg111[Note@Pg100]2nd Apr

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khwaishfan

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Posted: 7 years ago

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Originally posted by: Iptida

Thanks for being considerate!!

no need to say thanks... hope you managed to sort everything out

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Posted: 7 years ago

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Posted: 7 years ago

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Posted: 7 years ago

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PRECAP : "Daadi Maa... What Shall I do?? Aap toh jaanti hain na Geet kitni najuk hain...Shaadi ki announcement kaab karengi aap??" Savitri herself was trying to grasp the whole bomb Maan just dismantled!!

"Oho?? Itney utavley?? Geet ki excuse yaa aap impatient hain...Kiya baat hain Maan...Shaadi ke naam se toh aapko gussa aa jata tha!!" She was defifitely not going to spare him of her leg pulling after his blatant suggestions!!

"Daadi maa Please!! I am serious!! I want our marriage announcement ASAP...I mean as soon as possible!!" He grew more impatient and so his voice pitched high as well!!

"Lekin?? Achanak itni urgengy kyun??"

Edited by WaveTeal - 7 years ago

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Roopa_1

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Posted: 7 years ago

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Wow baby awesome .. I am literally reading this one daily baby... Lekin comment karne ka time nahin mila lol 😆 Geet seriously??? Lingernie robe ko mopping cloth bana liya 🤣 I am literally imagining maan's expressions over her dialouge 😆 My poor maan 🤣 And his dialouge that he even likes her without robe 🤣 I guess her mouth formed a perfect 'O' after listening his shameless remark ... 😆 Wow...Their cute nok jhoks Maan wanted say her about sam but yeh writer kehne nahin de rahi hain ..😡 Writer ji ne phone ka scene daal diya beech mein 😡 Yeh tou aur complicated hothi jarahi hain... Wow titli... I love this name... Jaldi jaldi shadi kardo dono ki... Lagta hain meri nazar lag jaayegi meri love birds ko 😳 Maan is not leaving a chance to romance his titli 😆 Maan sensed geet's nervousness and he got it that something is bothering her .. Mp maan always amazes me with his depth of love... 😳 He very well know that something is wrong with geet just by seeing her face ans her antics... He knows her in and out... Even our titli is not less baby.. Even whenever maan is upset she can sense that by his voice... Both love each other beyond boundaries... 🤗

Geet broke down .. After seeing his concern she felt guilty for taking the decision without consulting him in her anger...

Awww... My baby is hurt... He is not at all angry on her but he is hurt... Geet desperately trying to make him normal but maan is in his own thoughts as sam is disturbing him alott... Sam again messaged maan? 😡 How dare she??? Kithni baar kehna padega usse? Is she mad?? ? And voh bhi atrocious messages.. 😡 Now i can sense my blood is boiling up.. 😡 Awww maan is very busy Right now... He cant even go with her... But atlast geet somehow made him smile by her cute antics but inside he is still hurt...

Wow ... Baby ithni jaldi... Maan wants to announce his marriage with geet asap ... I guess this sam again messed up his mood... 😡

Awesome baby... Loved total update ❤️

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WaveTeal

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Posted: 7 years ago

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NOTE : For readers reading convenience I have put the chapter in two parts.

Story will be having it's crucial point very soon!! This time there is a target!! 130 likes on each parts and 30 feedback comments!! Pretty easy peasy!! Silent readers show your power!! 😳

Until then not going to update!!

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PM Shall be sent later!!

Edited by Iptida - 7 years ago