AvNeil OS- Happiness!

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Posted: 7 years ago
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AvNeil OS- Happiness!


So finally I found time and the inspiration to pen it down! I was so craving for AvNeil to share a beautiful moment in the morning.

It's dedicated to all the fans of AvNeil!😳


The sun rays peeping through the blinds woke Avni up! She saw herself sprawled across Neil's bare chest. That's when it struck her! They had crossed that barrier in their relationship, they had finally consummated their relation and became one in true self. A small blush crept up her cheek as she got up and barely managed to find his transparent white shirt to cover herself with! She slowly rose herself and rested herself against the soft leather back rest of the bed. She reminisced all their moments, right from their first meeting to their soulful union last night. She was amazed at how much destiny has showered her with happiness and bliss! She was finally blessed to have a husband like Neil and a family like the Khanna's. Her mother was so very right; Neil will keep you happy!

She slowly bent down, caressing his fluffy, silky hair she gently pecked his cheek, she slowly pecked his eyes and finally she nibbled at his ears.

Neil: "Yeh bhi galti se hua? he asked a stunned Avni.

Avni: "Nai, bilkul nai!

Neil: "Kuch zyaada hi blush nai kar rahi tum? I mean I know ki tum kaafi bold ho, par itni bold, I am surprised.

Avni: "Thankyou Neil, for being so gentle and loving!

Neil pulled Avni towards himself and engulfed her in his arms. He slowly pecked her forehead and tucked the hair falling on her radiant and beautiful face!

Neil: "finally hum ek ho gaye. Avni I have waited for this moment for so long. We became friends first, later fell in love!


Avni nodded in positive!

Avni: "Ek time tha jab hum sab hamara rishta daav pe lagane waale the. I am so glad that we are together now. Thanks for all the happiness Neil!

Neil: "Tumhe ek baat batana bhool gaya tha, mujhe shayad promotion mil sakta!

Avni gave him a bone crushing hug!


Avni: "Matlab ab ACP Neil Khanna ke liye mere paas aur kam waqt ho ga na... she said pain and sadness evident in her voice.

Neil: "Aisa kabhi kabhi hoga Avni, you'll always be my priority.

Avni managed to smile through her tears. How much was she blessed to have this man, who she married by betrayal and for revenge love her, keep her happiness and their relation first!

Avni: "Neil, tumhe babies pasand hai na? I really want to start a family with you!

Neil: "Offcourse, kuch zyaada hi pasand hai. I hope we have twins!

Avni: "Thankyou!

With that Neil rolled over Avni and took her lips in a passionate kiss!

Neil: "Hume kabhi koi alag nai kar sakega...na yeh samaaj aur nahi hamari kismet..."

She nodded in affirmative. She laid all her thoughts to rest, knowing he will be with her to take care of her, to wash away her pain, to soothe her pain and to ultimately comfort her. He entwined his fingers with hers, his one palm gently patting the back of her head.

Avni: "Neil main jaanti hoon ki hamara pyaar hamari kamzori hai, par main chahti hoon ki hamara pyaar hamari takat bane..."

She knew he heard this, as his lips gently touched her forehead. They snuggled closer to each other, to feel the love they had for each other and the promise they had given each other, to stay together in health and sickness, in sadness and happiness.

They had promised each other, a relation of equality, a relation of respect and a relation of love.

The End!

I hope I have lived upto the expectations of AvNeil fans!

Positive criticism welcome!

Love,

Mayu

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darsh333 thumbnail
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Posted: 7 years ago
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This is beautiful 😳 how i wish cvs had shown something similar to this in the show
Thanks for penning these down😊will be waiting for more stories of yours😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
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It has everything I wanna see in their morning scene . Avni in his shirt , Neil getting up as she was showering him with love , both cuddling up .😳😃 I expected him to be more teasy but Avni was high on emotions . I enjoyed throughout ! 👍🏼
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Mummy😭
It was so beautiful. I want this on show. I know that never come.
Awesome update. Avni's emotions was on point. How I wished to see teasing neil. Superb well done dear. Thanks for the pm. Welcome to the forum.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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It is awesome dear.cvs could HV shown something like this.kaash is scene hota to kitna acha lagtha tha
Thanks for penning down this for us😃
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Wow it's beautiful thank you writing this 👏
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Posted: 7 years ago
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To be Brutally Honest...It Was Fabulous ❤️
Totally Romantic

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: darsh333

This is beautiful 😳 how i wish cvs had shown something similar to this in the show

Thanks for penning these down😊will be waiting for more stories of yours😊


Thankyou so much 😳

I also wish! They didnt even spend one moment after their special night, thats so unfair!😭

Shall be writing more!

Love,
Mayu
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: AgnesFan

It has everything I wanna see in their morning scene . Avni in his shirt , Neil getting up as she was showering him with love , both cuddling up .😳😃 I expected him to be more teasy but Avni was high on emotions . I enjoyed throughout ! 👍🏼


Thank you so much 😳

This is exactly how I had pictured these two in the morning! Some sweet moments and some emotional conversations.

Love,
Mayu
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: rilsaf

Mummy😭

It was so beautiful. I want this on show. I know that never come.
Awesome update. Avni's emotions was on point. How I wished to see teasing neil. Superb well done dear. Thanks for the pm. Welcome to the forum.


Thanks man!😳

I so wanted something like this! Some cute moments, teasing and an emotional talk!

Thanks for the warm welcome:)

Love,
Mayu


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