FF: Her King! (Completed - 23/02)

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Maithili

@maithu_

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Posted: 7 years ago

#241

Originally posted by: katheriene
Amazing update👏
Loved Pakhi & Chakor's bonding😊
They are so attached to each other😭
Waiting for next

Thank you so much dear for this lovely comment!

Glad you loved their bonding!

Hope the attachement stays!

See you soon with the next part

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Maithili

@maithu_

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Posted: 7 years ago

#242

Originally posted by: meshmesh
Nice update
Love Chakor-Pakhi bond.
Pakhi's gifts speak of her love to Chakor, especially the make over.
Eagerly waiting for next.

Thank you buddy for reading and liking this part too!

Happy you loved ChoKhi part

Hope you like the next part too

See you soon

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Maithili

@maithu_

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Posted: 7 years ago

#243

Part 27 (Previous part : Part 26 )

Evening arrived and one by one, guests started to fill the illuminated palace in their own way.

Few went to start the dance on the upper floor and few stayed in the cocktail area.

And in all this, the Queen and the Prince, in their splendid costume stood not far from the entrance to welcome the guests.

"I remember your father's coronation" Queen started with a dashing smile, facing her son "at the Christmas eve Ball too!" putting her hand on his cheek "You are as handsome as he was." she finished.

"If only I could stand half as tall as him." he said remembering his father.

Taking back her hand "Oh! You will son!" with still smile on her lips "Just takes a little time!"

"Good evening, Your Majesty! Your Royal Highness!" the Prime minister wished as he entered the space.

Taking Queen's hand, he kissed it in a royal way when Prince with a smile said "Prime Minister, I look forward to work with you!"

Shaking hand with the Prince "And I with you!" as Queen looked at them with happiness filled eyes.

And same with Pakhi "You Royal Highness!" as she did the hand shake.

In no time, people started to murmur and one by one, they looked towards the stairs to see the elegant lady in a light blue gown, coming down as an angel with simply being herself.

Prince who turned on his left, looked at her and got mesmerized in her beauty which can't be described with words.

"She looks beautiful!"

"She is ravishing!" and many more comments came from guests, and in between these crowd, stood Vivaan and Imli who looked at each other with a smirk adorning their lips.

Lifting her gown a little, she slowly made her way towards the Royal family as she lifted her gown a little bit more showing the sneaker to the Princess as she smiled at the little girl who was chuckling in return before lifting her head up to face the Prince who was standing by his sister.

Seeing all eyes on her, feeling self-conscious, her steps slowed down with a questioning look.

"She cleans up nicely!" Vivaan said to his companion.

"Lipstick on a pig as the saying goes!" Imli in hate in words and eyes.

Getting on the last step, she smiled at Pakhi who discretely pulled her brother's hand "What are you waiting for?" she asked and he in reply just smiled at his sister before he walked towards the elegant lady in blue, who was gaining all the attentions.

And she who was still a few feet away from them, looked at him with questions in her eyes before she looked around once again.

"Why are they staring?" she asked as he neared her.

"Cause you look perfect!" he replied, making her shy as he cheeks turned red.

"You don't look too shabby yourself, Prince Suraj!" she complimented him with a smile "Or should I call you King Suraj now?" she questioned.

"You know what I think about titles!" he said simply. Showing the stairs with his eye, he asked "Shall we?"

She not getting what he is asking, looked at him with big eyes which widened even more as he stepped closer to her.

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Thank you for reading buddies!

Hope you all liked it!

See you all soon!

Next part : Part 28

- Maithili

Edited by maithu_ - 7 years ago

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sonali mishra

@Shivi_forever

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Posted: 7 years ago

#244

Interesting update👏

Loved how Sukor's moment😳

Suraj is ready to take responsibility of king😊

What are Imvan upto😡

Waiting for next

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Maithili

@maithu_

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Posted: 7 years ago

#245

Originally posted by: katheriene
Interesting update👏
Loved how Sukor's moment😳
Suraj is ready to take responsibility of king😊
What are Imvan upto😡
Waiting for next

Thank you so much dear!

Glad you loved Sukor moment

Yup finally he is but let's see what fate has in store for him

ImVaan up to something we will hate Heee

Thank you once again

See you

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nemo316

@nemo316

Sparkler

Posted: 7 years ago

#246

Amazing update!

Hate Imvaan and their smugness.

Imli can't hide her jealousy.

Suraj has finally embraced his responsibilities, but I'm worried about the upcoming twist.

Loved how all eyes were on Chakor.

Sukor moment was lovelu, guess they're going to dance together.

Looking forward to the next update.

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Maithili

@maithu_

Rocker

Posted: 7 years ago

#247

Originally posted by: meshmesh
Amazing update!
Hate Imvaan and their smugness.
Imli can't hide her jealousy.
Suraj has finally embraced his responsibilities, but I'm worried about the upcoming twist.
Loved how all eyes were on Chakor.
Sukor moment was lovelu, guess they're going to dance together.

Looking forward to the next update.

Thank you so much dear!

Hate Imvaantill the last part dear

Let's just hope the best for SUkor dear!

Well guess isss right LOL

See you soon with a dance moment

Didn't came to work yesterday due to snow, so will be posting the next part today!

:-)

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Maithili

@maithu_

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Posted: 7 years ago

#248

Hey!

Sorry for no message from me yesterday!

As there were transport problem here sue to snow, I could not get to my work to post the part!

Happy reading!

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Part 28 (Previous part : Part 27 )

As everyone looked at them, Prince took the lady by surprise as he held her hand with a smile while she looked everywhere around her.

Looking at her son's happy face, Queen smiled and same did the little Princess who followed the Prince and his lady with her eyes as they climbed the steps to head to the ball room.

Entering the room filled with classical music (Violin, flute...), people dancing everywhere and the stage for the coronation set in the center with mike, table with crown on it and musicians around the stage, the Prince pulled himself along with his lady to the center of the dance floor with few eyes on them among the crowd.

"May I have the first dance?" Prince asked as they stopped in the center stage and faced each other.

"Seriously?" she asked shocked.

"As long as you promise not to tread on my feet!" he replied with a serious face making her chuckle "So accepted!" he says as he stands in his position, with his head held high and she on the other hand with a smile on her face, stands straight and did the small gesture of bending a little before accepting to give her hand in his extended one.

With music running around them, they stood close to each other, with her right hand in his left and her left hand on his shoulder while his right hand was on her back with just a small space between them so the air could pass by them.

Locking their eyes, they started to move to the music slowly, in circle.

And there entered another couple, hand in hand as their eyes were just for the only couple dancing in the center with evil smirks visible on their lips.

Imli, looking at her partner with a crooked smile, asked "Shall we?"

And he who was waiting for the opportunity, showed his teeth and asked for her hand before they made their way to the dance floor.

Looking around, she asked "Aren't you worried they are all talking about us?" trying to make her face look normal.

"They are just saying that you are out of my league!" he said as a matter of fact.

"I'm sure!" she laughing at his seriousness.

"I really wouldn't be here if it wasn't you!" he said sincerely.

"I think you are giving me more credits than what I really deserve." she said with a simple smile.

'No I'm not! And I don't think so!" with smile, he continued "I'm comfortable with you!" looking keenly in her eyes "You are more genuine than anybody I have ever met!" he finished making her face fall.

Taking his hand from her back as her hand went to his hip, he held her chin and lifted her face as she opened her mouth to tell him something "Suraj! I" and both got interrupted in whatever they were doing with the applause echoing the room with all the guests entering there as only few minutes is left for Christmas to begin along with Suraj's reign.

Everyone stopped dancing and went to take their place to witness the coronation.

"I guess it's time! Wish me luck!" he said with a smile that she reciprocated.

"You don't need luck!" she said before he moved away from there as the ceremonial music started to play with the Prime Minister and Price getting on the stage and standing straight, welcoming everyone with a warm smile hiding his stress.

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Thank you for reading!

Hope you liked their dance!

If you find it filler well it's not as it was another attempt of the reporter to tell her identity and another moment of the couple here ;-)

Will try to post the next part soon!

See you all!

Next part : Part 29

- Maithili

Edited by maithu_ - 7 years ago

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sonali mishra

@Shivi_forever

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Posted: 7 years ago

#249

Amazing update👏

Loved Sukor's dance & their conversation😳

So the coronation is in next part😲

I think Imvaan will reveal the truth😡

Hoping that everything get well soon as I don't want Vivan to rule😕

Waiting for next

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Maithili

@maithu_

Rocker

Posted: 7 years ago

#250

Originally posted by: katheriene
Amazing update👏
Loved Sukor's dance & their conversation😳
So the coronation is in next part😲
I think Imvaan will reveal the truth😡
Hoping that everything get well soon as I don't want Vivan to rule😕
Waiting for next

Thank you so much dear!

Happy you loved their convo and dance

Yep! Coronation next part! ;-)

Well drama is needed, so for sure something going to happen!

No worries, all is welll

See you