FF: Her King! (Completed - 23/02)

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Maithili

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Posted: 7 years ago

#231

Originally posted by: katheriene
Interesting update👏
Loved Sukor's moment
What Imli & Vivaan knows the secret of Sukor😲
What will happen now
Suraj is finally ready for taking responsibility😊
Waiting for next

Thank you dear for reading and liking it

Happy you loved Sc moment

Yup dear! Villains know the truth

Let's just hope for the best!

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Maithili

@maithu_

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Posted: 7 years ago

#232

Originally posted by: sumsukor
Maithu
just read

Why the hell cant they keep off my sukor pleaseee😡 mannerless ***** entering into others rooms and she does it her too😡

and she took the papers???

oh god no! 😭😭

i will quote my dudes words when ever I start to feel very happy something bad start to happen😭😭

hope chakor realise it and make a quick plan

Aww dear! Don't feel sad!

All will go well

Agree dear! They are a manner-less couple for sure! ImVan

No sad feeling!

A happy and emotional part on its way

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Maithili

@maithu_

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Posted: 7 years ago

#233

Originally posted by: HayaZehra313
Wow...❤️waiting for next update plzzz update soon...😳

Thank you so much dear!

Happy you liked it!

Keep on reading

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Maithili

@maithu_

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Posted: 7 years ago

#234

Originally posted by: meshmesh
Action packed update!

Loved Sukor romance, they gave in to their feelings.
Why is their happiness so short lived 💔?
Imvaan are horrible, I'm sure they'll expose Suraj's truth and make a lot of drama about Chakor's.

Eagerly waiting for next.

Thank you so much Mai

Glad you loved the small moment of Sukor

Well their happiness is short lived as it has to have a long run once they are together ;-)

Hope all is well dear

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Maithili

@maithu_

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Posted: 7 years ago

#235

Originally posted by: meshmesh
Hi Maithu

I think Chakor's truth will be out on ball night. Not sure about Suraj's, either Vivaan will blackmail the royal family or he'll leak it to the press.

I'm curious to know if this means Suraj won't be king or is there a twist? I don't want Imvaan to rule.
Will Chakor be framed for exposing Suraj's truth? They'll both be heart broken.

Hey dear!

Thank you for sharing your views dear!

Interesting indeed!

All I can say for now is that twists and turns are on their way soon!😊

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Maithili

@maithu_

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Posted: 7 years ago

#236

Originally posted by: HayaZehra313
I think chakor's truth will be out on coronation day...😳imvaan are so horrible hate them...😡and sukor first kiss was sudden but i love that scene...😳carry on waiting anxiously 4 next update...😳

Thank you dear for participating in this questions session

Heee Happy you loved their kiss scene

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Maithili

@maithu_

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Posted: 7 years ago

#237

Originally posted by: Krupy
My question is: Is there any possibility for Pakhi to be crowned if Suraj can't? I really don't want Vivaan to take a throne not even for two minutes.
Although I would like all truths to be out in the same time it will be huge shock for both. So I think Chakor's truth will be out on a ball, culprit Imli. Suraj's truth will be out in coronation time, culprit Vivaan.

Last, I don't think kiss was sudden. They have already spend some cute moments together, and it was surprise but it was not sudden.

Nope Pakhi can't be crowned. Only a man from the royal line can as it was mentioned in one of the parts.

Thank you so much buddy for sharing your view and thoughts on this story.

Interesting to read!

And I am sure that no one is wishing for Vivaan to take the crown LOL

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Maithili

@maithu_

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Posted: 7 years ago

#238

Part 26 (Previous part : Part 25 )

"Hi!" The student said as she saw her tutor face her.

"Hey!" With a smile "I was just trying to get dressed to the ball!"

Pakhi grumbles seeing the dark dress in Chakor's hand.

Seeing the little girl's reaction, she said "it's this" showing the gown "or sweats!"

With a straight face "I think you are almost done with your story!" Pointing at her writing work.

Putting the dress down, with a smile on her face, she took a seat on her bed, in front of the Princess "Almost!" She said "Tonight we will find out how it ends!"

With sadness lingering on her voice and bending her head "And then you will be gone!" Lifting her head, watching her tutor and bending her head once again "And you will never think about us again!" She added.

"Pakhi!" Shaking her head "How could I ever forget you?" Taking the small girls hand in here "No never ever!" She finished with a small smile.

Pakhi turned to her right as Chakor took back her hand as she saw her student to get a small box from the side of her wheelchair.

With a small smile, she passed the box to Chakor "This is for you! Merry Christmas Chakor!"

Surprised and feeling emotional "I don't have anything for you!"

"You have given me a lot!" The reply came, putting the box in her hand.

"Don't pretend you have learned everything from me as a tutor!" Looking serious but not her voice.

Shaking her head "You told me everything is going to be okay! Even if my father is gone!" Looking at her leg "Even if I'm... different!" Adding a smile she continued "Just open it!" She said as she faced the lady.

Smiling, she opened the box to find an elegant bracelet with a frozen pendant hanging on it and all in silver.

"Beautiful!" She said touching it.

"It reminded me of our toboggan ride!" As she helped to wear it.

Looking in her eyes, Chakor said "What would I have ever done without you?"

"Spend Christmas in the dungeon, for sure!" Like being serious.

And both ended laughing out loud and getting up from her place, Chakor went and hugged the girl before taking back her place.

"Right in the time!" Princess said as they knocks, making the elder one to think who it can be.

And one by one three people entered the room worrying the reporter "What's going on?"

"Meet Stella, Reshmi and Stephan!" Pakhi "They do hair, make-up and dressing!" She added as Stephan pulled a dressing rack along with him as he entered.

"Huh?"

"As you can say! Do 'The work!'" She said quoting the lady words, shrugging her shoulder as she smiled.

"And they are gonna work on me?" She asked.

"Uh huh!" She said smirking "Complete makeover!"

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Thank you so much dear!

Hope you all like it

Soon the ball will happen and the coronation too!

See you soon!

Next part : Part 27

- Maithili

Edited by maithu_ - 7 years ago