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Maithili

@maithu_

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Posted: 7 years ago

#221

Originally posted by: sumsukor
Maithu
Sumi could not stop herself so read at the wee hours!!! he he after drenching drooling over my adories yday...

I could not wait... true when it rains,... it pours and one pe one damaka on the show and here too

and lo two chapters in a go!!! and the way it end

lovely

Ok Am not going to hate her anymore (you know whom I am talking) as i have come to the infinite percentile... so lets leave her that selfish parasite...

shocking to note that the prince is adopted but does he have a glimmer thought of it somewhere!!!

Thanks for the convo of the dad and his girl yes thats the needed outline of advice and showing the way but not to force...

allowing her to think ... thats really nice... and he knows for sure that she will tread on the right path..

I would rather feel that Chakor will not bring this out to the media as it will lead to the breaking of the Prince's heart again and he will forever curse the female gender for playing with his emotions and sure our girl will not do that...For she knows about him now... its so platonic..the way he spoke...

Awwh whatever be it my girlie is girlie and she is bit J hahaha i like it... its sweet though and the way she gets it clarified...

Just loving the dude more and more for he is reminding of the placedo... still yet to get there..

and that blissful kiss which I wanted to happen in the Blue Moon Day when they were sooo ccclooosee just a (kiss)slip between the lips... (sorry I keep bringing in the show too but what to do Sumi cant resist it 😉)

but thats how it happens and with this hope the happenings will be good!

ok off topic I hope with the calls with her work dudes I hope they dont write about the Prince on their own for publicity!!!

its beautiful... still having my smile and hope and pray I keep smiling through please!

Lovely Maithu

go girl...

about the letter to Luck... i will write my question over the weekend!!!

Oh Sumi!

What I see when I open HK! Your lovely comment and it just brought a smile even before reading it.

Well Rain is one thing that make even the people who work hard to take a break and feel free and have lazy time LOL

And there is another chap on it's way.

Agree dear!

There is no need to talk about that lady! Selfish creature!

Nope! He doesn't know anything about it for now!

Happy u liked the father & daughter convo!

Well! She knows him more than anyone else for now! Hope Chakor makes good move.

Glad you are liking the dude nd his moves LOL

And no worries dear!

You can bring the show as much as you want, no pbm!

Nope dear! The office colleagues wants their friend to have a big future! that's it

Thank you so much!

See you soon!

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Take your time with the Letter!

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Maithili

@maithu_

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Posted: 7 years ago

#222

Part 25 (Previous part : Part 24 )

Both opened their eyes to look at each other still being in case.

"What was it that you wanted to tell me?" He asked as his eyes moved to her trembling and inviting lips.

As she was think of what she was going to say before, again an action of his ceased her brain to function, the action of taking her lips in his as he wanted more and more and she also give in to the desire and hungrily kissed him back as jealousy of this morning, the morning where she saw him with another woman provoked her. Hugging each other they enjoyed their closeness and shared untold promises with moon as their witness.

At the same time, inside the palace.

"Are you sure about this Lady Imli?" Vivaan asked standing behind her as she was opening a door using hair pin.

"I am telling you again that there is something fishy about this Miss. Rosella Ben!" Imli said opening the lock of the tutor's room with a smile of evilness "And I'm going to get to the bottom of the matter!" she added opening the door.

Entering the room as thieves "What are we looking for, exactly?" he asked.

"Anything and everything!" she said as she neared the bed where Chakor's bag and wallet were laying freely "I know she is hiding something!" she repeated as he was looking around the room "Here! Look through this!" she told him passing the file bag to him as she sat on the bed with hopes of finding something here.

Getting it in his hand, he opened it and started to go through it as she opened her small bag and emptied it on the bed to find a passport.

Opening the passport with curiosity, her eyes shone as she came to the page which caught her eyes "Hmmm" she hummed reading the name "Chakor Bhuvan Lal!" she said as smile danced on her lips. Turning it to Vivaan, she showed him the passport as his face also was of the same happiness.

"Well, well, well!" he said pulling a paper from that file bag "I have also something interesting for you!" he added showing her the adoption paper "Looks like Christmas came earlier this time!" he finished making her smile grew wider which he reciprocated in a mysterious way.

Taking the needed papers, the left the room in the same state as it was earlier.

"Good night!" Prince said as he accompanied the lady to her room.

"Good night!" she replied with the smile of happiness as she entered her room.

Waving his hand, he smiled at her "See you tomorrow at the ball!"

She simply smiled and closed the door.

Once inside her room, she took the file bag from the bed and put it in her luggage "I will soon tell you my truth Suraj!" she said before getting on her bed to enter the world of dreams.

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With sun shining brightly in-between the mountains, Prince with his favorite horse made his way to the graveyard.

Getting down, putting his hat on the horse's back, he walked further and stopped in front of Late King, his father's grave.

Getting on his knees with a hand on the tails, feeling the world crack beneath him, he started to talk to his father.

"I'm sorry for what I said the day I left, Father!" taking a breath "I know it hurt you!" sadness visible in his eyes "And there is no way I can take it back." seeing the rising sun and clear sky "I will do what you wanted from me!" facing the grave once again "I will accept the crown for you and for Mother!" and with a slight shake of head, he added "But I will never measure up to you!" getting up on his feet, he finished "And no one ever will, Father!"

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In the palace.

Chakor who accepted the Prince invitation, made a move.

With lots of efforts on her shoulder, all she wanted now is to present herself with a beautiful dress in front of him, so the first step is to be presentable for herself.

Changing one after the other, she was at her 8th dress when someone knocked on the door.

"Come in!"

"I see that someone is trying hard to get ready!" Pakhi said chuckling as she entered the room in her wheelchair.

While her tutor-friend stood their tired.

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Thank you buddies for reading this part!

Sorry that I could show you just a bit of preparation as the next part will also be on the same subject.

Let me know your views through LIKES & COMMENTS dearies!

See you all on Monday.

Next part : Part 26

- Maithili

Edited by maithu_ - 7 years ago

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sonali mishra

@Shivi_forever

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 7 years ago

#223

Interesting update👏

Loved Sukor's moment

What Imli & Vivaan knows the secret of Sukor😲

What will happen now

Suraj is finally ready for taking responsibility😊

Waiting for next

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sumsukor

@sumsukor

Rocker

Posted: 7 years ago

#224

Maithu

just read

Why the hell cant they keep off my sukor pleaseee😡 mannerless ***** entering into others rooms and she does it her too😡

and she took the papers???

oh god no! 😭😭

i will quote my dudes words when ever I start to feel very happy something bad start to happen😭😭

hope chakor realise it and make a quick plan

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Haya Zehra Jafar

@HayaJafar313

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#225

Wow...❤️waiting for next update plzzz update soon...😳

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Maithili

@maithu_

Rocker

Posted: 7 years ago

#226

Hey!

As it's a weekend and this story is crossing an interesting side, I thought to ask your views on few things.

First!

What are the questions you have over this story? (It will be useful for future parts)

Second!

When do you think both the main characters truth will be out? (Choose an option)

a) Ball night

b) Coronation time

c) A time you think

Finally!

Do you think it was sudden their first kiss?

Hope to see your views and opinions!

Thank you so much buddies!

- Maithili

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nemo316

@nemo316

Sparkler

Posted: 7 years ago

#227

Action packed update!

Loved Sukor romance, they gave in to their feelings.

Why is their happiness so short lived 💔?

Imvaan are horrible, I'm sure they'll expose Suraj's truth and make a lot of drama about Chakor's.

Eagerly waiting for next.

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nemo316

@nemo316

Sparkler

Posted: 7 years ago

#228

Hi Maithu

I think Chakor's truth will be out on ball night. Not sure about Suraj's, either Vivaan will blackmail the royal family or he'll leak it to the press.

I'm curious to know if this means Suraj won't be king or is there a twist? I don't want Imvaan to rule.

Will Chakor be framed for exposing Suraj's truth? They'll both be heart broken.

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Haya Zehra Jafar

@HayaJafar313

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#229

I think chakor's truth will be out on coronation day...😳imvaan are so horrible hate them...😡and sukor first kiss was sudden but i love that scene...😳carry on waiting anxiously 4 next update...😳

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Krupy

@Krupy

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#230

My question is: Is there any possibility for Pakhi to be crowned if Suraj can't? I really don't want Vivaan to take a throne not even for two minutes.

Although I would like all truths to be out in the same time it will be huge shock for both. So I think Chakor's truth will be out on a ball, culprit Imli. Suraj's truth will be out in coronation time, culprit Vivaan.

Last, I don't think kiss was sudden. They have already spend some cute moments together, and it was surprise but it was not sudden.