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Posted: 7 years ago
Maithu I won't comment anything about horrible creature. I think you already know how much I hate her.

But Suraj... I so love this Princ. If not for anything else then I would start to love him because of the way he is treating Imli.

Loved father-daughter bonding. The advice her father gave her is only advice that could really help Chakor in this situation, and I'm glad that she got it.

Waiting for the next.
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Krupy

Maithu I won't comment anything about horrible creature. I think you already know how much I hate her.


But Suraj... I so love this Princ. If not for anything else then I would start to love him because of the way he is treating Imli.

Loved father-daughter bonding. The advice her father gave her is only advice that could really help Chakor in this situation, and I'm glad that she got it.

Waiting for the next.

Of course I know how much most of the people here hate her and I'm just giving one more reason to hate her more LOL
Hahaha Glad you are loving him for his this behaviour LOL
Happy you liked the convo of Daughter & Father
Hope she follows it! ;-)
See you soon!
Thank you !
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Posted: 7 years ago
Part 24 (Previous part : Part 23 )


"There is someone at the door Papa! I will call you later!" as the knocking sound dies.
"Okay dear!" her father replied.
"Love you Dad!" and she cut the call.
Putting her phone on the table, she got up and went to open the door.

Opening the door half way, she saw the Prince waiting there, studying his watch.
Not getting what he is doing there, she said "Hi!" to get his attention.
Turning back to check her bed with document laying on it, she lightly closed the door as he faced her with his hands in his pant pockets.
"Is there something I can do for you?" she asked as flashes of the morning scene flashed in her mind.
"I thought we might go for a walk!" he replied simply "It's a lovely night outside."
Hesitatingly she replied "I don't know!"
"Please!" he said. With a thinking look, he added "Just 20 minutes. I will be pleased to have your company."
She nodded not knowing what to say "Sure!" and showing her hand inside the room, she said "Let me get my coat!" and that made him smile.
Closing the door, she heaved a breath of relief as he waited outside.

***

"I was going to invite you for a horse ride" Prince started as both started to get down from the palace premise to enter the garden "And then I thought that a walk might be a little bit safer!" he continued smiling at her as she was just a step away from him "Is everything all right?" he asked seeing her face to be a bit fallen.
Lifting her head but trying to avoid facing him, she asked the question that was bugging her since the time he asked her out "You often offer women to have romantic walks in the snow at night?" in a way that could have hurt him.
"What?" he asked not getting her this way of asking?
"No! Nothing! It's stupid!" she said getting what she just said.
"Please, talk it out to me!" he said sensing she is disturbed because of him or some other matter and in need to know what she is really thinking and what is her life story, he added "I feel like I've told you everything about myself, and I know hardly anything about you."

Instead of replying to his question, she asked "What would Lady Imli say if she saw both of us walking out here together?" as they moved around the garden filled with snow.
"Why would it matter?" he asked not getting it.
"I saw you two earlier!" she said seeing his face as both walked side by side.
Stopping on his track as she stopped along with him, he turned to face her and said "Whatever you think you saw, there is nothing between her and me!" he said with a serious face, trying his best to enter this info in her entire system.
With a mocking smile on her lips, she put forth her thought "It didn't look that way to me!" as she moved forward from there.
Sighing "She was just trying to rekindle something that isn't there anymore!" he said as he followed her.

And both started to walk once again together "It must be happening to you a lot that women through themselves at your feet!" she said with a bit of hurt mixed in her sarcastic voice.
Smiling at himself "Men too, sometimes!" and turning his face to see her "Well what about you? A woman of your intelligence and beauty must have men throwing themselves at you." he said in a way to know what she was going to say.
"Not so much!" she said with a smile too "My focus on my career at the moment is what interest me!" she simply said.
"Your career of tutor?" he questioned. And as if she got back to the shoes of Miss. Rosella, guilt passed through her eyes as she bent her head with thoughts running everywhere while his eyes were focused on their path "I hope you will come tomorrow night." he added.
Looking at him "Tomorrow night?" she questioned.
"The Christmas Eve Ball!" he said as both stopped facing each other "I will feel a lot less nervous to have you there."
"Suraj!" looking in his eyes as he was already studying her moves "There is something I need to tell you."

Even before she could say another word, something happened.
Something that even the Prince didn't plan.
Something even the lady didn't expect.
Something that made the equation change for good between them.
And that something is that the Prince took a step closer, pulling her to himself by her hand and sealed her lips with his for their first ever kiss in a fraction of second.
Kissing her lips tenderly for what felt like eternity, both moved their face away with their eyes closed, breaking the kiss as their hearts sang the song of Attraction and Love.

*******

Thank you buddies for reading!
Hope you all liked it!
May be you could have questions about the kiss!
Well in that case, you know where to ask LOL
See you soon with the Ball preparations!


Next part : Part 25


- Maithili

Edited by maithu_ - 7 years ago


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Posted: 7 years ago
Interesting update👏
Chakor was somewhat jealous about the morning incident😉
Loved Sukor's conversation😊
Sukor's kiss was beautiful😃
Waiting for next
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Posted: 7 years ago
Aww Sukor first kiss

Love the way Suraj invited miss.Rosella to the Christmas Eve Ball. I hope Chakor will accept invitation.

Waiting for next.
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Posted: 7 years ago
Amazing update
Loved Sukor talk, Chakor was mainly angry about the morning scene, but Suraj was only interested in her.
The kiss was sweet and unexpected, thanks for the treat.
I wonder how they'll react.

Eagerly waiting for next.
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Posted: 7 years ago
Maithu
Sumi could not stop herself so read at the wee hours!!! he he after drenching drooling over my adories yday...

I could not wait... true when it rains,... it pours and one pe one damaka on the show and here too

and lo two chapters in a go!!! and the way it end

lovely

Ok Am not going to hate her anymore (you know whom I am talking) as i have come to the infinite percentile... so lets leave her that selfish parasite...

shocking to note that the prince is adopted but does he have a glimmer thought of it somewhere!!!

Thanks for the convo of the dad and his girl yes thats the needed outline of advice and showing the way but not to force...

allowing her to think ... thats really nice... and he knows for sure that she will tread on the right path..

I would rather feel that Chakor will not bring this out to the media as it will lead to the breaking of the Prince's heart again and he will forever curse the female gender for playing with his emotions and sure our girl will not do that...For she knows about him now... its so platonic..the way he spoke...

Awwh whatever be it my girlie is girlie and she is bit J hahaha i like it... its sweet though and the way she gets it clarified...

Just loving the dude more and more for he is reminding of the placedo... still yet to get there..

and that blissful kiss which I wanted to happen in the Blue Moon Day when they were sooo ccclooosee just a (kiss)slip between the lips... (sorry I keep bringing in the show too but what to do Sumi cant resist it 😉)

but thats how it happens and with this hope the happenings will be good!

ok off topic I hope with the calls with her work dudes I hope they dont write about the Prince on their own for publicity!!!

its beautiful... still having my smile and hope and pray I keep smiling through please!

Lovely Maithu

go girl...

about the letter to Luck... i will write my question over the weekend!!!



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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: katheriene

Interesting update👏

Chakor was somewhat jealous about the morning incident😉
Loved Sukor's conversation😊
Sukor's kiss was beautiful😃
Waiting for next

Thanks a lot dear!
Glad you liked it
Yes she is indeed jealous LOL
Happy you enjoyed their moment Heee
See you!
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Krupy

Aww Sukor first kiss


Love the way Suraj invited miss.Rosella to the Christmas Eve Ball. I hope Chakor will accept invitation.

Waiting for next.

Thank you dear for reading and liking it!
Happy you loved Suraj's way here too LOL
Hope so dear!
Keep on reading
See you
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: meshmesh

Amazing update

Loved Sukor talk, Chakor was mainly angry about the morning scene, but Suraj was only interested in her.
The kiss was sweet and unexpected, thanks for the treat.
I wonder how they'll react.

Eagerly waiting for next.

Thanks Mai for the lovely comment!
Happy you enjoyed their talks and kiss Heee
Well soon you will know the reaction as they are kind of grown up people so knows where they stand. So less words are enough I feel LOL
see you soon with next part

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