MG- Aanchaal part 1 on pg 1

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Hi I am posting this story on this thread some of you already read that on Maneet Farewell thread and make some changes here part 1 might be same...hope you guys like that

Aanchaal

Hum tum bandhey ek aanchaal sy...
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Part 1


Maan singh khurana! Aj to ap gaye.

When he saw uncle Sharma enter as an invigilator in his class quickly he covered his face by his hands and murmerd which is quite loud. Due to loud voice geet handa turned and saw him, she got idea that invigilator is known to him that's why he covered his face. But how long he hides? Invigilator after giving geet handa her answer copy came to him and shocked.

Tum...?

He standup

Uncle! Dekhye meri koi ghalti nhi hy ma paper daney nhi arha tha wo to yash ne majboor kr dia us ne dhamki bhi di k us ki tayari zero hy aur kaha tum to msc aur mform ho tum to hr topic py chahye wo history ho ya current affairs py ghanton boltey ho tumhari knowdlege ghazab ki hy tum mera paper dy do warna ma sucide kr loon ga aur ilzam tum pr aye ga aur ma itna handsome plus genius banda maan singh khurana murder kay case ma saza katney sy bachney k lye paper daney chala aya.mjh kya pata tha k invigilator k roop ma hoon gy by god agr pata hota to getup change kr k ata ap mjh ghoorein to mat beshak ghar akar yash ki class ly lyjye ga us ne kis hoshyari sy admit card py meri pic lagayi hy ...

He said non stop all students busy in filling first page of copy but geet handa put her elbow on desk and hold her chin with his palm only looks slow whispered maan singh khurana. blue jeans and white shirt his greek body makes surrounding stunning, their talks make realize that invigilator is his relative and he came instead of someone named yash.

Jantey ho kisi dosrey ki jagah paper dena kitna badha crime hy?

Uncle said with angry tone but in slow voice so rest of the student didn't hear except geet handa.

Private student ko kon phechanta hy? Agr ap action na lein to kisi ko khabar na ho...oh no kya ap ne humari baatein sunn li hain?

While talking she saw geet handa who listened their talks with so much concentration so he said last line to her

Ji haan

She nodded

Phr...?

He said helplessly she smiled and said

Be fikar rahyee ma ek handsome plus genious bandey k khilaf kuch nhi kahon gi.

Her eyes and smile have naughtiness he saw geet handa for few seconds and then smile and said

Thanks a lot!

Its pleasure for me

They both smiled at each other

Uncle yeh stranger ho kr sath dy rhi hain ek ap hain kay...haan to ma kab keh raha hoon ap burey hain bura to wo manhoos yash hy

When unlce Sharma glared him he changed his line

Tum marey best friend k batey na hotey to ma abhi action leta aur Vicky tumhein bhi aqal na ayi jo in dono ko samjhatey.

Now uncle Sharma turned towards Vicky who sits after maan

Ma kya samjhata?

Baith jao yeh last paper hy is lye kuch nhi keh raha

he sighed and sit on his chair

uncle ko dekh kr tum chup q hogye? Wahan yash ka to bht sath dy rhy thy mjh himmat dila rhy thy ab kya ho gaya tha iss ghadari ka sila to ma tumhein ghar ja kr doon ga to ruk beta zara!

He turned and take vicky's class. Seems interesting guy for geet handa but atlast question papers came and pin drop silence in class

Inviglator kay roop ma uncle Sharma bar bar round ly rhy thy balkey apni moti moti gaye(cow) jaisi ankhon sy ghoor rhy thy us ka paper 2 hours ma ho gaya tha pr uncle ne kaha paper wo time py hi lein gy

Maan take a look in class a girl on first line reads her paper and nodded her head in negative one boy copy another one so hurriedly but that guy didn't know that someone is copy him, on back side a guy checking his chits poor boy forgets which answer in which pocket then in last his eyes saw geet handa who sits in his front light brown hairs with red shine, her pen moves very fast, then she hits her pen on her lips may be thinks something and her rosy plump lips a sudden argue to touch her lips then she put her curls who touched her cheeks behind her ear that makes him conscious he sit straight and nodded his head in negative but his eyes automatically goes on her

Maan! Sunn q nhi rhy deaf ho gye ho?

He heard vicky's irritate voice unlce Sharma also reached them

Vicky kya poch raha tha tum sy?

Some students including geet attract to the voice

Yeh poch raha tha japan ka capital kon sa hy?

Phr tum ne kya kaha?

Uncle Sharma glared him

Ma ne kaha ek bar to tu ne tok dia ab bar bar mat "Tokyo

His innocent way makes other students laugh geet's laughs makes him to look her again uncle Sharma controls his smile and goes

Apka humor bht acha hy thanks fourth question ka answer mjh bhi yaad nhi arha tha apki wajah sy wo ho gaya

She appreciate him after few minutes his paper flied and lands near geet's feet unlce also come kya hoa ?

Question paper urrh gaya!

Geet pick his paper and smiled uncle Sharma picks geet's question paper and give him so geet put his paper she saw he wrote something then she reads

Shakespare ki zindagi py behas kyjye?

He wrotes

Hum badhon ki zindagi py behas nhi krtey

Second hitler ki zindagi sy ap kya smjhtey hain?

Yeh hi k wo uncle Sharma ki jaisa zalim tha ma yash ka paper daney chala aya aur uncle Sharma mjh aisey ghoor rhy hain jaisey chicken wala chicken ko marney sy phele ghhorta hy

She smiled on that

Next pheli jang e azim py roshni dalye

Kitney watt k bulb sy aur kitney qareeb sy dalon?

Geet turned towards him maan is unique she thinks

Atlast paper end and everyone go out geet also goes towards library to collect her phone due to security every student have to submit their phone in library she saw maan comes towards her but someone asked her about paper and when shr turned maan is already leaving and when she came out someone pushed her and she bumped to none other than maan she quickly get straight and politely said

Sorry wo kisi ne push kr dia tha

Its alright class ma ap ne mjh bacha lia yahan ma ne apko

He said with smiled with that both turned to go but something pull them together then they both saw geet's aanchaal got stuck in his shirt button situation is awkward maan saw her she is looking so lovely maan eyes got freeze on her face geet came forward and take her anchal smiled at him and goes maan saw her going but his eyes didn't move vicky's voice get his conscious back and he thinks

Yeh mjh kya ho gaya dil q chaha raha hy k bus usey hi dekta rahon

He jerked his thoughts and turned towards Vicky

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Posted: 7 years ago
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congrats dear
read it in farewell thread
happy to read it again
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Superb start..
Very interesting..
Cont. Soon..
Thanks for pm..
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Congrats
I remember this one
Maan had a very light shade here n he talks a lot
Lovely os
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Congrats for new story..
Lovely update..
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congrats on the new story! read on the farewell thread! Part 1 - terrific update, well written!
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its very sweet
waiting to read more
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Awesome ... Already read in farewell thread...😳
Loved maan characterisation... 😳 hillarious.. Maan came to xam hall in place of yash... And the invigilator is his uncle 😆
Loved the way maan said answer to geet 😆
Waiting for next part
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Nice start dear
Liked it!!
Maan's characterization is lovely. Maan came to give exams on behalf of Yash and replaced thyself at yash's place. Geet helps Maan and hides Maan's truth. To Maan's luck his uncle was the invigilator of the exam. Liked the Maan helps Geet during exam.
Thanks for the pm!
:))

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