MG- Tujhey Dhoondon Kahan Part 12 pg 54 - Page 24

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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Iptida

REVIVING The thread Process~Keeping it alive by comments!!😳

Update when you can!!
Your readers are waiting!!

thanks for that buddy😊😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
trying to update soon
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i'll update soon buddy
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updating on friday
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: taahir004

Fantastic Chapter

The last part of chapter was so emotional
Geet determined to search for her Maan and unknowingly she enters the house where her Maan
is been treated it seems now he has slipped into a coma
waiting now to see what will happen

thank you so much
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Posted: 7 years ago

Part 11

After few minutes when geet get calm she asked

Kaka inki tabiat itni kharab hy ma inko abhi hospital lay jana chahti hoon

Pr beta abhi phr sy itni lambi drive kaisey karo gi kuch waqt aram kr lo phr chali jana

Nhi kaka ab ma nhi ruk skti plz meri madad krye inko car tak ley janey ma

Acha beta jaisi tumhari marzi

After she setteled maan in car she came to kaka and fold her hands and said

Mjh smjh nhi arha ma apka shukriya kaisey adda karon ap ne marey maan ko bachaya hy unka khayal rkha marey jeeney ki wajah mjh lota di ap hi bataye ma aisa kya karon jis sy ma apka shukriya adda kr sakon

Arey beti humey sharminda mat karo maan humarey betey jaisa hi hy batao agr maery batey ko kuch hota to bhi ma us kay lye bhi yeh hi krta na aisey hath jorr kr mjh sharminda mat karo jao khush raho

Nhi kaka ap ne jo kia uska badla to ma chah kr bhi pora nhi kr skti mgr plz ma sach ma ap k lye kuch krna chahti hoon

Tum ne to kia na beta mjh marey ghar phonchya aur agr phr bhi kuch krna chahti ho to jao maan ko jld sy jld hospital ly jao aur apna aur apney bachey ka khayal rakho jao upar wala tumhara tumhein khush rakhey

And he keeps his hand on her head geet takes driving seat bid bye to kaka and drive towards hospital which is so far she keeps driving and time by time also check maan for few hours she continuously driving her back start paining and a little pain in her tummy she put her one hand on her tummy and said

Bus baby thora aur hum hospital phonchney hi waley hain bus papa ko hospital phocha doon phr zaroor rest karo gi promise bus thora sa aur baby

She is feeling so exhausted but right now she only cared for maan after few minutes she reached hospital and immediately admitted maan, then she feels she is so tired and couldn't stand more but there is no seat where she is standing she take out her phone and call sameer

Hello sameer!

Geet bahbi kahan ho? Kaisi ho?

Sameer! Woh woh...

Kya sab theek to hy na?

Sameer woh mil gaye!!!

Kyaaa??

Haan marey maan mil gye

and tears are flowing from her eyes

Ap sach keh rhi ho bro mil gye!

Haan sameer marey maan mil gye

And she heared his scream

Dad! mom! meera! bro mil gye!!!

Kahan ho ap sab log bro mil gye geet bhabi ne maan bro ko dhoond lia

And asked to geet

Bhabi ap kahan py ho kab arhi ho? Maan bro kaisey hain? Kahan hain?

Sameer un ki tbit theek nhi hy aur ma yahan city hospital ma hoon tum jldi ajao please

Ap tension mat lein ma bus jld sy jld wahan phonchta hoon ok bhabi

But she didn't hear his voice her vision got blurred and she fall on the other side sameer got tensed for not getting reply

Next day geet open her eyes slowly and realized she is laying on bed but where? she saw her surrounding and realized it's a hospital then she saw meera sitting on couch she called her in slow voice

Meera!

Meera saw her and rushed to her and asked

Geet kya hoa theek to hy na tu? Kuch chahye?

Theek hoon ma, pr ma yahan pr kyun aur tum yahan baki sab kahan hain?

Ek min ek min saans to lay lay itney sarey sawal chal ek ek kr k batati hoon

Tu na baat krtey krtey behosh ho gyi thi to tujhey bhi yahan admit kr dia gya sameer ko pata chal gya tha kay tum problem ma ho isi lye wo hum sab ko ly kr yahan agya aur baki sab maan bhai kay doctor kay pass hain unko abhi bhi hosh nhi aya hy na...

Maan ko kab hosh aye ga meera?

Yeh to nhi pata ab wo log ayen gy to pata chaley ga doctor ne kya kaha hy q k may to teri wajah sy yahan hoon tujhey jo meri ziada zarorat thi

Pr meera tu bhi to doctor hy na tuhjey nhi pata maan kab theek hoon gy

Doctor to hoon pr gyne aur tujhey check krny kay lye phele tumharey pass ayi thi aur janti hy tera baby tujh sy ziada strong hy bilkul fit and fine hy teri tarah nhi hy kay behosh ho jaye

And slap her head slowly

Haan mera baby bilkul apney papa py gya hy unki jaisa strong acha ab ja kr pata to kr na maan kay barey ma aur ma yahan sy kab uthon gi yeh bhi bata

Tum fikar nhi karo sameer atta hi hoga aur rhi baat apki jinab to bus yeh drip khatam ho jaye ap theek hain chal jab tak rest kr ley

Hmmm

And she closed her eyes after few minutes when geet is ready for discharge sameer enters in room and smile at geet

Oh ho to madam geet uth gyin!

Sameer!

She smiles at him he came forward sit opposite to her

Wah bhyee manna parey ga apko kya kaam kiya h yap ne bro ko dhoond lia aur dekho khud bhi ek dum fit hain wah bhyee

Sameer is having a sarcastic smile but geet didn't get him and said

Haan to dekho na marey maan mjh ko mil hi gaye

Kya dekhon? Smjhti kya ho apney ap ko tum jab sy ghar sy gyi ho koi contact tak nhi kiya aur chahti ho kay hum khush hoon halat dekhi hy apni kya bana li agr tumhein kuch ho jata tou kya jawab deta ma bro ko aur kuch nhi to apney baby ka hi khayal kiya hota wo to shukar karo kay hospital ma hi thin warna pata nhi kya ho jata

Sameer shouts at her then meera came and put her hand on his shoulder and makes him calm

Relax sameer relax dekho ab sab kuch shi hy uskey face ko dekho lagta hy abhi ro degi ab to sab theek hy na to tum bhi relax karo

Sameer looks geet she is having tears in her eyes sameer take a long breath and hold geet hands and said

Listen geet I know key tum ne jo kiya hy wo koi nhi kr skta tha tum ne hum sab ko maan bhai wapis la kr dye hain... pr tum yeh bhi to dekho tum ne humein kitna dara dia tha humein laga hum ne tumhein bhi kho dia hy aur phr jab tum baat krtey krtey chup ho gyein aur nurse ne phone py batya kay tum faint ho gyi to jaanti ho meri to jaan hi nikal gyi thi...you know na hum sirf bro sy hi nhi tum sy bhi bht pyaar krtey hain we love you yaar.

Geet smiles with tears and said

I know sameer...aur mjh nhi maloom tha tu itna emotional bhi hy ab agr apki speech ho gyi ho to kya plz mjh maan kay barey ma batao gey

Arey lo wohi to bataney aya tha...tum bhi na yaar geet kitni baatein krti ho chalo doctor ne sab ko bulaya hy mom and dad bhi wahin hain

Ma...ma baatein krtin hoon??

Haan! Dekha khud bhi maan rhi ho ab chalo bhi ya yahin rehna hy

Meera dekh rhi ho isko sab kuch khud kr kay ilzam mjh py laga rha hy

Meera smiles and said

Ab chalo tum dono warna late ho jyen gy

Trio leave for doctor's cabin where mom and dad is already present and discuss something mom see geet and hugs her and give peck on her forehead geet asked

Mom! maan?

She gestured her towards doctor when dad asked

To doctor sahab ab maan kaisa hy?

Dekhye mr.khurana yeh to ma apko bata chukka hoon kay unkey sar py chot ayi hy jis ki wajah sy wo coma ma thy aura b unko hosh agya hy pr hum phele sy kuch keh nhi skty

To hum us sy mil skty hain?

Ji ap log mil lyjye phr ma unka checkup karon ga kyun k mjh kuch doubt hy

Wo kya doctor sahab?

Sameer asked quickly

Dekhye sar py chot lagney ki wajah sy kisi bhi person ki memory py bhi asar par skta hy aur wohi humein check krna hy

To phr chalye na doctor sahab

All enter in maan's room doctor said

Maan dekhye ap sy kon milney aya hy

Maan opens his eyes slowly and saw his whole family in front of him then doctor asked

Maan in sab ko jantey ho?

Haan mom, dad and sameer

He said slowly and then geet came forward asked

Maan kaisey hain ap?

Maan looks towards her and said

Ap...ap kon?

Sorry ma ne apko phechana nhi?

Maan!!

Whisper came out from her mouth...
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Posted: 7 years ago
oh no happy n sad part
maan here but he lost memory
he doesn't remember geet
poor girl she searched him but fate playing cruel now
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Posted: 7 years ago
Sweet and bitter update dear
Liked it!!
Geet was glad that she found Maan. All thanks to her never giving up attitude. Loved old man's generous self. He didn't expect anything from her in return. Khurana s were happy that Geet found Maan but worried sick for Geet as she abruptly stopped talking to them. Glad that Geet and baby are fine but alas Maan lost his memory concerning his life aftermath Geet's entry and doesn't recognize her.
:))
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Posted: 7 years ago
wonderful update, superbly written! Geet finds Maan! its sad that Maan lost his memory! feeling 4 Geet! update soon
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Keepdreaming

oh no happy n sad part
maan here but he lost memory
he doesn't remember geet
poor girl she searched him but fate playing cruel now

thanks😊

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