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Chapter 21 A

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CHAPTER 22



ALL THE NAMES & PLACES ARE FICTITIOUS (if any resemblance to persons & places is purely coincidental). Any royal titles, MEDICAL PROCEDURES, MEDICAL TERMS, MILITARY PROCEDURES, MILITARY TERMS, Punjabi terms, architectural terms, IT terms & programs, office hierachy, wedding rituals, etc. are from my imagination hence THEY ARE NOT TRUE. PLEASE DON'T BASH ME !!!!!

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Then there was a pin drop silence which was finally broken by sound of ambulance sirens. ACP rushed both Geet and Rahul to the ambulance. Both Geet and Rahul were unconscious and bleeding. ACP went in the ambulance with Geet and Rahul as Rahul was only surviving villian among the four. As there was no more place in the ambulance with one paramedic, hence, Maan was forced to drive in his car. But before going to the hospital, Maan went to his father's room where he briefed Rishabh and Adi about what had happened. Maan asked Rishabh and Adi to stay with Garima and the triplets! But Rishabh threatened to tell Garima and triplets the truth about Geet if Maan didn't take Adi with him to the hospital. Once Maan and Adi left, Rishabh called Vicky. By the time Maan and Adi reached the hospital, doctors had finished examining Geet and Rahul. Dr. Sudha Raghupathi came out and said in anger, "MAAN, WHY CAN'T YOU TAKE CARE OF YOUR WIFE! First she was alone during her miscarriage, then she delivered triplets without you being present and now again you have made her pregnant. I had told you that I have to operate her as soon as possible. Now a days children are so irresponsible!"

"PREGNANT? Aunty but..."

"Maan, doctors are currently operating on Geet's shoulder to remove her bullet."

"BULLET??"

"Maan I'm really surprised, DO YOU EVEN LOVE YOUR WIFE?" Dr. Sudha Raghupathi walked back to the OT (Operation Theatre) fuming, where she had come from. Maan collapsed on sofa nearby muttering to himself, "Geet ko goli lagi hai...Geet is pregnant...Mai Geet ko phirse nahi baccha paya...Geet ko goli lagi hai...Geet is pregnant...Mai Geet ko phirse nahi baccha paya...Mai Geet ko phirse nahi baccha paya..." (Geet was shot...Geet is pregnant...Again I was unable to save my Geet...Geet was shot...Geet is pregnant...Again I was unable to save my Geet...Again I was unable to save my Geet...)



Seeing Maan's state and also that Maan was not responding to Adi's questioning him, Maan looked as if he is in another world! Adi at once called Rishabh. Half an hour later, Rishabh and Garima were at the hospital. Garima went and put her hand on Maan's shoulder. Seeing Garima, Maan at once hugged his mother saying, "Mom, I've failed as a husband and as a lover!"

"Nahi beta, yeh sach nahi hai..." (No its not true Maan you have...)

"Haan Maan tum..." (Yes you have...) Rishabh started getting annoyed on Maan. But when Rishabh got a furious glare from Garima he stopped and getting a signal from Garima's eyes, Rishabh left with Adi to do formalities regarding Geet's surgery?



"Maan tumhei aisa kyun lagta hai ki tum ek acche pati (husband) nahi ho?" (Maan, why do you feel that you are not a good husband?) Maan narrated what all happened in his cabin once Garima had left and how Geet saved him. Garima calmed Maan down and said, "Maan jab woh chaaron ek dusare ko marne-maarne par tule huye the toh tum kya kar sakte the? Aur waise bhi tumhari peeth toh Dev ki taraf thee tumhei kaise patta chalta ki woh tum par goli chalanewala hai. Tum chinta matt karo beta, mai abhi Sudha se baat karke aati hoon." (Maan the four of them were hell bent on killing each other at the drop of hat so what could you do? Besides your back was facing Dev, so how could you know that he is about to shoot you? You don't worry, I'll talk to Sudha.)



Just then a doctor in bloody scrub came out of the OT and said, "Whose is here from Mrs. Gayatri Maan Singh Khurana's family?" Maan and Garima at once rushed. "Doctor, how is my wife?"

"I'm cardiologist Dr. Venkatesh Padmanabhan. Mr. Khurana, luckily the bullet did not penetrate very deep, hence, I have removed it. But for next few months Mrs. Khurana's left hand's mobility will be reduce I hope you all will help her?"

"Off course doctor there is no question about it! What about her pregnancy?" Garima enquired.

"I'm afraid Ma'am you will have to ask that to Dr. Raghupathi. Due to such a major physical trauma to Mrs. Maan Singh Khurana's body, chances of "miscarriage" are high!"

"When can I take my wife home, doctor?"

"Mr. Khurana, she has to be here in hospital for at least 8-10days."

"But we have three small children. What do I tell them as they had seen her just before that horrific encounter?"

"Mr. Khurana you as their father and your family here will have to tell them the truth as gently as possible. I suggest you call Mrs. Gayatri Khurana's mother to assist you for sometime. Excuse me!"

Once Dr. Padmanabhan had left, Garima calmly tried to explain to her son, "Maan beta, kyunki Geet ki pregnancy ki situation itni tense hai, iss liye Sudha ko tum par gussa aa gaya." (Maan as Geet's pregnancy is high risk hence Sudha is tense and therefore got annoyed at you.)



"Nahi Maa, Sudha aunty ne bilkul theek kaha thaa ki Geet aur mujhe savadhaani barthni chahiye thee jab Geet ka operation hona zaruri thaa." (No Mom. Sudha aunty is absolutely right that Geet and I should have been careful especially when Geet's surgery was so urgent!)



With coaxing and cajoling by Garima, both mother and son entered Dr. Sudha Raghupathi's cabin.



Garima wished Dr. Raghupathi, "Hello Su! How are you?"

"I'm not at all fine. Garima, tum aur poora Khurana Khandaan, Gayatri ko kya samjhata hai? Bacche paida karne ki machine!" (I'm not at all fine. Garima, what do you and whole of Khurana household think of Gayatri? That she is just a machine to produce kids?)



"Sudha tum itna gussa kyun ho?" (Sudha why are you so angry?)

"Rima, I had forewarned you all that Geet's uterus is not strong and healthy and she has to undergo an "hysterectomy" (removal of uterus) and yet she became pregnant. As if that was not enough to complicate matters now she is undergoing a surgery for her bullet wound!" Dr. Raghupathi paused to catch a breath and then continued, "Anyway as her Gynaecologist, I will put few facts straight. First as her uterus is not in a healthy state, there is a high chance of miscarriage ! Ideally its better to abort the foetus but I know Geet won't agree for it. Second, even if we don't abort the foetus, due to her "Endometriosis" there is a high chance of miscarriage hence its an extremely a "high risk" pregnancy hence "spotting" is very likely to occur! Third point is that Geet's delivery cannot be a normal even if her pregnancy completes term, it will have to be a "Caesarean" birth." There was a knock on the door and the nurse entered, "Doctor you are needed..."

Maan and Garima came out of the Dr. Raghupathi's cabin in a state of shock and collided with Rishabh and Adi. Khuranas being the trustee of the Hospital were given the Presidential Suite. Hence, Rishabh, Garima, Maan and Adi went inside the suite giving them privacy for discussion. Garima narrated to Rishabh and Adi what all Dr. Raghupathi had said.



Rishabh finally lost his temper which he was controlling since he came to hear about Geet collapsing, "Dr. Raghupathi bilkul sahi keh rahi hain. Maan ne naa tok ek pati ka aur naa hi ek pitah ka koi bhi kartavye poora nahi kiya hai. MAAN YOU ARE A FAILURE AS A HUSBAND AND A FATHER." (Dr. Raghupathi is absolutely right! Maan neither have you properly fulfilled the duties of a husband nor a father. MAAN YOU ARE A FAILURE AS A HUSBAND AND A FATHER.)

"RISHABH, KYA KAHA TUMNE? (Rishabh, what did you say?) A voice thundered.

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Nice update dear
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So, it was Geet who witnessed Dev and Sasha's act. She used their act against them and turned tables. The evil gang fought among themselves and shot each other. In process Geet is injured as well. Hope nothing happens to her.
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CHAPTER 23


ALL THE NAMES & PLACES ARE FICTITIOUS (if any resemblance to persons & places is purely coincidental). Any royal titles, MEDICAL PROCEDURES, MEDICAL TERMS, MILITARY PROCEDURES, MILITARY TERMS, Punjabi terms, architectural terms, IT terms & programs, office hierachy, wedding rituals, etc. are from my imagination hence THEY ARE NOT TRUE. PLEASE DON'T BASH ME !!!!!

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Location: Presidential Suite, City Hospital



"RISHABH, KYA KAHA TUMNE?" (Rishabh, what did you say?) Everyone looked in the direction of the voice and found Savitri Devi Khurana standing there in anger with Vicky.

"MAA?" Rishabh ran towards his mother.

Savitri Devi pushed Rishabh away. She held Maan's hand and took Maan with her to a sofa and made him sit with her.



"RISHABH, KYA KAHA TUMNE? KI MAAN IS A FAILURE AS A HUSBAND AND A FATHER! Agar kumari advice maane toh RISHABH YOU ARE A FAILURE AS A FATHER! Rishabh tumne humesha se Maan ko galat samjha thaa aur samjha hai. Bachpan se Maan kam bolta thaa aur bahut sensitive thaa jisse tumne uski kamzori samjha. Vicky jovial aur prankaster thaa toh uske hassi mazak mein tumne kabhi bhi uski intelligence par dhyaan nahi diya aur Annie ko itna laad-pyaar diya ki woh tum par poori tehra dependant bann gayi. Kyunki tumne jo society ka criteria hai ek adarsh pati aur pitah kaa, tum bhi ussi criteria apar chale. Yeh bhool gaye ki duniya mein kissi bhi do individuals ki ek tehre ki personality nahi hoti chahe woh identical twins hi kyun naa hone! Tum kehte ho ki Maan accha pati nahi hai kyun? Maanti hoon ki Maan ke gunah ke kaaran woh chhe saal Geet ke saath nahi thaa magar uske baad jo bhi hua usmein Maan ki koi galati nahi! Udharan ke taur par, (example) jab Maan ko Geet ki "jhooti" mauth ka pata chala toh woh ek dam toot gaya aur khudh ki bhi jaan lene ko tyaar thaa. Magar Rishabh, tumko phir bhi Maan ka dard nahi dekha sirf yeh dekha ki Maan ek mard ho kar aise kaise toot sakta hai? Jab Geet Yamuna mein kudi hum sabne Geet ko mrit maana, magar ek akela Maan apne vishwas par atal raha ki uski Geet zinda hai. Maan yehi maanta raha ki Geet uske jaan ki raksha aur Geet Maan se roothi hai iss liye uske samne nahi aa rahi hai. Sirf sabke saamne apni patni ke saath hassi-mazak karna aur sabke saamne apni patni ke saath chumma-chaati (kissing, hugging, public display of affection etc.) karna hi ek pati ka apni patni ke prati prem nahi darshata hai !" (Rishabh, what did you say? That MAAN IS A FAILURE AS A HUSBAND AND A FATHER! According to me, RISHABH YOU ARE A FAILURE AS A FATHER! Rishabh you have always misunderstood Maan both in the past as well as now! Since childhood Maan spoke less and was extremely sensitive which you always considered as his weakness. You as well as everyone else considered Vicky a jovial, careless prankster, who is not at all serious in life. But neither you nor any male member of the family ever noticed his intelligence. You pampered and were so over protective regarding Annie, that she has become totally emotionally dependant on you. Rishabh, you blindly accepted the society's norm for an ideal husband and an ideal father. You overlooked that each individual is different and has a different personality, even identical twins don't have the same personality! You say that Maan is not a good husband. Why? I agree that after Maan committed the sin with Geet, for six years he was not there with her. But after those six years whatever has happened in Geet's life was not in Maan's control. For example, when Maan came to know about Geet's death (which was false) he was so broken emotionally due to guilt and loss of his life partner that he wanted to give up his own life! Unfortunately, you were unable to see Maan's pain, you only felt that as a full grown adult man how can Maan be weak? When Geet jumped in Yamuna river to save her honour we all thought her to be dead. But Maan was the ONLY who refused accept her death and he was very determined that she is alive and just hiding to save Maan's life as well as she is upset with him. Just by laughing and joking with your wife in front of others or by showing public display of affection with your wife, doesn't make you an ideal or the most loving husband!)



Garima turned red with embarassment realising that her mother-in-law had seen Rishab's public display of affection towards her which they had thought was done discreetly.



"Jahan tak pitah hone ka sawal hai Rishabh, kya tumhein maloom hai ki Vicky itna intelligent hai ki usse graduation ke liye Amerika ke best Engineering University (M**) se call aayi thee?" (As far as fatherhood goes Rishabh, do you know how intelligent Vicky is? Vicky got an admission offer from one of the most prestigious University in America for Engineering (M**).) Surprising Rishabh, Maan and Adi. "Magar usne refuse kar di kyunki woh hum sabko chodhke chaar saal ke liye US nahi jaana chahta thaa. Tumhare khud ke Engineer banne ke baad bhi woh tumse apne mann ki baat nahi kar paaya. Kyun? Annie ko tumne itne laad-pyaar se paala ki woh tum par aur uske bhaiyon par itna emotionally dependant ho gayi ki woh Dev ki ghinoni harqat ke aage awaaz tak nahi uttha paayi. Yeh toh bhagwaan ki kripa thee ki Geet ne samay par aa kar Annie ko baccha liya. Aur aakhiri baat, kya tumhei maalom hai Rishabh, ki Ayush ne Garv ko dhakka diya thaa jisse Garv ke sar par chot lagi thee? Maan ko Ayush ka behaviour dekh kar bahut gussa aaya magar Ayush ko maarne ke bajaaye usne Ayush ko video game dekhne se "boycott" kar diya. Chahta to Maan bhi Ayush ko do thappad maar kar apne baap hone ka farz poor kar deta jaise adhik tar pitah karte hain. Iss liye agar humari rai (advice) poocho toh Maan, Rishabh aap se kaheen behtar pitah sabit hue hain. Kyunki jo ek pitah bacche ki maansik sthithee (emotional state) samjhe bina kewal maar-pitayi ko hi anushasan (discipline) samjhe woh ek pitah kehlane layak nahi hai!" (But he refused to go as he loved his family too much to seperate from them for four years! Despite of your being an Engineer, Vicky was unable to share his wishes with you. Why? You pampered, over protected and never let Annie face any hardship, thereby making her emotionally dependant on you and her brothers. So dependant that when Dev tried to misbehave with her she could not even raise her voice against his disgusting act. It was God's grace, that Geet arrived on time saved her and Khurana's honour. Otherwise Khurana's prestiage would have been tattered into shreds! Last but not least, Rishabh do you know that Ayush had pushed Garv, thereby Garv hitting his head? Maan was furious seeing Ayush's behaviour but instead of physically punishing Ayush, Maan "boycott Ayush's playing of video games. If Maan wanted he could have also given two tight slaps to Ayush and done his fatherly discipline as most father's do. Hence, in my humble opinion, Maan proved to be a better father than you, Rishabh. Because when a man uses corporal (physical) punishment for disciplining a child without understanding child's emotional needs he is not fit to be called a "father"!)



Just then a nurse from OT came and said, "Mrs. Gayatri Maan Singh Khurana is calling for her husband."

"Maan aap jaayiye. Hum bhi thodi der mein Geet ko dekhne aayenge." (Maan you go. I'll also come after sometime to see Geet.) Savitri Devi said caressing Maan's face in an encouraging gesture.



Vicky said as everyone is tired and tense so he will get coffee for everyone. Maan also went to washroom and quickly washed his face and combed his hair with his fingers and went to meet his injured wife.
"Rima, mujhe nahi maloom thaa ki mai itna "jalaad" pitah hoon."(Rima, I never realised that I'm such a "monster father!)

"Jalaad" nahi beta. Atyadhik anushasan priye." (Not a "monster", my child but a very strict disciplinarian.)

"Aap kehna kya chahti hain Maa?" (What do you mean Maa?)

"Rishabh beta, aap humesha se apne beton ko apna hukum (order) sunnate hain. Kabhi aapne unki icchaiyen jaan ne ki koshish ki. Woh kya padhna chahte hain? Unke dost kaun hain? Poora parivaar chuttiyon par kahaan jaana chahta hai? waghera, waghera." (Rishabh, you always order your son's around. Have you ever tried to understand what their feelings and wishes are? What education stream they want to take? Who are their friends? Where does the whole family want to go for summer vacation? etc.) Making Rishabh and Garima go in deep thought. "Jab Maan ne woh gunah Geet ke saath kiya aur Rishabh tumhei patta chala, toh tumne Maan se ek dam apna naata todh liya aur woh Maan ke liye sabse dukh ki baat thee kyunki woh tumhei apna role model samjhata thaa aur hai bhi." (When Maan committed the sin against Geet, you at once threw Maan out of your life. That was a major catastrophe for Maan as he always considered you as his role model. He also considers you even now as his role model.)

"KYA? ROLE MODEL?" (What? Role model?)

"Haan ek baar maine Maan se poocha thaa ki usne itne din tak usne kyun humse Geet aur uski shaadi ka sach chupaya? Toh usne kaha ki uske Dad uss se door chale jaate jaise aap chale gaye the uska sach jaan ne par!" (Yes, once I had asked Maan why he hid the truth of Geet and his marriage for such a long time? He said that Dad would have thrown me out of his life as he has done now!) Garima agreed with Savitri Devi.

"Rishabh beta, Maan aur Vicky dono tumse sirf aur sirf ek pitah ka pyaar chahte hain jaise tum Annie ko karte ho. Maan aur Vicky ko apna dost samjho, naa ki tumhare under kaam karnewale employee." (Rishabh, Maan and Vicky want only your fatherly love as you love, Annie. Rishabh, consider Maan and Vicky as your friends not as employees working in Khurana Industries!)

Location: Recovery room, next to Operation theatre



Maan went with a thudding heart to see his wife. But he need'nt had worried. Matron there saw Maan and asked surprised, "Mr. Khurana you are here?"

"Yes my wife is asking for me."

"Off course how could I not put two and two together? Throughout the surgery even after anaesthesia Mrs. khurana kept muttering, "Mere Maan ko bacchao...Mere Maan ko bacchao...Mere Maan ko bacchao...!" (Save my Maan...save my Maan...save my Maan...!) "Mr. Khurana are you hurt anywhere?"

"No matron. I was shot at but my wife saved me but could not save herself." Matron nodded understandingly. "Come I'll take you to her."




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Superb parts dear
I loved how savitri stand for maan .

Otherwise his dad arghh


Thanks for double update
Hope geet will be fine soon
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Nice update dear
Liked it!!
Maan was feeling guilty that he couldn't protect Geet like previous time and was feeling remorseful. Geet is pronounced with so much critical health issues. Rishab is still angry on Maan and held Maan responsible for the happenings took place with Geet.
PS: sorry dear. Posted my comments in between your updates.
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Thanks for pm for part 21 b. Action packed update.
Evilness killed itself the evil. So that goodness has nothing to blame for. Evil fours can died by the hands of anyone from maan or geet or police but they killed each other. The whole truth from the mouth of rahul surely goinh to change some scenes. Going to read next part.

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