Three Shot: Dirt (Shivika/OmRu) COMPLETED

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Ruchi

@Rachna.KG

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Posted: 8 years ago

#101

I love all...all of your stories and can't tell you how much you are being missed these days in the forum. Since this turmoil has come up, I look up for your name every day. Would love to read your analysis on the separation track.

You are being missed

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sue1o1

@sue1o1

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Posted: 8 years ago

#102

Why have you stopped writing? You're brillaint with words

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S.love1

@S.love1

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Posted: 8 years ago

#103

Why did you not write anymore?

You are amazing at it and it's really enjoyable to read your work

Please do continue writing

I miss your words

Much love!

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jeenal

@jeenal20

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Posted: 8 years ago

#104

Wohooo..

Loved it... That sargent is surely gonna die from shivaays hand...

Poor girl anika... Had to go through soo much...

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Srivalli

@Srivalli.t

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Posted: 7 years ago

#105

Awesome story..

Loved it.

Very beautifully written.

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abhilasha

@jaansahiba

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Posted: 7 years ago

#106

That was absolutely amazing!! I loved it. My words can't clearly explain how I feel right now. The much wanted shivaay which we have always longed on the screen was here. Shivaay saying oh my mata was lovely. Khannaji replacing the partition for his boss and aloo-puri waali madam-ji was sweet enough to bring a smile on my otherwise worried face. The last part, the comforting kiss and annika Singh oberoi was fantastic. Omru were as all ways my favourite. Had it not been Rudy, shivaay Singh oberoi would have only found his lady love he would be prisoned for attacking the cop. Was absolutely wonderful.
Do keep writing more stories.
Love,
Abhi