AVNEIL TS:ae dil hai muskil * final part page 2 * completed!

Hi everyone , I started watching naamkaran a few days ago and fell in love with avneil. So here I am with my first story on avneil. This is my take on their story after the jail incident.

In this story avni is proved innocent and Vidyut dies in an accident which is actually neo's setup. No one doubts this to be a murder because it looks like an accident. Also mishit is alive and avni still doesn't knows the real reason behind her being in jail and hates neel for it.

This story starts from neel and neela taking avni home with them.

KHANNA HOUSE :

Swetha aarthi ki thaal leke aa,meri AVNI aagayi hai, says BEBE.

Haa BEBE abhi aayi...

Swetha gets the thaal and everyone is happy.

They welcome avni .

Avni asks Swetha...Mummyji misthi kaha hai,mujhe use milna hai abhi,akhir ushi ke liye to main is ghar mein aayi hu.

Everyone gets shocked.

AVNI, puttar yeh tu kya keh rahi hai,tu sirf misthi ke liye nahi puttar,tu hum sab ke liye aayi hai, haina,aakhir meri bacchi begunah saabit hogayi hai,ab toh woh iss ghar mein sar utha ke rahegi.

A : Nahi BEBE, main yaha sirf misthi ke liye aayi hu,mera iss ghar se ab koi lena dena nahi hai.

NEEL: yeh tum kya keh rahi ho AVNI, tum iss ghar ki bahu ho aur meri biwi ho.

A : BIWI? Kis haq se tum mujhe apni biwi bula rahe ho? Bhul gaye neel tumne hi mera sar ka sindoor mitaya tha aur tumne hi mere gale ka mangalsutra tod ke kaha tha ki yeh rishte ki koi ahemiyanat nahi hai tumhare zindagi. Bhul gaye?

Neel ek rishte mein,pyaar ke saath saath bharosa bhi zaruri hai,tumne mujhse pyaar toh karliya lekin shayd bharosa kabhi nahi kar paye,mein tumhare nazron mein hamesha ek criminal thi.

Neel : AVNI ,meri baat suno aisa kuch nahi hai.

A : NEEL mujhe tumhari koi baat nahi sunni,mein iss ghar mein zarur rahungi,maine tumse waada kiya tha ki marte dam tak tumhara saath dungi,woh wada main zarur nibhaungi par humare beech sirf ek hi rishta hoga,hum sirf misthi ke mummy papa banke rahenge, par pati patni kabhi nahi banenge,main ghar ke har insaan se unke saath ka rishta nibhaungi ,par tumhare saath mera aur koi bhi ristha nahi rahega,yeh baat kaan kholke sunlo. Saying this she goes away to misthi's room.

Neel starts crying, he is heartbroken because the thing he feared has happened, his Avni hates him and he cannot bear this.

Everyone in the house is sad.

Swetha,Bebe,Neela all three of them cry...

MISTHI'S ROOM :

Misthi is sleeping when Avni enters the room.

Avni goes and sits beside misthi and ruffles her hair, and cries her heart out and says "AB MERE JEENE KA MAKSAD SIRF MERI MISTHI HAI, USNE MERI ANDAR KI MAA KOI JAGAYA HAI AUR MAIN USSE DUSRI AVNI NAHI BANNE DUNGI,YEH MERA VAADA HAI TUMSE MISTHI. Saying so she sleeps next to misthi.

Next Day :

Avni gets up early at 5 in the morning as it has become her daily routine.

She bathes,does her prayer and wear long skirt along with kurti,she doesn't apply the sindoor, and she looks like how she used to look before marriage.

Aaj main nashta banaungi sabke liye ,sab ki manpasand ek dish banaungi, Says AVNI.

She goes to the kitchen and starts preparing dishes like chocolate cake,aloo paratha,poha,sandwich,cereals eat dish according to each ones preference.

Neela wakes up hearing the noise from the kitchen as she is staying in the guest room,which is quite near to the kitchen(she is staying at Avni's house for few days until she sorts out with Avni,she is sad as well as happy to see her cooking.)

By the time she completes cooking ,everyone including neel and misthi come out for breakfast.

Everyone is shocked to know that Avni has made the breakfast because she doesn't knows cooking.

Misthi runs to avni and hugs her and says " Angel aap ka the,aap mujhe chod ke chale gaye the na,maine aapko boht miss kiya,please aap phir se mujhe chod ke kabhi mat jaana. She sobs really hard.

Haa bacha,mein apse waada karti hu ki main aapko chod kar kabhi nahi jaungi. Says Avni.

Ab chalo sab breakfast karte hai. And asks everyone to sit down and have breakfast. Neel is very very sad to see Avni in that attire which does show any sign that she is married.

Neel,dekho Avni ne sandwich bhi banaya hai,lo kha lo, tumhe boht pasand haina. Says neela .

Neel happily eats the sandwich because for the first time Avni has made something and he was really happy about it.

(Neil has taken a month off from his duty because he wanted to monitor Avni and take care of her.)

After the breakfast Neel tries to talk to Avni but she goes away with misthi to her room.

IN MISTHI'S ROOM :

M : Angel kya main aapko mumma bula sakyi hu? kyunki mere school mein har bacche ke mummy aur daddy hai.

Avni has happy tears rolling down her cheeks ,she has never felt such happiness before,she is feeling lucky.

A : haa Misthi zarur, akhir main aapki mumma hoon toh aap mujhe hi toh mumma bulaoge na.

Misthi hugs Avni tightly and says I love u my angel mumma .

Avni says "Misthi ab tumhe thodi der aaram karna chahiye,chalo sojao.

M : mumma please aap mujhe lori sunao na.

A : ok thik hai, pehle aap leth jao.

Aa le ke chalun tujhko

Ek aise desh mein

Aa le ke chalun tujhko

Ek aise desh mein.

As everyone including Neel were sitting in hall they all came to Misthi's room listening to the song.

Milti hain jahan khushiyan

Pariyon ke bhes mein

Milti hain jahan khushiyan

Pariyon ke bhes mein

Pariyon ke bhes mein

Aa le ke chalun tujhko

Everyone outside the door were crying, especially Neel, he was feeling guilty.

Neela : yeh lori, Ayesha jee Avni ko sunati thi. Mere bacchi ke zindagi se dard kam hone ka naam hi nahileta hai aakhir kab tak sahegi who yeh sab. Kab bhagwaan uska imtehaan lena band karega. And she starts crying.

Ho chaand chaahe aadha Ho phir bhi roshni

Ho chaand chaahe aadha Ho phir bhi Roshni

Ummeed jo na chhoote Har baat hai bani

Raaton ke sur se nikle Subah ki raagini.

Lori tujhe sunaaun

Lori tujhe sunaaun

Bachpan ki ek main

Lori tujhe sunaaun

Bachpan ki ek main

Milti hain jahan khushiyan Pariyon ke bhes mein

Pariyon ke bhes mein

Aa le ke chalun tujhko.

She completes the lori and sees misthi sleeping,

She turns to go to the door where she sees everyone with tear filled eyes and she and neel have an eyelock where both of them are filled with tears.

OK GUYS THIS WAS THE FIRST PART,THIS IS GOING TO BE A THREE SHOT,SO IF U LIKE IT PLZ COMMENT AND SHARE YOUR VEIWS.I HOPE U ALL LIKE IT, AND DO LET ME KNOW IF THERE ARE ANY ERRORS, APOLOGY AND THANKS IN ADVANCE AND PLEASE IGNORE THE GRAMMATICAL ERRORS.😃😆

nice read! thank you very much for posting! look forward to next part

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Continue soon ⭐️

This is awesome..So cute I loved avni and Mishti's bonding😊

Part 2 (superman papa?)

Neil is sitting with sweta ,bebe,neela and Prakash.

N : aajtak misthi ne kabhi mujhe papa nahi bola,usne ek pal me avni ko apni mumma bana liya, main jaanta hu ki main boht bura hun, lekin kya itna bura hoon, ki 6 mahine mein bhi misthi ka dil nahi jeet paya.

Neela : nahi neel aisa nahi hai,misthi aur avni ek dusre ke boht karee bhai na isliye, tum dekhna boht jaldi who tumhe bhi papa bulayegi, boht jald.

And everyone nodded their head in agreement ,atleast to keep his heart.

Avni was listening to all this, though she says she hates neel but she still felt bad for him and his condition, she decided to make misthi comfortable with neel.

MISTHI'S ROOM :

Misthi has woken up after a peaceful sleep.

Avni sits beside her.

A : misthi mein apse ek baat puchu?

M : haan Angel Mumma pucho na.

A : apne aajtak apne superman ko papa kyu nahi kaha, mujhe toh apne ek second mein mumma bol diya..

M : mein superman ko bhi boht pyaar karti hu, lekin who hamesha sad sad rehte haina isliye unse baat nahi kar pati hu.

A : sad sad? Kya matlab hai aapka?

M : mumma jab se aap gayi haina superman hamesha sad rehte the, woh rote rehte the,raat ko jab ekdin mein unke pass gayi tab who bed pen ahi zameen mein so rahe the,jabhi maine unse baat ki who humesha apke baare mein hi kehte the,woh kehte the ki unhone apko sir se bachane ke liye dur bheja tha aur aap unse nafrat karti hai isliye who rote the,toh sir ka name sunke mein darr jaati thi na isliye main unse zyaada baat nahi karti thi.

Our smart Avni was trying to connect the dots and she recalled her talk with neela ma and realized that neil has done all this to save her from Vidyut and she in turn had hated him for not trusting her,she was shocked and was scolding herself,she also thought that he had spoiled his relation with misthi just by mentioning about Vidyut by mistake and she decided to make misthi call Neel as her father,today itself.

A : misthi aapko pata hai apke superman aapse boht pyaar karte hai, who toh aapke papa haina ,aur ab toh main aagayi hoon na ,toh ab aap superman se gussa mat ho,ab aap unhe papa bulaoge na?

M : haan muma ab main unko apna superman papa bulaungi.

A : par misthi aap unhe yeh mat bolna ki maine yeh seb bola hai aapse ok?unhe aap yeh bhi mat bolna ki apne mujhe sab bata diya.ok?

M : Ok mumma , angel promise. Saying so she goes away from her room to neel's room

NEEL'S ROOM :

Neel was sitting on the bed with his head under his hand and was very depressed and was thinking about Avni.

M : superman kya main andar aa sakti hu?

N : are misthi yeh toh apka hi karma hai apko puchne ki kya zarurat hai, aao misthu andar aao.

M : superman kya main aapse kuch maang sakthi hu?

N : ha misthi zarur! He was happy that she was talking to him so happily, he knew it was all because of Avni's arrival.

M : maine angel ko apni mumma bula liya hai, kya main apko papa bula sakti hoon? Asked the innocent child

Neel was beyond shockedand overwhelmed, though it was proven that was not his daughter but still he had always considered her as his daughter and he never expected this day to come and he happily hugged misthi.

N : zarur misthi ! aap jaante nahi ho ki apne mujhe aaj kitna khush kiya hai! I love u my bacha!

Neel and Misthi had a hug and this whole scene was witnessed by the entire family including Avni and Neela ma and the whole family were having happy tears in their eyes.

Suddenly Misthi saw Avni and said " are mumma please aap bhi aao na, family huggie mein,mumma papa and misthi huggie mei!

Avni who has forgiven neel decides to play along for sometime and said " ok beta,par sirf aapki Khushi ke liye with that she joined the hug much to neel's shock and he was so happy that he though he would explode with happiness .

This scene was captured by neela in her phone and the family left letting the trio have their time as they knew that misthi would be the cupid , the real angel to bring avneil back, little did they know that misthi had already done the work.

Precap:

I am leaving this house and going forever!

Avni please ruk jaao ,meri baat toh sunlo ek baar! Saying so neel falls off from the stairs.

guys I am not happy with the response. I have decided that nest part will be the last one and i will not continue writing on avneil as the reponse is veryy low.

Khanna House :

Avni is thinking to herself " Neil Khanna tumhe kya lagta hai tum boht maahan ho, bilkul nahi ,tumne mujhe bachaya ,lekin tumhe mujhse yeh baat chupani nahi chaiye thi. Ab dekho kaise mein tumhara muh se sab sach nikalwati hu. Bas kuch samay ki baat hai uske baad sab thik hojayega. Mera happy family ka sapna pura hojayega.

Avni then enters Neil's room with her suitcase and says " Neil ab bas boht hogaya , I cant handle it anymore, I am leaving this house and going forever.

Saying so she leaves the room.

N : Avni meri baat toh suno, plz, ek baar yar avni!!!!

A : nahi neil, saying so she gets down the stairs.

N : Avni please ruk jaao ,meri baat toh sunlo ek baar! Saying so neel falls off from the stairs.

Neil!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Shouts Avni as she sees him falling from the stairs , the whole family comes and gathers down near him.

A : neil apni aankhen kholo ,dekho mein kahin nahi jaa rahi hu , tumhare paas hi hu, plz aankhen kholo, mujhe sab sach pata hai , maine toh bas tumhare muh se sunne ke liye yeh sab kiya , I have forgiven u ,plzzz get up plz... and she cries and she sees neil opening his eyes ...

N : avni mein gira tha but who ek acting tha yeh dekhne ke liye ki u really hav moved on ki still have feelings for me, but tumhare sach ne toh mujhe shock kardiya...Avni please mujhe maaf kardo...plz

A : haan neil maine tumhe maaf kiya... I love u neil, I love u so much , itna ki ab tumhare bina main zinda nahi reh paungi.

Neil was feeling as the luckiest man on this world and said " I love u too Avni, plz never leave me "

Saying so he hugs her... both of them are lost in the hug and then they feel a tug and turn around to see misthi...they engulf her also in the hug...

And uske baad kya...is story ka happy ending/beginning hua.

Thanks for supporting me throughout the journey of this story.

Love u all!!!!😆

I have decided not to write anymore as I am not getting the support and response.

hey:) please dont get disheartened. sometimes people may miss the FF or not respond and be silent readers. but dont stop writing. please do continue writing more. Its about wanting to express your thoughts on the forum, your ideas and i'm sure if you keep at it more people will read and comment!

Originally posted by: neeraja91

hey:) please dont get disheartened. sometimes people may miss the FF or not respond and be silent readers. but dont stop writing. please do continue writing more. Its about wanting to express your thoughts on the forum, your ideas and i'm sure if you keep at it more people will read and comment!

thanks for such positivity and support.😃👏