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Posted: 7 years ago
#41
Tere dard ka na tha pehle mujhe ehsaas

Ab wohi ehsaas hai mere liye sabse khaas

Tujhse maafi milne ki lagayi hui hai aas

Teri har yaad hai mere dil ke aas paas


Nafrat teri hai sirf ek dikhava yeh maine jaana

Pyaar hai tujhe ab bhi mujhse maine yeh maana

Kyun dhoondti hai tu mujhe daantne ka bahana

Teri pyar bhari daant hai tere pyar ka nazrana


Tere dil mein pyar fir le aaunga

Tere dard ko door kahin le jaaunga

Gussa ko pyar me badal ke rahunga

Tere pyar ke liye main har dard sahunga


Hum dono ka pyar bane ek misaal

Is baat ka rakhna hai mujhe ab khayal

Do insaan magar hum hain ek jaan

Is baat ko jald legi tu bhi maan
Edited by braveheartdoc - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: braveheartdoc

Tere dard ka na tha pehle mujhe ehsaas

Ab wohi ehsaas hai mere liye sabse khaas

Tujhse maafi milne ki lagayi hui hai aas

Teri har yaad hai mere dil ke aas paas


Nafrat teri hai sirf ek dikhava yeh maine jaana

Pyaar hai tujhe ab bhi mujhse maine yeh maana

Kyun dhoondti hai tu mujhe daantne ka bahana

Teri pyar bhari daant hai tere pyar ka nazrana


Tere dil mein pyar fir le aaunga

Tere dard ko door kahin le jaaunga

Gussa ko pyar me badal ke rahunga

Tere pyar ke liye main har dard sahunga


Hum dono ka pyar bane ek misaal

Is baat ka rakhna hai mujhe ab khayal

Do insaan magar hum hain ek jaan

Is baat ko jald legi tu bhi maan


Maan gaye ustaad...ye to Sameer ki diary ka material hai...too good!!! 😳
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Posted: 7 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: Samaina_1990

hero ne maana use hai heroine se pyaar, kiya apne nanu se bhi iqraar, uski balcony ke niche kiya raat bhar intezaar, chadh gaya use pyaar ka bukhaar, uski gali me gaana bhi gaaya sapne me dhamakedar, school me hua shart ka prachaar, ab chal rahi hai jeeja saale ki taqraar, aaj darshan denge Sameer in Agarwal parivaar...


Too good Sam ! Love the way you have rhyming words at the end of each line 👏
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Posted: 7 years ago
#44

Originally posted by: Samaina_1990

Sameer to Naina:

1. Ishq me padna hai mushkil, par bin tere jeena kahan aasan,
Sau dard seh lu teri khaatir, bas aa jaye tere chehre pe muskaan...
2. Tu jitna door mujhse jaayegi, utni meri taqleef badhayegi
Par main bhi haar na maanuga, tu meri hi dulhaniya kehlayegi
3. Hawa ka jhonka hun, tujhpe aakar bikhar jaunga..
Jo tu na mili, sach kehta hu, jeete jee mar jaunga
4. Jab pehli nazar ka asar hua, tab maine kahan jaana
Yahi wo teer hai, jo banayega mujhe ghayal deewana
Tune tadpaaya, gussa dilaaya...
Par sab bhul gaya main jab pyaar se padhaya
Tere papa ne aakar firse kahani me udham machaya
Paper chor kehkar mujhe bahot rulaya...
Zidd thi meri, sabak sikhaunga..
Bin soche samjhe tujhe mohra banaya
Rakhi se to bach nikle, fir dosti ka haath badhaya
Dheere dheere tujhe apni baaton me uljhaaya
Par hua yun kuch asar tera, ki bhul gaya kyun tha tere dar aaya
Teri hasi me, teri khushi me jaane maine kyun sukoon paaya
Tujhse chori chori milna, baatein karna
Lagne laga ik meetha sa sapna
Tune mujhpar wo pyaar jhalkaya
Jo maa se bhi na tha maine paaya
Pari bankar tum aayi meri kahani me,
Jab tak maan paata ki rog laga tha prem ka...
Tujhe sach samajh me aaya
Tu royi, tu tooti
Mera dil bharmaya
Kyun kyun kyun...sochta raha main har pal..
Tujhsi maasoom ka dil tha dukhaya...
Maafi maangne ki jab samajh aayi
To phir se tere dar pe aaya,
Kabhi tota, kabhi gulaab se
Tera dil behlaya
Ye bechanini ajeeb thi, ye ehsaas naye the...
Hum tab kya jaante the...hum tere aashiq ban gaye the...
Jab tere aansu dekhe...umad kar mujhe bhi rona aaya...
Tab jaana tu meri parchayi thi aur main tera saaya...
Tera hero banta isse pehle villian ka kirdaar tha nibhaya
Par ab hridya parivartan ka aabhas tujhe karwaane hun aaya
Tere sitam sar aankhon par, tadpa jaise maine tujhe tadpaaya
Teri ik hasi pe sau janam qurbaan..
Tu aur main hain aakhir do jism...ik jaan...
Aaj aaya hun shayad hone wale sasural...
Kya tu fir chahegi mujhe...bas yahi hai sawaal...
Teri ik haan se ban jayegi meri kismet...
Jaanta hu main..hamare dilon me aaj bhi hai qurbat
Chal aaj ek naya rishta banate hain...
Gussa, mohabbat, taqraar sab saath nibhaate hain...
Is nahi...har janam me tujhe chahunga...
Tu haan keh de bas...is pal me sadiyaan jee jaunga...
5. Naina...tumhe bhi mujhse pyaar hai na...
Kaho na, dil tumhara bhi beqaraar hai na..
Kya dogi ek mauka, apni har galti mitaane ka..
Ek mauka firse tere dil me jagah banane ka?
Again some impromptu shayaris coz of sudden insomnia 😆 Feedback welcome...PS: I'm not a shayar...



All of them are lovely ! You brought out their whole story 👏
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Posted: 7 years ago
#45

Originally posted by: TereLiyeMINU

Wow! What a thread.👏👏 Would love to be part of this awesome creativily productive thread.😃

Here goes my poem--

"Mujhse zindagi main sirf ek bhool hui hai aur wo tum ho-Sameer Maheshwari

Mujhse pyar tha teri khata?

Ye dilruba de itna bata.

Pyar kya hai nahin tha pata

Ye dilruba de itna bata.

Pyar ki panghat pe hai kitne sitam

Kis mod pe hai rishton ka janam.

Ye dil ruba de itna bata

Kho diya hai kahin mere dil ka pata.

Ankhon ko satake ,

Haathon ko chubhake;

Ye sitam teri pyar ko kam na karpaye.

Jin ankhon main pyar tha kabhi

Kya sach hai wo nafrat sabhi?

Sapne jo mere sath sajaye the

Pyar jo anshu se jhalkaye the

Wo lamhein jeene ki tamanna hai

Bol de ek baar teri nafrat sirf bahana hai.

Ye dilruba de itna bata.

Kya yeh sach hai?

Mujhse pyar tha teri khata?...


P.S.:Thank you for reading.😃 Would love to read feedbacks.😳


Beautiful Minu ⭐️
Edited by dixie123 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
#46

Originally posted by: SammP

Awara Kaho, Pagal Kaho Ya Majanu Diwana

Awara Kaho, Pagal Kaho Ya Majanu Diwana

Naina Mujhe Toa Bas hai Tere hi Dil Mai Aana.

Mai Sameer Maheshwari hu hawa ka jhokha

Sacha kehta hu na kabhi dunga aab tujhe dhoka.

Naina, Yakin nahi tujhe ,Lekin aajmaa ke dekh le,

ek baar apne kadam, mujha tak badha ke dekh le.

Sach Mano mujhe tere dard ka ehsaas hai,

Aisa lagta hai Jaise dil ka ek tukda Tere hi paas hai.

Chahe jitna dushman mujhe tere ghar wale maan le.

Naa rok sakenge mujhe ye tu gaatha bandha le.

Karta hu tujhase hi pyar ye sach maan le.

Pake rahunga tujhe ek din, ye sach bhi jaan le.

Sameer aur Naina nahi hai 2 ye jaan le.

Hona hai hame Saamaina ye Sach tu aaj maan le.


I tried my level best guys.😳



Wonderful Sammp👏

Hona hai Hume Samaina 😳
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Posted: 7 years ago
#47

Originally posted by: Samaina_1990

Rokun ye kadam to rukte nahi...

Door tujhse hokar, din ye guzarte nahi...
Khawab bas itna hai tu ho baahon me meri...
Par kya karun...baadal hain ke chantate nahi...
Gussa tera tauba hai...
Kyun tune pyaar ko fir hone se roka hai...
Jaise dil dhadakta hai mera...
Tera bhi dhadakta hoga na...
Jo kehna chahta hun tujhse...
Kyun lagta tujhe ek dhokha hai...
Ek baar phir kar le aitbaar...
sach kehta hun...patjhad me le aaunga bahaar...
teri sooni aankhon me...fir se khushiyan bhar dunga...
teri hasi ki chehek se...main fir ye galiyan bhar dunga...
Tu muskura de...bas hai itni si hai iltaza...
Kar de iqraar ek baar phir...
Kasam hai mujhe mohabbat ki...
Is baar na muh modunga...
Tujhe baahon me bhar ke...
is baar apna bhi ishq zaahir kar dunga...



Sam, wonderful lines really 👏 may I know your name? I have asked you this multiple times already I think 😆

Btw, what does chantate mean ? Baadal hai chantate nahi..
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Posted: 7 years ago
#48

Originally posted by: Piya_Malik

Naina POV

Tu na aaya tha tab tak sab upar-upar se tha
Padhai ke ilava mere Dil mein kuch aur na tha
Koi bahanji bulaye ya maniben koi fark hi naa padta tha
Par jab se hoon tujhse takrai, Dil jor ka dhadkta tha
Ab lagne Laga tha dhar, bahanji Jo koi kahta tha
Par koi kya Jane tere saamne hi toh Sara fark padta tha
Koi kya Jane andar ki gahrai ko hye pyar mein kya-kya na karna padta tha
Jhooth bole, chudail Bani, tikdam lagaye dimag ko Shaitan banana padta tha
Phir Teri zindagi ki khuli keetab padhi, tab samjhi zindagi ka kitna gahra asar Tum par padta tha
Jaankar ye sab ab pyar nibhana padta tha
Par nahi pata tha zindagi ka dusra pahlu iss kadar gham ko bhi chupana padta tha
Kyu Kiya ye sab pyar mein ki kya dil iss kadar todna padta tha
Tukde-tukde karke armaanon ke ab phir se jodna padta hain
Pachtave me jal rahe hoo Tum aur sath mein mujhe bhi Jalna padta hain
Chahe tumse naaraj hi Sahi par dekhu tumhe iss haalat mein kyu ye sahna padta hai

LOL


Another good one Piya 👏

Loved the last line 😳
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Posted: 7 years ago
#49

Originally posted by: braveheartdoc

Tere dard ka na tha pehle mujhe ehsaas

Ab wohi ehsaas hai mere liye sabse khaas

Tujhse maafi milne ki lagayi hui hai aas

Teri har yaad hai mere dil ke aas paas


Nafrat teri hai sirf ek dikhava yeh maine jaana

Pyaar hai tujhe ab bhi mujhse maine yeh maana

Kyun dhoondti hai tu mujhe daantne ka bahana

Teri pyar bhari daant hai tere pyar ka nazrana


Tere dil mein pyar fir le aaunga

Tere dard ko door kahin le jaaunga

Gussa ko pyar me badal ke rahunga

Tere pyar ke liye main har dard sahunga


Hum dono ka pyar bane ek misaal

Is baat ka rakhna hai mujhe ab khayal

Do insaan magar hum hain ek jaan

Is baat ko jald legi tu bhi maan


Kyun dhoondti hai tu mujhe daantne ka bahana 😆

Nice one Manisha 👏

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Posted: 7 years ago
#50

Originally posted by: Samaina_1990

Sameer to Naina:

1. Ishq me padna hai mushkil, par bin tere jeena kahan aasan,
Sau dard seh lu teri khaatir, bas aa jaye tere chehre pe muskaan...
2. Tu jitna door mujhse jaayegi, utni meri taqleef badhayegi
Par main bhi haar na maanuga, tu meri hi dulhaniya kehlayegi
3. Hawa ka jhonka hun, tujhpe aakar bikhar jaunga..
Jo tu na mili, sach kehta hu, jeete jee mar jaunga
4. Jab pehli nazar ka asar hua, tab maine kahan jaana
Yahi wo teer hai, jo banayega mujhe ghayal deewana
Tune tadpaaya, gussa dilaaya...
Par sab bhul gaya main jab pyaar se padhaya
Tere papa ne aakar firse kahani me udham machaya
Paper chor kehkar mujhe bahot rulaya...
Zidd thi meri, sabak sikhaunga..
Bin soche samjhe tujhe mohra banaya
Rakhi se to bach nikle, fir dosti ka haath badhaya
Dheere dheere tujhe apni baaton me uljhaaya
Par hua yun kuch asar tera, ki bhul gaya kyun tha tere dar aaya
Teri hasi me, teri khushi me jaane maine kyun sukoon paaya
Tujhse chori chori milna, baatein karna
Lagne laga ik meetha sa sapna
Tune mujhpar wo pyaar jhalkaya
Jo maa se bhi na tha maine paaya
Pari bankar tum aayi meri kahani me,
Jab tak maan paata ki rog laga tha prem ka...
Tujhe sach samajh me aaya
Tu royi, tu tooti
Mera dil bharmaya
Kyun kyun kyun...sochta raha main har pal..
Tujhsi maasoom ka dil tha dukhaya...
Maafi maangne ki jab samajh aayi
To phir se tere dar pe aaya,
Kabhi tota, kabhi gulaab se
Tera dil behlaya
Ye bechanini ajeeb thi, ye ehsaas naye the...
Hum tab kya jaante the...hum tere aashiq ban gaye the...
Jab tere aansu dekhe...umad kar mujhe bhi rona aaya...
Tab jaana tu meri parchayi thi aur main tera saaya...
Tera hero banta isse pehle villian ka kirdaar tha nibhaya
Par ab hridya parivartan ka aabhas tujhe karwaane hun aaya
Tere sitam sar aankhon par, tadpa jaise maine tujhe tadpaaya
Teri ik hasi pe sau janam qurbaan..
Tu aur main hain aakhir do jism...ik jaan...
Aaj aaya hun shayad hone wale sasural...
Kya tu fir chahegi mujhe...bas yahi hai sawaal...
Teri ik haan se ban jayegi meri kismet...
Jaanta hu main..hamare dilon me aaj bhi hai qurbat
Chal aaj ek naya rishta banate hain...
Gussa, mohabbat, taqraar sab saath nibhaate hain...
Is nahi...har janam me tujhe chahunga...
Tu haan keh de bas...is pal me sadiyaan jee jaunga...
5. Naina...tumhe bhi mujhse pyaar hai na...
Kaho na, dil tumhara bhi beqaraar hai na..
Kya dogi ek mauka, apni har galti mitaane ka..
Ek mauka firse tere dil me jagah banane ka?
Again some impromptu shayaris coz of sudden insomnia😆Feedback welcome...PS: I'm not a shayar...


Who says you are not a shayar?

Tere papa ne aakar udham machaya 😆 ...I mean I just died laughing 👏
But jokes apart amazing poetry Samaina...please continue writing

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