FF: Her King! (Completed - 23/02)

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nemo316

@nemo316

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Posted: 8 years ago

#41

Interesting update.

Glad Chakor wasn't caught eavesdropping. Is Suraj not ready to become king or not ready to get married?

I knew Paakhi will be a prankster but I'm sure she and Chakor will become good friends.

Hope Suraj isn't clean shaven, I like him better with a stubble. Did Chakor only notice how handsome he is after he shaved or did she notice something else?

Eagerly waiting for next.

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sumsukor

@sumsukor

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Posted: 8 years ago

#42

lovely one Maiithu

liking mom and son convo

hahaha Paakhi so cute with her pranks and sure Ms. Rosella will love it and lo i am seeing their bonding as she is beautiful in breaking the ice and she will make a difference in her life...

waiting for the Sukor interaction...

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Maithili

@maithu_

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Posted: 8 years ago

#43

Originally posted by: meshmesh
Interesting update.
Glad Chakor wasn't caught eavesdropping. Is Suraj not ready to become king or not ready to get married?
I knew Paakhi will be a prankster but I'm sure she and Chakor will become good friends.
Hope Suraj isn't clean shaven, I like him better with a stubble. Did Chakor only notice how handsome he is after he shaved or did she notice something else?

Eagerly waiting for next.

Thanks a lot dear for reading and liking the update!

Luckily she escaped else, she would be out of the palace the next second!

I think you are right over ChaKhi!

Well you can imagine him with a bit of stubble ;-)

Well she noticed he is different from what she know about him :-)

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Maithili

@maithu_

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#44

Originally posted by: katheriene
Interesting update👏
So Suraj needs time before accepting responsibility😊
Pakhi seems to be witty girl, loved the sketch & the prank on Miss Rosella😆
Pakhi pity herself for her disease, looks like she is not allowed to go out😭
Chakor was on verge to reveal truth, lets see how long she can hide it😉
Waiting for some Sukor Moment
Waiting for next

Thanks a lot dear!

Glad you enjoyed reading it!

So happy you enjoyed Pakhi's work!

Yup yaar! She is not allowed to go out, that was the reason for the shock

See you in few minutes!

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Maithili

@maithu_

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#45

Originally posted by: sumsukor
lovely one Maiithu
liking mom and son convo

hahaha Paakhi so cute with her pranks and sure Ms. Rosella will love it and lo i am seeing their bonding as she is beautiful in breaking the ice and she will make a difference in her life...

waiting for the Sukor interaction...

Thank you so much Sumi!

Glad you liked their convo!

I think Miss. Rosella is already loving the pranks Heee

Sukor scenes in few minutes!

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Maithili

@maithu_

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#46

Part 7 (Previous part : Part 6)

"Give it to me!" His sister asked as she extended her hands to get the archery materials.

"Two seconds!" He said as he turned and launched the arrow right at the eye of the target before turning to face the ladies "Your turn!" He forwarded the kit to the Princess.

While Miss.Rosella who turned Chakor was gaping at him for his skills.

"Don't show off!" Taking it and pointing the arrow at the center while he went and stood behind his sister, near Miss. Rosella "I will for sure beat you one day!" Pakhi continued making both the elders to smile.

"She is just a little bit jealous of me as I learned it from my father!" He said to Miss. Rosella "While she is learning it from me!"

Smiling at his friendly way of approach "I'm sorry for that day" she started.

"It's my mistake." He cut in "I shouldn't have took your taxi but emergency was at my door."

"I can understand!" Checking on Pakhi who was trying her second arrow to hit the centre but missed it again "You seems to be a different person from"

"What you read in magazines and newspapers?" He finished her line by making it a question.

She shook her head NO and then nodded her head YES and it turned out to be a circle in the head which made the Prince to smile in a healthy way.

"Want to try it?" he asked pointing on his left.

"No!"

"Oh Miss. Rosella!" Pakhi who turned right at the moment when her brother proposed her tutor to try his kit "I know he has mocked my skills but don't worry, he will do the same with you!" she said glaring at her smiling brother.

"It's not that! He didn't"

"It is not needed to take his side Miss. Rosella!" Pakhi "I know he said it!" forwarding the bow "Take it and try!"

"I...I don't know"

"He will teach you!"

"I can help you!"

Both the brother and sister said at the same time, making Miss. Rosella to agree.

"You both carry on, I'm going to check on the flowers after a long time!" Pakhi said with a shining smile as she turned her wheelchair and went to greet her only friends.

"Hold it like this!" he said as he went behind her and held the bow in his both hands, trying to keep the distance as much as possible "Here" he said as he positioned her right hand and left hand correctly.

"If the newspapers and magazines are not showing who you are, why don't you let the world know the real you?"

"Focus on the eye!" he said as they pulled the string with their hands caressing, making the action to be a comfortable one and not a weird or strange one "People who are meant to be with me, know the real me." seeing her in her eyes, showing her that he is saying the truth, his hold on the how, over her hand got stronger along with his words "My world is my family! People who are and who will be my family are meant to know me!"

She smiled at his words, not only because she is getting feeds for her article but also because, she could see the real him.

She left the string, making the arrow take its route, which was initially directed to the eye of the target but now it hit

CRACK

When the tutor smiled, tilting her head, their hands changed the direction making the arrow to hit the glass window of the Queen's study room where the Queen and her assistant were discussing something.

"Noo I didn't" she said.

"It's not you but we don't have time to talk!" he said to her as he got the bow in his hand and went near his sister who was in-between the plants "We need to go!" he said to his sister who turned to see the scene as she heard the glass breaking sound.

While inside the room.

"Who can it be?" the assistant questioned as both neared the window to check only to see the Prince pushing the wheelchair while the lady by his side followed them to get inside the palace.

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Thank you buddies for reading!

Hope you all liked this part! Let me know your thoughts through your words friends!

See you all soon with Zarir's update!

Next part: Part 8

- Maithili

Edited by maithu_ - 8 years ago

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sonali mishra

@Shivi_forever

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 8 years ago

#47

Interesting update👏

Loved how Sukhi were teasing each other😆

Loved the way Suraj teached Chakor archery😊

Loved Sukor's conservation, so Suraj is not bothered about the opinion of outside world 😊

Waiting for next

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Sania_suraj

@Sania_suraj

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

#48

Lovely update sis..

Suraj and paakhi's lil fight s so cute..

In future is chakor write the article abt real suraj?is that ll be the reason for making his heart break in future?

The way he taught her how to hold the archeries was lovely..

Chakor and queen are always having some misunderstandings like chakor is breaking her things everytime..lol

Eagerly waiting 4 next update sis..

Luv u..tc

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nemo316

@nemo316

Sparkler

Posted: 8 years ago

#49

Interesting update

Loved Sukhi's cute fights.

Now I know why you chose archery and not shooting 😉.

Hope Chakor doesn't get in trouble for breaking the window or taking Paakhi out.

I like Suraj he's easy going and I like he's attitude towards the outer worlsd, hope that Chakor doesn't break his trust.

Eagerly waiting for next.

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Maithili

@maithu_

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#50

Originally posted by: katheriene
Interesting update👏
Loved how Sukhi were teasing each other😆
Loved the way Suraj teached Chakor archery😊
Loved Sukor's conservation, so Suraj is not bothered about the opinion of outside world 😊
Waiting for next

Thank you so much buddies!

Glad you loved it!

Yup! Suraj doesn't care about others view!

Soon soon!

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